SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga I · The Satchel · Arc 3 · Baldr

Chapter 17

The Bell
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, before dawn, the fjord where the Kettle went down.

Black water, a rim of new ice along the rocks, a sky still full of stars. On the shore the crew sleeps in a hollow under the cliff around a dead fire, wrapped in troll moss-blankets. One small figure stands apart at the water's edge: DREKK, pulling off his boots.

P2CLOSE, Drekk.

His breath smokes. He lays his spyglass on his folded coat, carefully, like a man setting down the last thing he owns. He looks out at one spot on the black water. He knows exactly which spot.

DREKKto himself
…Stay there, old girl. I'm coming.
P3MID.

He dives.

hshhk — SPLNK
PAGE 2
P4UNDERWATER, dark green and silt-black.

Drekk kicks downward with his cheeks puffed and his eyes stinging open. Far below, in the silt, lie the charred ribs of a small, ugly, beloved boat.

P5ON THE ROCKS.

MINGUS stands at the water's edge with his front paws in the ice, whining. KOMPIS jerks awake under his blanket.

MINGUS · NOT RANKED

KOMPIS · K-II MARKED · Scalelist #9,880

KOMPIS
…Boy? What is it—
P6INSERT.

A pair of boots. A folded coat. A spyglass on top.

KOMPIS
DREKK!
PAGE 3
P7WIDE, the camp waking in a panic.

VIGOLAS sprints barefoot down the rocks, coat flapping, thirty-seven shards glowing through the lining.

VIGOLAS · ∞−1 · OFF THE LIST

ROUGEINA is already on a ledge above the water, barefoot on the ice, her black panther pressed against her legs.

ROUGEINA · K-III TESTED · Scalelist #777

TROLLMAGE doesn't move from his blanket. His crow sits on his chest.

TROLLMAGE · K-II MARKED (assigned) · Scalelist #120,331

TROLLMAGEeyes shut
He'll come up or he won't. Shouting doesn't change the water.
VIGOLAS
THAT IS NOT HELPFUL.
P8MID.

At the very edge of the shore stands SMURJAN: slate-grey skin, a white braid woven with one black and one red strand, a third eye on his forehead. In the starlight he throws three shadows in three directions.

SMURJAN · K-IV SHAPED · Scalelist #2,201

KALIfrom his mouth, sharp, jagged balloon
Is the little one drowning? Should we care?
SMURJANcalm
Yes.
KALI
Yes he's drowning, or yes we care?
SMURJANstepping out onto the water
Yes.
PAGE 4
P9UNDERWATER.

Drekk reaches the wreck. The Kettle's dented brass bell lies half-buried in silt at what was her bow, still on its iron bracket. He grabs it with both hands and pulls. It doesn't move. Bubbles stream from his mouth.

P10CLOSE, Drekk's face

lungs burning, eyes furious. He plants both bare feet against the Kettle's blackened hull, the way you brace against an old friend, and heaves.

krrnk
P11SILT EXPLODES.

The bracket tears free. Drekk kicks for the surface with the bell clutched to his chest, and the bell drags at him like it wants to stay where it sank.

PAGE 5
P12THE SURFACE, eye level.

Smurjan walks out across the fjord as if it were a floor, a perfect ring spreading under every step, and stops above the spot. He kneels on the water and reaches one grey hand down into it.

P13ACTION.

Drekk bursts up through the surface, gasping, the bell in his arms, right in front of that offered hand.

HHHAAAHH
P14TWO-SHOT, held.

Drekk and Smurjan face to face, a hand's width of freezing water between them. Smurjan's hand stays out. Drekk looks at it.

P15MID.

Drekk turns away and swims for the shore one-armed, the bell pulling him under every second stroke.

PAGE 6
P16ACTION.

Vigolas wades into the fjord up to his chest, swearing at the cold, grabs Drekk by the collar and hauls him up onto the rocks.

VIGOLASteeth chattering
Somebody has to steer. You said that. Day one. You don't get to drown.
P17MID.

Drekk on the rocks, blue-lipped, shaking. Kompis throws his own hoodie over him, the one older than empires. Mingus lies down across Drekk's legs like a warm golden blanket. Drekk hugs the bell to his chest.

