SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga V · The Current · Arc 5 · Tidekant

Chapter 278

Hagel
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, the lake, noon.

The flagship storm coming across the water toward Tidekant, slow, enormous, an island of black cloud. Hail falling out of it in a white curtain, hissing on the lake. Lightning crawling grey-white in its belly. Tier on tier of thunderhead sails, rigged like a ship of the line.

tsssssssssssssss
P2CLOSE, the dock.

Both crews lined up along it, wet from the morning, weapons out. The fisher-folk behind them. Njord at the end in Old Pike, not moving, his rod across his knees.

PAGE 2
P3WIDE.

The storm stopping over the middle of the lake, a mile off, and the front of it folding, cloud rolling and shaping, into a face. A colossal face of black thunderhead leaning down over the water: a storm-coat, a tricorn of cloud, a beard of hail, eyes of grey-white lightning. At its throat, on a chain of rain, a lantern, dead.

P4CLOSE, the face

rank plate drawn on the cloud in grey-white letters, as on the DEAD board.

HAGEL · K-IV SHAPED · THE DEAD · #1,099 · Admiral of the Storm Fleet

HAGELa voice like hail on a roof; jagged, rattling balloons
…Tidekant.
PAGE 3
P5CLOSE, Drekk

on the Marka's deck, staring up.

DREKKhoarse
…Hagel. · They told that one in every port when I was a boy. · An admiral who wouldn't strike his colours in a storm. · Three hundred years ago. · He'd rather drown than lower a flag. · · So he did.
P6CLOSE, Hagel's face

the lightning eyes sweeping the dock, the crews, the village. Bored. Then stopping, on one man in a long coat at the end of the dock.

PAGE 4
P7CLOSE, Hagel

leaning lower, the hail-beard dragging on the lake, the lightning eyes narrowing on Vigolas.

HAGEL
…You.
VIGOLAS
…Me?
HAGEL
…I know you. · · You steered into me.
P8CLOSE, Vigolas

very still. The green lightning under his skin starting to crawl, up his arms, toward his throat.

PAGE 5
P9FLASHBACK, one panel, drawn in the black-sailed-seas style.

A black-sailed ship at night. A forty-metre wave standing up out of the sea like a cliff. And on the deck a pirate captain with gold-sight blazing, looking from the wave to the hold, and turning the wheel toward the wave.

HAGELover it
…Every other captain runs from my waves. · You had gold in the hold and you turned in. · Nobody does that.
P10CLOSE, Vigolas

the present, jaw tight.

VIGOLAS
…I did that.
HAGELa rattling hail-laugh
…Yes! · And you drowned! · · So why aren't you in my fleet?
PAGE 6
P11CLOSE, Hagel's face

the lightning eyes going soft, almost fond.

HAGEL
…Every captain who drowns hating the sea is mine. · His hate stays in the weather and I give it a wheel. · You should have a storm of your own by now, boy. · Green, I think.
VIGOLAS
…I don't hate the sea.
HAGEL
…Then why does my lightning live in you?
P12CLOSE, Vigolas's arm.

The green lightning under his skin straining toward the storm, toward the sky, like a dog toward a whistle.

PAGES 7–8 — SPLASH
P13SPLASH (double page). EVERY DROWNED CAPTAIN.

Hagel's storm reaching for him: a colossal wind pouring off the flagship down across the lake onto the dock, and lifting Vigolas off his feet, dragging him toward the water, his coat streaming, the cubes in his sash rattling, green lightning pouring off him into the wind and up into the storm in long emerald ribbons. Above him, in the black clouds of the flagship's rigging, faint shapes of storm-captains at their wheels, leaning down to watch a new one join them.

HAGELa roar of hail
…COME AND TAKE YOUR WHEEL!
PAGE 9
P14ACTION.

Krydog diving off the dock, catching Vigolas by the back of the collar with one bandaged fist, and hooking his other arm round a piling. The wind trying to tear them both off it. Krydog's feet off the ground.

KRYDOG
…Oi. · Not yours.
P15CLOSE, Krydog

hanging on, roaring up at the storm.

