SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga I · The Satchel · Arc 3 · Baldr

Chapter 24

A Million Slates
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, the board-cutters' workshop by daylight, four days later.

The roof is a patchwork of stretched canvas and stolen sailcloth, and snow sifts through the gaps. Trollmage's sign: WAITING. DAY 4. DO NOT DISTURB.

P2MID.

Vigolas, asleep, is tied to the great iron glass-press with enough rope to rig a ship. His legs are walking. Steadily. In his sleep. Toward the door. The press scrapes one finger's width across the floor with every step.

DREKK
He's dragged it a metre since we tied him.
P3CLOSE, Vigolas

waking up and looking down at his own feet with deep betrayal.

VIGOLAS
Traitors.
PAGE 2
P4MID.

Rougeina, bandage off, tests her side with a slow spin on one bare heel. It holds.

ROUGEINA
Healed.
KOMPIS
Mostly.
ROUGEINA
Healed.
P5MID.

Smurjan sits facing the wall, three shadows rigid. He has barely moved in four days.

KALIfrom his mouth
Let's just go. Storm the tower. Take back our shard. Eat whoever's in the way.
BAKASURA
…Yes. That one.
SMURJAN
He would sign us to our knees before we reached the stairs.
PAGES 3–4 — THE PLAN
P6WIDE, the workshop floor.

The crew kneels around a model built from blank glass tiles: a tall stack for the Protocol Tower with the Hall at its top, a ruler for the covered bridge, and, standing in for Baldr's house on its terrace, the melon-sized cube from the market, with twelve tiny Sentinels inside it.

DREKK
Tower. Hall at the top. Bridge. House.
VIGOLAS
You're using my cube as his house. Nice. Symbolic.
P7CLOSE, Kompis

tapping the top of the tile tower.

KOMPIS
Every mission he has ever signed lives in that Hall. That's how one man in a cardigan holds a million people at once.
KOMPIS
Break the Hall, and every leash goes slack.
P8CLOSE, Vigolas

looking down at his own twitching legs.

VIGOLAS
Including mine.
VIGOLAS
I'll fold it.
P9TWO-SHOT.
DREKK
It's a tower.
VIGOLAS
I folded a beach.
DREKK
It was a small beach!
P10FLASH PANEL, grey-washed:

Mother Sela on the schoolroom floor among the broken desks, her cracked hands in her lap. "If anybody ever wrote one with his own pen, he'd do it."

P11CLOSE, Kompis.
KOMPIS
And he has a price. He's signed so many orders he can't refuse one himself. Not if it's written with his own pen.
ROUGEINA
Then we take the pen.
SMURJAN
And our shard.
ROUGEINAquietly
And him.
P12MID, over the tile model.

Vigolas sorts the crew into two piles with both hands, like a card dealer.

VIGOLAS
Two halves. The pen: Kompis, Rougeina, Smurjan. The Hall: me, Drekk, and…

(He looks at Trollmage, flat on his back.)

VIGOLAS
…Why do I get the one who sleeps?
TROLLMAGEeyes shut
Because I'm the only one who's been working.
PAGE 5
P13NIGHT, on the canvas roof.

Vigolas and Kompis sit looking across the city at the glowing tower. Vigolas hums something: a slow sailor's tune.

KOMPIS
What's that?
VIGOLAS
My mother's song. She sang it on the dock every morning, braiding rope, before the boats went out.
P14CLOSE, Vigolas

smiling, reaching for her in his memory. The smile stops.

P15FLASH PANEL.

The dock at dawn. The strong hands braiding rope, the song drifting over them in small musical notes. The panel pans up to the blank where her face should be.

P16CLOSE, Vigolas.
VIGOLAS
…I can hear her.
VIGOLAS
I can't see her.
PAGE 6
P17TWO-SHOT.
KOMPIS
The market.
VIGOLASvery quiet
…I didn't even count. I just paid.
P18CLOSE, Kompis.
KOMPIS
You don't have to fold the Hall. We'll find another way. There's always—
VIGOLAS
I'll fold it.
P19CLOSE, Vigolas

looking at the tower. The grin comes back slowly, smaller and harder than it used to be.

VIGOLAS
Number one on the Scalelist. And then nobody gets ranked by anyone again.
VIGOLAS
That Hall is the ranking. A million people on one man's string. I'm not buying it back for a face.

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VIGOLAS
…She'd tell me to do it anyway. I'm pretty sure. I can hear her saying it.
PAGE 7
P20WIDE, night, the city, with two paths drawn across it like a map.

(left) The pen team crosses the snowy roofs toward the warm house: Rougeina Swapping icicle to icicle, Smurjan walking up a wall as if it were a floor, Kompis climbing a drainpipe with Mingus in a sling across his chest.

(right) The hall team climbs the outer stair of the Protocol Tower: Drekk with Trollmage on his back, Vigolas striding ahead, his legs delighted.

VIGOLAS
For once, my legs agree with me.
P21MID, the top of the outer stair.

A wide terrace in front of the great doors of the Protocol Hall, snow-covered, lantern-lit. And across it, a wall of shields.

PAGE 8
P22WIDE.

Twenty heavy guards in slate-blue plate stand shoulder to shoulder, their tower shields locked edge to edge into one wall, spears of light bristling over the top. Each shield bears the crest of a closed gate. At the centre stands a broad captain with a shield like a door.

