SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga IV · The Twelfth Chair · Arc 3 · Stilla

Chapter 176

I'Ll Hold It. You Move.
PAGE 1
P1EXTREME CLOSE

from the last page: the tip of the brass hour hand an inch from the centre of the ice clock-face, in Tövind's trembling old fingers.

TÖVINDoff
…Now.
P2CLOSE, Isa's bare feet

on the whale's back, planting. The frost under her soles is melting, beads of water running between her toes from Tövind's thaw spreading across the whale's skin. One slip.

ISAvery quietly
…I'll hold it.
PAGE 2
P3CLOSE, Isa

looking at the crew. Eyes going clear as lake ice. Hair lifting.

ISA
…You move.
P4WIDE, THE HOLD.

The world stops: the lake, the whale, the hanging snow, the Thaw-Brothers on the flanks, Grandmother Vinter's cracked song frozen in the air as a visible ripple. Kompis, Öde and Rougeina slap their hands onto her shoulders. Trollmage sits down against her back and shuts his eyes. Smurjan, outside the chain, is frozen mid-swing.

…ba—
PAGE 3
P5CLOSE, Tövind

inside the hold, touching his own chest, tick, the hour hand moving a hair closer to the face. Then tick again. Another hair. On his throat the age-line climbs a fraction.

TÖVINDpatiently
You can't stop me, Isa. I'll just walk through it.
P6CLOSE, Isa's frozen eyes

and her thought balloon, frost-edged, and for the first time in the series, steady:

(Thought:) …i know. that's the point.

PAGE 4
P7CLOSE, Kompis

at her shoulder, eyes gold, seeing it: Tövind's thin, ancient thread, and every tick draining a little more out of it.

KOMPISlow, to the others
…She's not stopping him. She's charging him. Every second she holds, he pays to move.
ÖDE
How much has he got left?
KOMPIS
…Not a thousand years.
P8CLOSE, Tövind

tick, the hour hand a hair closer, and his black hair going grey at the temples in one panel.

PAGE 5
P9ACTION.

Rougeina, at the end of the chain, eyes fixed on the brass hour hand in Tövind's fingers.

ROUGEINA
…Then let's make it expensive.

She Swaps with the hour hand.

P10SEQUENCE, two panels.

1. Where Rougeina stood, in the chain with her hand on Öde's shoulder, is the brass hour hand. Öde's fingers close on it.

2. Where the hour hand was, in Tövind's fist, is Rougeina: wrist caught in his old grip, out of the chain, touching no one, and frozen mid-snarl, eight blades half-drawn. Rougeina hates waiting.

PAGE 6
P11CLOSE, Tövind

staring at the frozen woman in his fist where the hour hand was, and laughing, genuinely delighted.

TÖVIND
…Clever. (He drops her wrist, and she hangs frozen in the air beside him.) I need the hour hand, Isa. (tick) I'll come and get it.
P12ACTION.

Tövind walks toward the chain, tick, tick, tick, each step greying him: crow's feet, a stoop, his hair silver now. He reaches for the hour hand in Öde's fist.

Kompis's eyes flicker gold, his pulse-line fracturing into slivers.

KOMPIS
…Subtick.
PAGE 7
P13CLOSE, inside Subtick inside the hold.

A moment inside a moment: a dozen ghost-Tövinds reaching, a dozen ghost-Kompises turning. In one sliver Tövind's old fingers close on empty air because Öde's hand has moved an inch. That one.

P14ACTION.

Tövind's grab misses by an inch. He stumbles, old knees, and catches himself.

TÖVINDbreathing hard now, an old man's breath
…tick. (He straightens.) …tick.
PAGE 8
P15CLOSE, Mingus

padding calmly across the frozen whale's back at full speed, and sitting down in front of Isa, between her and Tövind, facing him. Golden. Quiet.

P16CLOSE, Tövind

reaching for the dog to thaw him out of the way, tick, palm out, and his hand stops an inch from Mingus's nose. The thaw-light flickers and finds nothing to hold.

MINGUS
…grrrrrrr.
TÖVINDa whisper
…There's nothing to catch up. You're the… · …you're what everything else is counted in.

(He pulls his hand back.)

PAGE 9
P17ACTION, a run of small panels down the page.

The crew stages the battle inside the hold, every move set and waiting:

Kompis, the chain still in one hand, levels Ivar, Lilla Ulv, Fru Gnista and Tyst at Tövind's grip on the clock-face, all four set: the Four-Gun Volley, aimed and not yet fired.

Öde, hour hand tucked in her belt, lowers her scythe in a long, even arc, its blade an inch from the minute hand in Tövind's other fist.

Trollmage, asleep against Isa's back, glowing violet, full.

