SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga I · The Satchel · Arc 3 · Baldr

Chapter 23

Engagement
PAGE 1
P1INTERIOR, dusk, Baldr's house.

A room hung with paper streamers, a cake with eight unlit candles, a long table being quietly cleared by servants. Edda stands at the window in a party dress, her forehead against the glass, watching the snow.

P2MID.

Baldr kneels beside her in his cardigan and winds a knitted scarf around his own neck.

BALDR
Not today, little one. Soon. I promise. Grandpa has to go and see some people first.
EDDA
The bad people?
BALDR
The lost people.
PAGE 2
P3WIDE, night, a snowy street of the lower terraces.

A white-haired old man in a cardigan and scarf walks alone, a small lantern in his hand. No guards. On the rooftops above him, the last faint silver-rose ghosts, almost gone, point the way.

P4CLOSE, Baldr

looking up at the ghosts, humming the wolf's tune under his breath. Behind him, in a doorway, the House Steward wrings his white gloves.

STEWARD
Sir, at least take the wardens—
BALDR
I've never needed wardens. I have a pen.
PAGE 3
P5INTERIOR, the workshop.

The crew, settled in for the night. Vigolas counting shards on a blanket. Rougeina asleep, bandaged, a blade in her hand even in sleep. Smurjan meditating. Drekk trying to straighten his dented spyglass. Kompis cleaning Ivar. Trollmage flat on his back beside his sign: WAITING. DAY 3. DO NOT DISTURB.

P6CLOSE, the door.
knock knock.

Everyone freezes.

P7CLOSE, the door.
knock.
VIGOLASwhisper
…Nobody knocks.
PAGE 4
P8CLOSE, Drekk

opening a slit in the door, knife ready. A kind old face with snow on its eyebrows looks back at him.

BALDR
Good evening. I'm so sorry to call this late.

BALDR · K-V ARCHITECT · Architect Three, Keeper of the Engagement Protocol

P9MID.

Baldr steps inside and closes the door behind him against the cold, stamping snow off his slippers. On the back of his right hand, a small square seal of white light glows faintly: his Signet.

P10CLOSE, Kompis

gone white. He's on his feet before he knows it.

KOMPIS
…Sir.
BALDR
Hello, son. You've grown a beard. It suits you.
PAGE 5
P11MID.

Vigolas steps between them, grinning with all his teeth.

VIGOLAS
You're the one who wants me engaged.
BALDR
And you're the one in the coat. May I?

He sits down on a crate as if it were his own armchair and takes out a small pad of paper and an ornate silver pen.

P12CLOSE, Baldr

polite and apologetic.

BALDR
Today is my granddaughter's eighth birthday. I cancelled her party, because a young woman with eight knives was in her rafters last night.

(He nods at Rougeina, asleep in her blankets.)

BALDR
I would like to give her the party back. So let's be quick.
PAGE 6
P13INSERT, the pen on the pad.

Neat silver handwriting:

Vigolas: deliver the satchel to me.

VIGOLAS
It's a coat.
BALDR
The paperwork calls it a satchel. I'm not rewriting the paperwork.
P14CLOSE, the signature.

A flourish of silver. As the last stroke lands, the Signet on the back of his hand flares.

shhhk
P15CLOSE, Vigolas's boots.

His right foot steps forward. Then his left. Toward Baldr. He didn't move them.

VIGOLAS
…Huh.
An Architect rewrites one law of the world inside his own office. Baldr's law is simple: whatever he signs, you do.
PAGE 7
P16ACTION.

Smurjan is already moving: Wrath, the one correct blow, two fingers driving for the pen-hand. Kali tears up out of his shadow; Bakasura's maw rises through the floorboards.

P17INSERT, Baldr writing without looking up:

Smurjan, all three of you: kneel. Signed.

P18ACTION, three beats in one tier.

(a) Smurjan's knees hit the floor mid-lunge, his fingers a hand's width from the pen.

(b) Kali, half out of the shadow, drops to her knees beside him, furious.

(c) Bakasura's colossal maw presses itself flat against the floorboards like a very large, very embarrassed rug.

KALI
WHAT— I don't kneel. I have never once knelt. I am kneeling. Why am I—
BAKASURA
…Kneeling. Apparently.
PAGE 8
P19ACTION.

Rougeina wakes at the noise and a blade flashes up from her bedroll, slow with the wound—

BALDRwriting
Rougeina: sleep.

—and she drops back into the blankets mid-draw, asleep, the blade sliding out of her fingers.

P20ACTION.

Kompis swings Ivar up at Baldr's chest.

BALDRwriting, gently
Kompis: sit.

Kompis sits down on the floor. Hard.

P21CLOSE, Ivar's ghost

popping out of the barrel, outraged.

IVAR
BOY. Why are we sitting?
KOMPIS
…I don't know.
PAGE 9
P22CLOSE, Kompis

sitting, his hand dropping onto Mingus's head.

KOMPIS
Subtick.

The golden pulse line wakes along the panel border.

P23GREY WORLD, a wide strip of afterimages.

Kompis lives the moment again and again. In one he lunges. In one he rolls. In one he fires. And in every one, before the movement even begins, his body sits back down. A thousand afterimages of Kompis, every one of them sitting on the floor.

