SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga II · The Call · Arc 5 · The Compost Fields

Chapter 73

The Ferryman
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, beyond the last salt line.

Saltbrand stands on his iron sled, hood thrown back, both arms spread, white salt-fire running up his cracked crust from his boots to his bald crown like a living torch. Above him rears the mountain of mouth.

SALTBRAND
Built for you, Trinity. Couldn't touch you. You're too exact.
SALTBRAND
So I'll let your hunger touch me.
P2CLOSE, Saltbrand

lifting his burning arm toward the jaws like a man offering meat to a dog.

SALTBRAND
Eat, then.
PAGE 2
P3ACTION.

Smurjan and Kali arrive at a dead run. Kali leaps, hooks her one arm round a lower tooth, and hauls back with everything she has, heels kicking at the air.

KALI
NO! No no no no! Spit-it-out-spit-it-out-spit-it-OUT! It's SALT, you ENORMOUS IDIOT—
P4CLOSE, Smurjan

below the jaws, his third eye blazing. A crimson Sightline draws itself to the hinge of the great jaw: the one point that would stop the bite. His palm is raised.

His palm doesn't move.

SMURJAN
…I can't.
SMURJAN
He's my family. I can't strike my family.
P5IMPACT.

The jaws close on Saltbrand's burning arm, and on the white fire.

KRRRUNCH
PAGE 3 — INSIDE
P6BLACK PANEL.

Silence.

P7WIDE, a place we have never seen.

Inside Bakasura. A slow black river runs under a sky full of tiny amber stars that drift like embers. On the far shore stands a little village of lamplit houses from three different centuries: a fisherman's hut, a stone cottage, a soldier's tent, a door built for a troll. People sit on the shore by small fires: the consumed. And among them, on an upturned boat beside the biggest fire, sits a very large woman with her back to us and an anchor on a chain lying at her feet.

P8CLOSE, a flat-bottomed ferry

tied up at the near bank, a lantern on its prow. Asleep on its deck, his flat ferryman's hat tipped over his eyes, an old man with a white beard down to his belt. Torbjörn.

PAGE 4
P9WIDE.

Upstream, where the river begins in the dark, the sky cracks open, and white fire pours down out of it like a waterfall of light, hissing, falling into the river. Where it touches the water, the water turns white and dead. The whiteness starts to flow. Downstream. Toward the shore. Toward the lamps.

P10CLOSE, the shore.

The consumed are on their feet, faces lit white: a young girl, a soldier with one boot, an old cook with a ladle in his belt. Nobody speaks.

P11CLOSE, Torbjörn

pushing back his hat. He looks upstream at the falling fire. He isn't afraid. He lets out a small sigh, like a man who's been called out on a cold night and knew he would be.

TORBJÖRN
…Ah.
PAGE 5
P12MID.

Torbjörn stands up on his ferry, takes up his long pole, and unties the mooring rope. He glances over at the shore: the big woman by the fire has turned round now, half-risen, one huge hand reaching out toward him. Her face is lost in shadow.

TORBJÖRNgently
Sit down, lass. It's a one-man boat.
P13CLOSE, the big woman's hand

lowering. Slowly. Then lifting again, to her brow: two fingers. A sailor's salute.

P14ACTION.

Torbjörn plants the pole and pushes off. Upstream. Toward the fire. Humming.

TORBJÖRNhumming
Hm-hmm… row, little ferry, the river is wide…
PAGES 6–7 — SPLASH
P15SPLASH (double page). THE FERRYMAN.

Bakasura's throat, from the inside: the river narrowing into a great dark gorge, and down it, thundering, the white salt-fire, falling like a star.

Across the narrows, the old ferryman has jammed his ferry sideways like a door, and he stands on it with his long pole braced against the roof of the throat, holding the whole hunger shut. The white fire falls on him. Not past him. On him. His beard, his hat, his patched coat are whitening, crusting, salt creeping up his arms and his pole; the lantern on the prow is still lit.

Behind him, downstream, the river runs dark and safe to the lamplit shore, where small figures stand in a row and watch him hold.

His face is calm. He's still humming.

TORBJÖRN
…nobody stays on the cold side.
PAGE 8
P16CLOSE, Torbjörn

white to the shoulders now, salt in his beard like frost. He looks back over his shoulder, toward the shore.

TORBJÖRN
Everyone across?
P17CLOSE, the shore.

Faces in lamplight. Nobody can answer him. The big woman's salute is still held.

P18CLOSE, Torbjörn

smiling, his eyes going white.

TORBJÖRN
…Good.
PAGE 9 — OUTSIDE
P19WIDE.

Outside, the maw stands frozen with its jaws clamped tight, white smoke leaking out between the teeth. Kali still hangs from one tooth, silent now, staring at the smoke.

P20CLOSE, Bakasura's small eyes.

The wildness goes out of them all at once, like a lamp turned down. They're wet.

P21ACTION.

Bakasura spits.

