SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga I · The Satchel · Arc 2 · The Trinity

Chapter 11

Taste Like Family
PAGE 1
P1INTERIOR, the troll cave, morning.

Trolls asleep in heaps like boulders with blankets. The fire is down to coals. Bakasura has emerged from Smurjan's shadow and lies across the cave floor like a beached whale made of teeth, eyes half-lidded, sniffing.

SMURJANasleep sitting up, murmuring
…don't eat the trolls.
BAKASURA
…Wasn't going to.
BAKASURA
…Much.
P2CLOSE, Bakasura's nostrils

each as big as a doorway, flaring as he sniffs along the sleeping crew.

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P3MID.

He sniffs Marka. "Strong." He sniffs Drekk. "Salty." He sniffs Trollmage. "…Lazy. Delicious." Trollmage, eyes closed, flaps a hand at him: "Go away."

P4CLOSE.

He reaches Vigolas, asleep with both arms around his coat, and stops, nostrils frozen mid-sniff.

P5CLOSE.

He moves on to Kompis. Stops again. Longer this time.

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P6MID, Kompis

waking up nose-to-nose with a mouth the size of a barn door.

KOMPIS
…Morning.
BAKASURA
…You. And the coat one.
P7CLOSE, Bakasura

troubled, a giant creature with a small, honest confusion.

BAKASURA
Other people's sins taste like food.
BAKASURA
Yours taste like family.
BAKASURA
…I don't eat family.
P8CLOSE, Kompis

completely lost.

KOMPIS
…Thank you?
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P9LOW ANGLE.

Bakasura turns and finds Mingus sitting right in front of him: a golden retriever, tail sweeping the floor, looking up at the jaws of the world with total calm.

P10CLOSE.

Bakasura opens his maw over the dog, slowly, more to test than to bite. Mingus doesn't move. He sneezes.

P11CLOSE, Bakasura

the jaws stopping and hanging open in the air, his small eyes blinking.

BAKASURA
…Can't.
BAKASURA
…Don't know why.

He closes his mouth and lies down beside the dog, very carefully, like a mountain trying not to squash a pebble.

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P12MID, by the coals, Rougeina sharpening her blades.

Kali slides out of Smurjan's shadow and sits down across from her uninvited, spinning a black-glass sickle on one fingertip.

KALI
The little dance you do. With the swapping. It's good.
ROUGEINA
You stole it.
KALI
Borrowed. Sixty seconds. I gave it back.
P13TWO-SHOT.

Two killers, measuring each other.

ROUGEINA
What does it feel like? Borrowing someone's sin?
KALIgrinning, then not
Like wearing someone else's skin in winter. Warm, and wrong.
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P14CLOSE, Kali

looking at Rougeina's blades, at the silver one specifically.

KALI
That one's pretty. Where'd you get it?
ROUGEINAsliding it into its sheath
I've always had it.
KALI
…Hm.
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P15WIDE, deeper in the mountain.

Grandmother Ulla leads the crew and the refugee trolls through the troll tunnels: vast carved halls with pillars like tree trunks, troll faces carved into every wall, glowing moss for light.

GRANDMOTHER ULLA
The tunnels run under three valleys. Trisdel has never found them.
P16CLOSE, Drekk

at the back of the group, glancing behind him into the dark.

DREKK
There's always a first time.
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P17WIDE, a junction.

Far down a side tunnel, a faint voice drifts in the dark, dry and precise.

VOICEtiny balloon
"…the passage beneath Kråkberg, its pillars, its…"
P18CLOSE.

At the end of the side tunnel, the stone greys. The carved troll faces on the walls fade one after another, mid-expression.

P19CLOSE, Grandmother Ulla.
GRANDMOTHER ULLA
…They're reading their way in.
PAGES 9–10 — THE RUNNING FIGHT
P20ACTION.

Black-and-white Cleaners pour out of the grey: six of them, each with a short scroll, reading fragments aloud as they run. Wherever they point and read, a pillar, a stair or a lantern greys and goes.

RANK PLATE ×6: CLEANER · K-II MARKED · Scalelist #160,000–#199,000

P21ACTION.

Rougeina Swaps behind a Cleaner and claps a hand over his mouth. His half-read word dies unheard, and nothing greys.

ROUGEINAto the others
Shut their mouths!

Marka swings her anchor into a Cleaner's scroll and tears it in half mid-word.

P22ACTION.

Kompis shoots a scroll out of a Cleaner's hands: Ivar, two shots.

IVAR
Ha! I can shoot words! Just the paper ones!

Kali rides Bakasura's head like a war-elephant through a line of Cleaners, laughing.

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P23ACTION.

But there are more voices coming from every side tunnel, a chorus of dry drones reading the mountain away. The grey creeps in from three directions. The ceiling over the trolls starts to fade.

P24CLOSE, Vigolas

grabbing Trollmage, who is being carried on Marka's back again, by the collar.

VIGOLAS
Tell me you've got something.
TROLLMAGEeyes opening
It's been… one day. Since the fjord.
TROLLMAGE
One day is something.
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P25CLOSE, Trollmage's hand

lifting. Violet runes ignite one after another along his fingers, more than at the Pass, fewer than he'd like.

TROLLMAGE
Everyone stand behind the big one.
MARKA
Which big one?!
TROLLMAGE
The one with teeth.
P26CLOSE, violet script

written in the air:

MACRO : COLLAPSE TUNNEL = 40

PAGES 13–14 — SPLASH
P27SPLASH (double page).

Forty tunnels collapse at once. Across a cross-section of the mountain, like an ant-farm diagram, forty side passages slam shut in a thunder of falling rock, one after another, boom-boom-boom-boom, sealing every grey voice behind a wall of stone. In the one tunnel left open, the crew, the trolls and the Trinity run, with Bakasura bringing up the rear, his huge body holding back the dust.

BOOM BOOM BOOM BOOM BOOM BOOM boom boom boom boom…
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P28MID, a sealed hall.

Silence. Dust settling. Trolls coughing, counting each other, everyone accounted for.

P29CLOSE, Trollmage

flat on his back on the floor, runes dark, completely spent.

TROLLMAGE
That was one day. Don't need anything until… Thursday.
KOMPIS
What day is it now?
TROLLMAGE
…Not Thursday.
PAGE 16 — THE HOOK
P30CLOSE, Grandmother Ulla

pressing her huge hand flat against the cave wall, listening.

P31WIDE, a cutaway of the mountain from outside.

On the mountainside above, Sigvat stands in the snow with a very long scroll unrolled down the slope like a carpet. He's reading. He looks older than he did yesterday.

SIGVATdry, patient
"…the mountain called Kråkberg, its stone, its roots, its halls, and everything within them…"
P32FINAL PANEL.

Inside, on the tunnel wall beside Grandmother Ulla's hand, a thin grey line appears in the rock and starts, slowly, to spread.

END OF CHAPTER 11

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.