SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga III · The Architect War · Arc 4 · Tyngden

Chapter 106

The Banked Beat
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, the canyon, day two.

Training everywhere. Smurjan sits alone on a rock, recovering, his three shadows apart from each other like quarrelling children. Kompis and Mingus run drills with the Riser children.

P2CLOSE, Trollmage

in his hollow in the rock, flat on his back, hands folded on his belly, the crow asleep on his chest. The TRAINING. sign beside him now has a second line, written by someone else: (STILL.)

PAGE 2
P3CLOSE, Mor Lyft

standing over the hollow, scowling down.

MOR LYFT
Your troll has not moved in thirty hours.
VIGOLASpassing, doing knee-walks
That's him working.
MOR LYFT
…Explain.
P4CLOSE, Vigolas

kneeling beside the hollow, lowering his voice like a man explaining a sacred rite.

VIGOLAS
Every heartbeat he spends doing nothing, he keeps. Saves it. Like coins in a jar. Then one day he spends them all at once.
MOR LYFT
And then?
VIGOLAS
And then something very big happens, and he sleeps for a week.
PAGE 3
P5CLOSE, Mor Lyft

looking at the sleeping troll with new eyes.

MOR LYFT
…Hm. On a world where every movement is a debt, a man who doesn't move is the richest man alive.
P6CLOSE, the crow

opening one eye at her, smug.

CROW
Kraa.
PAGE 4 — ROUGEINA
P7WIDE, the canyon's far wall.

Rougeina stands bent at a slab of rock with a row of targets painted on it, and above them, tied to strings, light things hanging: a feather, a leaf, a moth in a jar, a soap bubble.

MOR LYFTarriving
You're trying to Swap with heavy things here. It drags you.
P8CLOSE, Rougeina

panting.

ROUGEINA
I Swapped with a raindrop on the first day. It worked.
MOR LYFT
Then swap with the lightest thing you can see, toward the heaviest place you want to be. Let the light thing carry you. Then let the weight bring you down.
PAGE 5
P9ACTION, a run of attempts.

Rougeina tries:

She Swaps with the feather above a target. The feather drops, and she drops on the target like a hawk.

She Swaps with the soap bubble. It pops, and she's left hanging in the air for an instant before slamming into the ground. Crack.

She clutches her side.

P10CLOSE, Rougeina

curled up on the rock, gasping.

ROUGEINA
…Ribs. Two.
MOR LYFTnot unkind
The bubble's too light. It can't carry anything. Try the moth.
PAGE 6
P11ACTION.

Rougeina, ribs bound, sweat on her face, Swaps with the moth, which is light but alive, and its wings carry the Swap like a sail. She lands on the target exactly, softly, and then lets her weight fall into the strike. The target shatters.

P12CLOSE, Rougeina

standing, bent and shaking like a Riser, but standing.

ROUGEINA
…Moth.
MOR LYFT
Moth.
PAGE 7
P13WIDE, day three.

The crew trains: Vigolas walking on his knees, Kompis teaching Riser kids how to read people without powers ("Watch the shoulders"), Smurjan meditating. Trollmage in his hollow, unmoving. Seventy-two hours now. His sign: TRAINING. (STILL.) (STILL!!)

P14CLOSE, Trollmage's closed eyelids.

Behind them, faintly, a violet glow that has been getting brighter for three days.

PAGE 8
P15A SOUND.

Scraping. From the canyon's rim: hooks biting rock, armour scraping stone, dozens of them.

P16WIDE, the rim.

Ballast pouring over the edge of the crack, crawling down the canyon walls on hooked pikes like spiders. Fifty. A hundred. Tyngd's soldiers come for the Risers' camp.

BALLAST CAPTAIN
The King says: nobody stands on Tyngden but the King.
PAGES 9–10 — THE CLASH
P17ACTION, a run of fast panels.

The Risers fight back, bent and trembling, using the Ballast's own weight against them. But there are too many, and children are crying.

Rougeina Swaps with a moth over the Ballast captain and drops onto him. One down, ribs screaming.

Vigolas, on his knees, punches lightning sideways, and three Ballast are bowled down the slope.

Kompis fires Lilla Ulv along the rock: "ground wolf!"

Smurjan tries the three-at-once again, and the hunger floods him. He goes down, Kali screaming.

P18WIDE.

The Ballast reach the fires. Huts collapse. A hooked pike catches Mor Lyft's ankle, and the old woman goes down on her knees for the first time in forty years.

PAGE 11
P19CLOSE, Mor Lyft

on her knees in the dirt, shaking, horror on her face.

MOR LYFT
…No. No. Not after forty years. Not on my knees again.
P20CLOSE, the hollow in the rock.

Trollmage's eyes open. Violet. Blazing.

PAGE 12
P21WIDE.

Trollmage sits up. On Tyngden, where everyone crawls, he just sits up, as easily as getting out of bed on a Sunday. Then he stands, fully upright, the only person in the whole canyon standing straight, yawning enormously, the crow flapping off his chest.

TROLLMAGE
…Mm. Is it time?
P22CLOSE, Vigolas

from his knees, grinning wildly.

VIGOLAS
It's TIME!
PAGES 13–14 — SPLASH
P23SPLASH (double page). THE BANKED BEAT.

Trollmage raises one big grey-green hand and writes in the air, letters burning violet:

MACRO : LIFT = 72 HOURS

Seventy-two hours of banked heartbeats, every one he saved lying in the rock, fire in a single beat.

For one heartbeat, the whole canyon floats. Risers, Ballast, crew, huts, fires, stones, a hundred hooked pikes: everything lifts gently off the ground, weightless, hanging in the air like dust in a sunbeam. Children float laughing. Mor Lyft floats up off her knees, her face astonished. The Ballast flail in mid-air, pikes useless, hooks catching nothing.

In the centre, standing on nothing, a lazy half-troll in slippers with his hand raised, eyes blazing violet. Above his head, faintly, the words form themselves: THE BANKED BEAT.

PAGE 15
P24ACTION.

The heartbeat ends. Everything drops, but the Risers were ready; they've waited their whole lives for a moment of lightness. They land on their feet, and the Ballast land on their faces. The Risers pin them before they can crawl.

P25CLOSE, Mor Lyft

landing standing, perfectly upright, on her own two feet.

PAGE 16 — THE HOOK
P26ACTION.

Trollmage sways, yawns, says "…Good," and falls asleep standing up. He topples like a tree. Drekk catches him on his knees like a sack of flour, as always.

DREKKthrough the mask
…Three days?
KOMPIS
Three days.
P27FINAL PANEL, close on Mor Lyft

eighty years old, standing over the snoring troll in the wreck of the raid, looking down at him with the respect of a master for a master.

MOR LYFT
…The lazy one is the strongest of you.
END OF CHAPTER 106

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.