SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga III · The Architect War · Arc 5 · Smedjan

Chapter 114

Reforged
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, the summit forge at midnight.

The forge-fire roars white. On the great anvil, the pieces of Ivar laid out in order like a puzzle: splintered stock, cracked barrel, the engraved fragment with the bear and the little hat. Malm with the long tongs. Kompis with the hammer. The crew in a ring around them.

P2CLOSE, Malm.
MALM
When the spark goes into the steel, you strike. Every blow, you remember something. Not think. Remember. The steel forgets what it was unless someone who loved it reminds it.
PAGE 2
P3CLOSE, Kompis

hammer raised, swallowing hard.

KOMPIS
…What if I remember wrong?
IVARfrom the fire
You won't, boy. You never forget anything. It's your most annoying quality.
P4CLOSE, Glöd

at the forge-door at the edge of the summit, whistling his three-note tune softly, watching the path down the mountain.

GLÖD
…Torches. Coming up. Lots of torches.
PAGE 3
P5CLOSE, Malm

not looking away from the fire.

MALM
Vigolas. Smurjan. The path. Glöd, the door. Nobody gets in until this is done. If the spark goes cold halfway, he's gone for good.
P6WIDE.

The crew moves: Vigolas, Smurjan, Rougeina, Kali and Drekk run down to the first switchback with weapons up. Glöd plants himself in the big iron forge-door, hammer in hand. Mingus stays by Kompis's leg.

PAGE 4
P7ACTION.

Malm reaches into the white fire with the tongs and lifts out Ivar's spark, a bright gold mote spitting and crackling.

IVAR
Careful! CAREFUL! I'm delicate!
P8ACTION.

Malm lays the spark on the pieces. It sinks into the cracked barrel like water into sand, and the whole heap of pieces glows.

MALM
Now.
PAGE 5
P9ACTION. First strike.

Kompis brings the hammer down. CLANG.

KOMPISremembering
…The first day. You wouldn't fire for me. You said my hands were too soft.
P10CLOSE, the steel

the crack in the barrel closing a finger's width.

PAGE 6 — CUT: THE PATH
P11ACTION.

The Melters hit the first switchback with cauldrons of black oil on poles and gauntlets dripping. Vigolas lightning, Smurjan Triple Pulse, Rougeina dropping from sparks. They hold. Barely.

P12CLOSE, Slagg

walking up the path through the chaos, calm, the black pistol in his hand.

SLAGG
The forge. They're reforging. Flood it.
PAGE 7 — THE FORGE
P13ACTION. Second strike.

CLANG.

KOMPISremembering
…The bear. You shot its hat off. I laughed so hard I fell out of the tree.
P14CLOSE, the steel.

The stock knits, wood grain flowing together.

IVARsoul-voice, from inside the steel now, muffled and warm
…It was a beautiful hat.
PAGE 8
P15ACTION. Third strike.

CLANG.

KOMPIS
…Every time I was scared. Every night on watch. You talked. About the weather. My aim. Anything. So I wasn't alone.
P16CLOSE, Kompis

tears running into his beard, hammer still rising and falling.

KOMPIS
…Fourth. The night you stood in front of that blade. "Not this boy."
PAGE 9 — CUT: THE PATH
P17WIDE.

The Melters tip their cauldrons. A river of black oil pours down the mountain in reverse, up the path, pushed by Melters with long poles. It flows past the crew's line, too wide to stop, too slick to fight, straight toward the summit forge-door.

VIGOLAS
GLÖD! THE DOOR!
P18CLOSE, Glöd

at the iron door, seeing the black wave coming, fifteen years old, hammer in his hands.

GLÖDto himself, whistling once, shakily
…fweet, fweet, fwee… okay. Okay.
PAGE 10
P19ACTION.

Glöd slams the iron forge-door shut and throws his whole body against it from the outside, on the oil's side, so the door holds and the forge behind it stays clean.

P20ACTION.

The black oil hits him and the door. It pours over him, up to his knees, his waist. He doesn't move. He keeps whistling.

GLÖDthrough gritted teeth, whistling
…fweet… fweet… fwee…
PAGE 11 — THE FORGE
P21CLOSE, Kompis

inside, hearing the whistling through the iron door, not knowing. Striking.

KOMPIS
Fifth. (CLANG) I'm sorry I let you break. I'm sorry I put you in a box.
P22CLOSE, Malm

hearing the whistling too. And understanding. His coal-eye goes dark for one beat. His hands on the tongs don't waver.

MALMvery quietly
…Keep striking, boy. Don't stop. Don't stop.
PAGE 12
P23ACTION. The last strike.

Kompis raises the hammer one more time, everything he has in his arms.

KOMPIS
…And the day you came back. Every good weapon remembers who it was.
P24ACTION.

CLANG. The steel flashes: white, then gold.

PAGES 13–14 — SPLASH
P25SPLASH (double page). IVAR REBORN.

On the great anvil, in a burst of gold light that throws the whole summit into day, IVAR: the old hunting rifle, reforged. The barrel is now gold-veined steel, the cracks healed into shining seams like a mended bowl. The stock is dark and whole, and the engraving along the barrel is now three pictures: the bear, the little hat, and, new, burned into the steel by the last strike, a dog. Out of the rifle, solid as a man, rises the ghost of a grey-moustached old hunter with his arms folded, furious.

IVAR
BOY! WHERE'VE YOU BEEN?!

And Kompis, hammer dropped, is hugging a rifle and a ghost at the same time, sobbing and laughing.

PAGE 15
P26CLOSE, Ivar's ghost

gruff, awkward, patting Kompis on the back with one huge ghostly hand.

IVAR
…There, there. Stop dripping on me, I've just been forged.
IVARsquinting at the engraving
…Who put a dog on me?
KOMPISlaughing
You did. You remembered him.
PAGE 16
P27A SOUND.

The great iron forge-door groans. Then bursts inward. A wave of black oil slops across the threshold and stops just short of the anvil, spent.

P28WIDE, the doorway.

Beyond it, on the path, the Melters are retreating down the mountain, beaten back by Vigolas and Smurjan, the oil drained away. In the doorway, on the black-slicked stone, lies a boy, fifteen, his hammer still in his hand. Not moving. Not whistling.

PAGE 17
P29CLOSE, Malm

walking slowly to the door. Kneeling in the oil beside Glöd. One huge, soot-black hand on the boy's chest. The coal-eye dims.

MALM
…You held it.
P30CLOSE, Mingus

padding over, lying down beside the boy who loved him, chin on Glöd's arm, whining softly.

PAGE 18 — THE HOOK
P31CLOSE, Malm's chest.

Faint, a new splinter, a tiny warm light settling in among the hundreds. He keeps every soul he can.

P32FINAL PANEL, wide, the summit at dawn.

The crew standing in silence around the doorway. Kompis holding Ivar. And Malm, kneeling over the apprentice, begins to hum: not a hunter's song, not a sailor's. A cheerful three-note tune.

MALMhumming
…hm-hm, hm-hm, hmmm…

(He doesn't stop.)

END OF CHAPTER 114

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.