SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga III · The Architect War · Arc 5 · Smedjan

Chapter 111

Smedjan
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, the Current.

The Marka sails toward a red glow on the horizon, the brass clock-hand still standing in her deck, the crew on the rail.

P2CLOSE, Kompis

at the bow, the wooden box of Ivar's pieces held against his chest in both arms, Mingus pressed to his leg.

KOMPISquietly, to the box
…Almost there, old man. Almost there.
P3CLOSE, Lilla Ulv

in her holster, the soul-text bouncing:

LILLA ULV
he's SO LOUD. he's been yelling since the heavy planet. he says you're slow.
KOMPISa wet laugh
…Yeah. That's him.
PAGES 2–3 — SPLASH
P4SPLASH (double page). SMEDJAN.

A volcanic planet hanging in the starlight, its whole surface veined with rivers of lava that glow like arteries under black rock. Every mountain is crowned with an anvil, some the size of houses, some the size of towns, and on many of them, tiny figures are hammering, sparks fountaining up into the dark. Smoke rises in a hundred columns. The whole world rings, clang… clang… clang, a planet-sized forge.

And around it, a ring of ugly black ships, hulls slick with oil, chains hanging from their sides: a blockade.

Smedjan, the Forge. Where metal can hold a soul.
PAGE 4
P5CLOSE, Trollmage

peering through a spyglass at the black ships.

TROLLMAGE
Oil ships. Chains. Big cauldrons on deck. That's the Melters. The Order pays them to melt soul-weapons down into plain metal: guns that shoot for anyone, swords that cut for anyone.
TROLLMAGE
Tools. Things that don't say no.
P6CLOSE, Kompis

hand going to Lilla Ulv.

KOMPIS
…They're not getting near her.
PAGE 5
P7WIDE.

The black ships turn as one toward the Marka. Grapples fly, iron hooks on oily chains biting into her rail.

MELTER CAPTAINthrough a horn
Soul-signature aboard! Two! Surrender the weapons for melting by order of the Council!
P8CLOSE, Kompis

reading the Melters' threads with gold eyes. Their threads are black and slick, coated in oil, dulled, like rope left in tar.

KOMPIS
…Something's wrong with them. Their threads are greased.
PAGE 6
P9ACTION.

Melters swarm over the rail: men and women in heavy leather, faces masked against the fumes, both hands sheathed in gauntlets dripping black oil.

RANK PLATE ×15: MELTER · K-II MARKED · Smedjan blockade

P10ACTION.

A Melter grabs Rougeina's blade, and the oil on his gauntlet smears the steel. For one moment the mirror-steel goes dull, like a dead eye. She rips it free, horrified.

ROUGEINA
…It went quiet. Something in my blade went quiet.
PAGES 7–8 — THE CLASH
P11ACTION, a run of fast panels.

Vigolas, coat on and clinking, punches green lightning through three Melters into the sea.

Smurjan's Triple Pulse sends three more flying in one beat.

Rougeina, wiping her blade frantically, Swaps with a gull overhead and drops onto a Melter's head.

Drekk swings the axe, through his bell-rope mask: "Off my SHIP!"

Trollmage, asleep on a barrel, is stepped over by every Melter. Nobody wants the troll.

P12ACTION.

Three Melters converge on Kompis, gauntlets reaching for his holster.

MELTER
That one. The little pistol. It's loud.
PAGE 9
P13CLOSE, Kompis

Subtick, the world grey. A thousand versions. In the one he keeps, he draws Lilla Ulv and fires before they touch her.

P14ACTION.

The wolf-cub bullet ricochets off a cauldron, a mast and a Melter's helmet, and bonks all three gauntlets off all three hands in one bound.

LILLA ULV
don't TOUCH me with that GREASE—
PAGE 10
P15CLOSE, a fallen gauntlet

on the deck, oil pooling out of it. Where the oil touches the planks, the wood goes grey and silent. Not burned. Quieted. Even the Marka's bark-hull seems to shiver.

P16CLOSE, Kompis

staring at it, holding Lilla Ulv close.

KOMPIS
…That stuff. If it touched her—
PAGE 11
P17WIDE.

The crew drives the Melters back over the rail. The black ships pull off, regrouping, their cauldrons smoking. The Marka limps through the gap in the blockade toward the harbour.

P18CLOSE, Vigolas

wiping oil off his knuckles, frowning at the grey smear it leaves.

VIGOLAS
Okay. I don't like them.
PAGE 12
P19WIDE, the harbour of Smedjan.

A crescent of black sand under a mountain crowned by an enormous anvil. Forges along the shore, every chimney smoking. People in leather aprons with soot-black faces stop hammering to watch the Marka come in.

P20CLOSE, a child at a forge

pointing at the ship, shouting to someone up the mountain:

CHILD
Master! Master! A bark-ship! There's soul-signatures aboard!
PAGE 13
P21CLOSE, Kompis

stepping onto the black sand, the box in his arms. And he hears something, faint and far, coming from high up the mountain, from inside the glow of the great anvil. A voice. Gruff. Familiar.

P22CLOSE, Kompis

frozen, eyes filling.

VOICEvery faint, from far above
…—about TIME, you slow, soft-hearted, dog-loving—
PAGE 14
P23CLOSE, Lilla Ulv

bouncing in the holster.

LILLA ULV
told you! TOLD YOU! he's SO LOUD!
P24CLOSE, Kompis

laughing and crying at once, clutching the box.

KOMPIS
…That's him. That's him.
PAGE 15
P25WIDE, the mountain.

The crew climbs a switchback path toward the great anvil at the summit, past forges, past lava streams, past racks of half-finished blades that seem to turn to watch them go by.

P26CLOSE, Rougeina

passing a rack of swords. Every blade on it tilts toward her, toward her blades, as if recognising something. She walks faster.

PAGE 16 — THE HOOK
P27WIDE, the summit.

An anvil the size of a house, glowing red-hot from within. Beside it a forge-fire like a small sun. And on the anvil sits a short, broad, soot-black old man with forearms like anvils, in a leather apron burned through in a hundred places. One of his eyes is a glowing coal. He's humming, and it isn't his own song.

P28FINAL PANEL, close on the old smith

looking down at Kompis and the box in his arms.

THE SMITH
Bring me the box, boy.
THE SMITH
He's been yelling for weeks.
END OF CHAPTER 111

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.