KRYDOG
…He drowned, yeah! · Then he got UP! · That makes him OURS!
THE UP-AGAINfrom the Upp Igen, all of them
…UPP IGEN!
PAGE 10
P16CLOSE, Hagel

lightning eyes narrowing at Krydog.

HAGEL
…Up. · What a stupid word.
P17ACTION.

The wind dropping off Vigolas and Krydog all at once, both of them crashing onto the dock. And Hagel's whole storm swinging, sails turning, heaving round to the north, toward the open lake, away from the village.

NJORDrising in Old Pike, shouting
…No— · He's feinting!
PAGE 11
P18ACTION.

The flagship storm wheeling back in the same heartbeat, not north at all, but straight across the fishing grounds south of the dock, where six boats are still out, small, with men in them hauling nets. Hail coming down on them like stones.

P19CLOSE, a fishing boat

two old men and a boy in it, looking up at the black wall coming down on them.

KRRSSSSSHHHHH
PAGE 12
P20CLOSE, Levla

at the end of the dock, ten rings on his fingers, staring at the six boats. Holding up his hand. Six brass price tags flipping into the air over the boats, one each, swinging on their strings in the hail.

LEVLAvery calm, very fast
…Sold. · · Not to you.
TAGdrawn, six times
PRICE: THREE DAYS.
P21ACTION.

The storm hitting the boats: every hull smashed to kindling, masts snapping, nets torn away into the sky. And the men, every one, tumbling into the water and bobbing up, untouched, the hail bouncing off the air an inch above their heads, the wind sliding off them like water off oilskin.

KRAKK — KRAKK — KRAKK — (then, small) plip. plip. plip.
PAGE 13
P22CLOSE, Hagel

staring down at six empty-handed fishermen floating unharmed in the wreck of their boats, a tiny brass tag swinging over each one.

HAGEL
…What is that?
LEVLA
…A price. · You can have their boats. · The men cost three days. · Pay up or leave them.
P23CLOSE, the fisher-folk on the shore

already pushing out in rowboats to pull their men out of the water. Sill in the first one, rowing like a demon.

PAGE 14
P24CLOSE, Hagel

a long rattling look at Levla. At the tags. At Njord in Old Pike. At Vigolas on the dock, getting up.

HAGELslowly
…Three days. · · Then three days it is, little lake. · I'll come back and pay.
P25WIDE.

The flagship storm withdrawing: the face unfolding back into cloud, the sails turning, the whole island of weather sliding back across the lake to the storm-wall, slow and unhurried, hail hissing behind it.

HAGELfading
…Bring your green, boy. I'll keep you a wheel.
PAGE 15
P26WIDE, the dock, late afternoon.

The six rescued men wrapped in blankets on the dock, their wives round them. Smashed boats washing in. Both crews standing in the wet, silent. The sun coming back out over the lake as if nothing happened.

P27CLOSE, Vigolas

staring at his hands. The green lightning quiet again. He closes them into fists.

VIGOLASvery low
…He knew me. · He knew the wave.
PAGE 16
P28CLOSE, Kompis

beside him, eyes gold, looking at Vigolas's threads, at the lightning inside him: and seeing, in it, a thread he's never noticed before. A grey-white thread, very old, running from Vigolas's heart out across the lake, toward the storm-wall.

KOMPISbarely audible
…Vigo. · · There's a thread from you to him.
P29CLOSE, Vigolas

turning slowly to look at him.

VIGOLAS
…Cut it.
KOMPIS
…I can't. · It's not a bond. · It's like it's… part of you.
PAGE 17 — THE HOOK
P30WIDE, the end of the dock.

Old Pike tied up, rocking. And Njord climbing out of her onto the dock, slowly, and then just sitting down, heavily, as if his legs had been cut, his rod across his knees, his boots in the lake. Sill running to him.

P31FINAL PANEL, close on Njord

staring out at the storm-wall, an old man with his whole face falling in.

NJORDa whisper
…That's him. · · That's the one who took my boys.
END OF CHAPTER 278

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.