RANK PLATE ×20: BASTION GUARD · K-II MARKED · Scalelist #70,000–#99,000

BASTION SHIELD-CAPTAIN · K-III TESTED · Scalelist #4,410

SHIELD-CAPTAIN
Registry Defence. Architect Ten lent us to the Protocol after your little visit to the Archive.
SHIELD-CAPTAIN
Nobody touches the slates.
P23CLOSE, Vigolas

cracking his neck.

VIGOLAS
Twenty of you and a door. Easy.
PAGE 9 — THE SHIELD WALL
P24ACTION.

Vigolas charges, and bounces off the shield wall like a gull off a cliff. The wall doesn't move.

DONNG
P25POV, Greed-sight.

The shields are cheap steel, but the hinges where each one locks to the next glow gold. The weak points. Too many of them, too high, too well guarded.

P26ACTION, a tier.

Drekk, Trollmage on his back, ducks a light-spear and bangs a guard's helmet with a frying pan from his pack.

DREKK
I brought it from the troll steading! I knew I'd need it!

Vigolas pries at a gold hinge and gets a shield-rim in the face.

The wall takes one step forward. Then another. It is pushing them toward the edge of the terrace and the long drop to the clouds.

P27CLOSE, Vigolas.

Green lightning sparks at his fingertips. He closes his fist on it.

VIGOLASthinking
Not here. Not on them. I need it for the Hall.
VIGOLAS
DREKK! WAKE HIM UP!
PAGE 10
P28CLOSE, Drekk

shaking the half-troll on his back.

DREKK
Hey. HEY.
P29CLOSE, Trollmage.

One violet eye opens.

TROLLMAGE
…Has it been four days?
DREKK
FOUR DAYS AND SIX HOURS!
TROLLMAGE
Oh. Then it's ready.
P30CLOSE, his hand rising

slow and unhurried. Violet runes light along his fingers one after another, like lamps being lit down a long street. He writes in the air:

MACRO : SNOWFALL = FOUR DAYS

PAGES 11–12 — SPLASH (double page)
P31SPLASH. Four days of snow, all at once.

The night sky above the terrace opens, and every flake that would have fallen on Glasheim over four whole days comes down in four seconds: a roaring white avalanche out of nowhere. It buries the Bastion's shield wall to the tops of the helmets, leaving twenty heads and one captain's plume sticking out of a fresh white slope. Across the whole city, every roof, tower and bridge turns white in a single breath. And riding the front of the surge up the last stairs toward the great doors, like riders on a breaking wave, come Vigolas, whooping, and Drekk, with a sleeping half-troll on his back.

FWWUUUMMMMPPFFF
PAGE 13
P32MID. The price.

Trollmage's runes go dark one after another. He falls asleep on the spot, face-first in the snow on Drekk's shoulder. Drekk staggers.

DREKK
You're heavier asleep.
VIGOLAS
Everyone's heavier asleep.
P33CLOSE, the Shield-Captain

buried to the chin, plume drooping.

SHIELD-CAPTAIN
…It's very cold.
VIGOLASpatting his helmet on the way past
It's four days of cold. Stay warm.
PAGE 14
P34CUT TO Baldr's study, the same moment.

The window unlatches from the inside: Rougeina, already there, eases it open. Smurjan steps in over the sill. Kompis climbs in after him and sets Mingus down out of the sling.

P35WIDE.

The study: the fire, the wall of birthday cards, the desk, the jar of a hundred identical silver pens. And through the half-open door to the next room, a soft voice singing: Baldr, at his granddaughter's bedside. One door away.

EDDAoff, sleepy
Is it tomorrow yet?
BALDRoff
Not yet. Sleep. Tomorrow's your party.
PAGE 15
P36CLOSE, the jar.

A hundred silver pens. Every one identical.

KOMPISwhisper
Which one?
ROUGEINAwhisper
They're all the same.
P37CLOSE, Smurjan.
SMURJANwhisper
Kali.

Kali rises silently out of his shadow, sickles sheathed, and holds out her hand to Kompis.

KALIwhisper
Lend me your eyes, spy.
P38CLOSE, Kali breathing in.

Her eyes flash gold. On Kompis's wrist, his gold sin-mark goes dark. He blinks. The world has gone flat for him: no threads, no ghosts in the guns, nothing.

KOMPISwhisper
…So that's what it's like for everybody else.
PAGE 16
P39POV, KALI, gold soul-sight.

Ninety-nine pens in the jar are only pens. One pen pours a million threads out of its nib, straight up through the ceiling toward the tower, like a waterfall running backwards. And one thin thread runs the other way: out of the study, through the half-open door, to the wrist of the man singing next door.

KALIwhisper
Found you.
P40ACTION, close and delicate.

Kali lifts the one pen out of the jar between finger and thumb. The jar rocks. One of the ninety-nine pens tips over with a tiny tink.

P41WIDE, silent.

Everyone freezes. Next door, the singing stops.

EDDAoff, half asleep
Grandpa, keep singing.

A pause. The singing starts again.

PAGE 17 — THE HOOK
P42CLOSE, Kali

placing the pen in Kompis's palm as her gold eyes fade and his threads come flooding back. He is holding a pen that holds a million people.

KALIwhisper
Your turn, spy.
P43CUT TO the Protocol Tower.

Vigolas, knee-deep in snow, puts both hands on the great doors of the Hall and pushes them open. Light pours out over him.

P44FINAL PANEL, low angle behind him.

A million glowing slates rise in front of him from floor to ceiling. He sweeps a bow like a man arriving at a party.

VIGOLAS
Hello, everyone.
END OF CHAPTER 24

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.