SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga IV · The Twelfth Chair · Arc 5 · The Mirror

Chapter 194

The Hall Between
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, the Nettle Field.

Smurjan on his feet, two shadows behind him, his white braid loose, his face like a closed door.

SMURJAN
We're going in.
BALIgetting up, cracks on his cheek, not meeting anyone's eye
…I'll take you in. · For her. (beat, a glance at the silver mirror) Not for her.
P2CLOSE, Nässla

sitting down cross-legged in the nettles at the field's edge, Drekk beside her with the sleeping panther against his boots.

NÄSSLA
I don't go in there. · There's nothing true in there to sting.
DREKK
Somebody's got to mind the door. · Bring 'em back, captain. All of 'em.
PAGE 2
P3ACTION.

A chain of hands: Bali at the front, then Rougeina, Räva (eyes shut, gripping Rougeina's hand), Vigolas, Kompis with Mingus pressed against his leg, Öde, Isa, Smurjan with a sleeping Trollmage over his shoulder. Bali steps into the great silver mirror as if it were water, and pulls.

shhhn.
P4CLOSE, Bali's face

half through the glass. With each person he draws after him, a new crack opens across his skin, tik, tik, tik.

BALIthrough his teeth
…Keep walking. · Don't let go.
PAGE 3
P5WIDE, INSIDE.

The Hall Between: an endless corridor with mirrors for walls, a floor of glass, and no ceiling, only Astralis's stars reflected into infinity. On both sides, reflections of the crew, then reflections of the reflections, each a little fainter, receding forever.

P6CLOSE, Trollmage

awake on Smurjan's shoulder, the crow peering over his head.

TROLLMAGE
…Every reflection's a copy of the last one. · Copies lose a little each time. · By down there—
ÖDElooking down the hall
…they've lost everything. · That's the edge.
PAGE 4
P7CLOSE, the mirrors.

In every one, at every depth, the half-faced woman appearing, smiling.

ECHOfrom everywhere
Welcome home.
P8ACTION, a run of four panels.

Placing.

Kompis takes one step, and he's gone: yanked to where his reflection stands three hundred mirrors deep. Mingus is already bolting after him down the hall at full speed, barking.

Öde, one step, gone: two hundred mirrors deep.

Smurjan, gone, five hundred deep, Trollmage still on his shoulder.

Bali lets go of the chain and slips into a wall of glass after Kali, without a word.

PAGE 5
P9WIDE.

Who's left at the mouth of the Hall. Rougeina, standing perfectly still. Isa, standing perfectly still. Räva, eyes shut, clinging to Rougeina's hand. And Vigolas, and all round him his reflections flickering, trying to be pulled and finding nothing to pull.

ECHOpuzzled, from the nearest mirror
…There's no place for you. · The count never gave you one.
P10CLOSE, Vigolas

grinning crookedly at her.

VIGOLAS
Yeah. I get that a lot. · I've got a ship, though.

(A beat. In the glass, Echo doesn't answer.)

PAGES 6–7 — SPLASH
P11SPLASH (double page). THE HALL BETWEEN.

The endless corridor of mirrors seen from high above, a glittering line running away to a vanishing point where everything goes grey. Strung along it at different depths, each in their own fight:

Kompis, three hundred mirrors down, Mingus at his heel, firing Bror.

Öde, two hundred down, scythe in a long sweep.

Smurjan, five hundred down, Trollmage on his back.

Vigolas, running straight down the middle of the hall, coat flaring, fist cocked.

Near the mouth, Rougeina and Räva, walking hand in hand, Räva's eyes shut tight.

Back at the entrance, Isa, standing perfectly still.

And reaching for every one of them out of the walls: the same silver hand, out of seventy-two mirrors at once, fanned like the spokes of a wheel.

The deeper you look, the fainter they get.

PAGE 8
P12ACTION.

Two hundred mirrors down. Seventy-two identical silver hands come out of seventy-two mirrors at Öde, all at once, all in the same beat. Her scythe sweeps through a dozen of them, and then stops dead in mid-swing. In the nearest mirror a silver hand is holding the reflection of her scythe.

ÖDEhauling on it
…She's got my SCYTHE—
P13ACTION.

Kompis, arriving at a run with Mingus, eyes gold, the pulse-line live along the border. Subtick. One shot from Ivar, a plain lead bullet, into that mirror. It bursts. The scythe comes free, and Öde staggers.

KOMPISwiping a thin line of blood off his lip
…She holds what she can see. · So break what she's looking through.
PAGE 9
P14CLOSE, the mouth of the Hall.

Silver hands passing round Isa like water round a stone, finding nothing to take hold of. She hasn't moved a hair.

ISAa beat late, to no one
…She can't move what doesn't. · I'll wait here. · Come back to me.
P15CLOSE, Vigolas

stopping dead in the middle of the hall, emerald eyes ringed with gold. Greed-sight on an endless corridor: glitter, glitter, glitter, nothing worth anything. Then KEYSTONE: the one small point that holds the whole hall together. Far, far down, at the very vanishing point, a dark speck.

