SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga II · The Call · Arc 5 · The Compost Fields

Chapter 66

Hungry
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, the Marka, deep night, the open Current.

The same night. The ship sails dark, one lantern lit by the mast. Behind her, a ring of slow ripples where Rävgrytet sank. Above her, across the whole sky, the Arbiter's sentence still hangs in hard square stars: ONE MATCH. OF MANY, with no full stop.

P2MID, the mast.

Smurjan sits against it, wide awake now, very still. The lantern throws his three shadows across the deck. His own. Kali's, one-armed. And Bakasura's, which covers the planks from rail to rail and is still growing, sliding up the mainsail like a tide coming up a beach.

P3CLOSE, Smurjan's mouth.

The voice that comes out isn't his. Slow, deep, hollow, a huge round balloon with almost nothing in it.

SMURJANBakasura's voice
…Hungry.
PAGE 2
P4CLOSE, the binnacle.

The ship's compass, needle trembling, still pointing off the bow at the dark ring on the horizon. On the compass card under it: TRINITY.

P5CLOSE, Smurjan

pressing both palms flat to the deck as if he's holding a door shut from the inside. Sweat on his grey face. The crimson script-scars on his forearms flare, one line at a time.

SMURJANhis own voice, low
Not here. Not on the ship. We'll find you something. Wait.
KALIfrom his mouth, fast, frightened for once
He's done waiting, brother. He's been waiting since the Arena. Do you know how long that is in hungry? That's forever in hungry—
P6CLOSE, the shadow on the deck.

Its edges lift off the planks. The flat black shape becomes thick, then deep, then solid, rising.

PAGES 3–4 — SPLASH
P7SPLASH (double page). THE HUNGER.

Bakasura rises out of Smurjan's shadow, higher than the mainmast: a black hill of wet hide veined with amber that pulses like embers, rows of teeth like broken pillars, and high above it all, the small mournful eyes, ringed tonight with a wild amber light that wasn't there before.

Beneath him, the whole crew is still asleep: Rougeina curled around her panther by the rail; Trollmage snoring in a coil of rope with the crow on his belly; Kompis at the bow with Mingus across his feet and Lilla Ulv asleep in her holster; Vigolas sitting up against the bowsprit with a hopeless tangle of rope in his lap; Drekk slumped at the wheel in his woven mask.

Above everything, the sentence in the stars. And at the foot of the maw, tiny, one hand raised as if he could hold back a landslide: Smurjan.

BAKASURAa balloon the size of a sail, almost empty
…HUNGRY.
PAGE 5
P8ACTION.

The jaws come down on the row of water casks lashed along the starboard rail.

KRRRUNCH

Casks, lashings, and two metres of rail are simply gone. Water sheets across the deck.

P9ACTION, the deck erupting awake.

Mingus is up first, four legs braced, barking at the sky.

MINGUS
WOOF! WOOF! WOOF!
KOMPISscrambling up
Wha— Smurjan?!
P10CLOSE, the rope coil.

The jaws swing toward it, dripping. Inside the coil, Trollmage snores on. The crow on his belly opens one eye, sees what's coming, and screams.

THE CROW
KRAAAA!
PAGE 6
P11ACTION, three beats in one tier.

Blink: a silver-rose afterimage by the rail, and Rougeina is crouched beside the coil (a belaying pin clatters to the deck where she was).

She grabs Trollmage by the collar.

Blink: both of them are at the foot of the mainmast. Behind them the jaws close on the rope coil. KRUNCH. A perfectly round hole in the deck-clutter where it was.

P12CLOSE, Trollmage

dangling from Rougeina's fist, still asleep, the crow clinging to his hair.

TROLLMAGEasleep
…mm. Five more minutes.
ROUGEINA
You nearly didn't get five more seconds.
PAGE 7
P13ACTION.

Kali bursts out of the shadow, red braid whipping, one arm. She doesn't strike. She throws herself at the maw, hooks her one arm around a lower tooth like a pillar, and hauls back with her whole weight, heels skidding on the wet deck.

KALI
BAD! Bad! No! Not the lazy one! Not the rope! Not the BOAT! We do not eat the boat! We like the boat! The boat is where we SLEEP—
P14ACTION.

Vigolas vaults onto the capstan, green lightning crawling over his knuckles, fist cocked, and stops. His eyes ring with gold: Greed-sight. In it, the maw glows like a bonfire, worth everything to someone. He lowers the fist.

VIGOLAS
…Can't punch him. Can't fold him. He's crew.
VIGOLASbellowing up at the teeth
Nobody eats anybody on my ship! You hear me, big— uh— bigger man?!
PAGE 8
P15ACTION.

Kompis reaches Smurjan, Mingus pressed against his leg. Smurjan is on his knees now, both fists against his own chest, his white braid stuck to his face with sweat.

KOMPIS
How do we help?! Tell me how!
SMURJANthrough his teeth
You don't. He's not angry. He's starving. You can't talk a hunger down.
P16LUST-SIGHT POV.

Kompis's eyes film gold. From Smurjan's chest run eighteen gold threads, every one of them climbing up into the maw above, pulled taut and trembling like mooring lines in a storm.

KOMPISthinking
Eighteen. And every one of them's being dragged the same way.
PAGE 9
P17WIDE.

The maw swings away from the rail, with Kali still dangling from its tooth and shrieking, and turns toward the bow. Toward the Kettle's bell, gleaming on its post. And below the bell, on the hull, the long scar of dead white bark with the shape of Ulla's arms and hands glowing gold inside it.