KOMPISthinking
Ten thousand tries.
KOMPISthinking
I sit in every one.
P24COLOUR RETURNS.

Kompis, still sitting, blood running from his nose, shaking. He has paid for nothing.

PAGES 10–11 — SPLASH (double page)
P25SPLASH. ENGAGEMENT.

The workshop, lit by one lamp and the glitter of a thousand blank glass tiles. In the middle of it an old man in a cardigan sits on a crate with a little pad on his knee, writing. Around him, the most dangerous crew in the world is obeying: Smurjan, Kali and the great maw kneeling in a row; Rougeina asleep beside her fallen blade; Kompis sitting on the floor with his rifle in his lap and blood on his lip; Drekk frozen in the doorway with a slip floating beside him (Drekk: stand still.). A collar of silver light glows around each of their throats.

And Vigolas, walking toward Baldr: every muscle fighting, one foot frozen in mid-step, sweat pouring off him, teeth bared, green lightning sparking uselessly from his fingertips.

In the corner, ignored, Trollmage lies on his back with his eyes shut.

VIGOLAS
My legs… are… MINE…
PAGE 12
P26CLOSE, Vigolas

one step short of Baldr, frozen mid-stride, half his body leaning forward and half dragging back. His rank glitches above his head: ∞−1 · ∞−1 · ∞−

BALDRfascinated, like a scholar
Remarkable. The Ledger can't quite find you. Only half of you takes the order.
VIGOLAS
Half of me… is… very stubborn.
P27MID.

Baldr leans forward, slips two fingers into the lining of Vigolas's coat and, without searching, draws out one shard. He knows exactly which one.

BALDR
Then I'll take half a satchel.
P28INSERT, the shard in Baldr's hand:

the white room, the man splitting into three, and in the great mirror the silver figure. Baldr looks at the silver figure a moment longer than he needs to.

P29CLOSE, Smurjan, kneeling

all three voices in one roar.

SMURJAN / KALI / BAKASURA
THAT ONE IS OURS.
BALDRpocketing it
This one should never have been filed.
PAGE 13
P30MID.

Mingus stands up from beside Kompis. Baldr notices him. He writes The dog: sit. and signs.

P31INSERT, the slip.

The silver ink slides off the paper like water off oiled glass and drips onto the floorboards. The words won't stay.

P32CLOSE, Baldr

surprised for the first time.

BALDR
…No line. No line at all.
BALDR
What are you?
PAGE 14
P33ACTION.

Mingus walks up to him, calm and unhurried, and bites the pen-hand. Not savage. Firm. The way a good dog stops a hand that is hurting someone.

P34CLOSE, the silver pen

falling from Baldr's fingers, tumbling end over end toward the floor.

P35WIDE.

In the half-heartbeat that the pen is in the air, every silver collar on the crew flickers.

P36CLOSE, Trollmage in the corner.

One violet eye opens.

TROLLMAGE
Three days. I was saving it for seven.

He writes in the air: MACRO : UPDRAFT = 1 ROOF

PAGE 15
P37IMPACT, wide.

The workshop roof tears off into the night sky, beams, slates and all, sucked upward in a violet whirlwind. Snow and a thousand blank glass tiles spin up into the dark like a blizzard of mirrors. Everyone is knocked flat.

FWOOOOOOMMMMMM
P38MID, the whirling snow.

Baldr, thrown off his crate, picks his pen up off the floor with his good hand. Mingus has already trotted back to Kompis's side. On Baldr's other wrist are the neat marks of a dog's teeth. He looks at them almost fondly.

BALDR
Good dog.
PAGE 16
P39ACTION.

The collars steady again. The crew is still half-held. Baldr walks to the door, rewinds his scarf, and steps out into the snow. Vigolas lunges after him, then realises his legs are lunging for him: the mission is still running, and his legs want to deliver him.

VIGOLAS
HE'S GETTING AWAY— no— wait— my legs are following him—
P40ACTION.

Kompis and Smurjan tackle Vigolas into the snow now drifting through the roofless room before he can walk out the door after Baldr. His legs keep kicking toward the street like a dreaming dog's.

P41CLOSE, Baldr in the doorway

looking back, kind and sad.

BALDR
Don't fight his legs too hard. They know the way. They'll bring me the rest of it.

He's gone.

PAGE 17 — THE HOOK
P42WIDE, the roofless workshop, snow falling inside.

The heroes have lost. Smurjan pounds the floor with his fist.

SMURJAN
He took the day we were split.

Rougeina sits up, groggy, blade in hand.

ROUGEINA
…What did I miss?
DREKK
Everything.
P43MID.

Vigolas, pinned under Kompis and Smurjan, his legs still walking.

VIGOLAS
Somebody tie me to something heavy.

Drekk ties him to the great iron glass-press. In the corner, Trollmage, his runes dark and spent, props up his sign and crosses out the number: WAITING. DAY 0.

P44FINAL PANEL, the Protocol Hall at night

empty and humming. Among the million slates, a new one lights up:

VIGOLAS · ∞−1 · MISSION: DELIVER THE SATCHEL · STATUS: HALF-HELD

END OF CHAPTER 23

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.