SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga V · The Current · Arc 6 · The Burn

Chapter 293

Bakasura'S Portion
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, day three, dawn.

Roffe on top of an upturned cauldron at the head of the branch, beating Mätt with Sleven: the dinner bell. It rings down the whole length of the Burn.

BWAAANNG — BWAAANNG — BWAAANNG
ROFFE
…SIT DOWN, THE LOT OF YOU!
P2WIDE.

The pilgrims waking and coming up the branch to the chalk tables, hundreds of them, jars in their arms, sitting down in rows, uncertain, in front of bowls with their own names chalked beside them. A place for each jar. A dish for each jar.

PAGE 2
P3CLOSE, an old man

at a table, reading the chalk beside the bowl in front of the empty place opposite him: KARIN · FISH SOUP · NO DILL, SHE HATED DILL.

OLD MANbarely audible
…How did he know about the dill?
LEVLApassing with a tray
…He asked you. · Yesterday. · You cried for an hour, friend.
P4CLOSE, Aska

at the head of the first table, a plate in front of her too: barley bread and honey. Roffe standing over her with his arms folded until she takes a bite.

ROFFE
…Eat first. · Then work.
ASKAmouth full
…You're worse than the Everlasting.
ROFFE
…Much worse, love.
PAGE 3
P5CLOSE, Aska

putting down the bread. And her cracks, which were grey and dull at dawn, glowing again, warm, ember-bright. The amber of the Full Table lighting in her chest under the ember-knot.

ASKAsurprised, looking at her own hands
…I'm strong.
ROFFE
…Strength back. · That's what a table's for.
P6CLOSE, Aska

standing up, turning to the first pilgrim's jar on the table. Explaining it to the old man, gently, the way she explains it to everyone:

ASKA
…Sealed jars keep. · Open one on the Burn and it lights by itself, but only as a picture. · A face that doesn't hear you. · · With me, she gets her heartbeats back. · Sixty. · Hers.
PAGES 4–5 — SPLASH
P7SPLASH (double page). THE MINUTE MEAL.

The whole length of the Burn, black branch under a red-gold dawn, and running down it, table after table of chalk, lantern-lit, steaming, hundreds of places set. And at every table, for one minute each, a family eating with their dead: a fisherman relit with a bowl of salt-cod in front of him and his sons on either side; a girl with a red ribbon and pancakes with lingonberry, her mother laughing; an old woman, Karin, with fish soup, no dill, scolding the old man across the table; a soldier and his little brother splitting a loaf.

Minute after minute, down the branch, like lamps lighting one after another. And Aska walking the tables, cracks glowing, counting under her breath, not tired, giving each one sixty.

And between them, both crews in aprons carrying bowls.

PAGE 6
P8A RUN OF SMALL PANELS, the count in every corner.

Karin, at 45: "You've let the garden go." "I have." "Plant the beans again." "I will."

A father, at 30, feeding his relit baby daughter mashed barley off a spoon, both of them laughing.

Two old sisters, at 59, clinking cups.

An empty bowl, a scraped plate, a spoon set down: 60.

P9CLOSE, Roffe

at the cauldron, counting every one under his breath, ladling the next bowl on the sixtieth beat of the last.

ROFFEbarely audible
…fifty-eight… fifty-nine… · Next bowl.
PAGE 7
P10WIDE, noon.

The line moving faster than it has in a hundred years. Families leaving down the branch with empty jars and full stomachs. Aska still glowing. Jeppson redrawing tables with hands that shake so hard Kompis holds the chalk with him.

P11CLOSE, an Everlasting acolyte

the thin young one from the supply cart, white robe smeared with flour, carrying bowls down a table, and stopping beside a relit old woman to refill her cup. The old woman patting his hand. He goes red.

PAGE 8
P12WIDE, dusk.

The last jar. The last minute. The tables empty, scraped, the lanterns burning down. The pilgrims mostly gone, a few asleep in heaps with empty jars hugged to their chests, smiling. Aska sitting on the edge of a table, tired now, the good kind. Roffe at the cauldron, grey, swaying, his stomach roaring.

GRRRRRRRMMMMMBLLL
P13CLOSE, Roffe

looking down into Mätt. At what's left: a lot. And then looking across the branch at Smurjan, sitting with his back to a stove, and at his shadow, stretched long in the lantern-light, where something huge and quiet is lying with its chin on its paws, watching the pots.

PAGE 9
P14CLOSE, Roffe

wiping his hands on his apron, walking over, lowering himself onto a stool in front of the shadow.

ROFFE
…Oi. · You.

