SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga I · The Satchel · Arc 3 · Baldr

Chapter 22

Edda
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P1WIDE, night, snow falling over Glasheim.

The covered bridge between the glowing tower and the warm house on its terrace. On the bridge's snowy roof crouches a barefoot woman with crimson hair, a black panther beside her.

P2CLOSE, an icicle

hanging from the house's eaves, glittering in the light of a window.

P3SAME FRAME, next beat.

The icicle is on the bridge roof now. Rougeina is gone. Under the eaves, a silver-rose ghost of her fades. Already there.

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P4INTERIOR, the rafters of a warm study, Rougeina's POV looking down.

A good fire in the fireplace. Shelves of books. A broad desk covered in neat stacks of decrees, and on it a glass jar holding a hundred identical silver pens.

P5WIDE, the far wall.

It is covered floor to ceiling in birthday cards, hundreds of them, pinned in perfect rows by year, every one signed in the same neat silver hand.

ROUGEINAthinking
…He keeps a copy.
P6MID.

Through an open door off the study, a child's bedroom: a small lamp shaped like a moon, a bed with a patchwork quilt. A little girl with a gap in her teeth sits up under the quilt, clutching a knitted toy wolf: EDDA, seven for one more night.

Beside the bed, in an armchair, sits a white-haired man in a woollen cardigan, reading glasses on his nose, a picture book open on his knee: BALDR.

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P7MID.

Rougeina moves through the rafters, silent as dust, to the beam above the bedroom door. The panther follows along another beam.

P8MID, below.

Baldr reads aloud, doing the voices.

BALDR
"…And the great wolf opened his jaws, as wide as the whole sky, and there was the sun right in front of him, warm and gold and ready to be swallowed…"
EDDA
And he ate it.
BALDR
He did not.
P9TWO-SHOT, Edda and Baldr.
EDDA
Why not?
BALDR
Because somebody he loved was standing in it.
EDDA
That's silly.
BALDR
It's the oldest story in the north, little one. It's allowed to be silly.
PAGE 4
P10CLOSE, Edda

bouncing under the quilt.

EDDA
Tomorrow I'm eight.
BALDR
Tomorrow you're eight.
P11INSERT.

He takes a card from his cardigan pocket and signs it, resting it on the picture book, with an ornate silver pen. The pen. "To little Edda, eight years old! — Grandpa." He blows on the ink.

P12MID.
EDDA
You have to sign two.
BALDR
I always sign two. One for you, and one for my wall.
EDDA
Why?
BALDRsigning the second, smiling
Because I file everything, little one. Even you.

He tucks both cards into his cardigan pocket and pats it.

BALDR
Yours comes with breakfast.
PAGES 5–6 — SPLASH (double page)
P13SPLASH. The shot.

From the beam above the door, Rougeina leans out over empty air, one blade drawn and angled down. The line from its point to the back of Baldr's neck is perfect: short and clean. The blade's mirror-bright face reflects the whole room below: an old man in a cardigan leaning down to kiss a little girl's forehead, the moon-lamp, the knitted wolf, the card on the quilt. Above it hangs Rougeina's face in shadow, her crimson hair falling, the panther's yellow eyes beside her. No sound at all.

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P14CLOSE, Rougeina's hand on the hilt.

Steady.

P15CLOSE, Edda's small hand

holding a fistful of her grandfather's cardigan sleeve. She is already half asleep.

P16CLOSE, Rougeina's eyes.

Something in them closes.

ROUGEINAbarely a breath
…Not in front of her.
P17MID.

She slides the blade back into its sheath. Below, Baldr stays in his chair by the bed, humming the wolf's tune, until the child's breathing slows.

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P18WIDE, outside, under the eaves.

A man in soft grey livery makes his rounds in the snow with a lantern. He stops. On the snow below the eaves, a faint silver-rose ghost of a crouching woman is still fading.

P19CLOSE, his hand

closing on a small glowing thread in his palm: a silent alarm. No bells. There are no bells in this house.

P20MID, a minute later.

