SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga III · The Architect War · Arc 5 · Smedjan

Chapter 116

Tyst
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, the vault.

The iron door glows cherry-red. Black oil drips under it and smokes on the stone. The waiting souls on the racks shrink back, whining.

P2MID, the crew

weapons up, facing the door. Kompis in front with Ivar on his back and Fru Gnista in his hand. Behind him in the corner, the long silent rifle points steadily at the door. It hasn't moved since it turned.

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P3CLOSE, Kompis

glancing back at it. Eyes gold. Inside the plain dark wood and blackened steel, a soul: small, very still, a figure sitting cross-legged with a cloth wrapped over its mouth.

KOMPIS
…Hello?

(No soul-text. Nothing.)

P4CLOSE, Malm

quietly.

MALM
That one won't answer you. Not in words. Tyst. An assassin, a long time ago. When she died she swore a vow of silence for every word she'd ever used to lie her way close to someone. She's kept it ever since.
PAGE 3
P5CLOSE, Fru Gnista

fizzing in Kompis's hand.

FRU GNISTA
Never said a word in eighty years, dear. Dreadful conversationalist. Excellent shot.
P6CLOSE, Kompis

walking slowly over to the silent rifle, Mingus at his heel. He doesn't reach for it. He looks.

KOMPISthinking
…No threads I can read. No voice. Just… how it sits. How it waits.
PAGE 4
P7KOMPIS'S POV, the old way.

No soul-text. He reads the rifle like he read the crew in Katriel's fog: how it's angled, not at the door's centre but at the hinge, where a man would step through; the barrel perfectly still; the strap hanging toward him, just slightly, the way a person leans when they want to be asked.

KOMPISthinking
…You don't point at the middle. You point where he'll be. You've been watching me since I walked in.
P8CLOSE, Kompis.
KOMPIS
…You want to come.
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P9CLOSE, the silent soul inside

still cross-legged, cloth over its mouth. It lifts one hand and touches two fingers to its own brow: a salute. Yes.

P10CLOSE, Kompis's hands

lifting the long rifle off its rack. It's light, perfectly balanced, cold, and then, slowly, warm.

IVARfrom his back, grudging
…Hmph. At least that one'll be quiet.
FRU GNISTA
Rude!
PAGE 6
P11ACTION.

The vault door bursts inward in a gush of black oil and heat. Melters pour through behind a wave of it. At their centre, Slagg, bloodied from yesterday and not caring, gauntlets dripping, and in one hand the black silent pistol: Lilla Ulv, quenched.

P12CLOSE, Slagg

calm.

SLAGG
Master Malm. The waiting ones. All of them. Tools by tomorrow.
PAGES 7–8 — THE CLASH
P13ACTION, a run of fast panels.

Malm charges like a landslide, fists swinging, and the Melters' oil-poles keep him at bay.

Vigolas and Smurjan hit the flank, lightning and Triple Pulse.

Rougeina Swaps with sparks from Fru Gnista's second firework.

The Melters dunk two more waiting swords. Hiss. Two lights go out.

P14CLOSE, Slagg

raising quenched Lilla Ulv at Malm's back, perfectly steady, no hesitation. A man who feels nothing never hesitates.

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P15CLOSE, Kompis

raising Tyst. Eyes grey. Subtick. The world freezes.

P16GREY WORLD.

A thousand versions of the shot. In most of them, the bullet is heard: the crack echoes, Slagg turns, and the oil-gauntlet comes up to catch it the way it caught Lilla Ulv. In one version, there's no sound at all.

KOMPISthinking
…Your shots don't make a sound. He can't catch what he can't hear.
PAGES 10–11 — SPLASH
P17SPLASH (double page). TYST.

Kompis fires. The long rifle bucks against his shoulder, and there is no sound. The panel is drawn completely silent: no SFX, no lines, no crack. Just a thin dark streak across the vault, faster than anything, and at the end of it Slagg's left gauntlet is torn off his hand in a spray of black oil, spinning away into a cauldron.

Slagg's bare hand, pale and scarred, hangs in the air. Behind him on its rack, the silent soul in the rifle sits cross-legged with the cloth over its mouth, and nods once.

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P18CLOSE, Slagg

looking at his bare hand. No pain on his face. No anger. Nothing.

SLAGG
…Silent. Clever. I didn't hear it.
SLAGG
I didn't feel it either. Didn't you hear? I don't.
P19CLOSE, Kompis

lowering Tyst, nose bleeding.

KOMPIS
You will.
PAGE 13
P20ACTION.

Slagg backs out of the vault with his one gauntlet and quenched Lilla Ulv held up like a hostage. The Melters retreat around him, dragging cauldrons.

SLAGG
Dawn, Master Malm. The lava-lake. The pup goes in first, in front of everyone. Then the rest.
P21WIDE.

They're gone. Oil on the floor. Two more quenched swords. The vault quiet except for whimpering racks.

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P22CLOSE, Kompis

sitting on the vault floor with three guns: Ivar across his back, Fru Gnista in his lap, Tyst across his knees. The fourth loop on his bandolier, Lilla Ulv's, is empty. So is the fifth.

KOMPISquietly
…Three. And she's out there alone.
P23CLOSE, Tyst's soul

silent, lifting a hand and placing it, very gently, flat on Kompis's knee. I know.

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P24CLOSE, Ivar's ghost

rising from his back, arms folded, looking out of the vault toward the red glow of the lava-lake.

IVAR
…The cub. Tomorrow. In front of everyone.
IVARvery quietly, not grumbling at all
…Not that one. Not that pup. Not while I've got a barrel.
P25CLOSE, Malm

sitting down heavily beside them, humming Glöd's three notes.

MALM
Then you'll need to be loud, old man. Louder than you've ever been.
PAGE 16 — THE HOOK
P26WIDE, the lava-lake at night

far below the mountain: a crater of molten rock glowing like a sunrise. On its rim the Melters build a platform over the lava, and a cauldron of black oil steams beside a crucible for melting. Forge-folk gather on the slopes, forced to watch.

P27FINAL PANEL, close on the platform.

On a post above the crucible hangs a small black pistol on a chain, silent, swinging gently over the lava's glow. Slagg stands beside it with a pocket watch.

SLAGG
…Dawn.
END OF CHAPTER 116

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.