SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga IV · The Twelfth Chair · Arc 6 · The Tideline

Chapter 202

Wet Ground
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, dawn at the Tideline.

The crew on a patch of wet grey ground at the white's edge, where Drämmen climbed out last night: a dozen puddles spreading round his feet on the blank, each one a small island of real, ordinary, counted water. Bakasura asleep across three of them, the white streak through his jaws. The Marka anchored in the black fjord behind, as close as Drekk dares.

P2CLOSE, Drämmen

standing up to his shins in the white, still, water dripping off him in a steady patter. He hasn't slept. He doesn't.

DRÄMMEN
…They'll come at dawn. · Grey ones. · Stand in the wet.
PAGE 2
P3CLOSE, Kompis

crouching at a puddle, eyes gold. In the puddle, for the first time since they reached the Tideline, threads: faint, flickering, but there, running from the water up into the soles of the crew's boots.

KOMPIS
…The puddles have threads. · They're counted.
DRÄMMEN
Wet's counted. · Long as it's wet.
P4CLOSE, Vigolas

stamping happily in a puddle like a child.

VIGOLAS
So we fight standing in puddles.
DRÄMMEN
…Yes.
VIGOLAS
Best plan I've ever heard.
PAGE 3
P5WIDE.

Out of the white, at dawn, wading in silent ranks: the Unwritten. Fifty of them, robed in grey, faces blank and soft. Behind them, far back, a small hooded figure with a shadow standing a second late: Ysel, watching.

P6CLOSE, Drekk

standing on the Marka's bowsprit, staring past all of them at her. He doesn't move to go back aboard. He grips the bell-rope of the Kettle's bell so hard his knuckles go white.

PAGES 4–5 — THE CLASH
P7ACTION, a run of fast panels.

Puddle to puddle.

An Unwritten lays a grey hand on Smurjan's shoulder as he stands in a puddle, and nothing happens. His plate holds. Kali, in his shadow, still knows him.

SMURJANgrinning
…Wet.

Rougeina, mid-Swap, lands outside the puddles on the blank white, and a grey touch brushes her. Her plate gutters. She swaps back into a puddle with a gull's feather and the plate steadies.

Kompis fires Bror into the white, and the warm gold shove doesn't push the Unwritten, it pushes the water, splashing new puddles across the blank. New counted ground.

KOMPIS
Make it rain, Lillebror!
BROR
Okay!
P8ACTION.

Vigolas, Greed-sight on, punching only the emerald lights (a ring, a locket, a folded letter), and each blow landing on someone, real for a second, staggering back into the white.

PAGE 6
P9CLOSE, Drämmen

wading into the Unwritten line, slow, huge, ignoring their grey hands on him. Their touch does nothing: he's not on any board, not on any map. There's no plate to put out.

UNWRITTENa faint voice from a blank face
…He has no number.
DRÄMMEN
…Never did.
P10ACTION.

Drämmen grabs two Unwritten by the collar and drags them, the Undertow in reverse, up out of the white onto the wet ground, where for a moment their faces flicker into features, and they scream at being counted again.

PAGE 7
P11ACTION.

Six Unwritten seize Drämmen at once and pull him down into the white, deep, deeper, his drowned bulk going dotted, then sketch, then gone. No splash. (Empty SFX box.)

P12CLOSE, Öde

at the puddle's edge, screaming at the place where he went under.

ÖDE
DRÄMMEN!
PAGE 8
P13CLOSE, the white.

Nothing. Then, after a long beat, deep down, a faint sea-green light. And a heartbeat SFX starting from nothing, counting up:

…ba. …ba-dum. ba-dum.
P14ACTION.

Drämmen climbs back up out of the Tideline onto the wet ground: SINK AND RISE. He's bigger and wetter than before, water gushing from his mouth, more barnacles, his outline a little softer, one more strand of his face sagged loose. Six grey robes floating empty in the white behind him.

