SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga I · The Satchel · Arc 3 · Baldr

Chapter 18

The Protocol Hall
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, the underways of Glasheim.

Ancient troll tunnels wide enough for giants, with white Trisdel brick and brass pipes bolted over the old stone like bandages. Steam. Dripping. The sledge and the goats are hidden in a dry cistern behind them, and the crew goes on foot. Kompis leads without a lantern.

DREKK
You haven't looked at a map once.
KOMPIS
I used to run these. Barefoot.
ROUGEINAbarefoot, right behind him
Amateur.
P2MID.

Trollmage rides piggyback on Smurjan, asleep, his crow perched on Smurjan's braid. Drekk glares at the arrangement.

TROLLMAGEmumbling, eyes closed
He's very comfortable. Like a warm wall.
SMURJAN
…Thank you?
PAGE 2
P3WIDE.

An iron door in the tunnel wall, three times a man's height, with a much smaller door cut into it at the height of a child. Brass letters above it, green with age: THE NURSERY.

KOMPIS
Here.
VIGOLAS
Nursery. For what?
KOMPIS
For us.
P4CLOSE, Kompis's hand pushing the small door.

It isn't locked. It never was.

PAGE 3
P5FLASHBACK, soft grey wash, rain-textured, years ago. A gate in the underways.

A small boy of about eight stands in the rain in clothes too thin for it, clutching a cloth-wrapped bundle to his chest. Beside him sits a golden dog with a soft coat and kind brown eyes. It is exactly the dog at Kompis's feet today, not a day younger.

P6MID.

A tall woman in a grey coat with a high collar bends down to him. She is in her thirties, hair pulled into a tight bun, a long pointer-stick under one arm, faint rose-coloured script on the backs of her hands.

WOMAN IN GREY
What's your name?

(The boy says nothing.)

WOMAN IN GREY
It doesn't matter. You'll get a better one here.
P7CLOSE, her hands

taking the cloth bundle out of his, gently and firmly. The small hilt of a knife shows through the cloth. The boy's fingers stay curled around the empty air where it was.

WOMAN IN GREY
Agents don't keep keepsakes.
PAGE 4
P8MID.

A clerk with a clipboard points at the dog.

CLERK
Strays don't come in, Mother.
WOMAN IN GREYlooking at the dog, then at the boy, measuring
Let it. People trust a boy with a dog.
P9WIDE, a schoolroom.

Rows of small desks, forty children in grey, all of them silent. At the front, a chalkboard, and across it in neat capitals:

A GOOD TOOL DOES NOT ASK WHOSE HAND HOLDS IT.

The woman taps the board with her pointer.

WOMAN IN GREY
Read the room. Who's lonely? Who's afraid? That's the handle. You hold people by the handle.
P10CLOSE, the boy at his desk

the golden dog lying under it. He raises his hand.

BOY
What if they're nice?
WOMAN IN GREY
Then they're easier.

The other children laugh. The boy doesn't.

PAGE 5
P11FLASHBACK, MID.

The woman in grey at a high window with the children lined up behind her, all looking across a gulf of air at a long gallery that glows from inside.

WOMAN IN GREY
One day, each of you will be a light in there. And Architect Three will touch you every morning.
P12PRESENT, the same schoolroom.

Dust on everything. The small desks are still in their rows. The chalk words are still faintly on the board. Kompis runs a finger along one desk, where a little dog is scratched into the wood.

VIGOLASreading the board
"A good tool does not ask whose hand holds it."
VIGOLAS
Bad school.
KOMPIS
Best in the world.
P13TWO-SHOT, Rougeina and Kompis by the window.

She's watching Mingus.

ROUGEINA
Your dog was there.
KOMPIS
My dog's always there.
VIGOLASfrom across the room
Wait. How old is that dog?
KOMPIS
Don't.
PAGE 6
P14MID.

Kompis opens a narrow door behind the teacher's desk: a dark stair going up, and at the top of it light. A lot of light.

KOMPIS
Keep low. And don't touch anything. I mean it, Vigolas.
VIGOLAS
Why does everybody always say my name at the end?
PAGES 7–8 — SPLASH (double page)
P15SPLASH.

The Protocol Hall, seen from a high gallery rail. A hall as long as a street and as tall as a cathedral, and every surface from floor to vaulted ceiling is a honeycomb of glowing glass slates, a million of them, each the size of a book, each carrying a name and a single line of writing, all humming softly like a field of crickets on a summer night. Far below, at the very centre of the floor, stands one white lectern. The crew are small dark shapes on the rail, their faces lit from below.

The Protocol Hall. Every agent of the Order is a slate in this room, and every slate is a leash.
VIGOLASwhisper
…I want all of them.
KOMPISwhisper
You can't fence a slate.
VIGOLASwhisper
Watch me.
PAGE 9
P16INSERT, three slates up close, glowing.

