SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga III · The Architect War · Arc 4 · Tyngden

Chapter 110

Standing
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, the Leaden Hall.

Silence but for the rain. Tyngd on both knees on the cracked floor. Vigolas standing over him in the coat that weighs a world. The crew behind him, swaying, bleeding, upright.

P2CLOSE, Tyngd

his huge hands flat on the floor, breathing like a bellows.

TYNGD
…Take it off. The weight. I'm— I'm done holding it.
PAGE 2
P3CLOSE, Tyngd's hand

lifting slowly. The coat on Vigolas's shoulders gets lighter, back to a coat, clinking, thirty-six shards in the lining. Vigolas staggers at the sudden lightness.

VIGOLAS
Whoa— okay. Okay.
P4CLOSE, Vigolas

hugging the coat around himself, nose buried in the collar.

VIGOLASmuffled
…Hi. Missed you. Never doing that again.
PAGE 3
P5CLOSE, Tyngd

trying to get up. His knees won't take him. His whole body shakes with the ghost-weight of everything he carried in that fight.

P6CLOSE, Vigolas

stepping forward to help him, reaching down, and his knees won't bend. He tries to crouch. They lock. The Minus One holds.

VIGOLAS
…Oh. Right. I gave that up.
PAGE 4
P7ACTION, comic.

Vigolas tries to help without kneeling: he bends at the waist, way over, like a crane, arms dangling, and grabs Tyngd's huge hand upside-down.

VIGOLAS
Hold on— hold on, this is fine, this is totally— (straining) —how much do you weigh—
TYNGD
…I decide that.
VIGOLAS
Then decide less!
P8ACTION.

Tyngd, despite himself, a huff of breath that might be a laugh. He makes himself light, just a little, and Vigolas hauls the Heavy King up onto his feet.

PAGE 5
P9TWO-SHOT.

Two men standing face to face: one a giant in a crown of lead, one a pirate who can't kneel.

TYNGD
…You gave up kneeling. On my world. You understand you'll pay for that heartbeat.
VIGOLAS
Already did. Felt it go.
P10CLOSE, Vigolas

a hand on his own chest. The beat that stopped and didn't come back.

VIGOLASquietly, lightly
Eighth body. Fewer spare beats than I'd like. (a grin) Worth it.
PAGE 6
P11CLOSE, Kompis

eyes gold, looking at Tyngd's threads, the dark lead cables running down into the planet. Among them, one thread runs up: thin, silver, pointing straight at the sky, through the one window.

KOMPIS
…You've got a thread to the sky.
P12CLOSE, Tyngd

very still.

TYNGD
…Since I was a boy. I've wanted to leave the ground. Just once. To be light.
PAGE 7
P13CLOSE, Tyngd.
TYNGD
But my body weighs what my world weighs. I can only leave its surface by making myself light, and it tears me. From the inside. Every time I've tried.
TYNGD
So I made everyone else heavy instead. If I couldn't rise, nobody would.
P14CLOSE, Mor Lyft

who has climbed the whole way here on her own two feet, standing in the doorway, eighty years old, soaked.

MOR LYFT
…Forty years I spent learning to stand under your weight, boy.
PAGE 8
P15CLOSE, Tyngd

looking at her, the old woman who stood up anyway.

TYNGD
…I know. I watched you. Every day. You're the only one who ever did.
P16CLOSE, Mor Lyft

stepping into the hall.

MOR LYFT
Then do something useful with that crown for once.
PAGE 9
P17CLOSE, Tyngd

closing his eyes. He places both huge hands flat on the floor of his hall, on his world.

TYNGD
…One day. I can hold it off you for one day. Then it comes back.
VIGOLAS
Then make it a good day.
P18CLOSE, Tyngd's face

and he lifts. Not one thing. Everything. The weight of his whole world, off. His face twists. Cracks of light run along his skin like a cracked dam. It's tearing him, and he holds.

