SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga I · The Satchel · Arc 2 · The Trinity

Chapter 12

Seventeen Voices
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, a hidden exit high on the far side of Kråkberg.

The crew and the trolls spill out of a crack in the mountain onto a narrow ledge above a vast gorge. Behind them, inside the tunnel, the grey line keeps spreading through the rock.

P2MID.

Across the gorge, two hundred metres away, is the far cliff and safety. The only way over is a troll rope-ferry: a huge wooden platform hanging from ropes as thick as tree trunks, pulled hand over hand.

GRANDMOTHER ULLA
Forty at a time. Then back for the next forty.
PAGE 2
P3ACTION, the first crossing.

Forty trolls on the platform; Marka and three trolls haul the rope. The platform swings out over a drop so deep that clouds drift through it beneath their feet.

P4CLOSE, Drekk

looking down, then quickly not looking down.

DREKK
I'm a sailor. Water I trust. Air, no.
PAGE 3
P5WIDE, the far cliff.

Two figures step out from behind a rock as the platform reaches the halfway point. They are identical: two thin clerks in black-and-white robes, the same face, the same glassless spectacles, each holding one half of a torn scroll.

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P6CLOSE, the twins

reading, each starting where the other stops, the same sentence in two voices.

CLERK A
"By decree of the Null Protocol: the ferry of Kråkberg—"
CLERK B
"—its ropes, its planks, and all who stand upon it."
PAGE 4
P7ACTION.

The great ropes grey from the far end, fading toward the platform. Forty trolls, Marka, and the children on it.

P8CLOSE, Rougeina

on the near ledge, eyes on the twins.

ROUGEINA
Two mouths. Shut both.

She looks at a rock beside Clerk A, blink, and her hand is over his mouth. Clerk B keeps reading alone. The grey slows to half speed, but it doesn't stop.

P9CLOSE, Clerk B

reading faster, sweating.

CLERK B
"—its ropes, its—"
PAGE 5
P10ACTION.

Kompis aims across the gorge. Two hundred metres, in wind, at a mouth. Ivar's ghost holds its breath.

IVAR
…Long shot, boy.
KOMPIS
I've got a good dog. (hand on Mingus) Subtick.
P11GREY WORLD.

A fan of afterimages of Kompis's rifle, hundreds of tries, every bullet path through the wind, until one threads it and clips Clerk B's half-scroll out of his hands. It spins over the edge of the gorge.

P12COLOUR RETURNS.

Clerk B, scroll gone, keeps reading from memory, and the grey keeps creeping, slower, but still coming.

KOMPISnose bleeding
…He memorised it?!
PAGE 6
P13CLOSE, the ropes.

The grey is ten metres from the platform. The platform jerks. The trolls scream.

P14CLOSE, Smurjan

on the near ledge. He looks at the grey rope and at the children on the platform. His third eye opens.

SMURJANonly his voice, calm
Kali. Bakasura. Stay inside.
KALIfrom his mouth
What are you—
SMURJAN
Stay inside.
PAGE 7
P15ACTION.

Smurjan leaps off the ledge. He runs along the greying rope itself, across the open sky, toward the far cliff, toward Clerk B. Everywhere his feet touch the rope, the rope holds a moment longer.

P16ACTION.

He reaches the far cliff at a dead sprint. Clerk B sees him coming, turns and reads at him, every word aimed at his chest.

CLERK B
"—and the soul designated TRINITY—"
PAGE 8
P17CLOSE, Smurjan's chest.

Where the words hit, the grey blooms through his robes, over his heart.

P18ACTION.

He doesn't stop. With the last of his colour he puts one hand over Clerk B's mouth, and with the other drives the twin into the rock.

KRAK

The reading stops. The ropes stop greying. On the platform, forty trolls are safe.

PAGE 9
P19CLOSE, Smurjan

standing over the unconscious twin. His skin is grey from the heart outward. He looks back across the gorge at the crew, at the trolls, and he almost smiles.

