SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga III · The Architect War · Arc 6 · The Dawnstar

Chapter 124

And
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, the Dawnstar split.

The violet half and the rose half drifting apart across a canyon of white fire, twenty metres, thirty. As the halves part, the light of each one dims, two dying stars.

P2CLOSE, Orka

on the violet edge, grey to the shoulders now, her split eyes fading.

ORKAtwo balloons, no bridge
The star is dying. … So am I.
PAGE 2
P3CLOSE, Trollmage

who woke when the star cracked, staring at the gap.

TROLLMAGE
Her power's in joining. He cut the word she joins with.
KOMPIS
Then she needs a new word.
P4CLOSE, Kompis

running to her, kneeling on the edge, gold script blazing on his arms.

KOMPIS
Orka. "And" isn't the only joining word. What else joins two things?
PAGE 3
P5CLOSE, Orka

gasping, trying. Her mouth shapes words.

ORKA
…"Or." No, "or" splits. "But" splits. "Then"… "then" is time, not joining…
P6CLOSE, Orka's grey hands

trembling, and something in her face sharpens.

ORKA
…"With."
PAGE 4
P7CLOSE, Orka

lifting both hands toward the drifting rose half, and her two balloons, for the first time, are joined by a new bridge: a small gold "with".

ORKA
This half — with — that half.
P8WIDE.

A gold glyph burns across the gap, with, and the two halves of the star shudder. The drift slows. It doesn't stop.

ORKAstraining
It's not enough! "With" is softer than "and"! I can hold it, but I can't pull!
PAGE 5
P9CLOSE, Kompis

looking at the gap, at the thread of the star itself, a vast gold thread running between the two halves, cut by Sax's shears, its two ends drifting apart in the white fire.

KOMPIS
…Then you hold it. I'll pull.
P10ACTION.

Kompis leaps off the edge into the canyon of white fire, Mingus barking on the rim, and catches one cut end of the star's thread in both hands.

PAGES 6–7 — THE CLASH: CUT AND TIE
P11WIDE.

Sax steps onto the gap from the rose side, walking on nothing, untethered, gravity not even holding him any more, his slim shears open.

SAX
You can't tie a star, dog-man.
KOMPIShanging on the thread, burning
Watch me.
P12ACTION, a run of fast panels.

Cut and tie.

Kompis reaches for the other end of the star's thread. Sax snips it shorter.

Kompis ties a knot. Sax snips the knot.

Kompis ties two. Sax snips both.

Vigolas leaps in, lightning, and Sax snips the thread between Vigolas and his own jump, and Vigolas just stops mid-air and falls back onto the violet half.

Rougeina Moth-Swaps to Sax's back. He snips the Swap's line and she arrives nowhere, tumbling into the white fire. Smurjan catches her by the wrist.

PAGE 8
P13CLOSE, Kompis

in the fire, nose and ears bleeding, tying faster than he has ever done anything. Gold knots blooming in his hands like flowers.

KOMPIS
You cut. I tie. You cut. I tie.
P14CLOSE, Sax

cutting, cutting, his pale face for the first time puzzled.

SAX
…Why do you keep doing that? They'll just get cut again.
KOMPIS
Because I want them tied. That's all a knot is.
PAGE 9
P15CLOSE, Vigolas

on the violet edge, Greed-sight blazing, looking at Sax. Searching for value. Sax glows almost nothing: a man who has cut everything worth having.

P16CLOSE, Vigolas's Greed-sight.

But deep in Sax's chest, faint, one thread glows. Thin, frayed almost to nothing, unnamed. The one bond he hasn't cut.

VIGOLAS
…Kompis! His chest! He's got one left!
PAGE 10
P17CLOSE, Kompis

eyes going gold, finding it: one frayed thread in Sax's chest, running down into the dark of the Current, toward something very far away and very old.

KOMPIS
…Who is that? Who's on the other end?
P18CLOSE, Sax

his hand going to his chest, and for one panel his calm face cracks.

SAX
…I don't remember. I cut everyone. I don't remember who that one is. I just never could make myself—
PAGE 11
P19CLOSE, Kompis

quiet, holding out a gold-scripted hand across the fire.

KOMPIS
I can tie it tighter. Whoever it is. You'd feel them again.
P20CLOSE, Sax

staring at the hand. Then at his own shears.

SAX
…No.
SAX
If I felt them, I'd have to feel all of it. Everything I cut.
PAGE 12
P21ACTION.

Sax turns his shears on himself. On the one frayed thread in his own chest.

P22CLOSE.

snip.

Sax, cut loose from the last bond he had, cut loose from the star, from gravity, from everything, simply drifts. Off the gap. Out over the Current. Away. No one and nothing holding him. Growing smaller against the starlight sea.

PAGE 13
P23CLOSE, Kompis

reaching after him, too late.

KOMPIS
…No—
P24CLOSE, Ivar's ghost

rising from the rifle on his back.

IVAR
Leave him, boy. Some people would rather drift than be held. (gruff) Tie the star.
PAGE 14
P25ACTION.

With Sax gone, nothing is cutting. Kompis seizes both ends of the star's great thread, one in each fist, gold script blazing to his shoulders. Orka on the violet edge, hands open, gold "with" blazing across the gap.

KOMPIS
Orka! NOW!
ORKA
This half — with — that half!
P26ACTION.

Kompis ties: a knot as big as a ship, a fisherman's knot of pure gold thread in the middle of a canyon of fire, pulled tight with everything he has.

PAGES 15–16 — SPLASH
P27SPLASH (double page). TWO HALVES, ONE LIGHT.

The Dawnstar closes. Orka's with holds it and Kompis's knot pulls it, and the violet half and the rose half come crashing back together. The seam of white fire fuses. Violet and rose don't just touch, they blend, into one light, a magenta dawn rising out of the Current brighter than the star has ever burned.

At the centre of the fused seam, a gold knot the size of a ship, glowing, holding the star together like a clasp on a book. On it, small, a bleeding fisherman with gold script to his shoulders, arms around the knot. And on the rim, a woman with her hands open, and between her two balloons, two golden bridges now: & and with.

PAGE 17
P28WIDE, the star, whole.

The crew drags Kompis up out of the seam onto warm magenta light. He's grey, shaking, bleeding from the nose and ears, grinning.

KOMPIS
…Tied it.
VIGOLAShugging him, lifting him off his feet
You tied a STAR!
P29CLOSE, Orka

sitting down slowly on the warm light, her hands finally lowering, all the way, for the first time in twelve years. They're grey and cold. The star holds on its own now, knotted.

ORKA
…I've held it with my hands for twelve years. & Now I can put them down.
PAGE 18 — THE HOOK
P30WIDE, far out on the Current.

A tiny figure drifting on the starlight sea, unanchored, untethered, slowly spinning. Sax. Pockets full of snipped threads streaming out behind him like a comet's tail, still drifting away from everything.

P31FINAL PANEL, close on Sax's face

calm again. A single tear floating up off his cheek into the dark, weightless, held by nothing.

SAXbarely a whisper
…Who was it…
END OF CHAPTER 124

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.