SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga V · The Current · Arc 6 · The Burn

Chapter 297

Put It Out
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, the summit of the pyre.

The furnace-giant hauling on the last white-hot chains. Aska sagging in them, her last fire tearing out of her toward the crowned flame of the King, rising from the ash a little higher. The Manticore on the slope below, wings spread. The crews coming up through the broken ring.

P2CLOSE, Aska's coal eyes

dimming, looking up into the sky of Helios. And inside them, very small, a memory lighting, like a match struck in a dark room.

PAGE 2
P3FLASHBACK, five hundred years ago, drawn in faded ember colours.

The same branch. The same crown, without the pyre-hill: just a stone bier. A king laid on it, old, crowned, burned to ash a week before. Around him, kneeling, a dozen priests in plain white, and one at the front with a lantern: the first High Flame.

FIRST HIGH FLAME
…Ash-Born. · Give him his minute. · · We must hear his will.
P4FLASHBACK.

Aska, exactly as she is now, slight and charcoal and smoke-haired, kneeling at the bier, her palm in the ash. Counting.

ASKAthen
…One minute.
PAGE 3
P5FLASHBACK.

The Ember King relit, sitting up on the bier: an old, tired man in a burned crown, looking at his own hands, at his kneeling priests, at the red sky. Not glorious. Tired.

P6FLASHBACK, close on the King

at 58, leaning down to the woman of charcoal beside him, very quietly, so only she and the first High Flame can hear.

THE EMBER KING
…Let me go. · · Put it out. · Don't keep me burning.
PAGE 4
P7FLASHBACK, close on the first High Flame

at 60, as the King burns back to ash, standing up, turning to the other kneeling priests with his lantern raised, and saying, loudly, clearly:

FIRST HIGH FLAME
…He said: AGAIN.
P8FLASHBACK, wide.

The priests rising, lighting torches off the King's ash, building it into a pyre, and the first chant going up into the red sky:

PRIESTSthen
…AGAIN! AGAIN! AGAIN!

(And a woman of charcoal sitting on the step below them, coal eyes on the High Flame, saying nothing. Nobody had asked her.)

PAGE 5
P9CLOSE, Aska, the present

her coal eyes flaring back up out of embers. Lifting her head in the chains. Turning it toward the furnace-giant. Her voice hoarse as smoke, and suddenly loud, carrying over the whole crown of the Burn.

ASKA
…He never said AGAIN.
P10CLOSE, the furnace-giant

freezing mid-haul, stove-door eyes on her.

THE KINDLER
…What?
PAGE 6
P11CLOSE, Aska

to the Everlasting on the slope, the white robes, the soot halos, every one of them turning to listen.

ASKA
…I gave your King his minute. · Five hundred years ago. · I remember every minute I've ever given. · · He looked at his priests. · And he said: Let me go. · Put it out. · Don't keep me burning.
P12WIDE.

On the pyre's slope, the Everlasting lowering their chains. Looking at one another. At the black hill they've kept smouldering for five centuries. A white-robed old woman sinking to her knees.

OLD EVERLASTINGbarely a whisper
…Put it out…
PAGE 7
P13CLOSE, the furnace-giant

shaking his blazing head, the chains still in his fists.

THE KINDLER
…Lies. · She'd say anything. · · The King wants to rise! · I need him to rise! · I NEED THE FIRE!
P14CLOSE, Aska

looking at him. Not angry. Sorry.

ASKA
…You need the fire, Kindler. · · He never did.
PAGE 8
P15ACTION.

Rougeina, at the summit at last, one Swap a beat: blink, beside Aska; blink, the chain on her left arm swapped with a lump of cold ash; blink, the right. The last chain across her chest.

ROUGEINAbetween Swaps
…Hold still.
ASKA
…I've been holding still for five hundred years.
P16ACTION.

Vigolas behind Rougeina, grabbing the last white-hot chain across Aska's chest with both bare hands, his palms searing, lightning crawling up his arms, and tearing it off her.

VIGOLASthrough his teeth
…I collect these.

(Aska falls free into his arms.)

PAGE 9
P17CLOSE, Aska

in Vigolas's arms at the top of the pyre, almost out, her cracks a web over all of her. Looking up at him. A hand on his chest.

ASKAhoarse
…Pirate. · You answer storms.
VIGOLAS
…You heard about that?
ASKA
…Ash talks. · · Fire's just a slower storm. · Answer this one.
P18CLOSE, Aska's bare black foot

touching the pyre's ash, and an Ember-Trail lighting from her footprint: a line of fire running down into the heart of the King's pyre, under the ash, deep, to the place where the five-hundred-year fire has been smouldering and never, ever been allowed to finish.

