SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga III · The Architect War · Arc 4 · Tyngden

Chapter 108

The Cave-Bear
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, the canyon.

The black clouds sink lower, filling the sky over the crack like a lid. The air goes thick. Fires flatten. Every Riser is pressed back down to their knees, even Mor Lyft.

P2CLOSE, a Riser child

on her hands and knees, looking up at the descending clouds, tears streaming.

RISER CHILD
…Mamma, the sky's coming down.
PAGE 2
P3CLOSE, Trollmage

still asleep under his tarp, day five of three.

KALIshaking him
WAKE UP, LAZY ONE! THE SKY! THE ACTUAL SKY!
TROLLMAGEasleep
…five more… minutes…
KALI
WE DON'T HAVE FIVE MINUTES!
P4CLOSE, Smurjan

third eye open, measuring.

SMURJAN
Each cloud weighs as much as a mountain. They'll reach the canyon floor in… (a beat) …ninety heartbeats.
PAGE 3
P5WIDE.

The crew tries. Vigolas, on one knee, punches green lightning straight up into the clouds. It vanishes into them like a match into a lake. The clouds don't notice.

P6ACTION.

Smurjan tries the Triple Pulse upward, three strikes at once into the lowest cloud. It dents. It keeps coming.

P7CLOSE, Rougeina

gasping, ribs bound.

ROUGEINA
There's nothing light up there to Swap with. It's all weight.
PAGE 4
P8WIDE.

The clouds are thirty metres above the canyon floor. Huts on the rim crumple under the edge of the cloud-mass, crushed flat like paper. The Risers crawl toward the deepest cracks, carrying children.

P9CLOSE, Kompis

on his knees in the middle of the canyon floor, arms around Mingus, looking up at the sky coming down on them. Nowhere to run.

KOMPISquietly
…Sorry, boy. I don't think there's a version of this one.
PAGE 5
P10CLOSE, Mingus.

He's looking up too. Then he looks at Kompis. At the Riser child crying by the fire. At Mor Lyft on her knees for the second time in forty years. At the crew, every one of them, his people, pressed flat under a falling sky.

P11CLOSE, Mingus's eyes.

Kind. Brown. And at the very edges of his fur, the gold begins to glow.

PAGE 6
P12CLOSE, Kompis

feeling it through his arms around the dog: the warmth rising, the heartbeat under his palm getting bigger.

KOMPIS
…Mingus?
P13ACTION.

Mingus slips gently out of Kompis's arms and walks to the centre of the canyon floor. On Tyngden, where everyone crawls, he walks easily. He weighs exactly what he weighs. He sits down and looks up at the sky.

PAGES 7–8 — SPLASH
P14SPLASH (double page). THE CAVE-BEAR.

Mingus wakes.

Out of the golden light at the centre of the canyon rises a cave-bear the size of a hill: shoulders like a mountain ridge, paws like boulders, a great blunt head and a coat of thick, shaggy, blazing retriever-gold. The same kind brown eyes, huge now, fierce with love. It rises on its hind legs, higher and higher, until its head and shoulders and two vast forepaws meet the falling sky.

And it holds it.

The storm-clouds, each as heavy as a mountain, pile against the golden bear's back and paws and stop, a lid of black thunder resting on a living pillar of gold. Lightning crawls across the clouds and crackles harmlessly down the bear's fur. Its hind legs sink into the rock to the knee. It roars: a deep, rolling, cave-shaking ROAR that shakes rain out of the clouds it's holding up.

Beneath it, the canyon. Fires. Risers. Children. A crew on its knees, looking up with their mouths open.

MINGUS
RRRRROOOOOAAAAARRR!
PAGE 9
P15CLOSE, Mor Lyft

on her knees, staring up at the golden bear.

MOR LYFT
…Forty years. I've never seen anything stand up under this world like that.
P16CLOSE, the Riser child

who was crying, now laughing, pointing.

RISER CHILD
The doggy's holding the SKY!
PAGE 10
P17CLOSE, Kompis

crawling across the canyon floor to the bear's enormous hind paw and pressing both hands against the golden fur. Under his palms the heartbeat is like a drum the size of a house. BA-DUM. BA-DUM. Along the bottom of the panel, the golden pulse line roars.

KOMPIS
…Hold on, boy. Just hold on.
P18CLOSE, the bear's great head

bowed under the weight of the sky, one huge brown eye rolling down to look at Kompis. A low, rumbling whuff. Go.

PAGE 11
P19CLOSE, Kompis

understanding. He gets up, unsteady, onto his feet, and turns to the crew.

KOMPIS
He can hold it. But not forever. He's saying go. Go get the coat.
P20CLOSE, Vigolas

on one knee. He looks up at the golden bear holding the sky, then at the far edge of the canyon, the rim, the plain beyond, and the Leaden Hall, one window lit.

VIGOLAS
…Okay. Okay, buddy. We'll be quick.
PAGE 12
P21WIDE.

The crew moves out from under the bear's shelter toward the canyon wall. Smurjan, three shadows side by side. Rougeina with a moth in a jar on her belt. Kompis, Lilla Ulv in hand. Drekk, mask on, axe up. Kali, rising out of the shadow. And Trollmage, still asleep, slung over Drekk's shoulder.

P22CLOSE, Drekk

adjusting the snoring troll.

DREKKthrough the mask
He's going to wake up in the middle of the boss fight, isn't he.
KALI
He always wakes up in the middle of the boss fight.
PAGE 13
P23WIDE, the canyon wall.

The crew climbs: on their knees, then on hands and knees, then, slowly, trembling, bent double like Risers, up the cracked rock toward the rim. Every handhold is a debt. They pay it.

P24CLOSE, Mor Lyft

at the bottom, upright again under the bear's shelter, calling up after them.

MOR LYFT
Small! Low! Precise! You don't fight the weight—
THE CREWtogether, gasping
—you carry it!
PAGE 14
P25WIDE, the rim of the canyon.

The crew hauls itself over the edge onto the open plain of Tyngden. Bullet-rain. Crushing sky. In the distance, squat and grey, the Leaden Hall.

P26CLOSE, Vigolas

at the front, on his knees on the plain, rain hammering his bare shoulders. He looks back once: down in the canyon, a golden bear holding up a black sky, alone.

PAGE 15
P27CLOSE, Vigolas

grim, the grin gone.

VIGOLAS
He's holding up a sky for us. We don't make him wait.
P28ACTION.

Vigolas puts one foot flat on the ground. Then he pushes. Every muscle in his body shakes. The rain hammers his face. He gets to his feet: bent like a Riser, trembling like an old man, coatless, standing.

PAGE 16 — THE HOOK
P29WIDE, the plain.

One man walking, bent, through the bullet-rain toward the Leaden Hall. Behind him, one by one, the crew pushes up onto their feet and follows.

P30FINAL PANEL, the Leaden Hall's window.

Behind the thick grey glass, Tyngd, broad as a doorway, watches them come. Over the back of his throne hangs a midnight-green coat with thirty-six shards in its lining.

TYNGD
…First day they kneel. Fifth day they walk.
TYNGD
…Hm.
END OF CHAPTER 108

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.