DREKK
She's coming with us.
VIGOLAS
…Yeah. She is.
P18WIDE, out on the water.

Smurjan still kneels on the fjord, alone, his hand held out over nothing. He lowers it.

KALIfrom his mouth
Rude.
SMURJAN
Earned.
PAGE 7
P19WIDE, sunrise, a troll steading in the snow.

Turf roofs, chimney smoke, enormous moss-backed Brygdar trolls. Two of them drag forward a sledge the size of a fishing boat, hitched to two shaggy mountain goats as big as carthorses. GRANDMOTHER ULLA, in her shawl of woven roots, leans on her staff beside it.

ULLA
The Order built its capital on top of our oldest road. Most of them have forgotten it is there.
ULLA
Brygdar lends you a sledge. And a road.
P20TWO-SHOT, Ulla and Vigolas.
VIGOLAS
Two things in Glasheim. Bark for a ship…
ROUGEINAon the sledge rail, not looking up from her blade
And Baldr.
SMURJAN
And whoever split us.
VIGOLAS
…Three things. It's a big city.
P21CLOSE, the sledge.

Trollmage is already lying on top of the cargo with the crow on his chest. He props up a hand-painted sign:

WAITING. DAY 1. DO NOT DISTURB.

VIGOLAS
We haven't left yet.
TROLLMAGE
I have.
PAGE 8
P22MONTAGE, one tier, the climb.

(a) The sledge on a switchback road up the Marhold Spine, the goats leaning into the snow.

(b) A troll-cut tunnel through the mountain, lined with giant carved troll faces, their stone eyes closed.

(c) Rougeina walking barefoot along the snowy ridge above the road. When she sits down, the panther lies across her feet.

DREKK
Doesn't she get cold?
ROUGEINA
No.
P23MID.

Smurjan walks behind the sledge. He holds out a grey palm and watches flakes land on it, frowning, like a man trying to remember the name of an old friend.

SMURJAN
What is this called again. The cold… white… that falls.
P24CLOSE, Drekk

driving the sledge, not turning around.

DREKK
Snow.
SMURJAN
Snow. Thank you.

Drekk's face: furious with himself for answering.

PAGES 9–10 — SPLASH (double page)
P25SPLASH.

The sledge crests the cloud line. Below lies an endless white sea of cloud. Above it, rising from the peak of the Marhold Spine: GLASHEIM. Hundreds of white towers, slender as needles, linked by bridges; a colossal Scalelist board blazing with millions of names at its heart; one tower taller than the rest, a long gallery near its summit glowing from inside like a lantern full of fireflies. And above the whole city, faint and upside down, like a reflection in still water, floats a city of glass: the Archive.

The crew on the sledge are tiny silhouettes against all of it.

Glasheim: the capital of the Order, where eleven Architects decide what every soul in the world is worth.
VIGOLASvery small balloon
…Okay. That's expensive.
PAGE 11
P26WIDE, where the troll road meets the Order's road.

A white checkpoint arch spans the pass, closed by a massive gate of iron bars woven with light. Wanted posters are nailed to it: ∞−1 · KOMPIS #9,880 · TARGET · ROUGEINA #777 · and a silhouette with three shadows: THE TRINITY · UNCOUNT ON SIGHT. A squad of Sentinels blocks the road. At their head stands a broad officer whose crimson sin-mark has crawled up one side of his face.

RANK PLATE ×8: SENTINEL · K-II MARKED · Scalelist #211,904

CHECKPOINT CAPTAIN · K-III TESTED · Scalelist #11,207

CAPTAIN
Unregistered sledge. Halt, unload and kneel for— (he looks at the posters, then at the sledge) …oh. It's all of them.
P27MID.

Vigolas stands up on the cargo, cracking his knuckles. Smurjan steps past him and stands between the sledge and the spears.

SMURJAN
Let us.
VIGOLAS
Us?
SMURJAN
The crew. · That's what you called it.
PAGE 12
P28ACTION.