PAGE 10
P19CLOSE, Vigolas

closing his eyes. Listening, the way Njord taught him. Feeling the fire of the pyre the way he felt the squall: not a weapon. Weather. Where does it want to go?

P20VIGOLAS'S SENSE OF IT, drawn as a current.

The whole pyre's fire, and the fire swallowed inside the furnace-giant, and the King's crowned flame: all of it leaning one way. Not up. Not out. Down. Into the deepest ash. To finish. A fire that has been kept from finishing for five hundred years, and wants nothing else.

VIGOLASeyes shut, barely audible
…It doesn't want to rise. · · It wants to go out.
PAGES 11–12 — SPLASH
P21SPLASH (double page). PUT IT OUT.

The crown of the Burn. A pirate at the top of a black pyre-hill with a woman of charcoal in one arm and his other hand open toward the ash. Out of his open hand, green lightning, released, not thrown, pouring down Aska's Ember-Trail, and the trail running emerald, a line of green fire racing down into the heart of the pyre.

And all the fire on the crown going with it: the King's crowned flame bowing and pouring down into the ash; the furnace-giant's chest tearing open as five hundred years of swallowed fire rushes out of him and down the emerald trail after it, home; and deep in the pyre, the King's ash finally, completely, burning through: a last great soft bloom of gold light from inside the black hill, and then nothing. Cold. Done.

Around it, the Everlasting on their knees, faces turned up in the last gold light. The Manticore folding its wings.

VIGOLASeyes shut
…Storm-Answer.
ASKAvery softly
…There. · He's out.
PAGE 13
P22WIDE.

The pyre-hill grey. Cold. A hill of plain ash, smoking faintly, no glow anywhere in it for the first time in five hundred years. The crown of the Burn still burning round it, the branch still cracked with ember-light, but the pyre itself: out.

P23CLOSE, the old Everlasting woman

on her knees, putting her palm flat on the grey ash. Cold. Crying.

OLD EVERLASTING
…He's at rest. · · Five hundred years and he's finally at rest.
PAGE 14
P24CLOSE, Mingus

the Manticore shrinking in a shower of gold back into a golden retriever, padding up the hill, and lying down on the warmest footprint left on the cold pyre: one of Aska's.

P25CLOSE, Aska

in Vigolas's arms, her cracks still deep, her coal eyes glowing a little stronger now that nothing is pulling them out of her.

ASKAhoarse
…He said thank you. · · At the very end. · I felt it go.
VIGOLAS
…Five hundred years late.
ASKA
…Better than never.
PAGE 15
P26CLOSE, the pyre's slope

where the furnace-giant stood. The giant gone. A man lying in the cold ash in the rags of a red-and-gold showman's coat, his ribs dark, gaunt again, smaller than ever.

P27CLOSE, the Kindler

curling up on the cold ash, his knees to his chest, his breath steaming in the hot air of the Burn as if he were lying in snow. Shaking.

THE KINDLERthrough chattering teeth
…No. · No, no, no— · Where'd it go— · I was warm—
PAGE 16
P28WIDE.

The crews coming up round him on the cold hill: Krydog, Kompis, Kali, Smurjan, the Everlasting drifting back to stare at their High Flame. Nobody raising a hand. There's nothing to fight.

KRYDOGquietly
…He's freezing.
KOMPISeyes gold
…His thread's going thin. · · The book's price. · Eat fire every day, or freeze.
P29CLOSE, the Kindler

reaching a shaking hand toward the nearest glowing crack in the branch at the pyre's foot, crawling toward it, too weak to reach it.

THE KINDLERa whisper
…Please. · · Just a little fire.
PAGE 17
P30CLOSE, Aska

still in Vigolas's arms, looking down at the shaking man who chained her. A long look.

ASKAhoarse
…I can't relight what isn't burned. · And I won't feed him a King.
P31CLOSE, Vigolas

looking at the Kindler too. At the city he came from. At the cold.

VIGOLASquietly
…Gate City. · · That's mine too.
PAGE 18 — THE HOOK
P32WIDE, from above.

The cold grey pyre at the crown of the burning branch. The crews standing round it. The Everlasting kneeling. And in the middle of them, on the ash, a man in a ragged showman's coat curled up like a child in snow, shaking, his breath steaming, his lips turning blue under their scars.

P33FINAL PANEL, close on the Kindler's face

eyes half closed, frost forming on his lashes in the heat of the Burn.

THE KINDLERbarely a sound
…So… cold…
END OF CHAPTER 297

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