SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga IV · The Twelfth Chair · Arc 4 · The Pillar Of Names

Chapter 179

The Pillar Of Names
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, night.

The Pillar rising out of a flat black sea: a column of black stone miles high, its top lost in mist. From base to tip it is carved with names, thousands upon thousands, in every hand and script, faint silver light glowing in the grooves.

P2CLOSE, the Pillar's flank.

A name crawling down the stone, letter by letter, freshly cut by no hand, silver-bright, settling into its place among the others. Then another. Then another.

Every soul that has ever died is written here. The dead come to read it, the way the living read the news.
PAGE 2
P3WIDE.

Round the base of the Pillar, on the still black water: small grey boats, dozens of them, each with one quiet passenger. The gentle dead: grey, calm, faintly see-through, reading the Pillar with their heads tilted back. An old fisherman pointing at a name and nodding. A woman finding one and smiling.

P4CLOSE, Drekk

at the wheel, beard down to his chest, very quiet.

DREKK
…Thanatos water. Never thought I'd sail it alive.
VIGOLASat the bow, fascinated
They're reading.
TROLLMAGEsleepily
Wouldn't you? Find out who else made it?
PAGE 3
P5WIDE, the base of the Pillar.

A ledge of black rock. Lanterns: a dozen small lantern-children sitting on the steps cut into the stone, each holding a lantern on a pole. Their eyes are milky white. Blind, and calm. The eldest, a solemn boy of twelve, stands with a bell-staff, listening.

P6CLOSE, the eldest boy

turning his blind face toward the Marka before anyone has called out.

PIM
…Mother Ögar. They're here. · Just like you said.
PAGE 4
P7FULL-FIGURE, ÖGAR

rising from the ledge where she'd been sitting. Very tall (two metres and more) and thin, long-necked, standing like a heron in still water. Layered mourning-linen in four shades of grey. A mantle of stripped cypress bark over her shoulders. Soft grey felt boots. A blindfold of black-green thread across her eyes. Her ash-white hair falls to her hips in dozens of thin braids, each tied with a tiny tag of grey lead stamped with a name. A pouch at her hip clinks.

ÖGAR · RÖNNKVIST-2 · not ranked (no examiner will meet her eyes)

P8CLOSE, Ögar

facing the Marka a beat before it slides out of the mist into view. Her voice is soft and certain.

ÖGAR
…You came. · You always came, here.
PAGE 5
P9WIDE.

The crew stepping off onto the ledge. Ögar walks straight toward them without hesitating, without stumbling, stepping over a coil of rope a beat before Drekk throws it down.

P10CLOSE, Ögar

stopping before Kompis and raising her long fingers to his face. She touches it: brow, nose, beard, mouth, gently, like someone reading.

ÖGAR
Forgive me. I know you by your ending. · I have to learn what you look like now.
KOMPISholding very still
…That's okay.
PAGE 6
P11CLOSE, Ögar

touching Rougeina's face, then stopping. Her blind face turns slowly to look past Rougeina, at the empty air behind her. She bows her head, once, then again, and again, as if greeting a crowd.

ROUGEINAtense
…What are you doing?
ÖGAR
Saying good evening. · To all of them.
P12CLOSE, Rougeina

very still, understanding: her dead.

PAGE 7
P13CLOSE, Ögar

kneeling, her hand finding Mingus's head, then his ears, his muzzle, his wagging tail. And she goes completely still.

ÖGAR
…Oh.
P14CLOSE, Ögar's face

and from under the blindfold, two silver coins of tears, rolling down her cheeks and falling, clink, onto the black rock. She's smiling.

ÖGAR
…There's no end in him. I looked and looked. · He doesn't end. He just sleeps in the sun.
KOMPISthroat tight
…Yeah. · Yeah, that's him.
PAGE 8
P15CLOSE, Drekk

behind them, clearing his throat.

DREKK
Captain— before I forget again— there's also the parcel, the one that came while you were—
P16A SOUND.