PAGE 10
P16CLOSE, the Compass

on its cord at his throat, swinging away from the crew toward the speck. And for one heartbeat a completely black panel: no gold threads, no hum, nothing.

VIGOLASin the dark
…Kompis? · KOMPIS?

(Next panel: the Knot humming back, gold, all the threads at once. He breathes out.)

VIGOLAS
…There. · The end. · Everything in here hangs off that.
P17CLOSE, Trollmage

on Smurjan's back as the two of them catch up, peering into a mirror at his own reflection. In the glass his troll-iron crown sits perfectly straight.

TROLLMAGE
…Even my reflection's wearing it properly. · Traitor.
ECHOfrom the glass, mild
It was crooked.
TROLLMAGE
It's supposed to be crooked!
PAGE 11
P18WIDE, the mouth of the Hall.

Rougeina and Räva walking, hand in hand, slowly, toward the vanishing point. Räva's eyes shut. Her voice low, quick, the way you talk so you don't have to think.

RÄVA
She cheated at cards. · Every single game. Kept the low ones in her boot. · She sang flat. Loud and flat. On purpose, I think.
P19CLOSE, Räva

eyes still shut, half smiling at something inside.

RÄVA
When I was six she carried me through a snowstorm on her back, and told me the snow was stars come down to have a look at me. · The scar on her chin, she got falling off the barracks roof showing off for a boy. · Rubbish boy. Not worth the scar.
PAGE 12
P20CLOSE, Rougeina

walking, tears running, not wiping them.

ROUGEINA
…Keep going.
RÄVA
That's the half you didn't get. · You were too little.
P21CLOSE, Räva.

The smile going.

RÄVA
The night they took her, I hid under the jetty. · I watched them walk her up the path. · Then I put on somebody else's face and ran. · And I never took it off.
ROUGEINA
…Which face?
RÄVAeyes shut, touching her own foxy cheek
…This one. · I don't remember what's under it.
PAGE 13
P22WIDE, a side-mirror opening like a window.

Inside the glass: a room, the little Astralis cottage copied in reflection, blue door, lamplight, a table set with four bowls. At the table, Kali, one arm, red braid, talking, nonstop and outraged, at a silent table. Beside her, Bali, sitting with his head down.

KALI
—and ANOTHER thing, you can't just PLACE people, I have been placed my entire life, I am SICK of being put—
P23CLOSE, Kali

seeing Smurjan through the glass.

KALI
FINALLY. Do you know how long I've been talking to a spoon?

And she's through the glass and back into his shadow in one leap. Behind Smurjan: three shadows again.

BALInot looking up
…I'm sorry, sister.
KALI
Later. · I'm going to yell at you LATER.
PAGE 14

Art note, pages 14–17: Null-scene grammar. Grey seeps in from the panel borders, the SFX boxes for footsteps are empty, and Kompis's pulse-line skips.

P24WIDE.

All of them together again, Isa rejoining at the end of a chain of hands, walking down the last stretch of the Hall. Here the reflections are only outlines, then dotted outlines, then nothing at all. The grey seeping in from the edges of the panel.

P25CLOSE, their feet

on the glass floor, bare and booted and pawed. No footsteps.

(Every SFX box: empty.)

KOMPISeyes gold, his pulse-line skipping a tick
…Threads go thin here. · Like walking out of a lit room.
PAGE 15
P26FULL PANEL. THE END OF THE HALL.

Where the reflections run out: a small plinth of black glass sand, the last real ground, and beyond it, nothing, the flat soundless grey. On the plinth, alone, a tall, narrow, frameless mirror of blue-grey mirror-steel, a head taller than a door, with eight long slivers missing from its left edge.

And in it, solid and close for the first time: Echo. Long crimson hair drifting. One green eye. Her clear half kind and tired. Her other half not there.

ECHO
…You came.
P27CLOSE, Echo

looking past her daughter at the woman with her eyes shut.

ECHO
Look at me, little sister. · Just once.
PAGE 16
P28SILENT PANEL.

Behind the dark mirror, in the grey, on the far side of the glass: a long hand in a grey sleeve, a black bar across its knuckles, resting flat on the back of the mirror like someone fond of what they're watching. Nobody looks at it. Nobody sees it.

(No balloon. Empty SFX box.)

P29CLOSE, Räva

eyes shut, jaw tight.

RÄVA
…No.

She steps back, and her heel catches on a curl of glass on the floor.

PAGE 17 — THE HOOK
P30ACTION.

Räva falls. Her free hand flies out to catch herself, away from her eyes, and her eyes open, straight into the dark mirror.

P31FINAL PANEL, close on Räva's face

the fox face, amber eyes wide, lit by whatever the glass is showing her. We don't see what it is.

RÄVA
…Oh.
END OF CHAPTER 194

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.