SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga I · The Satchel · Arc 3 · Baldr

Chapter 27

The First Sign
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, the Council chamber of the Architects, high in Glasheim, the same night.

A round hall whose floor is one great sheet of glass, with clouds drifting far below it. Twelve tall chairs stand in a ring under a carved frieze of twelve figures, the last of which is only a black bar. One chair has stood empty longer than anyone remembers: the Twelfth. Above its seat, at the height of a standing man, a small square Signet hangs in the air, faintly lit, as if someone were still wearing it. In ten of the other chairs sit figures in shadow, each with a Signet glowing white on the back of one hand. The third chair is empty. They are waiting for it.

SHADOWED ARCHITECT
His tower fell an hour ago. He'll be with his granddaughter.
ANOTHER
We'll wait.
P2CLOSE, a hand in shadow

drumming its fingers on a chair arm. Then stopping.

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P3WIDE, the same ring.

A ripple passes through all ten figures at once, like a draught through candle flames.

P4MID.

Silence.

SHADOWED ARCHITECT
…Who are we waiting for?
ANOTHER
For… I'm sure there was…
P5CLOSE, the third chair.

A small square Signet drifts down out of the dark like a leaf and settles on the seat, dark. The brass nameplate above it is blank.

A VOICE FROM THE RING
There are two empty chairs.
ANOTHER
The Twelfth has always been empty.
A VOICE FROM THE RING
And the other one?
P6WIDE, the ring from above

ten lit Signets, two dark chairs.

A VOICE FROM THE RING
…Whose chair is that?

Nobody answers.

P7CLOSE, the Architect in the tenth chair

broad and grey-bearded, a fresh scar across his face, a tower-shield taller than a man leaning against his chair with the crest of a closed gate on it, staring down through the glass floor at the gap in the sky where a tower stood.

TENTH CHAIR
Something is being taken from us, and we can't even see its shape.
TENTH CHAIR
Then I'll build something that can't be forgotten.
PAGE 3
P8WIDE, somewhere else entirely.

A crossroads island adrift in the Current, the sea of moving starlight between the realms. Roads from every gate in every realm run onto it and cross. Signposts crowd the junction, pointing every way at once. A lone woman walks one of the roads in dusty boots and a long road-coat, a great curved horn of pale, cork-ridged bark slung across her back.

TORVA · RÖNNKVIST-9 · not ranked by any board she bothers to read

P9CLOSE, the horn.

It trembles on its strap, all by itself.

P10CLOSE, Torva

unslinging it, one eyebrow raised.

TORVAto the horn
You've never once sounded for a lie.
TORVA
So I suppose it's true.
P11WIDE.

She blows. The sound goes out along every road at once, in every direction, into every realm.

TORVA
AN ARCHITECT HAS FALLEN.
HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMM
PAGES 4–5 — SPLASH (double page)
P12SPLASH. Every Scalelist board in the world goes dark for one heartbeat.

A montage across the spread, panels like shards of broken glass, all the same instant:

Glasheim's colossal board, black, above its ruined towers;

the fallen board of Gate City, lying in the harbour ashes, its last embers going out;

a border town on a fjord in troll country;

a city of mirrors under crimson stars;

a violet city of libraries;

a slow, river-grey city where the dead rest between lives;

and under every one of them, crowds of people looking up at a blank board.

Along the bottom of the spread runs a heartbeat line. It beats, beats, misses one, lies flat for a single beat, and beats again.

The First Sign: an Architect has died by a hand that is not an Architect's. The routing of souls begins to fail.
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P13WIDE, night, the black-sand beach below the ruins of Gate City

the embers of the burned city still glowing on the cliffs. People are walking out of the surf, the newly reborn, the way they do every night. Tonight there are hundreds, and every one of them is wrong: an old woman in a young soldier's body, a little boy in the body of a grey-bearded giant, a sailor in a girl's, a scholar in a fisherman's broad frame. They look at their hands. They look at each other.

P14MID.

A Trisdel clerk with a clipboard runs up and down the line of surf, flipping pages that don't match anything.

CLERK
The routing— it isn't routing— nobody's going where they were sent—
P15CLOSE, one small figure on the sand:

a child's body in a child's coat, and on it an old man's frightened eyes, crying. Behind him, the same wrongness repeats by the hundreds all down the beach.

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P16EXTERIOR, Glasheim, the terrace in front of the warm house, a minute later.

The crew stands in the snow staring up at a board that went dark for one heartbeat and has just come back on. Bells everywhere. Rougeina comes out of the house's front door.

VIGOLAS
What was that?
ROUGEINA
Something fell.
TROLLMAGEon Drekk's back, half awake
That was a horn. A real one. Nobody blows a horn that big for nothing.
P17MID.

Rougeina holds out a shard to Smurjan: the white room, the mirror, the silver figure.

ROUGEINA
Yours.
SMURJANtaking it carefully, all three voices quiet
…When did we lose it?
ROUGEINA
Doesn't matter. You have it.
P18CLOSE, Drekk

cracked spyglass to his eye, looking down at the lowest terrace.

DREKK
The bark-yards. Now. While they don't know what day it is.
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P19WIDE, the lowest terrace of Glasheim: the bark-yards.

Long sheds and great stacks of grey-gold Ferdinand bark, the only wood that floats on the Current. The yard wall has a crater blown clean through it, and in the crater, half-buried in snow, sits the house-sized cube, humming, a million tiny slates glinting inside it like stars in ice.

VIGOLAS
See? I planned that.
DREKK
You did not plan that.
P20MID.

The crew runs into the yard with the troll sledge and the two shaggy goats, fetched from the cistern, and takes two of the yard's own long bark-sledges. Along the yard wall, freed Grey Masks stand holding their masks in their hands, watching. Doing nothing.

