SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga I · The Satchel · Arc 3 · Baldr

Chapter 20

Orm
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, the Hay Stair at dawn.

Every door on the long stepped street opens at once. Bakers in flour, stable-hands, washerwomen, bark-yard porters carrying their hooks, an old man with a cane. All of them walk out into the snow in their nightclothes and turn, together, toward the cistern grate at the bottom of the stair. Their eyes are blank.

P2MID.

The crew climbs out of the grate into the street, and stops.

DREKK
…That's a lot of bakers.
P3POV, Kompis, soul-sight.

Every person on the street has had their threads lifted out of them and pulled up the stair, taut, to one point. Mothers no longer tied to their children. Neighbours no longer tied to neighbours. Every thread re-knotted into one white seal-knot in a gloved fist.

PAGE 2
P4MID, the top of the stair.

Orm stands in the snow in his new silver-stitched gloves. The same polite, debt-collector's smile.

ORM
Asset Kompis. And friends. I've been practising since our last meeting.
ORM
Last time, I took one thread at a time. That was amateur work.
P5CLOSE, Orm

raising both fists. Hundreds of golden threads quiver between his fingers.

ORM
This morning, I took a street.
twwwwwwnnnnnnnng
P6WIDE.

The whole crowd raises its tools at once: bread-peels, pitchforks, bark-hooks, a washing paddle, a cane. Two hundred people. They start down the stair toward the crew.

PAGE 3
P7MID, the crew backing up against the grate.
VIGOLAS
Okay. Rule one: we don't hit bakers.
DREKK
What's rule two?
VIGOLAS
Run.
P8CLOSE, Smurjan

one hand pressed flat against his own shadow, which is bulging.

SMURJAN
Bakasura. Do not eat them.
BAKASURAfrom his mouth
…Wasn't going to.

(A long, wet pause.)

BAKASURA
…Wasn't.
P9ACTION.

Kompis swings Ivar up at Orm, and twenty blank-eyed people step in front of Orm at once, a wall of bodies. Ivar's ghost grabs the trigger from the inside.

IVAR
I won't.
KOMPIS
I wasn't going to ask.
PAGES 4–5 — NOBODY CAN FIGHT
P10ACTION, a tier.

The crowd reaches them.

A ring of pitchforks closes around Drekk. Blink: Rougeina Swaps him with a hay bale. The forks stab hay. Drekk is suddenly on a rooftop, extremely confused.

A baker swings a peel at Vigolas. Blink: Rougeina Swaps Vigolas with a goat. The crowd closes around a very surprised goat.

VIGOLASfrom a balcony
WHY THE GOAT?
ROUGEINA
It was closer.
P11ACTION.

Silver-rose phantom trails criss-cross the whole street as Rougeina pulls the crew out of the crowd one at a time, faster and faster, sweat running down her face. She can't keep Swapping forever.

ROUGEINA
There are two hundred of them!
P12CLOSE, Orm

at the top of the stair, perfectly relaxed.

ORM
Your sin reads threads, Kompis. Mine keeps them. Which do you suppose wins?
P13CLOSE, Kompis

Mingus at his feet, rifle down, useless.

KOMPIS
…He's right. I can see every thread on this street. I can't touch a single one.
PAGE 6
P14MID.

Smurjan on the stair, the crowd closing around him.

SMURJAN
…Kali. Can you borrow him?
P15ACTION.

Kali rises up out of his shadow, black-glass sickles in hand, and looks up the stair at Orm the way a cat looks at a bird.

KALI
Ooh. Him. I've wanted to try him ever since I heard about the boat.
P16CLOSE, Kali's face.

She looks at the golden threads in Orm's fists and breathes them in. Her eyes flash gold.

P17CLOSE, Orm's gloves.

The silver stitching goes dark. The threads in his fists go slack, like reins dropped by a driver who has fallen asleep.

ORM
…What. What did you—
KALI
Borrowed it. One minute. I'll give it back. Probably.
PAGES 7–8 — SPLASH (double page)
P18SPLASH. Kali re-ties the street.

She stands in the middle of the Hay Stair with gold eyes, her sickles stuck in the snow, both hands raised, and between her fingers run hundreds of golden threads, which she plays like a harp. One by one they snap home: the baker's back to his wife in the doorway, a stable-hand's back to his old mother at a window, two feuding neighbours back to each other, the old man's back to a frayed dog-collar hanging on his door. Gold arcs over the whole stepped street like the sun coming up sideways.