KALI
NOT THE BELL! You'll get bell-ache! Do you know how long bell-ache lasts?!
P18CLOSE, Kompis

seeing where it's going.

KOMPIS
Drekk—!
PAGE 10
P19WIDE.

Drekk is already moving. He lets go of the wheel, walks the length of the deck without hurrying, and stops between the jaws and the bell, his back to the bell. The woven mask of the Kettle's old bell-rope is his face now: two dark eyeholes, a stern rope brow. He spreads his arms wide, the way someone once spread hers across a pair of jaws in a silent dawn.

P20CLOSE, the jaws

a metre above Drekk's masked head. Teeth like broken pillars. Drool steaming in the lantern light. Behind them, the hot dark of a throat that goes down forever.

DREKKmuffled, through the mask
Go on, then.
PAGE 11
P21CLOSE, Bakasura's eyes

small and high and wild, looking down at the masked man.

P22EXTREME CLOSE, the mask.

Old rope, salt-stiff, dark with thirty years of hands. The rope that rang the Kettle's bell. Marka's bell, on Marka's boat, before there was a ship that bore her name.

P23CLOSE, Bakasura's eyes.

The wild amber ring falters. Something underneath it. Recognition. Grief.

BAKASURAa tiny balloon
…Kettle.
PAGE 12
P24CLOSE, Smurjan's chest.

And from inside it, under the roar of the hunger, a new sound. An old man's voice: low, slow, a little off-key, humming to the rhythm of oars. His balloon is soft and round, with a small ripple drawn under each note.

TORBJÖRNfrom inside Smurjan, humming
Hm-hmm… hm-hm… Row, little ferry, the river is wide…
P25WIDE.

All across the deck the crew goes still. Vigolas on the capstan. Rougeina at the mast with Trollmage. Kompis with the dog. Even Kali, hanging from the tooth, stops kicking.

TORBJÖRNfrom inside
…nobody stays on the cold side.
P26ACTION, slow.

The great jaws close, gently, on nothing. The maw sinks. Down and down, like a tide going out, back into the shadow at Smurjan's knees. Kali drops onto the deck on her backside with a thump.

KALI
…Ow.
PAGE 13
P27WIDE, the deck afterwards.

A bite out of the starboard rail. No water casks. A round hole where the rope coil was. Water sloshing. Mingus going from person to person, sniffing each one in turn, checking them.

P28CLOSE, Smurjan

on his knees in front of Drekk, head bowed to the deck. His three shadows lie flat behind him like three people prostrated.

SMURJAN
We're sorry. We're so sorry.
P29CLOSE, Drekk.

He looks down at the kneeling man for a long moment through the eyeholes of the mask. Then he lowers his arms.

DREKKmuffled
Don't be sorry. He's hungry.
DREKK
So feed him.
PAGE 14
P30WIDE, dawn.

The Marka sails on, patched with spare planks. Smurjan sits at the stern rail, legs crossed, eyes closed, meditating over the starlight. Kompis sits down beside him with two tin cups of something hot. Mingus flops between them.

KOMPIS
Who was singing?
P31CLOSE, Smurjan

eyes still closed.

SMURJAN
Torbjörn.
SMURJAN
He's the oldest of them. The first one Bakasura ever ate.
PAGE 15
P32FLASHBACK INSET, grey-sepia.

A wide, slow river under a grey sky. A flat-bottomed ferry with a lantern on its prow. Poling it across, an old man with a white beard down to his belt and a ferryman's flat hat. On the ferry, huddled: a gaunt young grey-skinned figure with three shadows, starving, all ribs.

SMURJANnarrating
Three hundred years ago. We were new, and we were starving, and he rowed us across the Grey River for nothing. He gave us his supper.
SMURJANnarrating
Bakasura was still hungry.
P33FLASHBACK, close.

The old ferryman looking up at a vast mouth opening over him. He isn't afraid. He's smiling, sad and kind, holding out one open hand, the way you'd hold it out to a frightened dog.

SMURJANnarrating
He forgave him on the way down. He's sung him to sleep every night since.
P34CLOSE, Kali

sitting on the stern rail behind them, half out of the shadow, swinging her feet. Quieter than we've ever seen her.

KALI
He's the only one of us who never shouts. Not once in three hundred years. It's infuriating. He calls the big guy "little one". Little one!
PAGE 16 — THE HOOK
P35MID.

Vigolas drops down beside them out of the rigging, his tangle of rope still round his wrist. Serious.

VIGOLAS
He's starving. So where do we feed him?
SMURJAN
Nothing on the Current feeds him. Starlight isn't food. Salt would kill everyone inside him. The Nightmares were poison.
SMURJANopening his eyes, looking toward the binnacle
That's why the needle moved. He can smell home.
P36CLOSE, Kali

very quietly, for her.

KALI
…Oh no. She'll remember us.
VIGOLAS
Who?
SMURJAN
The one who grows us back.
P37LUST-SIGHT POV, Kompis looking at Smurjan.

Eighteen gold threads, all tied to one heart. And a nineteenth that wasn't there last night. It leaves Smurjan's chest and goes down: through the deck, through the hull, into the Current, off toward the horizon where the needle points. It isn't gold. It's brown, and fibrous, and it branches.

KOMPISthinking
…That isn't a thread.
P38FINAL PANEL, wide.

Far ahead, between two drifting islands, an arch rises out of the starlight like a bridge made of black earth, wider than any island, its far end plunging back into the Current: a root, of a tree too big to see.

KOMPISthinking
It's a root.
END OF CHAPTER 66

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.