KOMPISlooking at them
…They're not stopping us.
VIGOLAS
Nobody's making them anymore.
PAGE 9
P21ACTION.

Then the snow by the yard gate heaves and splits, and out of it, plume bent, his slate-blue armour furred with frost, climbs the Bastion Shield-Captain with eight of his guards behind him. They have dug themselves out.

SHIELD-CAPTAIN
FOUR. DAYS. OF SNOW.
P22MID.

He plants his door-sized shield in the snow. A long spear of light locks into a groove on its face like the bolt of a siege-bow.

SHIELD-CAPTAIN
Registry Defence does not forget a thief.
PAGES 10–11 — THE BARK-YARD
P23ACTION, a tier, everyone loading and fighting at once.

Bakasura rises out of the snow and lifts a whole stack of bark onto a sledge in his jaws.

BAKASURAthrough a mouthful of bark
…Not food.
BAKASURA
…Not food.

Kali, out of the shadow, cuts three guards' spears off at the haft.

KALI
Three! I'm counting this time! Somebody has to!

Rougeina Swaps a guard into a bark-stack and back out again, very dizzy.

Kompis shoots out two lanterns, and the yard drops into snow-dark.

P24ACTION.

Vigolas, green sparks at his fingertips, looks at the Shield-Captain, and closes his fist.

VIGOLAS
Not again tonight.

He picks up a length of bark the size of an oar instead, and swings it.

P25ACTION.

The Shield-Captain levels his siege-spear. Not at Vigolas. At the lead sledge, at the man on the driver's bench: Drekk.

SHIELD-CAPTAIN
Kill the driver, and the cargo stays.
P26ACTION.

The spear of light fires.

FSSHHHHAAAM
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P27ACTION.

Smurjan steps in front of the sledge. He doesn't dodge. He could have.

P28IMPACT.

The spear of light passes through Smurjan's chest, drawn as a bar of white light and nothing more. Kali and Bakasura snap back into his shadow like cut ropes. He falls backward onto the bark, onto the sledge, at Drekk's feet.

P29CLOSE, Drekk on the bench

staring down at him.

P30ACTION.

Vigolas reaches the Shield-Captain. The bark-oar comes down on the gold hinge of his great shield, and the shield splits, and the next swing lays the Captain flat in the snow.

VIGOLAS
DRIVE!
PAGE 13
P31WIDE.

Three sledges thunder out through the cube's crater and onto the ancient troll road: a long tunnel that drops down the inside of the Marhold Spine like a slide. The goats lean back on their haunches. The sledges go faster and faster, bark stacked high, the crew clinging on. Behind them, the house-sized cube sits in its crater as Trisdel lanterns begin to gather around it.

VIGOLASlooking back at it
I'm coming back for that.
DREKK
IT'S THE SIZE OF A HOUSE.
P32MID, the lead sledge in the dark tunnel

its lantern swinging. Smurjan lies on the bark, still. Drekk drives. He doesn't look down at him, and he doesn't look away.

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P33WIDE, dawn, the foot of the Spine.

The sledges burst out of the troll road into troll country, the snowfields gold in the sunrise.

P34INSERT, far above, in Glasheim, the same dawn.

A warm bedroom with a moon-lamp. A little girl wakes under a patchwork quilt, holding a birthday card. A young woman, her mother, sits down on the bed beside her, smiling.

MOTHER
Happy birthday, sweetheart. Who's that one from?
EDDAlooking at the card, puzzled
…I don't know.
MOTHERafter a moment
Someone who loves you very much, I think.
PAGE 15
P35MID, a rest-stop on the snowfield, an hour later.

Smurjan sits up on the bark, gasping, all three shadows jerking back into place around him. The crew turns. Drekk turns away at once.

SMURJAN
…We're back.
KALIfrom his mouth
Again.
BAKASURA
…Hungry.
P36MID.

Smurjan looks at the sledges, the bark, and the margin of Drekk's map, where Drekk has been sketching a hull in charcoal: a keel, ribs, a mast.

SMURJAN
What is that going to be?
DREKKnot turning around
A boat.
P37CLOSE, Smurjan.
SMURJAN
…A what?
P38CLOSE, Drekk

turning around now.

DREKK
A boat. You know. A boat.
SMURJANslowly shaking his head
I don't have that word anymore.

Drekk stares at him.

PAGE 16
P39NIGHT, a camp in the foothills

a fire, the sledges of bark drawn up around it. Rougeina unwraps something long from a cloth: the plank with her kill list, carried with her since the loft. She props it against a rock in the firelight. KATRIEL · WENDLAN · INGRITH · MEIRWEN · … And above them all, at the very top, a red circle drawn three times around…

P40POV, the crew.

…around nothing. A blank line of bare wood, circled three times in red.

P41CLOSE, Rougeina

the tip of her silver blade against the wood. She scratches one long line straight through the top name.

skrrrrt
PAGE 17 — THE HOOK
P42MID, the crew watching her cross out a line that, to them, was always empty.
VIGOLAS
Who was that?
ROUGEINA
Someone you'd have hated.

Kompis's hand goes to his pocket, to a silver pen he can't explain.

P43TWO-SHOT, Vigolas and Rougeina.
VIGOLAS
You said "until" someone. And then you'd be gone.
ROUGEINAlooking at the rest of the list
There are more names.
VIGOLAS
So you're staying.
ROUGEINA
…For now.
P44FINAL PANEL, wide, high on the ridge above the camp.

A hooded figure stands in the snow, watching the little fire far below. She turns and walks away along the ridge, and her shadow on the moonlit snow follows her one full second late.

END OF CHAPTER 27

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.