P20WIDE.

He falls. He drops off the edge of the cliff into the clouds beneath the gorge, without a sound.

P21CLOSE, Vigolas

on the near ledge, reaching out, too far away.

VIGOLAS
SMURJAN!
PAGE 10
P22WIDE, the far cliff, an hour later.

Everyone is across. The twins are tied up with ferry rope, gagged with moss. The trolls stand at the gorge's edge in silence. Kompis looks down into the clouds. Drekk stands with his hat off. Kali and Bakasura are nowhere; when their host fell, they fell too.

P23CLOSE, Mingus

ears up, looking down into the gorge. His tail starts, slowly, to wag.

PAGE 11
P24WIDE, the gorge.

Out of the clouds below, a figure climbs back up the sheer cliff face: slow, hand over hand, white braid swinging. It's Smurjan. Alive. His robes are torn and his skin is slate-grey again.

P25MID.

He hauls himself over the edge and lies on his back in the snow, breathing. Everyone stares.

MARKA
…You died.
SMURJAN
Yes.
Whatever dies in the Trinity comes back. Never quite the same.
PAGE 12
P26CLOSE, his face.

His third eye is open, and it is no longer void-black. It is grey-blue now, the colour of the gorge's clouds.

P27CLOSE, Smurjan

looking up at the sky. White flakes are drifting down onto his face. He frowns at them, puzzled.

SMURJAN
…What's the word for this?
KOMPIS
For what?
SMURJANcatching a flake on his fingertip
This. The white. Falling.
P28SILENT PANEL.

The crew exchanges looks.

MARKAgently
…Snow, big man. It's snow.
SMURJANquietly
Snow. (He says it again, testing it.) …Snow. I knew that once.
PAGES 13–14 — SPLASH
P29SPLASH (double page).

The memory he came back with. As Smurjan closes his eyes in the falling snow, the spread fills with what dying shook loose. It is the flashback (five panels inside the splash, the only flashback this chapter):

(a) A young man with slate-grey skin and one shadow, laughing in a sunlit field. Before.

(b) A white room. Chains. Trisdel robes. A great mirror on the far wall.

(c) Inside the mirror, the silver figure, raising one hand.

(d) The scream: one shadow tearing into three, the calm one, the sharp one and the hungry one.

(e) The silver figure's hand closing, taking something small and bright out of the screaming man, and keeping it.

SMURJANthree voices, small, at the edge of the spread
They split us. And she took a piece. And we don't know which.
PAGE 15
P30MID.

Kali and Bakasura seep back out of his shadow, Kali sullen, Bakasura heavy-eyed. They sit on either side of him in the snow like two siblings at a hospital bed.

KALI
Next time you tell us before you jump off a cliff.
SMURJAN
You'd have argued.
KALI
Of course I'd have argued!
PAGE 16
P31TWO-SHOT, Vigolas crouching beside Smurjan.
VIGOLAS
Every time you die, you lose something.
SMURJAN
Every time. A word. A face. Once, a whole year.
VIGOLAS
And you jumped anyway. For trolls you met yesterday.
SMURJANshrugging
They were going to fall.
P32CLOSE, Vigolas

looking at him differently now.

PAGE 17 — THE HOOK
P33CLOSE, Vigolas

glancing at Bakasura, the colossal maw breathing slow clouds of steam into the cold.

VIGOLAS
Bakasura eats people.
SMURJAN
Bakasura has eaten people.
VIGOLAS
How many?
P34CLOSE, Smurjan.

His grey-blue third eye shines faintly.

SMURJAN
Seventeen.
SMURJAN
Seventeen we ate.
P35FINAL PANEL, Smurjan's chest.

Faint, layered, behind his voice, like a crowd in a far-off room, many voices whisper at once.

SMURJAN
…who still talk to us.
END OF CHAPTER 12

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.