SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga V · The Current · Arc 5 · Tidekant

Chapter 286

The Pinch
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, the still water, afternoon.

Sun on Heartbeat's great lake. The rain gone. The flat patch, glass-calm, and on it: Hagel on his knees, raining off himself into a widening puddle; Njord facing him, held up by Jeppson's plank and Svala's arm, the line still in his fist; Vigolas treading water beside them. The two ships coming slowly in, anchors up.

P2CLOSE, Hagel

smaller than an hour ago, his coat hanging loose, water running steadily from his fingertips, his hair, his chin.

HAGEL
…I'm running out, old man. · Another hour on still water and there'll be nothing to talk to. · · So let's talk.
PAGE 2
P3CLOSE, Njord

reading his lips. Saying nothing. A long, long look.

VIGOLASquietly
…You could just wait. · An hour. · He'd be gone.
NJORD
…Aye.
P4CLOSE, Njord

looking out across the lake, to where the storm-wall still stands at the horizon, smaller now, a dozen storms left in it, captains without an admiral, milling, lightning flickering uncertainly.

NJORD
…And them? · A dozen storms with no admiral, loose on my lake. · They'd scatter. · They'd drown somebody's boys every spring for a hundred years.
PAGE 3
P5CLOSE, Hagel

a thin, wet smile.

HAGEL
…You are a fisherman. · You think about next year.
NJORD
…Somebody has to.
P6CLOSE, Hagel

lifting his chin.

HAGEL
…Then here are my terms. · Unhook me. · I gather what's left of my fleet, and I take them out of your lake. · · That's all I'll give.
PAGE 4
P7WIDE.

A rowboat coming across the flat water from the Upp Igen: Krydog rowing, and in the stern, leaning back at an impossible angle under his own tiny raincloud, soaked to the skin, the tin in his hand, Flexsnus.

FLEXSNUScalling, cheerful
…Don't sign anything!
P8CLOSE, Flexsnus

as the rowboat bumps alongside, leaning over the gunwale toward the drowned admiral, raincloud and all, polite as a shopkeeper.

FLEXSNUS
…Afternoon, Admiral. · Flexsnus. · Quartermaster. · · I do the paperwork.
PAGE 5
P9CLOSE, Hagel

staring at the man under the raincloud.

HAGEL
…You. · You're the one who made my storm late.
FLEXSNUS
…One notch. · I'm still paying for it. · (Looking up at the cloud.) As you can see.
P10CLOSE, Flexsnus

quieter now, to Njord, and then to Vigolas.

FLEXSNUS
…"Out of the lake" is a good deal, friend. · But it's got a hole in it.
VIGOLAS
…What hole?
FLEXSNUS
…It doesn't say for how long.
PAGE 6
P11CLOSE, Hagel

the thin smile going thinner. Caught.

HAGEL
…A storm goes where the weather takes it, quartermaster.
FLEXSNUS
…Mm. · · And weather comes back.
P12CLOSE, Njord

reading it all off their lips, nodding slowly at Flexsnus.

NJORD
…Ten years. Twenty. · · For somebody else's boys.
PAGE 7
P13CLOSE, Hagel

raining faster, looking from one to the other. Running out of time and knowing it.

HAGEL
…Fine. · Fine. · Unhook me, and I'll take my fleet and leave the lake. · Agreed?
P14CLOSE, Flexsnus's thumb on the tin.

And the tiniest movement of his lips. Before Njord can answer, before Hagel can finish closing his mouth on the last word, right in the half-heartbeat between the offer and the shake.

tk.
FLEXSNUSvery soft, very quick, sliding it in
……forever.
PAGES 8–9 — SPLASH
P15SPLASH (double page). THE PINCH.

Inside one heartbeat, drawn as a heartbeat-ring round the whole spread: the deal, made visible. A line of emerald script hanging in the air over the still water between the drowned admiral and the old fisherman: I'LL TAKE MY FLEET AND LEAVE THE LAKE, and at the very end of it, squeezed in after the last word, smaller, neat, in a different hand, a pinch of extra script:

— FOREVER.

And the sentence closing round it like a knot pulled tight.

At the centre, Flexsnus in the rowboat under his raincloud, his heart drawn through his soaked shirt doing something strange: ba-DUM — and then nothing where the next beat should be. A gap. A held breath.

HAGELa hail-rattle of outrage
…I didn't SAY—
FLEXSNUSmildly
…You agreed, friend. · All of it.
PAGE 10
P16CLOSE, Hagel

staring at the glowing sentence. At the extra word in it. Trying to unsay it, and the words holding like a hook.

