SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga III · The Architect War · Arc 5 · Smedjan

Chapter 115

Fru Gnista
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, Smedjan, morning.

The forge-village counts its losses. Smoke. Apprentices sweeping oil off the paths. A small cairn of stones at the summit door with Glöd's hammer laid on top.

P2CLOSE, Malm

sitting beside the cairn, humming Glöd's three notes, hm-hm, hm-hm, hmmm, polishing a blade that doesn't need polishing.

PAGE 2
P3CLOSE, Kompis

sitting beside him, Ivar across his knees, the reforged gold seams glinting.

KOMPIS
…I'm sorry. He was holding the door for us.
MALM
He was holding it for the spark. For a grumpy old man he'd never met. That's what kind of boy he was.
P4CLOSE, Ivar's ghost

rising from the rifle, uncharacteristically quiet, taking off a ghostly hat.

IVAR
…I'll remember him. I'm good at that now.
PAGE 3
P5CLOSE, Malm

standing up, wiping his face with a soot-black hand.

MALM
Slagg's got your pup. He'll melt her into a tool at dawn tomorrow, at the lava-lake. That's how the Melters do it: in front of everyone, so the forge-folk watch.
MALM
You'll need more than one gun to get her back. Come.
PAGE 4
P6WIDE, a vault

dug into the mountain behind the great anvil. A long stone hall, lamp-lit, lined floor to ceiling with racks: hundreds of weapons, swords, bows, axes, guns, all humming faintly, all turning very slightly as Kompis walks in.

P7CLOSE, Kompis

eyes gold, and the vault blazes with souls: hundreds of small lights inside the metal, curious, shy, hopeful, looking at him.

KOMPISwhispering
…They're all awake.
PAGE 5
P8CLOSE, Malm.
MALM
The waiting. Souls that chose metal and haven't chosen a holder yet. Some have waited a hundred years. A soul-weapon chooses, boy. You don't pick them. You stand there and let them look.
P9CLOSE, Kompis

standing very still in the middle of the vault, Ivar on his back, Mingus at his heel. Hundreds of little souls peering at him.

IVARgrumbling
Don't get too many. I'm not sharing the good shoulder.
PAGE 6
P10A VOICE

bright, loud, crackling like a fuse:

VOICE
Oh, FINALLY! A boy with a sky worth lighting!
P11CLOSE, a high rack.

A dusty flintlock pistol: long-barrelled, brass-fitted, with a cracked mother-of-pearl grip painted with tiny stars. Inside it, as Kompis sees it, an old woman: white hair piled high and singed at the ends, spectacles, a soot-smudged apron, a twinkle like a lit match.

FRU GNISTAsoul-text, sparkling
Don't just stand there gawping, dear, take me down! I've been on this shelf since before your grandmother was born!
PAGE 7
P12CLOSE, Kompis

lifting the flintlock down carefully. It's warm. It fizzes in his hand.

KOMPIS
…Hello. Who are you?
FRU GNISTA
Fru Gnista! Mistress of Fireworks to the Court of Glasheim, dismissed, for "excessive celebration". I made the sky go gold at a coronation and they said it was showing off!
FRU GNISTA
I wanted to light it one last time before I died. I didn't get to. So here I am. Waiting for someone with a reason.
P13CLOSE, Malm

a ghost of a smile.

MALM
She bit me too.
PAGE 8
P14CLOSE, Kompis.
KOMPIS
…I've got a reason. My friend. A little wolf. They're going to melt her tomorrow.
FRU GNISTAthe twinkle going hard as flint
…Melt her? A pup?
FRU GNISTA
Oh, I'll light that sky, dear. I'll light it so bright they'll see it in Glasheim.
PAGE 9
P15A SOUND.

Shouting at the vault entrance. Iron on stone. The lamps flicker as the door is forced.

P16WIDE.

Melters pour into the vault, cauldrons of black oil on poles, gauntlets dripping. Twenty of them, heading for the racks. Every waiting soul in the vault shrinks back; the humming turns into a terrified whine.

MELTER
Quench the lot! Every waiting one! Master Slagg's orders!
PAGE 10
P17ACTION.

The Melters dunk the nearest swords into a cauldron. Hiss. Two small soul-lights go out, under. The racks scream.

P18CLOSE, Kompis

raising the flintlock, eyes going grey. Subtick. But it's a flintlock: one shot, slow to load, a spark in a pan.

KOMPISthinking
…One shot. Make it count.
FRU GNISTA
Oh, I always make it count, dear. Aim up.
PAGES 11–12 — SPLASH
P19SPLASH (double page). FRU GNISTA.

Kompis aims up, at the vault's high stone ceiling, and pulls the trigger. Flint strikes, the pan flashes, and out of the long barrel comes not a bullet but a firework: a streaking rocket of white-gold that hits the ceiling and bursts.

A chrysanthemum of fire blooms across the whole vault ceiling: gold, crimson, emerald, violet, silver, rose and amber, all the colours of the sins at once, sparks raining down, dazzling. Every Melter is blinded, staggering, cauldrons dropping, oil spilling harmlessly onto stone. Every waiting soul on every rack lights up in the glow, cheering.

In the middle, Kompis with a smoking flintlock, and an old woman's soul laughing like a lit fuse.

FRU GNISTA
THAT is how you light a sky!
PAGE 13
P20ACTION.

While the Melters stumble blind, the crew pours in: Vigolas bowling them over, Smurjan's palms, Rougeina Swapping with sparks from the firework, Malm hauling cauldrons out of their hands and pitching them out the door.

P21WIDE.

The vault is clear. The two quenched swords lie dark on the floor. Malm picks them up gently and sets them on the anvil-bench to work on later.

PAGE 14
P22CLOSE, Kompis

reloading the flintlock clumsily. Powder, ball, a fiddly little flint.

FRU GNISTA
Not like that! Tamp it, dear, tamp it, you're not stirring soup!
IVARfrom his back
Oh wonderful. She's going to be like this.
FRU GNISTA
And who's this grumpy old thing?
IVAR
The senior gun.
P23CLOSE, Kompis

grinning, wedged between two arguing gun-souls.

KOMPIS
…I've missed this.
PAGE 15
P24CLOSE, Mingus

sniffing toward the far corner of the vault, the darkest one, where the lamplight doesn't reach. His ears are up. Not growling. Listening.

P25WIDE, the corner.

On a rack by itself: a long, thin rifle, plain dark wood and blackened steel, no decoration at all. It doesn't hum. It doesn't glow. In Kompis's gold sight there's a soul in it, small and very still, with no soul-text at all.

PAGE 16 — THE HOOK
P26ACTION.

The long silent rifle turns itself on its rack, slowly, without a sound, until its barrel points at the vault door. It says nothing.

P27FINAL PANEL, the vault door

slammed shut after the fight. The iron is starting to glow red from the other side, hotter and hotter, and a slow drip of black oil is seeping under it.

SLAGGmuffled, calm, through the door
…Master Malm. I've come for the rest.
END OF CHAPTER 115

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.