Smurjan says one word: "Kali." The shadow to his left stands up off the snow and becomes a woman: ash-grey skin, red markings, a long wild red braid, a sickle-sword of black glass in each hand.

KALI · aspect of the Trinity · (counted with Smurjan)

KALI
Finally. Two days of walking and not one stab. Do you know what two days of walking is like inside him? He hums. He doesn't know he hums.
P29ACTION, three beats in one tier.

(a) Eight spears of light thrust at once. Kali cuts four of them in half in mid-air.

KALI
Four! Did anyone count? Nobody ever counts.

(b) Rougeina blinks, Swapping places with a Sentinel's thrown spear, and lands behind the line, leaving a faint silver-rose afterimage of herself hanging in the air where she stood. The Sentinel ends up face-first in a snowdrift on the ridge, holding his own spear.

(c) Kompis fires twice from the sledge. Ivar's ghost grumbles on the barrel. Two chains of light snap.

IVAR
Cold hands, boy. Cold shots.
P30POV, Vigolas, Greed-sight.

The world goes grey, and the collar seam on every Sentinel burns gold: the most expensive part of each of them.

VIGOLAS
Smurjan! Collars! The gold bits!
SMURJAN
I know where.
PAGE 13
P31ACTION, a full-width strip of six small panels, one Sentinel each.

Smurjan walks through the squad without hurrying. Two fingers, one tap, exactly on each gold seam. Each collar cracks. Each Sentinel folds. There isn't a single wasted movement.

tk. tk. tk. tk. tk. tk.
KALIperched on the arch, swinging her legs
See, this is him. No flourish. No speech. I do the speeches.
P32CLOSE, Vigolas

impressed and a little jealous.

VIGOLAS
…I see the gold, he hits the gold. That's a nice trick.
KALIleaping past
That's Wrath, pirate. It doesn't miss.
P33MID.

The Checkpoint Captain backs through the arch and slams the great gate shut. Bars of iron and light drop into sockets in the rock. Spears of light bristle from the wall above.

CAPTAIN
That gate has held for three hundred years. Try it!
PAGE 14
P34CLOSE, Smurjan

looking up at the gate without expression.

SMURJAN
Bakasura.
P35FULL-WIDTH, low angle.

The snow under Smurjan's second shadow bulges and splits. BAKASURA rises: black hide, an amber glow deep in the throat, and mostly mouth, a maw as wide as the gate itself, small mournful eyes high above it.

BAKASURA · aspect of the Trinity · (counted with Smurjan)

P36IMPACT.

The maw closes over the gate: iron, light, hinges and a good stretch of the arch.

KRRRRUNNNCH
PAGE 15
P37WIDE.

Where the gate was, there's a neat, gate-shaped bite out of the mountain. The Captain stands in the gap holding one bent hinge-pin. His Sentinels are already running down the far road.

CAPTAIN
…Three hundred years.
P38CLOSE, Bakasura

chewing slowly.

BAKASURA
…Metallic.
BAKASURA
…I'm still hungry.
P39MID.

The Captain turns and runs. Vigolas pats the side of Bakasura's enormous jaw, very carefully.

VIGOLAS
Good… boy? Girl? …Mouth?
BAKASURA
…Mouth is fine.

Kali laughs and steps back into Smurjan's shadow. Bakasura sinks into the snow after her.

PAGE 16 — THE HOOK
P40WIDE.

Through the bitten gap, the sledge rolls on into a dark troll tunnel that climbs inside the mountain toward the city. Drekk drives, with the bell lashed to the front of the sledge. Everyone is talking at once. Except Kompis.

P41MID, inside the tunnel.

The old troll stonework gives way to newer white Trisdel brick. A painted sign on the wall: UNDERWAY 9. Kompis has stopped walking. Mingus has stopped beside him and is looking up at him.

P42CLOSE, Kompis's hand on the wall.

At the height of a small child's shoulder, scratched into the brick long ago: a little stick-figure boy and a little stick-figure dog.

P43FINAL PANEL, close on Kompis's face

lit by the sledge lantern behind him.

KOMPISvery quietly
I know this city.
KOMPIS
I grew up in it.
END OF CHAPTER 17

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.