DRÄMMEN
…More water. · Less me. · Always.
PAGE 9
P15CLOSE, Isa

watching him from a puddle, very quietly, a beat late.

ISA
…He can't die. · That's worse.
P16WIDE.

The Unwritten falling back into the white, clutching rings and lockets. The crew standing in a cluster of puddles, breathing hard. Ysel, far off, turning away into the grey, her shadow following a second later.

PAGE 10
P17CLOSE, Drämmen

turning, wading back into the white, alone, deliberately, his outline going dotted.

VIGOLAS
Where are you going?
DRÄMMENnot turning
…Something's half. · Out there. · I hear it.
P18WIDE, a time-skip strip, three panels.

The crew in their puddles, waiting. Morning. Noon. Afternoon. Öde not taking her eyes off the white.

PAGES 11–12 — SPLASH
P19SPLASH (double page). DRAG-BACK.

Out of the blank white, wading, Drämmen comes back, and hauled behind him on a rope of old net is half a village: four small fishermen's houses, a jetty, a boat on its side, half a church tower, all of it grey and soft-edged and dotted, filling in with colour one beat at a time as his heart counts up. And standing among the half-houses, grey, faint, bewildered: a dozen people, half-drawn, a woman with a basket, an old man with a pipe, two children holding hands.

Drämmen drags it all up onto the wet ground, water pouring from him, his barnacled knot glowing sea-green with every beat.

PAGE 13
P20CLOSE, Drämmen

collapsing to his knees on the wet ground, exhausted, the rope falling from his hand.

DRÄMMEN
…Half. · Can't hold half for long. · It'll slip back. · Unless…
P21CLOSE, the half-village

already slipping: the colour that came in starting to drain out again at the edges, the children's outlines going dotted again.

PAGE 14
P22CLOSE, Öde

splashing out of her puddle to the nearest half-person, the old man with the pipe, and taking his grey, faint hands in hers.

ÖDE
What's your name?
OLD MANfaint, confused
…Ebbe. · Ebbe Strand. · I mend nets.
ÖDE
Ebbe Strand. Mends nets. (She's already writing it on her arm in place-ink.) Next.
P23MONTAGE, small panels down the page.

Öde going from half-person to half-person, asking, listening, writing. "Maja. Bakes on Thursdays." "Nils and Tora. Twins. Seven." "The village? …Ekeskär. We had a red boathouse." And with every name she writes, that person's outline stops slipping, colour holding.

PAGE 15
P24CLOSE, Öde's forearm

a new line in the darker place-ink under SNÖBERGA: EKESKÄR · red boathouse and twelve small names beside it.

P25WIDE.

The half-village, holding: four houses, a jetty, half a church tower, solid and grey-blue in the dawn light, a dozen people standing in it, blinking, counted, real. Not whole. Not quite. But here.

DRÄMMENstaring at Öde from his knees, water dripping
…You held it.
ÖDE
You brought it. · I just listened.
PAGE 16
P26CLOSE, Drämmen

looking down at his own closed fist, barnacled, never opened.

DRÄMMENslowly
…Could you… · …hold what's in here? · If I knew what it was?
ÖDEgently
…If you ever tell me. · I'll listen.
P27CLOSE, Drekk

on the Marka's bowsprit, who has watched all of it. He looks from Öde to the place where Ysel vanished into the grey. Something in his weathered face decides.

PAGE 17 — THE HOOK
P28A SOUND.

Iron. Chains. A great grinding of stone. On the cliff behind them, the Bastion's huge sea-gate opening for the first time since the siege began.

P29FINAL PANEL, wide.

Out through the open gate, onto the last of the stone jetty, walks a giant of an old man: broad as a door, grey-bearded, scarred over scars, armour under a grey robe, a war-axe on his back and on his arm a tower-shield taller than a man. Across his face, a scar that has never closed. He looks down at the pirate in the puddle.

OLD GIANT
…Pirate. · Get behind my wall.
END OF CHAPTER 202

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.