Bells. Tiny bells, many of them, out in the mist. The lantern-children's heads all turn at once. Ögar stands, a beat before anyone else hears it.

ÖGAR
…Not yet, sailor. · They're early.
PAGE 9
P17WIDE.

Out of the mist, fast and silent, a dozen white skiffs. In each, three or four figures in long white robes, their faces hidden behind veils of fine silver mesh. At every belt, a coin-pouch. As the skiffs close, each figure puts something small and silver in their mouth and swallows.

RANK PLATE ×30: SEER · K-III TESTED · the Guild of Thanatos

P18CLOSE, Ögar

her mouth thin.

ÖGAR
…My old order. · Those are my tears they're eating.
PAGES 10–11 — THE CLASH
P19ACTION, a run of fast panels.

A fight against people who are always a beat ahead.

Smurjan's Triple Pulse: three strikes, three Seers, and all three lean aside before his fists arrive.

Kompis fires Ivar. The Seer he aimed at was already ducking when he pulled the trigger.

Öde's Scythe-Sweep, a long arc, and a Seer steps over the blade like a skipping-rope.

Isa plants her feet and holds, …ba—, and the Seers are not in front of her. Every one of them stepped out of her sight-line a beat before she looked.

ISAreleasing, a beat late
…They know where I'll look. · Before I look.
P20ACTION.

Vigolas charges a Seer, and the Seer's veiled head twitches, confused, flicking left, then right, then left. Vigolas's fist lands. The Seer goes flying.

SEERcrashing into the water
His road keeps moving!
PAGES 12–13 — SPLASH
P21SPLASH (double page). THE SEEN PATH.

The ledge at the base of the Pillar, a battle raging in lantern-light: Seers in white and silver flowing round the crew's attacks like water round stones, always a beat ahead. The names on the Pillar glowing silver behind them, new names crawling down.

In the centre, Ögar, perfectly still in the eye of it, blindfolded, one long hand lightly on Rougeina's shoulder, speaking softly into her ear.

And Rougeina, a silver-rose blur, moving exactly where Ögar tells her a beat before the Seers expect it: four Seers falling in four directions.

ÖGAR
…Left. · Now. · Duck. · Stay.
PAGE 14
P22CLOSE, Rougeina

landing in a crouch among four groaning Seers, breathing hard, staring back at the blind woman.

ÖGARmildly
…You're welcome.
P23CLOSE, a Seer

scrambling back to his skiff, pulling his silver veil aside to spit out a half-dissolved coin, panicking.

SEER
She's guiding them! Fall back! Fall back to the Prime!
PAGE 15
P24WIDE.

The white skiffs pull back into the mist, fast. The ledge is quiet again. The gentle dead in their grey boats go back to reading the Pillar, as if nothing happened.

P25CLOSE, Ögar

sitting down heavily on the ledge's edge, one hand pressed over the blindfold. The lantern-children gather round her. Pim puts his hand on her shoulder.

PIM
…Did you see too many, Mother?
ÖGAR
…Just enough, Pim. Just enough.
PAGE 16
P26CLOSE, Vigolas

crouching in front of her, grinning, out of breath.

VIGOLAS
That was amazing. You're blind and you saw everything.
ÖGAR
I'm blind to what is. · I see what will be. It's not the same. · Come here.
P27CLOSE, Ögar's long fingers

rising to Vigolas's face. Touching his brow, his scar, his grin.

PAGE 17 — THE HOOK
P28CLOSE, Ögar's face

and the faint rose script round her eye-sockets, under the blindfold, glowing. She's frowning.

ÖGAR
…Seven. · Seven deaths behind you. Seven endings, all finished. · And an eighth…
P29FINAL PANEL, close on Ögar and Vigolas

her hand on his face. Her voice drops, as if she's afraid someone is listening.

ÖGAR
…that keeps changing. Every time I look. · Someone has been writing in your ending.
END OF CHAPTER 179

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.