SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga I · The Satchel · Arc 1 · The Heist

Chapter 2

The Spy And The Dog
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, morning, Gate City harbour.

People are walking out of the surf in soaked clothes, confused and looking at their own hands. These are the newly reborn. Some are in bodies that clearly aren't theirs: an old man in a child's coat staring at his small hands. Trisdel clerks with clipboards wave them into queues.

(No caption. The image is the explanation: here, souls wash ashore.)

P2CLOSE, cobblestones.

Four golden paws. A wagging tail.

Pan up: MINGUS, a golden retriever with a soft gold coat and kind brown eyes, sits patiently at the feet of a man leaning against a fish-market wall.

MINGUS · NOT RANKED

P3MID, the man.

KOMPIS: golden-tan skin, a braided beard with a single strand of lake-weed tied into it, a hoodie older than most empires, and a long rifle wrapped in cloth on his back. He looks tired in the way kind people look tired.

KOMPIS · K-II MARKED · Scalelist #48,112

PAGE 2
P4INTERIOR, a back room that smells of fish.

A masked TRISDEL HANDLER slides a sheet across a crate: a printed copy of the Scalelist with one line circled, ∞−1 · UNNUMBERED.

HANDLER
Washed up yesterday. Broke two Sentinels into a cube the size of a fist.
KOMPIS
A cube.
HANDLER
Architect Three wants to know what he is before anybody else does.
P5TWO-SHOT.
KOMPIS
And you want me because…
HANDLER
Because you're Marked, you're cheap, and the dog makes people trust you.

Mingus, under the crate, puts his chin on Kompis's boot.

P6CLOSE, the handler tapping the circled line.
HANDLER
Remember what you are. K-two. One sin awake, one trick. Good enough to kill a man in an alley.
HANDLER
This one is off the ladder. If he turns on you, you're a stain on the floor.
KOMPIS
Comforting.
PAGE 3
P7INSERT, Kompis's hand on the wrapped rifle.

Through his eyes, the metal is faintly translucent. Inside it sits the ghost of an old hunter with a grey moustache, arms crossed.

SOUL OF THE RIFLE, IVAR (small ghostly balloon): I don't like this job.

KOMPISunder his breath
You don't like any job, Ivar.
IVAR
I liked the bear.
KOMPIS
You shot the bear's hat off.
IVAR
It was a beautiful hat.
P8WIDE, the street outside.

Kompis walks; Mingus trots beside him. He talks to the dog without looking at him.

KOMPIS
Easy job. Isolated people always want someone who listens.
P9CLOSE.

Mingus stops and looks up at him. Just looks.

P10CLOSE, Kompis

caught.

KOMPIS
…That's a terrible thing to think about someone.

·

KOMPIS
Yeah. I know.
PAGE 4
P11WIDE, a tavern called THE DROWNED LEDGER, mid-brawl.

Chairs flying. Standing on the central table in a borrowed shirt, kicking a drunk off his ankle, is Vigolas.

VIGOLAS
I'm HIRING! The pay is terrible! The job is impossible! Nobody is coming back alive!
P12THREE SMALL PORTRAITS in a row, introduced in action.

MARKA, enormous and laughing, swinging an anchor on a chain like a flail, three men hanging off her arm.

DREKK, wiry and sharp-eyed, a spyglass behind his ear, ducking a bottle without looking.

YSEL, hooded and quiet, sitting perfectly still in a corner while the brawl breaks around her like water around a rock.

DREKK
And what's the impossible job?
P13CLOSE, Vigolas

grinning down at the room.

VIGOLAS
Number one on the Scalelist.
PAGE 5
P14WIDE.

The whole tavern freezes mid-punch. Silence.

Then: "HAHAHAHAHAHA" from every direction. People fall off chairs laughing.

P15MID.

Marka is not laughing. She puts her anchor down.

MARKA
I'm in.
DREKKsighing
…Fine. Somebody has to steer.

Ysel says nothing. She just stands up, which is somehow the same thing.

PAGE 6
P16POV, Kompis in the doorway, soul-sight active.

The room looks different through his eyes. Thin glowing threads run between people: friendship, debt, love, hate. Fresh golden threads already run from Marka to Vigolas, and from Drekk to Vigolas.