HAGEL
…That's cheating.
FLEXSNUS
…That's paperwork. · · One word. · I never fit two. · Two's how you break things.
P17CLOSE, Flexsnus

a hand going to his chest, wincing, a little grey.

FLEXSNUSunder his breath
…Ooh. · That'll skip tonight.
KRYDOGat the oars, worried
…Flex?
FLEXSNUS
…Fine, captain. · One beat. · I've got spares.
PAGE 11
P18CLOSE, Hagel

a long silence. Then, slowly, the outrage going out of his face. Something like a laugh. Rain running off his chin.

HAGEL
…Forever. · · Three hundred years I kept a wheel turning so I'd never have to stop. · And a man with a tin of snus just told me where I'm going for good.
VIGOLAS
…Where will you go?
P19CLOSE, Vigolas

answering his own question, looking out past the storm-wall, toward the dark.

VIGOLAS
…The Deep's got no weather. · No wind. No rain. · · It's got a north now. · It could use some weather.
PAGE 12
P20CLOSE, Njord

wading closer on his plank. Taking the line in both hands. Looking into the drowned admiral's face, very close.

NJORD
…Before I unhook you. · · My boys. · Arvid and Ebbe. · Twenty-two years ago this spring. · Are they in your fleet?
P21CLOSE, Hagel

looking at him. A long time. The lightning gone quiet in his eyes.

HAGEL
…No.
PAGE 13
P22CLOSE, Hagel

quiet, almost gentle, the last of the admiral in his voice.

HAGEL
…Your boys aren't in my fleet, old man. · · They never were. · Only the ones who drown hating come to me. · · They didn't hate the sea.
P23CLOSE, Njord

his huge face crumpling, holding on to the plank and the line, weeping on the flat water like a child. Mingus pressing against him. Svala's arm tight round him.

NJORDbarely a sound
…No. · · They loved it.
PAGE 14
P24CLOSE, Njord's hands

reaching up the line to Hagel's back, finding the barbed bone hook in the sodden coat, and working it free, carefully, the way you'd free a fish you meant to let go.

NJORD
…Go on, then. · Forever.
P25WIDE.

Hagel rising off the still water, lifted as soon as he moves, the rain round him gathering instead of falling, a coat of cloud, a beard of hail coming back, smaller than before, and drifting away across the lake toward the storm-wall, slowly, not looking back.

PAGE 15
P26WIDE, the horizon.

The storm-wall moving: a dozen storms falling in behind their admiral, sails of thunderhead filling, and the whole remnant of the Storm Fleet sailing out, through the gap in the wall, into the dark of the Deep. And behind them, the wall itself thinning, breaking up, until there's nothing on the horizon at all but open sky.

rrrrrooooommmmmm…
P27CLOSE, Sill

on the dock, both hands on her mouth, staring at a horizon she's never seen without the wall on it.

SILL
[It's gone.] · [The whole wall. It's GONE.]
PAGE 16
P28WIDE, evening, the dock.

Both crews and the whole village, soaked, battered, alive, a bonfire on the beach, Roffe cooking salt-cod in mjölksta (it's surprisingly good). Njord wrapped in three blankets on a barrel, Jeppson's plank leaning against his knee. Flexsnus under his raincloud, a little grey, a cup in his hand, Levla sitting right next to him inside the rain, getting soaked on purpose.

LEVLA
…Your heart all right, Flexi?
FLEXSNUS
…It'll skip once tonight, mate. · Then it's paid.
LEVLA
…I'll stay up.
FLEXSNUS
…You don't have to.
LEVLA
…I know.
P29CLOSE, Flexsnus

digging in his waistcoat, pulling out a folded slip of paper, and holding it out across the fire to Vigolas.

FLEXSNUS
…Oh. · Captain. · Your bill.
PAGE 17 — THE HOOK
P30CLOSE, the bill

unfolded in Vigolas's hands by firelight, in a neat merchant's script with a ruled line under it:

FOR SERVICES
ONE (1) STORM, BENT ONE (1) NOTCH.
AMOUNT DUE
ONE (1) BOTTLE CAP, captain's choice.
VIGOLASstaring at it
…A bottle cap.
FLEXSNUS
…Captain's choice.
P31FINAL PANEL, close.

Vigolas, a man with a sash full of cubes and pockets full of bottle caps, reading the bill again, slowly grinning, folding it, and tucking it into his coat instead of paying it.

VIGOLAS
…Mine.
FLEXSNUSdelighted, under his little raincloud
…Thought you'd say that.

(Over Flexsnus's head, the tiny raincloud keeps raining. Day two of seven.)

END OF CHAPTER 286

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.