(In the shadow, two small sad eyes open.)

P15CLOSE, the shadow

rising: Bakasura, the great maw, jaws as wide as a door, a white streak down its dark, small sad eyes in all that mouth, looking at the cook.

BAKASURAa low rumble
…Hungry.
ROFFE
…I know, my heart. · · You always are. · Nobody's ever fed you right, have they?
PAGE 10
P16CLOSE, Smurjan

watching, very still. Kali beside him, sitting up.

KALIlow
…Cook. · He eats people.
ROFFE
…He's eaten seventeen. · Over centuries. · · Because nobody ever put a bowl in front of him.
P17CLOSE, Roffe

standing, turning to both ships' crews, rolling up his sleeves again over a hundred burns.

ROFFE
…Everything. · Every scrap on both ships. · Every pot. · · Bring it here.
PAGE 11
P18A RUN OF PANELS: THE PORTION.

Both crews hauling every scrap of food on two ships up the branch: sacks of barley, the last of the salt-cod, Levla's emergency biscuits, Tihi's secret jam, Trollmage's hidden sausages ("…Those were for a nap."), Krydog carrying the Upp Igen's whole larder on his back. Roffe at three stoves at once, faster than anyone's ever seen him, Sleven flashing.

ROFFE
…Onions! · More onions! · He likes onions, I can tell!
P19CLOSE, Mätt

full to the brim, steaming, amber. Roffe setting it down on the black charcoal in front of the great maw. Kneeling beside it with a ladle.

ROFFE
…Your portion. · · Slowly, my heart. · It's not going anywhere.
PAGE 12
P20CLOSE, Bakasura

lowering its jaws to the cauldron. Eating. Slowly. The whole pot. Roffe ladling, ladling. A second pot. A third. The sacks. The biscuits. The jam.

…mmf… mmf… mmf…
P21CLOSE, Smurjan

his eyes going wide, a hand flat on his own stomach. And Kali beside him the same.

SMURJANbarely audible
…Kali. · Do you feel—
KALIstaring at nothing
…Warm.
PAGE 13
P22CLOSE, Bakasura

lifting its jaws out of the last empty pot. Very still. The small sad eyes blinking. Something happening in that great dark body that has never happened before.

P23CLOSE, Bakasura's eyes

not sad. Astonished.

BAKASURAa word it has never said
…Full.
PAGE 14
P24WIDE.

Silence on the Burn. Both crews frozen with sacks and pots in their arms. Smurjan sitting back against the stove, both hands on his stomach, tears running down his face. Kali laughing, a small helpless laugh, one hand over her mouth.

KALI
…Centuries. · · Centuries, and I've never once been full.
SMURJANvery quietly
…None of us have.
P25CLOSE, Bakasura

turning the great maw down toward the grey-faced cook kneeling beside the empty cauldron. Looking at him. At the apron. At the stomach that hasn't stopped growling in three days.

BAKASURAa low, careful rumble
…You?
PAGE 15
P26CLOSE, Roffe

smiling up at the maw, his face grey, his eyes warm, his stomach roaring.

ROFFE
…Me? · Never, my heart. · · Somebody's got to stay hungry. · Keeps the cook honest.
P27CLOSE, Bakasura

a long look at him. Then lowering the great jaws, very slowly, and resting them, gently, on the cook's shoulder. The way a dog rests its chin.

PAGE 16
P28CLOSE, Roffe

under the jaws, his eyes rolling up, sitting down hard on the overturned Mätt, and then fainting flat on his back on the black branch, a smile on his face, his stomach still growling.

THUD. — GRRRMMMBL.
KRYDOGrushing
…Roff!
EMMAalready kneeling, checking him
…He's fine. · · He's hungry.
P29WIDE, night.

Both crews asleep on the branch round a cook flat on his back, a great dark maw curled round him like a dog round its master, and a one-armed woman and a quiet man sitting against a stove, full, for the first time in their lives.

PAGE 17 — THE HOOK
P30WIDE, dawn.

The kitchen cold. The tables bare. The few pilgrims left asleep. And coming down the branch from the pyre, alone, unhurried, in the rags of a red-and-gold showman's coat: the Kindler, steam pouring off his lips, walking along the line of sleeping pilgrims, stopping at each, bending down, whispering.

P31FINAL PANEL, close on the Kindler

straightening up in the middle of the branch, arms spread to the waking pilgrims, the voice of a man who once sold fire for coins in a square.

THE KINDLER
…She could give you MORE minutes! · · She CHOOSES not to!
END OF CHAPTER 293

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