KALI
Everything goes back where it lives.
PAGE 9
P19WIDE.

Up and down the stair, people blink awake in their nightclothes in the snow, holding pitchforks and peels.

BAKER
…Why am I holding a peel?
WASHERWOMAN
Why are we outside?

The baker turns and hugs his wife without knowing why.

P20CLOSE, Kali

sweating, still playing threads, her gold eyes beginning to flicker.

KALI
Thirty seconds. There are a lot of aunts on this street.
PAGE 10
P21ACTION.

One stable-hand, the last thread Kali hasn't reached, still blank-eyed, comes up behind Smurjan, who stands perfectly still holding the shadow-tether that keeps Kali out. The man raises a heavy iron bark-hook over the back of Smurjan's head.

P22CLOSE, Drekk

on the step below, seeing it. No thought. Just movement.

P23ACTION.

Drekk throws himself between them and takes the swing on his spyglass, held up like a sword. The brass bends. The lens cracks. He shoves the man down into a snowbank.

KLANNK — krik
PAGE 11
P24CLOSE, the spyglass in Drekk's hand

dented, with a crack running clean across the lens.

P25TWO-SHOT.

Smurjan turns around. Drekk is breathing hard and glaring at his own hands as if they had betrayed him.

SMURJAN
…Thank you.
DREKK
Don't.
P26CLOSE, Drekk.
DREKK
If you die, you come back different. She's in there.
DREKK
I didn't do it for you.
SMURJAN
I know.
PAGE 12
P27ACTION.

Kali ties the last thread, the stable-hand's, back to wherever it lives, and spins, gold eyes flickering out, sickle swinging, straight up the stair at Orm.

P28IMPACT.

One clean line of black glass across Orm's face, from brow to jaw, drawn as a single line and nothing more. His rank plate flickers.

KALI
That's for making me do chores.
P29CLOSE, Orm

one hand to his face, eyes wide. The silver stitching on his gloves flares back to life as Kali's minute runs out, but there is nothing left on the street for him to hold.

PAGE 13
P30MID.

The crew comes up the stair at him, Vigolas in front.

VIGOLAS
Still got nobody of your own, Orm?
P31CLOSE, Orm.

For the first time, the polite smile is gone.

ORM
You have no idea what you're walking into. The old man isn't angry with you. He's never angry. He has never even met most of the people he's ruined.
ORM
That's what you should be afraid of.
P32ACTION.

He flings a fistful of loose threads into the air. They flash like a net of sunlight in everyone's eyes, and when it fades he's gone over the rooftops.

DREKK
He runs a lot for a K-four.
VIGOLAS
Twice now.
PAGE 14
P33MID.

Kali is back in Smurjan's shadow. Only her voice is left.

KALIfrom his mouth
He tasted like a drawer full of other people's letters. Ugh.
SMURJAN
Thank you, Kali.
KALI
Don't thank me. Thank the little navigator. He saved your face.

Drekk, ten steps away, pretends very hard that he hasn't heard.

P34WIDE.

The baker, still in his nightshirt, comes down the stair holding a fresh loaf and presses it awkwardly into Vigolas's hands.

BAKER
I don't know why. But… thanks?
VIGOLASholding the bread like treasure
First thing I haven't stolen in a week.
PAGE 15
P35POV, Kompis, soul-sight

quietly watching Drekk and Smurjan climb the stair ten steps apart. Between them, for the first time, there is a thread. Grey. Frayed. Thin as a hair. But there.

P36CLOSE, Kompis.

He doesn't mention it. Mingus's tail thumps once against the step.

PAGE 16 — THE HOOK
P37WIDE, the top of the Hay Stair

looking out over the market square of Glasheim, where the city's colossal Scalelist board towers over the roofs. A bell starts tolling. Then another. Then every bell in the city.

P38MID.

On the board, all of the millions of names wipe away at once, top to bottom, like a hand clearing a fogged window.

P39FINAL PANEL.

A new image fills the blank board: a harbour on black-sand cliffs seen from the sea, and in the middle of it a tavern sign with a drowned book painted on it.

DREKKvery quietly
…That's Gate City.
END OF CHAPTER 20

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.