PAGES 10–11 — SPLASH
P19SPLASH (double page). A WORLD STANDS UP.

Tyngden, without its weight.

Across the whole crushed-flat planet, everyone stands up. The Risers in their canyon rise straight-backed, weeping, laughing. The Ballast, crawling soldiers for twenty years, push up off their bellies onto their feet, staring at their own legs. Children jump, jump high, for the first time. The sideways trees lift their branches. And the birds, the birds that walked, spread their wings and fly, thousands of them, all at once, a storm of wings rising into a sky that is suddenly open.

In the canyon the golden Cave-Bear lowers its paws. The clouds float away, light as clouds again. It shakes itself like a wet dog, shrinks, and trots out of the canyon as a golden retriever, tail going.

And at the centre, on the roof of the Leaden Hall, Tyngd stands with his arms spread under the open sky, cracks of light all over his body, tearing, and on his face the happiest look a giant has ever worn.

PAGE 12
P20CLOSE, Mingus

bounding into the Leaden Hall, soaking wet, and launching himself at Kompis. Kompis goes over backwards, laughing.

KOMPIS
You held the sky! You held up the whole sky!
MINGUS
WOOF!
P21CLOSE, Vigolas

rubbing Mingus's ears, quietly.

VIGOLAS
…Good boy. Best boy. Thanks for waiting for us.
PAGE 13
P22WIDE, the plain, sunset.

For one day, Tyngden is light. Risers and Ballast dance together in the open. Mor Lyft sits on a rock, stands up, sits down, stands up, for the joy of it. Children throw stones that fly forever.

P23CLOSE, Trollmage

lying on the grass, asleep again. (Of course.) A Riser child has placed a crown of flowers on his head.

PAGE 14
P24WIDE, the roof of the Leaden Hall.

Tyngd sits on the edge, legs dangling, glowing cracks fading slowly from his skin, watching birds fly. Vigolas sits beside him in his coat, swinging his legs.

TYNGD
When the day ends, it all comes back. I'll be heavy again. So will they.
VIGOLAS
But they'll know now. What it's like. You can't un-know flying.
P25CLOSE, Tyngd

quiet.

TYNGD
…The Order will want to know why I didn't send them your coat.
VIGOLAS
Tell them it was too heavy.
PAGE 15
P26CLOSE, Tyngd

and the giant laughs, a rockslide of a laugh that shakes the hall.

TYNGD
…Too heavy.
P27CLOSE, Tyngd

holding out his huge hand.

TYNGD
If they send me after you again, I'll come. I'm still their general.
VIGOLASshaking it
If they do, come light.
PAGE 16
P28WIDE, the Marka

hauled upright by the Risers and Ballast together, lighter than she's ever been. The brass clock-hand still stands in her deck. The Kettle's bell is pried out of the planks and rehung at her bow. The crew climbs aboard, all on their feet, all a little stronger, all a little more broken.

P29MONTAGE, the prices, four small panels:

Vigolas, a hand on his chest: one heartbeat gone.

Kompis, a cloth to his nose, still bleeding from the Shared Beats.

Rougeina, ribs bound tight, wincing as she climbs the rigging.

Smurjan with his stomach growling, all three souls hungry together, Kali gnawing a loaf.

PAGE 17 — THE HOOK
P30CLOSE, Kompis's hip.

Lilla Ulv in her holster, and her soul-text explodes out of the steel, frantic and joyful:

LILLA ULV
kompis. KOMPIS. the old man. i can hear the old man. he's AWAKE. he's YELLING.
P31FINAL PANEL, wide, the open sky over Tyngden

as the Marka rises from the planet's light surface back up into the Current. On the far horizon of the starlight sea, small and very bright, a red volcano glows. From it, very faintly, carried on the wind like a voice from a long way off, a grumpy old man is shouting:

IVARvery far away
…BOY! Where've you BEEN?!
END OF CHAPTER 110

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.