And in the corner of every panel, Vigolas, crawling through syrup across the whale's back toward Tövind's jaw: an inch a panel, teeth gritted, fist cocked.

PAGE 10
P18CLOSE, Isa

holding. Her lips are blue. Frozen tears on her lashes. The frost from her feet is spreading outward across the whale's back in a widening ring, over the Thaw-Brothers' boots on the flanks, over their heat-lances, crawling up the brass. And her heart isn't beating, and it isn't beating, and it isn't beating.

(Thought, frost-edged, very small:) …one minute. …two.

P19CLOSE, Kompis

feeling her through his hand on her shoulder, panicking.

KOMPIS
Isa— that's two minutes— you said your limit was—
ISAthought
…not here. · …here, i'm home.
PAGES 11–12 — SPLASH
P20SPLASH (double page). ONE UNFINISHED HEARTBEAT.

The whole lake stopped, blue-white, frost thick on the panel borders. Grandmother Vinter's back an island of ice. A battle set but not happened: Thaw-Brothers frozen on the flanks with frost-white lances; snowflakes hanging; the ripple of the whale's song frozen in the air.

At the centre, a small barefoot girl perfectly still, lips blue, hair suspended, a ring of violet frost spreading from her feet. Hands on her shoulders. A sleeping half-troll glowing violet against her back. A golden dog sitting in front of her like a guard.

And before her, Tövind, old now, white-haired, stooped, the face in one fist, the minute hand in the other, surrounded on every side by blows that are waiting: four gun-barrels an inch from his fingers, a scythe-blade an inch from his wrist, a frozen woman with eight blades half-drawn at his shoulder, and a pirate's emerald fist an inch from his jaw.

Printed across the whole spread, unfinished: …ba—

PAGE 13
P21CLOSE, Tövind

an old man now, in a young man's coat, looking around at every waiting blow. He understands. He doesn't try to thaw anything else. His hand on his chest, he doesn't tick.

TÖVINDquietly
…You made me spend it. · All of it. On time.
P22CLOSE, Isa's frozen eyes

and her lips, barely moving, a breath of a word:

ISA
…Now.
PAGE 14
P23WIDE. RELEASE.
—DUM.

Everything lands in one beat. The Four-Gun Volley tears the ice face out of Tövind's grip, and it spins away into the air. Öde's scythe flicks the minute hand from his fingers. Rougeina unfreezes mid-snarl and catches it before it falls. Vigolas's fist, an inch from Tövind's jaw for two minutes, arrives at full speed: KRAKOOM.

P24ACTION.

All across the whale's flanks the Thaw-Brothers lunge, and their frost-covered heat-lances shatter like glass in their hands. Frost Ring. The Cult's hook-ropes, frost-brittle, snap. Thaw-Brothers tumble back onto the broken floes.

PAGE 15
P25ACTION.

Trollmage, snapping awake against Isa's back, violet light pouring off him, writing in the air at speed:

MACRO : SLEEP = GRANDMOTHER VINTER

TROLLMAGE
…Sloth's oldest gift, old girl. (yawning) Go back to bed.
P26WIDE.

The great whale's song softens to a hum. The grey patch on her skin stops spreading. And Grandmother Vinter sinks, slowly, back under the lake, the black water closing over her vast back and freezing, clear and solid, as if it had never broken. Under the new ice, her great eye closes.

PAGE 16
P27CLOSE, the ice clock-face

spinning through the air above the lake, flashing, and Öde leaping to catch it in one hand, landing on a floe on her grass.

ÖDE
Got it!
P28CLOSE, Tövind

on his back on the new ice. Old. Seventy, eighty, white-haired, his face lined, his body thin inside the Timekeeper's coat. Only his eyes are young: grey and astonished.

TÖVINDan old man's voice
…I was on time. · For once in my life, I was exactly on time.
PAGE 17
P29CLOSE, Vigolas

standing over him, shaking out his fist. Not angry any more.

VIGOLAS
…You were early, old man. · You've got your whole life left. It's just shorter now.
P30CLOSE, Kompis

spinning round toward Isa at the sound of the Backlog: not a race of ba-dums but a storm of them.

PAGE 18 — THE HOOK
P31WIDE.

Isa, on her knees on the whale-ice, both hands clamped over her heart, two minutes of held beats slamming through her at once. The SFX doesn't race across the panel; it fills it, edge to edge, top to bottom: ba-dum ba-dum ba-dum ba-dum ba-dum ba-dum ba-dum ba-dum ba-dum ba-dum ba-dum.

P32FINAL PANEL, close.

Isa tipping sideways onto the ice, lips blue, eyes open and unseeing, and the frozen tears on her lashes finally falling. Mingus is already there, lying down against her.

KOMPISoff, already running
ISA!

(She isn't getting up.)

END OF CHAPTER 176

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.