SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga II · The Call · Arc 5 · The Compost Fields

Chapter 75

The Sentence
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, the white room on the soil.

Rain falling indoors. Sigvat standing on the white tiles with the two halves of his scroll; Smurjan kneeling in chains at the centre, thirty metres between them. The grey dead watching from the tiers.

SIGVAT
I was a handful of words from the end. Then a lazy troll changed one of them, and a man with a white braid cut my scroll in half.
SIGVAT
The Arena doesn't like unfinished things. Neither do I.
P2A square balloon, stamped across the rain:
SIN COUNTS. ADVANTAGE
SMURJAN.
P3CLOSE, the chains on Smurjan's wrists.

They crack, and fall away, and clatter on the tiles. The memory has changed.

SMURJAN
…In the real one, the chains never came off.
SIGVAT
Lucky you. I've no sin left to count. I've a sentence.
PAGE 2
P4CLOSE, Sigvat

pushing the glassless spectacles up his nose with one ink-stained finger. His hair is thick and dark. His hands are young.

SIGVAT
Every decree I ever read cost me a year. I was thirty, and I looked like my grandfather.
SIGVAT
Dead men don't pay. Here, I'm thirty.
SIGVATbeat
I've never been thirty before.
P5CLOSE, Smurjan

getting to his feet.

SMURJAN
I'm sorry.
KALIsharp, from his shadow
WE'RE sorry. He can't say it right now. It's a whole thing.
P6CLOSE, Sigvat.
SIGVAT
Don't be sorry. Be quiet. I'm reading.
PAGE 3
P7CLOSE, Smurjan's third eye

opening, crimson-rimmed. A crimson line draws itself across the whole white room, straight to Sigvat's chest, to the thin crimson scar where the first strike passed.

SMURJAN
Sightline.
P8ACTION.

He walks it. Step. Step. Unhurried and perfect, the way he always walks it.

P9CLOSE, Sigvat

not even glancing down at the scroll.

SIGVAT
"The floor before the soul designated SMURJAN."
P10ACTION.

The white tiles in front of Smurjan's next step go grey, and then they are gone: a hole of black wet soil. His foot comes down on nothing, and he drops into it to the waist.

PAGE 4
P11ACTION, a run of small panels.

Smurjan hauls himself out and steps forward.

SIGVAT
"The tile beneath his foot."

Gone. He drops again.

He jumps the gap.

SIGVAT
"The floor where he lands."

Gone before he lands.

He catches the edge of a hole with his left hand, his strange new left hand, and climbs.

P12CLOSE, Sigvat

calm as a clock.

SIGVAT
You're very precise. It doesn't matter.
SIGVAT
You can't step half an inch out of the way of a voice.
PAGE 5
P13ACTION.

Out of the shadow behind Sigvat, Kali bursts up: Shadow-Lash. Her black-glass sickle sweeps once and slices both halves of the scroll out of his hands. Paper scatters in the rain.

KALI
HA! No paper, no—
P14CLOSE, Sigvat

watching the paper fall without interest.

SIGVAT
I read it ten thousand times. I don't need the paper.
SIGVAT
I never did. The paper was for the people who needed to see it.
P15ACTION.

Bakasura rises out of Smurjan's shadow, jaws open over the dead man. One bite. One heartbeat. Gone.

And then the jaws stop.

PAGE 6
P16CLOSE, Bakasura's small eyes

looking down at the clerk.

BAKASURA
…Not… inside.
P17CLOSE, Kali

staring up at him, then getting it.

KALI
…Oh. Oh. Right. Eat him and he's one of us. Forever. In there. Reading.
KALI
…Yeah, no, good call, don't eat him.
PAGE 7 — CUT: THE MARKA
P18WIDE, the Marka at night in the rain.

The single plate hangs above the bow, pulsing. Everyone is gathered around it. Drekk stands beside it, arms folded, rain running off the bell-rope mask.

P19LUST-SIGHT POV, Kompis.

His thread to Smurjan runs over the rail and simply ends, a metre past the ship, as if the world stops there.

KOMPIS
Still there. It's still there.
P20CLOSE, Trollmage

sitting on a fresh coil of rope, uncharacteristically quiet. Mingus lies against the base of the hanging plate, chin on his paws.

TROLLMAGE
Nobody's ever heard of it calling one. So the other one's somewhere we can't see.
PAGE 8 — INSIDE
P21ACTION.

Kali leaps onto Sigvat's back and clamps her one hand over his mouth.

