SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga V · The Current · Arc 7 · The Heartwood

Chapter 303

The Finished
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, the sap-river's bank, night.

Levla sitting alone on the bank, the grove's firelight behind him, the narrow river of amber light running past his boots. The grey groove lying in the grain beside him like a sleeping snake.

THE WHISPERin Levla's own voice, grey receipt-bordered balloon, cracked, no tail
…It's heavy, isn't it. · Owning nothing. · Every day, nothing. · · I can make it stop being anything at all.
P2CLOSE, Levla

his pale-gold eyes half shut, no price tags in them, nothing in them.

LEVLAvery quietly
…It's very light. · Owning nothing. · It's very light, and I'm so—

(His lips parting on the next word. The grey groove sliding the last inch toward his ear, the grain greying under his hand where it rests on the bank.)

PAGE 2
P3ACTION.

A long arm in a cream shirtsleeve held up by a brass garter, a hand with six cheap rings on it, grabbing Levla by the collar from behind and hauling him back off the bank so hard he goes over on his back on the floor of the grove.

FLEXSNUS
…Mate.
P4CLOSE, Levla

flat on his back, blinking up. Flexsnus leaning over him at an impossible angle, the one escaping strand of slicked black hair hanging over his forehead, a pinch bulging in his upper lip, not smiling.

LEVLA
…Flexi.
FLEXSNUS
…Up you get. · Away from the bank.
PAGE 3
P5CLOSE, the bank.

The grey groove turning in the grain toward Flexsnus. A new balloon by his ear: his own lazy drawl, the outline leaning, one tiny notch kinked into it, but drawn grey and cracked and tailless.

THE WHISPERin Flexsnus's own voice
…Aren't you tired of bending, friend? · Everything you bend bends back. · · Let it all stop.
P6CLOSE, Flexsnus's thumb on his tin.

tk tk tk. And nothing: no emerald ruled line across the panel, no notch to pinch. He looks at the tin, mildly surprised.

FLEXSNUS
…Huh. · Not a rule. · (beat, to the groove) No thank you, friend. · I lean.

(He leans on the nearest rib of grain, at an angle that should drop him, and doesn't fall. The grey balloon slides off him like rain off oilcloth.)

PAGE 4
P7CLOSE, Levla

sitting up, rubbing his throat, staring at his friend.

LEVLA
…How did you know?
FLEXSNUS
…You stopped flipping. · You haven't had a coin in your pocket since Glasheim, mate, and you've never once stopped flipping it. · · Tonight you stopped.
P8WIDE.

And the groove withdraws: a long stripe of nothing sliding away across the grove's edge through the grain, the grain-lines bending round it like water round a stone, the sap-light dimming over it as it passes and coming back behind it. In the floor its shape is almost a rune: three strokes that keep trying to settle and never do, like a word on the tip of the tongue.

And above it, where a rank plate would hang over anyone else on the board, an empty plate: the frame of a plate, drawn once, with nothing on it at all. No name. No rank. No number. Not even a dash.

PAGE 5
P9WIDE, the grove's edge.

The crews coming running with lanterns. Mingus first, stopping square in the groove's path, legs planted, lips back, the deepest growl he owns. The groove curving round him as if he were a rock in a stream.

KOMPISeyes gold, arriving
…There's nothing on it. · No threads. · None at all. · · Not even to itself.
P10CLOSE, Kali

out of Smurjan's shadow to the waist, one-armed, her one hand shooting out to grab the groove the way she grabs a sin.

KALI
…Let me have a go at it— BORROW—

(Her hand closing on the grain. On nothing.)

KALI
…Nothing to borrow. · It's not a sin. · · It's a full stop.
PAGE 6
P11CLOSE, Vigolas's coat

the lining buzzing, the verdict cube humming so hard the shards clink against each other.

VIGOLAShand flat on it
…I know that hum. · That's the same hunger.
SMURJANthree eyes on the floor
…We know it too.
P12WIDE, the grove.

Runa on her rowan stool under the Rune Wall, not having moved. Everyone turning to her.

RUNA
…The twenty-fifth. · Never carved. · · Its meaning is END.
PAGE 7
P13CLOSE, Runa.

For once, the sap-light in her eyes low.

RUNA
…It offers to finish whatever you are tired of. · In your own voice. · Everyone is tired of something. · · It needs one mouth. · One mouth to speak it aloud in here. · Then it is carved. · · Then the tree has an end.
P14CLOSE, Vigolas

shrugging, a grin, the easy answer.

VIGOLAS
…Then nobody says yes. · Easy.
RUNA
…Everyone is tired of something, woodworm.
PAGE 8
P15CLOSE, Daniel

square-cornered balloon, one hand on the folded certificate in his breast pocket.

DANIEL
…The ones who said yes. · Where are they?
RUNA
…In the galleries. · Go and look. Take a lamp. · Do not touch the grain where it is grey.
P16WIDE, a ring-stair going up into the outer rings.

Both crews climbing behind three silent Bark Monks with long-handled lamps. Perne at the front, patch on her right eye today, the left glowing crimson with the Long Look, a single crimson tear on her cheek.