Rougeina drops from the rafters into the corridor beyond the study, and the corridor is full of people in soft grey livery: four household wardens, and an old man in white gloves holding a thin cane-sword and a padded mallet.

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PAGE 9
P21CLOSE, the Steward

one finger to his lips.

STEWARDwhisper
Quietly, miss. The child is sleeping.
ROUGEINAwhisper
I know.
P22ACTION.

The wardens drive anchor-stakes into the floorboards with padded mallets. No tang, only a soft tmp, tmp, tmp. The air in the corridor stiffens, and shimmering frost-lines spread across the walls.

tmp. tmp. tmp.
P23CLOSE, Rougeina's eyes

flicking to a window as she tries to Swap. A silver-rose spark. It fizzles.

ROUGEINAwhisper
…Of course he knows about the stakes.
PAGES 10–11 — THE WHISPER FIGHT
P24ACTION, wide.

Rougeina fights with plain steel in a corridor where nothing can be traded: a dance on bare feet across a polished floor, a spin, a heel-turn, two blades. The panther pins a warden silently to the carpet. Nobody shouts. Every blow lands soft.

P25ACTION.

The Steward is good. Very good. His cane-sword is a thread of silver, precise and polite.

STEWARDwhisper
Forty years in this house, miss. Nobody has ever woken her.
ROUGEINAwhisper
I'm not here for her.
P26IMPACT.

The cane-sword finds her: a line across her side, under the ribs. A tear in her tunic and a dark stain spreading, nothing more. She doesn't make a sound.

P27ACTION.

Teeth gritted, she drives a blade into the floor beside one stake and levers it out of the boards. Where it stood, the frozen air thaws for one hand's width. It's enough. She looks through the window at the snow on the roof outside.

Blink.

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P28MID, the corridor.

Where she stood, a scoop of roof snow drops onto the polished floor with a soft fwump. The Steward looks at it, then at the window. Outside, silver-rose ghosts are fading across the roof.

STEWARD
…The trail's warm, sir.
P29INTERIOR, the study.

Baldr stands at the window in his cardigan, looking at the silver-rose ghosts on the roofs. He doesn't look angry. He looks tired.

BALDR
Pride and Envy. So she has come for me at last.
STEWARD
Shall we follow the trail, sir?
P30CLOSE, Baldr

glancing back at the half-open door where his granddaughter sleeps.

BALDR
Cancel the party.
BALDR
Find out where the trail ends. I'll go myself.
PAGE 13
P31WIDE, night, the roofs of Glasheim.

Rougeina runs across the snow clutching her side, Swapping from chimney to chimney, the panther leaping beside her. Behind her, across the whole city, a long line of silver-rose ghosts hangs in the air and fades slowly. Every Swap is a footprint.

P32CLOSE, her face

white with pain, jaw set.

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P33INTERIOR, the workshop, the skylight.

Rougeina drops through it onto a rack of blank glass tiles, which ring softly. Kompis is on watch, and he's beside her before she lands. Mingus sniffs at her side and whines.

KOMPISwhisper
You're hit.
ROUGEINA
I noticed.
P34MID.

Kompis cuts the tunic away from the wound with steady, trained hands and binds it. Everyone else sleeps. Vigolas mutters something about coins.

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P35TWO-SHOT, the two of them sitting against the glass-press.

She tells him. Not Vigolas.

ROUGEINA
I had him. Right under my blade. One cut.
KOMPIS
And?
ROUGEINA
He was reading her a story. About a wolf that wouldn't eat the sun.
P36CLOSE, Rougeina

looking at her own hands.

ROUGEINA
He's a good grandfather.
PAGE 16 — THE HOOK
P37CLOSE, Kompis

looking at nothing: at a schoolroom years away.

KOMPIS
So was my handler.
KOMPIS
To some kids.
P38FINAL PANEL, wide, the skylight above them.

Out across the snowy roofs, her silver-rose ghosts are still fading one after another: a dotted line drawn across the whole city, ending at this roof.

END OF CHAPTER 22

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.