KALI
Has to be heard, right?! Nobody hears anything through a HAND—
P22ACTION.

Sigvat, a dead man, strong the way dead things are strong, peels her hand off his face and throws her across the tiles. Then, clearly:

SIGVAT
"The hand that was upon my mouth."
P23CLOSE, Kali's hand.

Nothing happens. Not a flicker of grey.

P24CLOSE, Sigvat

frowning. The first expression we've seen on him.

SIGVAT
…You're not written anywhere.
KALIsprawled on the tiles
Never have been! Rude, honestly!
PAGE 9
P25CLOSE, Sigvat

turning his head slowly toward Smurjan, with new attention.

SIGVAT
Not her. · But he is.
P26CLOSE, Kali

scrambling up, her eyes going wide as she understands.

KALI
…Oh no. Okay. Okay. He has to be heard.
KALI
Then nobody's hearing anything.
P27CLOSE, Kali

filling the panel, taking the biggest breath of her whole life.

PAGES 10–11 — SPLASH
P28SPLASH (double page). THE VOICE WAR.

The white room becomes a storm of noise.

From Sigvat's mouth, his dry decree-words stream out like ribbons of printed black-and-white paper, greying every tile and drop of rain they brush. And crashing into them, smothering them before they can land: a flood of Kali's jagged red balloons, overlapping, overflowing the panel, and from the shadow, Bakasura's maw thrown open in a ROAR, a wall of amber sound with no words in it at all.

Through the middle of it, along a perfect crimson line, Smurjan walks: step, step, step, toward the dead man, while the floor greys and steadies and greys again under him. In the tiers all around, the grey dead are leaning forward.

KALI
—AND ANOTHER THING ABOUT DEAD CLERKS, you think you're SO SPECIAL with your little SPECTACLES with no GLASS in them, what's even the POINT of spectacles with no GLASS, I'll TELL you the point, there IS NO POINT, I've been talking for THREE HUNDRED YEARS and I have NEVER ONCE run out of things to say about people LIKE YOU—
BAKASURA
RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR—
SIGVAThis balloons drowned, unreadable
"—by decree— —hand of— —"
PAGE 12
P29ACTION.

Sigvat stops trying to shout over them. He simply waits, patient, while Smurjan comes on along the line: twenty metres. Fifteen.

SIGVATto himself, in a gap in the noise
I'm dead. I have all the time there is.
P30CLOSE, Kali

red-faced, voice cracking, still going.

KALI
—and your HAIR— and your— your—

(a gasp)

P31CLOSE, Bakasura

his roar trailing off into a rasp. One action in a heartbeat is all he's ever had, and he's spent a hundred of them roaring.

BAKASURAtiny, hoarse
…Can't.
PAGE 13
P32PANEL, silence.

For one beat, everyone is out of breath at the same moment. The rain falls. Nothing else makes a sound.

P33CLOSE, Sigvat

into the silence, clear and dry:

SIGVAT
"By decree of the Null Protocol, under the hand of Architect Two—"
P34ACTION.

Smurjan runs. For the first time in any fight he has ever fought, he runs, flat out, along the crimson line. Ten metres. Five.

PAGE 14 — CUT: THE MARKA
P35CLOSE, the hanging plate.

At its edges, the letters are going grey, like paper left out in the sun. Drekk unfolds his arms and steps closer.

P36LUST-SIGHT POV, Kompis.

His thread to Smurjan thinning, fraying, gold going pale.

KOMPIS
…No. No, no, no—
PAGE 15 — INSIDE
P37CLOSE, Sigvat.
SIGVAT
"—the soul designated TRINITY—"
P38CLOSE, Smurjan

two metres away, his palm drawn back, the Sightline blazing on the crimson scar.

P39CLOSE, Sigvat

looking him in the eye. Almost kind.

SIGVAT
"—and all who are carried in it."
PAGE 16 — THE HOOK
P40CLOSE, Smurjan's chest.

His heart. One last beat: ba—

Then nothing. The crimson script across his skin goes grey, line by line.

P41WIDE.

Smurjan falls forward, one step from Sigvat, his open palm a hand's width from the scar, and lies still on the cracked white tiles in the rain.

P42FINAL PANEL, OUTSIDE.

The hanging plate, entirely grey now, its letters worn smooth like an old coin. The crew stands around it. Trollmage looks up at it, puzzled, a little sad, and doesn't know why.

TROLLMAGE
…Whose plate is that?
END OF CHAPTER 75

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.