SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga I · The Satchel · Arc 2 · The Trinity

Chapter 10

The Cleaner
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, the ridge above Fjellheim.

Six CLEANERS in robes of printed black-and-white stand in a line. At their centre, the reader: a thin, prim man with ink-stained fingers, spectacles with no glass in them, and a face that looks seventy on a body that moves like thirty.

SIGVAT · K-IV SHAPED · Scalelist #1,877 · the Cleaner

P2CLOSE, the scroll in his hands

sealed at the bottom with a black wax seal shaped like a closed eye.

SIGVATreading, a dry drone
"By decree of the Null Protocol, under the hand of Architect Two: the dwellings of Fjellheim, the hearths, the stores, the stock, and the paths between…"
PAGE 2
P3WIDE, the village below.

With every word, something goes grey. "Dwellings": the longhouses fade like ink in water. "Hearths": the fires go colourless and cold mid-flame. "Paths": the stone steps between the houses dissolve under fleeing feet.

P4MID.

Trolls, enormous, moss-backed and gentle, run with children in their arms. One old troll stops and looks back at his house. It is already just a grey outline. Then it isn't even that.

P5CLOSE, a troll child

staring at her own hands. Her red scarf has gone grey.

Uncounted: erased so completely that the world forgets to keep it.
PAGE 3
P6THE CAVE MOUTH.

The crew watches from the crack in the cliff. Vigolas is already climbing out.

DREKK
Captain, there's a sea monster down there—
VIGOLAS
And people up there.
P7MID, Kompis

hesitating. Then Mingus runs past him out of the cave, uphill toward the screaming. Kompis swears and follows.

KOMPIS
Every time. Every time, dog.
PAGES 4–5 — INTO THE GREY
P8ACTION.

The crew crashes into the edge of the fading village.

Marka lifts a grey-flickering cart off a troll's leg.

Rougeina Swaps a child out of a dissolving doorway, blink, and is holding her on solid ground.

Drekk drags an old troll by the arm.

P9CLOSE, Vigolas

reaching for a troll caught in the grey. The grey touches his hand, and for a moment his fingers go colourless, the same way they did with the black shard. He yanks the troll out anyway.

VIGOLAS
Okay. Don't let it touch you. Noted.
P10ACTION, Kompis's soul-sight.

He sees the threads between the trolls snapping one by one as their houses vanish, the bonds of a whole village being uncounted. He shoots at the grey, and it does nothing.

IVAR
You can't shoot a word, boy!
PAGE 6
P11CLOSE, Trollmage

being carried by the crow. Not really: the crow is pulling his collar while he walks. He watches Sigvat's lips moving up on the ridge, very carefully.

TROLLMAGE
…He has to say it.
P12CLOSE.
TROLLMAGE
Every word fades exactly when he says it. Not before. Not after.
TROLLMAGE
The decree works because it's heard.
PAGE 7
P13WIDE, the ridge.

Sigvat stops reading and looks down at the small, fast figures running into his decree.

SIGVAT
…Who are they?
CLEANER
Unregistered, sir. Thieves. The ones from the Archive.
SIGVATa dry sigh
Not on the decree. Pity. (He coughs into a handkerchief: grey dust.) Next village.
P14CLOSE, Sigvat's hands

rolling the scroll up. His knuckles are spotted with age that wasn't there this morning; a few more hairs drift from his head onto the scroll. He brushes them off without looking, like a man who has stopped counting.

PAGE 8
P15WIDE.

The Cleaners file away along the ridge toward the next valley. Behind them, Fjellheim is gone. Where it stood is a flat grey field, shaped like nothing, the snow around it untouched, as if a village had never been there.

P16MID, the crew and the surviving trolls

standing at the edge of the grey field. A troll mother holds the girl with the grey scarf. Nobody says anything.

PAGE 9
P17INTERIOR, a deep troll cave, night.

A huge fire. Dozens of refugee trolls sit along the walls, wrapped in moss-blankets. The crew sits on one side of the fire.

And on the other side of the fire sits Smurjan, alone, his three shadows thrown up the cave wall like three people.

P18CLOSE, Drekk

hand on a knife.

DREKK
Why is he here?
SMURJAN
Because the Cleaner is hunting us too. And because this is the only cave in the valley.
PAGE 10
P19WIDE.

An ancient troll woman shuffles out of the dark, wrapped in a shawl of woven roots, her face like a cliff with kindness carved into it. She stops in front of Trollmage, who is lying by the fire, and looks at him for a long time.

GRANDMOTHER ULLAslow, deep
…You have your great-great-grandmother's ears.
TROLLMAGEnot opening his eyes
I get that a lot.
P20CLOSE.

Grandmother Ulla bows: a deep, slow troll bow, the kind that takes a while. Every troll in the cave bows too, all of them, toward the lazy half-elf by the fire.

P21CLOSE, the crew

staring at Trollmage.

MARKA
…Okay, what is the family thing?
TROLLMAGErolling over
Later. Much later. Ideally never.
PAGE 11
P22MID, Grandmother Ulla

turning to the whole fire.

GRANDMOTHER ULLA
Tonight, this cave is Dresk ground. Under the Dresk Council's roof, no one draws a blade.
GRANDMOTHER ULLAto Smurjan
Not even three of you.
SMURJAN
…Agreed.
KALIfrom his mouth, sulky
Agreed.
BAKASURAfrom his mouth
…Is there food?
PAGE 12
P23TWO-SHOT across the fire, Vigolas and Smurjan.
VIGOLAS
So. The Cleaner. Why's he after you?
SMURJAN
Because we were never supposed to exist. Someone split one soul into three. We're a mistake the Order wants to erase before anyone asks what was done.
P24CLOSE, Smurjan.
SMURJAN
Someone split us. We want to know who.
SMURJAN
And what they kept.
PAGE 13
P25CLOSE, Vigolas.

He reaches into his coat slowly and draws out one shard. It shows a white room, a man screaming, and his shadow tearing into three shapes. He holds it up to the firelight.

VIGOLAS
This one?
P26CLOSE, Smurjan's face.

For the first time, all three voices are silent. His third eye opens, void-black, staring at the shard.

PAGES 14–15 — SPLASH
P27SPLASH (double page).

The shard, magnified by the firelight, fills the spread. We are inside the memory:

a vast white room with a great mirror on the far wall

a single man in chains in the centre, his mouth open in a scream, his shadow tearing into three shapes (one calm, one sharp, one hungry)

and in the great mirror behind him, where there should only be his reflection, a fourth figure, tall and slender, silver from head to foot, standing inside the glass, watching.

SMURJANthree voices at once, very quiet, small balloons in the corner of the spread
…Who is that?
PAGE 16 — THE HOOK
P28CLOSE, the silver figure in the mirror.

We can't see a face. Just silver, and a head tilted, almost tenderly, toward the screaming man.

P29CLOSE, Rougeina

across the fire. She has gone very still, staring at the silver figure. Her hand has drifted to one of her eight blades: the one that, in this firelight, has exactly the same silver shine.

P30FINAL PANEL, the fire.

Vigolas lowers the shard. Smurjan's third eye is still open. Out in the night, far away, a dry voice drones across the snow: another valley, another decree.

SMURJAN
We're not leaving until we know.
VIGOLAS
Then I guess we're travelling together.
KALIfrom his mouth
…Ugh.
END OF CHAPTER 10

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.