PTOOOO

Out onto the black soil tumbles Saltbrand, his arm gone to the shoulder, his crust cracked all over, the fire on him guttering. And beside him, rolling to a stop, something small, and white.

PAGE 10
P22CLOSE, on the black soil.

A figure of white salt, no bigger than a child: an old man kneeling, a beard down to his belt, a ferryman's hat, a pole across his knees. His face is peaceful. His eyes are closed.

P23CLOSE, Smurjan

dropping to his knees in front of it.

SMURJAN
…Torbjörn.
P24CLOSE, Kali

landing beside him, reaching out her one hand, and stopping a finger's width short. She knows salt now.

KALIvery small
…He never shouted. Not once. Three hundred years.
PAGE 11
P25WIDE.

A few steps away, Saltbrand pushes himself up on his one remaining arm, his crust already beginning to close over the wounds. He reaches for the branding iron lying in the soil, raises it one-handed at the back of the kneeling man.

SALTBRAND
…Still burning.
P26ACTION.

Blink, blink, blink: silver-rose afterimages across the field, and Rougeina lands beside the salt line with a huge, slimed, mushroom-furred, snoring shape dangling from her fist by the collar. Trollmage. She sets him down in the soil and kneels by his ear. And for once she doesn't poke him with a pommel. She says his name softly.

ROUGEINAgently
Lazy one. It's time.
PAGE 12
P27CLOSE, Trollmage's eyes

opening. Violet. Blazing. Three days of waiting in a realm where waiting grows mushrooms. Brighter than they have ever been.

TROLLMAGE
…Someone stopped singing.
P28CLOSE, Trollmage

sitting up, writing in the air in enormous violet letters:

MACRO : CLOUDBURST = 3 DAYS

TROLLMAGE
You uncounted the rain that was. Nobody uncounted the rain I've been waiting for.
PAGE 13
P29WIDE.

The dry sky over the Compost Fields opens. Rain, sweet rain, three days of it in one moment, comes down like the sea falling out of the sky.

SHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
P30ACTION, a run of small panels.

Every white salt line across the Fields drowns at once in a roar of hissing steam.

Saltbrand screams, a dry, cracked scream. Sweet water runs over him and his crust runs like wet sugar, his legs melting away beneath him to the knee, to the hip.

Thunder. On Kompis's hip, Lilla Ulv whimpers. Kompis, arriving at a run with Vigolas and Mingus, tucks the pistol inside his hoodie.

KOMPIS
It's just rain, little one.
PAGE 14
P31CLOSE, Trollmage

standing in the downpour over what's left of Saltbrand, who lies dissolving to the waist in the mud, the branding iron cold in a puddle beside him.

TROLLMAGE
My grandmother held your fire on her back for a whole ship.
TROLLMAGE
She'd let you go. So I'm letting you go. Be grateful. I'm too lazy to hate you properly.
P32CLOSE, Saltbrand's face

in the rain. Water running down his cracked cheeks. Rain filling his bone-dry, red-rimmed eyes. Filling them, and running over. For the first time in his life, the salt man has tears.

SALTBRANDa dry whisper
…I can… cry.
P33WIDE.

Saltbrand drags what's left of himself away through the rain on one arm, toward the gate. Nobody stops him.

PAGE 15
P34CLOSE, the salt figure of Torbjörn

in the rain. The rain is melting it. The beard first. Then the hat.

P35ACTION.

Kali throws herself over it, her one arm and her whole body a roof. Vigolas, arriving at a run, tears off his coat and holds it out over both of them, shards clinking, rain pouring off its hem. Smurjan cups his hands around what's left.

It doesn't matter. It's salt, and it's water. It runs out between their fingers into the soil.

KALI
No no no no— stay— stay—
P36CLOSE, the soil where it ran.

A small white circle, a hand's-breadth wide, dead and white, in the middle of the black, wet, endlessly growing earth.

PAGE 16
P37MID.

Röta comes through the rain and kneels at the white circle. She lays her long root-fingers on it.

RÖTAvery softly
Compost.

Nothing. Not a shoot. Not a thread of mould. The circle stays white.

P38CLOSE, Röta.

Rain on her face, beetles stirring in her hair.

RÖTA
…Salt.
RÖTA
Everything ends up with me. Everything. I make it into something.
RÖTA
…Not him.
PAGE 17 — THE HOOK
P39WIDE.

Bakasura, huge and quiet now, lowers himself onto the soil beside Smurjan. Then he sinks: slowly, gently, back into Smurjan's shadow, like a tide coming home. Behind Smurjan on the wet earth there are three shadows again. Röta watches it happen. Nothing tied him. He came home on his own.

BAKASURAfrom the shadow, a tiny balloon
…Sorry.
P40FINAL PANEL, close on Smurjan

eyes shut, rain running down his face, listening to the inside of his own chest. The voices are back. He counts them, one by one. We can see his lips moving.

SMURJAN
…Seventeen.
END OF CHAPTER 73

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.