And from Ysel? Nothing. No threads at all, to anyone. As if she isn't attached to the world.

P17CLOSE, Kompis

a small frown.

KOMPISthinking
…Huh.
PAGE 7
P18FULL WIDTH.

The tavern door explodes inward.

BRAKOOM

A squad of Sentinels pours in behind a SENTINEL CAPTAIN: heavier armour, the helmet split open to show a scarred face. A crimson sin-mark glows on his neck and has spread down his arm in crawling script.

SENTINEL CAPTAIN · K-III TESTED · Scalelist #9,330

CAPTAIN
The unregistered comes with us. Everyone else, sit down and stay ranked.
P19MID.

He raises his arm. A crossbow made of red light forms in his hand, its bolt already notched.

CAPTAIN
Wrath doesn't miss.
PAGES 8–9 — THE FIGHT
P20ACTION.

Marka's anchor smashes two Sentinels through the wall. Drekk flips a table onto a third. Vigolas leaps from the bar, laughing, cube in his fist, punching a helmet in half.

P21ACTION.

The Captain doesn't fight the chaos. He waits. He's patient, precise. His red crossbow tracks one target: Vigolas's back, while Vigolas is busy.

P22CLOSE, the trigger finger.

Click.

The bolt leaves the bow, a red streak aimed straight at the spine.

P23CLOSE, Kompis.

In the doorway, without hurrying, he puts one hand on Mingus's head.

KOMPIS
Subtick.
PAGES 10–11 — SPLASH (double page)
P24SPLASH.

The whole world turns grey and frozen: flying chairs hang in the air, beer hangs in droplets, Marka's anchor stops mid-swing. The red bolt hangs one centimetre from Vigolas's spine.

Only Kompis is in colour. Behind him stretch dozens of translucent afterimages of himself, each taking a different path across the room: one shot, one dives, one is hit, one dies. He is living the moment over and over, keeping only the version where he survives.

Along the bottom edge of the spread runs a thin golden pulse line: Mingus's heartbeat, steady. Thump… thump… Subtick only lasts while that line keeps beating next to him.

PAGE 12
P25COLOUR RETURNS, three fast beats in one tier.

(a) The red bolt is in Kompis's hand, plucked out of the air.

(b) The Captain's crossbow is in three pieces, cut apart by shots nobody saw fired. Ivar smokes on Kompis's shoulder.

(c) The Captain staggers back, staring at an empty hand.

SHNK — TAK TAK TAK
P26CLOSE, Kompis.

The price: he's soaked in sweat, breathing like he has run for an hour, and a thin line of blood runs from his nose. His knees shake. Mingus leans his whole weight against Kompis's leg to hold him up.

IVARghost
…Eleven thousand tries. You're getting old.
KOMPISwheezing
Shut up.
PAGE 13
P27MID.

Vigolas turns and sees the bolt in a stranger's hand, aimed at where his spine was. He stares, delighted.

VIGOLAS
Who are you?
KOMPIS
Nobody. Kompis. (nods down) That's Mingus.
P28CLOSE, Vigolas

crouching down to the dog, completely serious.

VIGOLAS
Mingus, you're hired.
VIGOLASstanding, to Kompis
You can come too.
P29WIDE.

The Captain retreats through the broken door, clutching his ruined arm, shouting:

CAPTAIN
You've just put yourselves on the board!

Outside, through the doorway, the city's great Scalelist flickers. Three numbers that were nowhere a moment ago jump up the ladder: Marka's, Drekk's and Kompis's. Ysel's never moves.

PAGE 14 — THE HOOK
P30INTERIOR, the wrecked tavern, later.

Vigolas slams a rolled sheet onto the one table still standing and unrolls it: a blueprint of a city made of glass, floating in a twilight sky, with staircases going nowhere.

VIGOLAS
Good. Now that we're all friends.
VIGOLAS
We rob the Archive tomorrow.
P31CLOSE, Kompis.

His face says nothing. His eyes say everything: this is exactly what Baldr wanted to know.

P32FINAL PANEL, low angle.

Mingus, looking up at Kompis.

KOMPISwhisper
Don't look at me like that.
END OF CHAPTER 2

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.