INGA ÅSK · K-I · FISHWIFE, GATE CITY · LISTEN AT THE HARBOUR · ACTIVE

BJORN HALLE · K-II · BAKER, HAY STAIR · WATCH THE NEIGHBOURS · ACTIVE

PIM · K-I · AGE NINE · TRAIN · ACTIVE

P17CLOSE, Rougeina

touching a slate that is dark: no name, no light, one blank pane in the honeycomb.

ROUGEINAbarely audible
…Torvik.
DREKK
Who?
ROUGEINA
Nobody.
P18MID.

Kompis walks along the rail reading names, faster and faster, the way you look for your own name on a list. He stops.

PAGE 10
P19INSERT, the slate.

It glows a steady, angry red:

KOMPIS · K-II · ASSET (LAPSED) · STATUS: RECALL — TERMINATE IF RESISTING

P20CLOSE, Kompis.

His face doesn't move. His hand rises toward the slate on its own.

VIGOLAS
Can we smash it?
KOMPIS
It'd tell him exactly where we are.
P21CLOSE, his fingertips touching the glass.

The writing changes.

STATUS
RECALL — AGENT PRESENT
PAGE 11
P22WIDE.

Every one of the million slates in the hall turns red at once, a wave of red rolling out from his slate to the far end of the gallery like a field of poppies opening.

BWAAAAAANNNNG (a struck glass bell, everywhere at once)
P23CLOSE, Kompis

snatching his hand back.

KOMPIS
…Okay. I touched something.
VIGOLAS
YOU SAID DON'T TOUCH ANYTHING!
P24MID.

Doors open along the hall floor below. Figures in grey pour out, silent and fast, every face hidden behind a smooth grey mask with no features at all.

RANK PLATE ×12: GREY MASK · K-II MARKED · Scalelist #64,000–#139,000

KOMPIS
Grey Masks. Baldr's own. · They went to my school.
PAGES 12–13 — THE RUNNING FIGHT
P25ACTION, wide.

The crew runs down a spiral stair into the agent archives: endless aisles of wooden drawers, every drawer a life, card-files and dossiers spilling out behind them as they run. The Grey Masks come over the tops of the shelves like water.

P26ACTION.

A Grey Mask feints left and strikes right with a wire-blade. Kompis is already blocking right.

KOMPIS
I know that feint. (he hits back) Somebody taught it to me in the room upstairs.
P27POV, Kompis, soul-sight.

Every Grey Mask has the same single thing running out of the back of the neck: one taut silver-grey thread, climbing up through the ceiling toward the hall. No other threads. No friends. No families. Only the leash.

KOMPISthinking
…They're all on leashes. Every one of them.
P28ACTION, a tier of fast beats.

Rougeina dances down an aisle, Swapping with falling drawers, silver-rose ghosts flickering between the shelves.

Smurjan, Trollmage still asleep on his back, drops three Masks with three precise taps.

KALIfrom his mouth
Let me out. Let me out. It's shelves, I'm excellent at shelves—
SMURJAN
No.

Vigolas uses a drawer as a shield, then as a hammer, then quietly pockets something out of it.

Drekk reads the aisles like a coastline: "LEFT! The archive turns left!"

P29CLOSE, Vigolas

tucking a little index card into his coat.

DREKK
Did you just steal a file?
VIGOLAS
It was alphabetised. I couldn't help myself.
PAGE 14
P30MID.

A dead end of drawers. More Masks closing from both ends. Kompis looks at their threads, then at the crew.

KOMPIS
They're tracking my slate. Not you. We split.
VIGOLAS
Kompis—
KOMPIS
I know these halls. Back to the cistern. Go.
P31ACTION.

Kompis fires one shot into a steam pipe, and a white burst fills the aisle. When it clears, the crew is running one way and Kompis and Mingus the other, and every Grey Mask is following Kompis.

PAGE 15
P32WIDE, a corridor at a full sprint.

Kompis and Mingus run through the steam with Masks behind them. He takes every turn without looking. He shoulders open a panel that looks like plain wall, and the two of them tumble through it.

P33MID.

They are back in the schoolroom. Kompis pushes the panel shut. Outside, the Masks run past. Silence. Chalk dust hangs in the lamplight.

KOMPISpanting, sliding down the wall, to Mingus
…Still works. Nobody ever found that door but me.
PAGE 16 — THE HOOK
P34CLOSE, Mingus

ears up, staring at the front of the room.

P35WIDE, the front of the schoolroom.

Someone is sitting at the teacher's desk: a woman in grey, older now, iron-grey hair pinned in a tight bun, a long pointer-stick across her knees. Rose-coloured script crawls up both her forearms and spreads past the wrists like ivy.

MOTHER SELA · K-III TESTED · Scalelist #5,503

P36FINAL PANEL, close on her face

warm and terrible.

MOTHER SELA
Hello, little one.
MOTHER SELA
Nobody ever found that door but you. That's why I waited here.
END OF CHAPTER 18

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.