SCALELIST UNIVERSE

Chapter 164

Burn
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, the last field on fire.

A ring of flame racing inward through dry gold barley. Smoke rolls up into the paper-grey sky. The seventy islanders huddle in their string-marked corner, screaming. The crew is scattered across the acre.

P2CLOSE, Öde

beating at the flames with her straw hat, over and over, the brim catching fire, her face streaked with soot and tears.

ÖDE
Ma Svea's fence-row — Tant Gerd's corner — that's where Halm buried his tooth — STOP IT!
PAGE 2
P3CLOSE, Mother Skrap

still sitting enormous at the edge of the field like an old woman on a doorstep, the fire reflected in her one bright eye. She looks moved.

MOTHER SKRAP
…Oh. Oh, now it's lovely.
P4CLOSE, Vigolas

in the smoke, coughing, grabbing Öde by the shoulder.

VIGOLAS
Bring them! Bring Värn! A whole village can put out a fire!
ÖDErounding on him, furious
Into this? If I bring them home now, they'll burn! I'd watch my grandmother burn!
PAGE 3
P5CLOSE, Vigolas

stopped dead by that. He nods once.

VIGOLAS
…Then we're the village. CREW!
P6WIDE.

The crew splits up at a run, each heading for a different part of the fire.

PAGES 4–5 — THE CLASH: FIRE
P7ACTION, a run of fast panels.

Rougeina, Moth-Swap, again and again: every barley-moth fleeing the fire is a door. She swaps with a moth beside the islanders' corner, grabs a child, swaps with a moth at the water's edge, sets the child down, swaps back. Again. Again.

Smurjan's third shadow rears up into Bakasura: the colossal maw, jaws wide, bites a whole wall of fire out of the field. THE WHOLE BITE.

BAKASURAchewing, smoke pouring from between his teeth
…Spicy.

Drekk swings the Marka broadside to the acre and works the bilge pumps like a madman, spraying grey sea-water over the near edge.

Kompis, with Tyst, the silent rifle: no flash, no sound, and one by one the Gleaners on the barges throwing fresh torches drop them into the sea.

PAGE 6
P8CLOSE, Trollmage

on the farmhouse roof, sitting up properly for the first time this arc, eyes open, grim.

TROLLMAGE
…I was saving this.
P9CLOSE, Trollmage's hand

writing in the smoke with one finger:

MACRO : RAIN = 10 SECONDS

PAGE 7
P10WIDE.

A small black cloud forms above the islanders' corner and dumps ten seconds of rain, hard and loud. Their corner of barley steams, soaked and safe. Ten seconds exactly, then the cloud is gone.

P11CLOSE, Trollmage

swaying, sliding down the thatch, his book falling shut on his chest.

TROLLMAGE
…Ten seconds. That was a week's nap. (He's out cold.)
KALIcatching him at the gutter with her one hand
Got you, little king.
PAGE 8
P12A SOUND.

Boots. Shouting. Through the smoke, two dozen Gleaners with crowbars and sledge-hammers charge the farmhouse, the one thing in the field that isn't burning: stone walls, a thatched roof, a wooden door painted blue.

GLEANER CAPTAIN
The house! Stone's worth more than dirt! Strip it to the hearth!
P13CLOSE, Öde

across the field, turning, seeing them.

ÖDE
…No. That's Farmor's house. That's the last roof of—
PAGE 9
P14CLOSE, Mingus

standing in front of the blue door. Alone. Small. A golden retriever with singed fur and ears flat, between two dozen men and a house that isn't even his.

And his tail stops wagging.

P15CLOSE, his eyes.

The same warm brown eyes. And gold coming up behind them like a sunrise.

thrum.
PAGES 10–11 — SPLASH
P16SPLASH (double page). THE MANTICORE.

On the ridge of the farmhouse roof, wings spread wide over the whole house like a roof of its own, crouches the Manticore: a golden lion's body, wide gold-feathered wings fanned out from gutter to gutter, and a long scorpion tail of amber glass curling high over the chimney, catching the firelight like honey. He is gold from nose to tail. Only the eyes are the same: warm, brown, a dog's eyes.

Below him two dozen Gleaners skid to a stop in the ash, crowbars up, staring.

Behind him the ring of fire, and in the smoke a girl with a scythe, mouth open.

PAGE 12
P17ACTION.

The Manticore roars, and the wind of it blows the nearest flames flat. His wings beat once, and a whole line of Gleaners tumbles backwards through the ash.

P18ACTION.

The amber tail sweeps, glass singing, and snaps the hook-chains of three barges at once. The barges drift free, and Gleaners leap overboard to swim for them.

PAGE 13
P19CLOSE, the Gleaner captain

on his back in the ash, looking up at the golden lion standing over him.

The Manticore lowers his huge golden head, sniffs the man once, and doesn't bite. He just growls, low and long, right in his face.

GLEANER CAPTAINwhimpering
…Okay. Okay. Okay okay okay.

(He crawls away backwards, fast.)

P20CLOSE, Mother Skrap

watching from the edge of the field. Her bright eye narrows, interested, assessing.

MOTHER SKRAP
…Now there's a thing that'll never die. (A soft hiss, like disappointment.) Pity.
PAGE 14
P21WIDE.

The fight is over. The Gleaners are back on their barges, pulling away. The fire has nothing left to eat. Smoke drifts low across the acre.

The Manticore folds his wings over the farmhouse roof, then shrinks, gold settling down into fur, until a singed golden retriever sits on the doorstep in front of the blue door, panting.

P22CLOSE, Kompis

dropping to his knees beside him, burying his face in Mingus's neck.

KOMPIS
…Good boy. Good boy. That wasn't even your house.

(Mingus licks his ear.)

PAGE 15
P23CLOSE, Mother Skrap

rising from the edge of the field, small again, the salvaged strength draining out of her as the grey bell and mill-wheel fall back onto her barge. Bird-thin, bent, dragging her coat.

MOTHER SKRAPover her shoulder, to Öde
I'll be back when it's dying again, little harvest. It won't be long. (She glances at the grey horizon.) It's coming for you anyway.
PAGE 16
P24WIDE.

And now, in the silence, they see it. The last field is ash. Every stalk. A black, smoking acre floating on grey water. The scarecrow is burned to a stick, with an old man's felt hat lying at its foot. Only the farmhouse stands, stone and thatch, a blue door, a golden dog on the step.

The seventy islanders stand in their soaked green corner, the one patch of colour left.

P25CLOSE, Öde

walking slowly into the middle of the black acre. She kneels. She picks up a handful of ash and lets it run through her fingers. Grass tries to spring up round her boots, and burns brown at once in the hot soil.

PAGE 17 — THE HOOK
P26CLOSE, Öde's forearm.

The emerald names are still there, 111 of them, glowing faintly against the soot. But for the first time they flicker, like candles in a draught.

P27FINAL PANEL, close on Öde

on her knees in the ash, holding her grandfather's hat, her voice gone very small.

ÖDE
…If there's no field, they'll have nowhere to come back to.
END OF CHAPTER 164

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.