SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga III · The Architect War · Arc 6 · The Dawnstar

Chapter 125

Two Halves, One Light
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, the Dawnstar at dawn.

One magenta light rising out of the Current, whole, the giant gold knot glowing at its heart like a clasp. The Marka moored at its rim.

P2MID, the crew

sprawled on the warm light, exhausted, together: closer than they've ever sat, leaning on each other without noticing. Kompis lies with his head on Mingus, gold script to his shoulders, a rag pressed to his nose.

PAGE 2
P3CLOSE, Kompis

eyes half-closed, eyes gold. He can feel every thread now, both ends: Vigolas's warmth, Rougeina's fierce quiet, Smurjan's three-in-one, Kali's noise, Drekk's stubborn grief, Trollmage's sleepy contentment.

KOMPISmumbling
…You're all so loud.
KALI
You're loud! I can feel you feeling me! It's weird!
P4CLOSE, Rougeina

sitting closer to Kompis than usual, glancing at him.

ROUGEINA
…It goes both ways now?
KOMPIS
Both ways.
ROUGEINAafter a beat, looking away
…Good.
PAGE 3
P5A SOUND.

Oars. Three Severer skiffs, the last of them, come out of the dark one more time, shears raised, heading straight for the gold knot at the star's heart.

SEVERER
Sax is gone. The orders stand. Cut the knot!
P6CLOSE, Vigolas

not even getting up.

VIGOLAS
…Everybody?
PAGES 4–5 — THE CLASH: ONE BEAT
P7ACTION, a single beat, drawn as one wide panel across both pages.

The crew moves together, tied: no calling, no looking, everyone feeling where everyone else will be.

Rougeina Moth-Swaps to the first skiff.

Smurjan's Triple Pulse lands on the second.

Vigolas's Emerald Knuckle hits the third.

Tyst's silent shot snips every pair of shears in the air.

Kali has borrowed Drekk's sin, and swings his axe with him, both at once.

Mingus barks.

One heartbeat. Three skiffs overturned. Every Severer in the water, shears sinking.

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P8CLOSE, the Severers

in the water, clinging to their overturned skiffs, staring up at a crew that moved like one creature.

SEVERER
…How did they do that?
SEVERER 2
They're tied.
P9CLOSE, Vigolas

flopping back down on the warm light.

VIGOLAS
Okay. That I could get used to.
PAGE 7
P10WIDE, later.

The crew prepares to leave. Orka sits on the rim beside the gold knot, hands in her lap, resting for the first time in twelve years. Her fingers are still grey.

P11CLOSE, Kompis

sitting beside her.

KOMPIS
Come with us. We've got room. Kali sets an extra bowl anyway.
P12CLOSE, Orka

shaking her head gently.

ORKA
The further I go from the star, the dimmer it burns. & The dimmer I burn with it.
ORKA
But now it's knotted. & Maybe one day I can visit.
PAGE 8
P13CLOSE, Orka

turning her split eyes on Vigolas, who is pretending not to listen.

ORKA
Pirate. Come here.
P14CLOSE, Vigolas

wandering over, hands in his coat.

VIGOLAS
Two truths for me? Go on. I can take it.
PAGE 9
P15CLOSE, Orka

looking at him for a long time, the way she looks at a seam she's about to bind.

ORKA
You're going to lose almost everything you remember. Your ship's name. Your mother's song. Your age. More. So much more.
P16CLOSE, Vigolas

the grin flickering.

VIGOLAS
…That's one.
PAGES 10–11 — SPLASH
P17SPLASH (double page). AND YOU'RE GOING TO KEEP EVERYONE.

The rim of the Dawnstar, magenta light, the gold knot blazing behind them, the Current spread below like a sea of lanterns. Orka and Vigolas, facing each other. Her two balloons, joined by a gold "&" bridge:

ORKA
You're going to lose almost everything you remember.
ORKA
& You're going to keep everyone.

And behind Vigolas, unseen by him but drawn for the reader: the whole crew, tied, gold threads running from each of them to him, glowing.

PAGE 12
P18CLOSE, Vigolas

very quiet. In the Dawnstar's light, he can't hide what's on his face.

VIGOLAS
…I'll take that trade.
ORKA
You already have. & You'll make it again and again.
P19CLOSE, Orka

holding out her grey hand. He takes it. It's cold.

ORKA
Come back when you've lost more. & I'll tell you what you've kept.
PAGE 13
P20WIDE, the Marka

pulling away from the Dawnstar. Orka stands on the rim, hands down for once, waving one of them. The star behind her burns whole and magenta, and the gold knot glints at its heart.

P21CLOSE, Kompis

at the stern, waving back, his four guns murmuring.

LILLA ULV
bye star lady!
FRU GNISTA
Lovely woman. Terrible at small talk.
IVAR
She was perfectly pleasant.
TYST
(a two-fingered salute)
PAGE 14
P22NIGHT, the Marka on the Current.

The crew asleep in a heap of blankets by the mast, closer than ever. Rougeina on watch in the crow's nest, her list unfolded in her lap: Baldr, Katriel and Wendlan crossed off. Below them, the next name: EDVAR.

P23CLOSE, Rougeina's finger

on the name EDVAR. Her jaw tight.

ROUGEINAwhispering
…The one who poured her in.
PAGE 15
P24A SOUND.

A soft flap in the wind. Something small and pale drifts out of the dark sky and lands on the deck below the mast, as gently as a leaf.

P25ACTION.

Rougeina Swaps down to it. A folded slip of paper, sealed with a blob of red wax, neatly stamped. On the outside, in small, tidy, warm handwriting:

Delivered: to the daughter of the soldier-woman.

PAGE 16 — THE HOOK
P26CLOSE, Rougeina's hands

breaking the wax. Inside, the same tidy hand: an address, and nothing else.

The Routing Study. Glasheim. Come in — the kettle is on.

P27FINAL PANEL, close on the bottom of the slip

a signature, small and polite, and the faint ring of a teacup stain beside it:

— E. Solmunden.

(Rougeina's face, above it, is white with fury.)

END OF CHAPTER 125

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.