SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga IV · The Twelfth Chair · Arc 8 · Redactor

Chapter 224

The Ninth Line
PAGE 1
P1CLOSE, the grey pen

its tip touching the ninth line of the Ledger page. A thin stroke of grey beginning, like a crack spreading across ice.

P2CLOSE, Vigolas

gasping, a hand flying to his chest. Where his heart is, under the coat, something opening: a thin vertical line of grey light, like the edge of a door left ajar.

VIGOLAS
…Oh.
PAGE 2
P3CLOSE, Jorvand

writing slowly, carefully, an old man writing the last line of something long.

JORVAND
…∞−1, minus one more. · Minus nothing. · ∞. · No rank. No number. No edge. · A soul with no edge is a door with no frame, boy. · Anything can come through.
P4CLOSE, the line of grey

in Vigolas's chest widening: a doorway now, the width of a hand, and through it, the Null. Flat. Soft. Endless. Looking out.

PAGE 3
P5ACTION.

Rougeina going for Jorvand's left hand, the one with the grey pen, and her blades passing through the grey pen without touching it, as through smoke. Phase One. Nothing touches it.

ROUGEINA
Nothing— it's in his hand—
P6ACTION.

Kompis firing Bror at the pen, a gold shove that goes in and isn't.

BRORfrightened
It ate it! It ATE my push!
PAGE 4
P7CLOSE, Trollmage

on his knees, the Gluttony Codex burning amber against his chest, struggling to get at the grey pen, hungry.

TROLLMAGEgritted
…No. · You'd eat it and it'd eat you. · You can eat. · Or you can wait.
P8CLOSE, Vigolas's chest

the grey doorway two hands wide now. His outline beginning to go white at the edges, not grey, white, like a door's frame being painted out.

VIGOLASswaying
…Guys. · I don't feel great.
PAGE 5
P9CLOSE, Öde

watching his outline go white, and understanding. Her face going very hard.

ÖDE
…He's not erasing him. · He's making him worth nothing. · A door isn't anybody. It's for things to go through.
ÖDErounding on the crew
Then make him worth something! · Out loud! · What's he worth to you? Say it!
P10CLOSE, the crew

stopping. Looking at each other. And at their captain, swaying, with a door opening in his chest.

PAGE 6
P11CLOSE, Kompis

first, stepping in front of Vigolas, between him and the old man, and shouting it:

KOMPIS
You took a spy's file off a table and didn't read it! · You let me keep my dog! · You're worth every day since!
P12CLOSE, the grey stroke

on the Ledger page, under Jorvand's pen, stalling. The pen pressing. The ink not taking.

PAGE 7
P13CLOSE, Rougeina

beside Kompis, blades down, shouting, for once, at the top of her voice:

ROUGEINA
You folded Baldr's whole Hall so I could reach him, and it cost you a name! · You called me little storm in the middle of the Null! · You're worth a list with no names left on it!
P14CLOSE, Smurjan

his hand on his chest, the voices back in it, all of them, and Kali and Bakasura beside him.

SMURJAN
You struck me with lightning so I could open! · Seventeen voices say you're worth it!
KALI
Eighteen! I'm counting myself!
BAKASURA
…Nineteen.
PAGE 8
P15CLOSE, Trollmage

still on his knees holding the starving book, looking up.

TROLLMAGE
…You let me sleep. · For years. · Nobody ever let me sleep. · Do you know what that's worth?
P16CLOSE, Öde

her arm raised, the names on it readable again.

ÖDE
You learned all my names! · A hundred and eleven of them, with Järn! · You're worth a hundred and eleven!
PAGE 9
P17CLOSE, Isa

a beat late, very clear, in the smallest, most certain voice.

ISA
…You tried to be slow for a week. · You lasted four seconds. · …Worth it.
P18CLOSE, Drekk

his bell-rope mask in his hand, voice cracking.

DREKK
You nailed her name to my rail! · Camilla! · You're worth the Kettle and Marka and everything I lost to get to you!
YSELbeside him, quietly, fiercely
…You let me come.
PAGES 10–11 — SPLASH
P19SPLASH (double page). WHAT HE'S WORTH.

The office of redacted pages, and in its centre, the captain with a door of grey opening in his chest, swaying. Round him, his whole crew, every one of them shouting, mouths wide, balloons overlapping, full of what he's worth to them. And from every one of them, through the air, emerald light pouring into him: Greed's colour, value, the colour of something being decided. The light is filling the grey doorway at its edges, closing it from the outside in.

Across the desk, an old man with a grey pen that won't write, the ninth line still empty under its tip.

And at the captain's feet, a golden retriever, barking, one bark, the loudest sound in the room:

WUFF!
PAGE 12
P20CLOSE, Hjalmar

leaning on the doorframe, his blind face turned toward Vigolas, adding his dry old voice to the noise.

HJALMAR
…I wrote you in eight times, boy. · By hand. · I'd like to keep doing it.
P21CLOSE, Vigolas's chest.

The grey doorway narrowing, emerald light pressing it shut from the edges, until it's a line again, a hairline crack, a door closed on the Null.

VIGOLASgasping, tears running down his face, grinning
…You guys are so embarrassing.
PAGE 13
P22CLOSE, the Ledger page.

The grey stroke on the ninth line fading, flaking off the paper like dried mud. The line empty again.

P23CLOSE, Jorvand

looking down at the page, then up at the crew, at the emerald light, at the dog. His face very strange: disappointment, and under it, unmistakably, relief.

JORVANDvery quietly
…The line won't take. · Not while he's worth this much to anyone.
PAGE 14
P24CLOSE, Jorvand

folding the Ledger page with the grey pen inside it, slowly, and tucking it back into his coat.

JORVAND
…Seven lifetimes I tried to decide. · I never once tried to decide with them in the room.
VIGOLAS
…Then don't. · Stay. · Decide with all of us.
P25CLOSE, Jorvand

a long, long look at the young man he made. And then, very sadly:

JORVAND
…I can't, boy. · I walked too far into it. · I can't decide anything here. · Here there's too much worth.
PAGE 15
P26CLOSE, Jorvand

stepping back toward the far wall, the great redacted page of the wall, the black bars on it stirring, opening like a slit in a curtain.

JORVAND
…But there's a place where nothing is said. · Where nobody's worth anything. · Where I can think.
P27CLOSE, Ysel

white, knowing exactly what he means.

YSEL
…The Margin. · Don't— Vigolas, get AWAY from him—
PAGE 16
P28ACTION.

Jorvand's struck right hand, ink and blood on the knuckles, shooting out, faster than an old man should move, and closing round Vigolas's wrist.

P29ACTION.

And pulling. Backwards. Into the wall-page. Black bars swallowing the old man's arm, his shoulder, and Vigolas's hand after it, and Vigolas's arm.

KOMPIS
NO—

(Mingus lunging for Vigolas's coat-tail with his teeth.)

PAGE 17 — THE HOOK
P30CLOSE, Mingus's teeth

closing on the hem of the midnight-green coat, holding, and the coat tearing: a strip of green cloth left in the dog's jaws as the rest of it goes through.

P31FINAL PANEL, wide.

The wall of redacted page closing like water over a stone, black bars settling back into neat lines, the lamp flickering. Where the captain stood a heartbeat ago: nothing. The crew frozen. A golden retriever standing at the wall with a strip of green coat in his mouth, whining, pawing at the paper.

(No balloon. No SFX.)

END OF CHAPTER 224

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.