PERNE
…Gallery. Four rings up. · Figures. · Lots. · · Not moving. None of them breathing.
PAGES 9–10 — SPLASH
P17SPLASH (double page). THE FINISHED.

A vast ring-gallery, a nave of grain stretching away and away into amber haze, its ribs rising like a cathedral's into a ceiling of wood.

And filling it, standing in it, hundreds upon hundreds: grey-wood statues, smooth as driftwood, each caught mid-gesture, each with a face of perfect peace.

A knight mid-bow, helmet under his arm. A woman with the back of her hand at her brow, mid-sigh. A small child mid-yawn. An old sailor mid-shrug. Two people mid-turn away from each other, never quite apart. A troll with a lantern, mid-step. A Trisdel Sentinel in white armour, mid-kneel, his collar hanging open. A table of Bark Monks, brushes lifted, mid-copy. A woman holding a baby out to nobody. People in the clothes of a hundred centuries: furs, silks, Order whites, fisher-wool.

Every one of them finished.

At the gallery's mouth, small and lit by a few lamps, both crews, stopped dead. Mingus with his hackles up.

PAGE 11
P18A RUN OF SMALL PANELS, faces.

A man with his eyes shut and the beginning of a smile, as if he's just put something heavy down.

A girl mid-letting-go of a doll, the doll grey too.

An old woman with her hands folded in her lap.

A Bark Monk, ancient, wearing a fresh robe of bark that someone has laid over his wooden shoulders since. They still dress their Finished.

P19CLOSE, Öde

scythe on her back, kneeling by a long table where a Bark Monk keeps a ledger of shed bark: rows of names, each in sap-ink. And many more rows with no name at all, only a line.

ÖDEplain, slow
…Somebody should know who they were.
BARK MONKthe first one we hear, a whisper
…We write them. · When we know.
PAGE 12
P20CLOSE, Isa

a beat behind, standing in front of a statue of a woman standing perfectly still, hands at her sides, chin up, eyes open, no breath.

ISAa beat after everyone else's silence
…She looks like me.
P21CLOSE, Daniel

his hand going up, palm out, the way it goes up before any appeal, the double border already forming round his balloon—

DANIEL
…Objec—

(—and stopping. His hand stays up a moment. Then comes slowly down.)

DANIEL
…They chose. · I don't appeal a choice.
KRYDOGbeside him, quietly
…Then who appeals for them?
DANIEL
…Nobody can. · That's what a choice is.
PAGE 13
P22CLOSE, Ysel

hood down, no shadow at her feet, standing in the middle of the gallery among the statues, looking at them the way she looks at a locked door.

YSEL
…There's one way into it.

(Everyone turns.)

YSEL
…A yes.
P23CLOSE, Rougeina

apart from the others, in front of a Finished swordsman whose blade is lowered, point to the floor, his face soft with relief. She looks at him too long. Her hand drifts up to the hilts on her back.

PAGE 14
P24CLOSE, Svala

bouncing on her toes, then not.

SVALA
…They look happy.
EMMAquietly, beside her
…They look finished. · That isn't the same thing.
P25CLOSE, Vigolas

looking down the endless gallery, lamp held up.

VIGOLAS
…How many?
RUNAher voice up through the floor, far below
…Eleven thousand years of tired. · · Enough.
PAGE 15
P26CLOSE, Smurjan

his third eye opening, crimson-rimmed. THIRD-EYE POV: the gallery as grey diagram lines. In every statue, the grain of the body runs up to the mouth, and stops there in a small closed point, like a full stop at the end of a line. A hundred statues, a hundred full stops.

SMURJAN
…Every one of them ends at the mouth.
P27CLOSE, Kompis

frowning, gold-eyed.

KOMPIS
…The boy. · Abbe. · His mouth's still open.
RUNAthrough the floor
…Yes. · That is why he is inside the Ward. · He is safe there.

(Smurjan's third eye stays open a beat longer, looking down through the floor toward the grove, unsure. Then closes.)

PAGE 16
P28WIDE, the next gallery along.

The Up-Again crew drifting through it in a loose group, lamps raised: Roffe, Jeppson, Perne, Daniel, Flexsnus with Levla, Tihi holding Emma's sleeve, deaf, reading lips. Krydog ahead of them all, walking along a line of statues the way he walks into any fight, shoulders first, looking at every face.

P29CLOSE, Krydog

stopping. In front of him, a statue of a big man lying on his back on the floor of the gallery, hands folded on his chest, asleep: perfectly, deeply, forever. The one thing Krydog has never once done on purpose. Krydog looking down at it for a long time. The shadows under his own eyes very deep.

PAGE 17 — THE HOOK
P30CLOSE, Emma

a few steps behind, stopping. Her head turning. She can hear it.

P31FINAL PANEL, close on Krydog

standing very still over the sleeping statue, his bandaged fists hanging open at his sides. By his ear, a balloon in his own big warm voice: his flat-based, squared balloon, the one that always looks as if it's standing up, drawn grey, cracked, with no tail, and for the first time in the series, sagging.

THE WHISPERin Krydog's own voice
…Sleep. · You've earned it. · Four thousand nights. · · Nobody will ever knock you down again.
END OF CHAPTER 303

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.