SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga I · The Satchel · Arc 1 · The Heist

Chapter 1

Unnumbered
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, night sea.

A small black-sailed pirate ship, lanterns swinging, climbs the face of a wave forty metres high. Lightning cracks green on the horizon.

Eleven years. Seventeen ships taken. One rule: never look back.
P2MID, the deck.

The crew is screaming, clinging to ropes, being thrown overboard. At the wheel, lashed to it with his own belt, stands CAPTAIN VIGOLAS: dark windswept hair, emerald eyes, midnight-green coat. He is not screaming. He is looking up.

P3CLOSE, his eyes.

The wave is not what is reflected in them. Gold coins, torn loose from the flooded hold, glitter in the spray around the ship.

VIGOLASquietly
Forty metres. Three hundred tons of water.
VIGOLAS
…and about nine hundred in coin. Shame.
PAGE 2
P4FULL WIDTH.

The wave comes down.

BOOOOM
P5UNDERWATER, dark green.

Vigolas sinks with his eyes open. A single gold coin drifts past his face, and he reaches for it.

Even dying, he wanted to know what it cost.
P6BLACK PANEL.

A thin heartbeat line runs across the page and goes flat.

tk… tk… …
PAGE 3
P7WIDE, a grey forest.

The trees have no leaves, only pale bark. Footprints press into the moss with nobody making them, until they stop at a stump. FENNA sits there with an open book across her knees: plain grey coat, a face that looks like it has never been surprised. Vigolas stands in front of her, soaked and barefoot, dripping onto moss that does not get wet.

FENNA
Name.
VIGOLAS
Who's asking?
FENNA
The one who writes down what you were worth.
P8TWO-SHOT.

She turns the book toward him. Columns of names, each with a mark beside it.

FENNA
Every soul is ranked at birth by the Order. K-one to K-five. One step up the ladder, ten times the danger.
VIGOLAS
And what am I?
P9INSERT, the page.

His name is there: VIGOLAS. In the rank column, the ink will not settle. K-I… K-IV… K-?… scrolls and glitches, then burns into a symbol nobody prints:

∞−1

PAGE 4
P10CLOSE, Fenna.

For the first time her expression changes, very slightly.

FENNA
…Your entry has been edited. Seven times.
VIGOLAS
By who?
FENNA
Not by me.
P11MID.

She closes the book. The forest starts to fade behind Vigolas.

FENNA
Go back. Someone is going to be very upset that you exist.
PAGE 5
P12WIDE, dawn, a black-sand beach.

Wreckage everywhere. Vigolas gasps awake on the sand, coughing seawater. Up on the cliffs stands a harbour city, and in its centre rises a colossal glowing board taller than a cathedral, crawling with millions of names and numbers: the Scalelist.

P13MID.

Three figures land around him in a spray of sand: TRISDEL SENTINELS in white armour with faceless helmets, glowing collars at their throats and spears of hard light.

RANK PLATE ×3: SENTINEL · K-II MARKED · Scalelist #211,904

SENTINEL
Unregistered soul. Kneel for routing.
P14CLOSE, Vigolas.

Standing up, dripping, grinning.

VIGOLAS
I don't kneel for things I can't afford.
PAGE 6
P15ACTION, three beats in one tier.

(a) A spear of light stabs where his head was. He is already gone.

(b) He rips a broken oar out of the wreckage.

(c) The world through his eyes: everything glows by value. Sand is grey, the spears are dull silver, and the seam of one Sentinel's collar burns gold, the most expensive part of him.

VIGOLASthinking
Greed's just pattern recognition. Find what's worth the most.
P16IMPACT.

The oar smashes the gold seam. The collar shatters, and the Sentinel drops like a puppet with its strings cut.

KRAK
PAGE 7
P17MID.

The other two Sentinels lash chains of light around his arms and throat and drag him to his knees. One raises a judgement-blade over his neck. Close on Vigolas's eye: a spark of green lightning wakes inside it. A voice that is his and not his, from a life before this one:

VOICEjagged balloon
Say it.
PAGES 8–9 — SPLASH (double page)
P18SPLASH.

Vigolas, on his knees, opens one hand.

VIGOLAS
COMPACT.

Green lightning explodes outward. Space folds. Both Sentinels, their chains, a ton of sand and the breaking surf are crushed inward from every direction into a perfect, humming cube the size of a fist, which drops onto the beach.

KRRRRRNCH
PAGE 10
P19MID, the quiet after.

Vigolas picks up the cube and turns it in the light, admiring it. A Sentinel's tiny helmet is visible inside, pressed like a flower in glass.

VIGOLAS
Huh. I'm keeping this.
P20CLOSE.

His smile falters. He looks out at the wreckage of his ship.

VIGOLAS
My ship. Her name was…

·

VIGOLAS
Her name was…
P21SMALL PANEL.

Nothing. He cannot find it. He touches his temple like something is missing from it.

Every command takes something back.
PAGE 11
P22WIDE, looking up at the cliff city.

On the colossal board, a new line burns into existence among millions. The crowds on the city walls are pointing at it:

∞−1 · UNNUMBERED

P23CLOSE, Vigolas.

He pockets the cube and looks at the board the way he looked at the gold in the storm.

VIGOLAS
Number one.
VIGOLAS
I'm taking it.
PAGE 12 — THE HOOK
P24INTERIOR, a high warm study.

Bookshelves, a fireplace and a white-haired man with a kind, grandfatherly face, signing a document with an ornate silver pen. Beside it lies a birthday card he has just signed with the same pen: "To little Edda, seven years old!"

BALDR · K-V ARCHITECT · Architect Three, Keeper of the Engagement Protocol

P25CLOSE.

He slides the document across the desk to a masked aide, still smiling.

BALDR
Engagement Protocol.
BALDR
Send the spy with the dog.
END OF CHAPTER 1

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.