SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga I · The Satchel · Arc 3 · Baldr

Chapter 28

The Eighth Edit
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P1WIDE, a troll shipyard on a deep Brygdar fjord.

Cliffs carved with giant troll faces, eyes closed, look down on a stone slipway. On it lies a long keel of grey-gold Ferdinand bark. Trolls the size of houses carry planks like twigs. Grandmother Ulla sits on a rock, directing with her staff. The bark glows faintly in the cold sun, as if it remembers the tree.

ULLA
It floats on starlight. Water will be easy.
P2CLOSE, beside the slipway.

Trollmage lies flat on a plank with his sign propped up beside him: WAITING. DAY 3. DO NOT DISTURB. A troll child is drawing a moustache on the sign.

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P3MONTAGE, one tier, the weeks.

(a) Snow on the slipway; ribs of bark rising from the keel like the bones of a whale.

(b) Rain; trolls steaming bark planks and bending them around the ribs with enormous gentle hands. Vigolas carries a plank and talks the entire time. Kompis and Mingus sleep in the curve of the hull.

(c) Thaw; the hull closed in; Drekk on the scaffold with his cracked spyglass, sighting down the line of the deck, perfectly happy. Rougeina sits barefoot at the top of the newly raised mast with the panther.

P4MID.

On a rock apart from all of it sits Smurjan, watching. The trolls give him a wide berth. He opens his mouth to say something about what's rising on the slipway, and closes it again. He doesn't have the word.

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P5NIGHT, week three.

Mist on the fjord. A troll on watch on the cliff lifts its huge head.

P6WIDE.

Out on the water: three long boats rowing hard and quiet, full of white armour. Every Sentinel holds a fire-lance, its tip glowing like a coal. In the lead boat stands a heavy man with a scarred face and a crossbow of red light: the Sentinel Captain.

CAPTAIN
Burn the bark. All of it. Same as the harbour.
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P7ACTION.

Fire-lances arc through the dark onto the slipway. The scaffold at the bow catches.

FWUMP — FWUMP — FWUMP
P8MID.

The crew tumbles out of the hull and the troll huts, half dressed.

VIGOLASseeing the Captain
You. You were in the picture.
CAPTAIN
And you were the price. I've come to collect the rest of it.
P9CLOSE, Drekk

watching the flames climb toward the bow.

DREKK
NOT THE—

(He stops himself, white.)

DREKK
Not again.
PAGES 5–6 — THE SHIPYARD
P10ACTION, a tier.

Bakasura rises out of the slipway's shadow and swallows the whole burning tip of a fire-lance.

BAKASURA
…Spicy.
BAKASURA
…I'm still hungry.

Rougeina Swaps with a burning lance in mid-air and hurls it into the fjord, where it hisses out.

Trollmage, without opening his eyes, writes: MACRO : LEAK = 3 BOATS. Three neat holes open in three hulls. Three boats begin, very slowly, to sink.

TROLLMAGE
Three days' worth. I'm keeping the rest. (snore)

Kali runs the length of the slipway cutting fire-lances in half.

KALI
Fire! On wood! On our wood! Do you know how long the trolls took?
P11ACTION.

Smurjan is at the bow before anyone else, beating out the flames on the bark with his bare hands, with his robes, with his own body, until they're dead. His hands smoke. He doesn't step back.

P12CLOSE, Drekk on the scaffold

seeing it.

P13ACTION.

The Captain fires his red crossbow at Kompis. Kompis, Mingus at his feet, doesn't even reach for Subtick. He leans one inch, plucks the bolt out of the air with one hand, and fires Ivar once. The crossbow comes apart in three pieces.

SHNK — TAK
IVAR
That's two.
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P14MID.

The Captain, crossbowless, wades up onto the slipway with a fire-lance and swings it at Vigolas. Vigolas raises an open hand. Green lightning sparks. The Captain flinches, waiting for the cube.

P15CLOSE, Vigolas

looking at his own sparking hand. Then he closes it.

VIGOLAS
No. You're not worth a memory.
P16ACTION.

He picks up a broken oar from the shipyard's scrap pile, the same kind of oar he swung on the black sand the morning he woke. Greed-sight: the Captain's collar seam glows gold.

P17IMPACT.
VIGOLAS
That's for the Drowned Ledger.
KRAK

The collar shatters. The Captain drops.

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P18WIDE.

Two trolls lift the Captain off the slipway, very gently, between finger and thumb, and toss him in a long, soft arc out into the fjord after his sinking boats.

sploosh
ULLA
Brygdar trolls don't kill.
ULLA
They do throw.
P19MID, the dawn after the raid.

The bow is scorched but whole. The bark held. Smurjan sits on his rock again, his burned hands wrapped in moss bandages by a troll child who is very proud of the knots.

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P20WIDE, morning.

Drekk sits not far from Smurjan's rock, polishing the Kettle's dented brass bell in his lap and pretending Smurjan isn't there. Smurjan pretends the same. Above them both rises the finished hull.

P21CLOSE, Smurjan

looking up at the hull, trying again.

SMURJAN
It's a good…
SMURJAN
It's a good…

He stops, frustrated. The word isn't there.

P22CLOSE, Smurjan's mouth.

Another voice comes out of it: warm, laughing, a big woman's voice, in a balloon with a rougher, different border.

MARKAthrough Smurjan
…It's a good boat.
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P23CLOSE, Drekk.

The polishing cloth has stopped. The bell sits still in his hands.

P24CLOSE, Smurjan

touching his own lips.

SMURJAN
…Boat.
SMURJAN
Boat. That was hers. She gave it to me.
P25SILENT PANEL.

The two of them, ten steps apart, the bell between them on Drekk's knees.

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P26WIDE.

Drekk stands up. He climbs the scaffold to the bow with the bell over his shoulder and hangs it from a bracket of bark at the very front of the ship. It hangs there, dented and ugly and gleaming.

P27CLOSE.

He rings it once.

DONNNNG
P28MID.

Drekk turns and looks down at Smurjan. He speaks to him directly, for the first time.

DREKK
Smurjan.
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P29CLOSE, Drekk.
DREKK
You carry her right.
DREKK
Or I'll take her out of you myself.
P30CLOSE, Smurjan

standing, bandaged hands at his sides.

SMURJAN
…That's fair.
P31MID.

Drekk climbs down and walks past him without another word. But he walks past him, close. Not around.

KALIfrom Smurjan's mouth, very quietly
He's warming up to us.
BAKASURA
…Hungry.
P32TWO-SHOT, Smurjan and Vigolas

at the foot of the slipway. Smurjan holds out the fracture-record shard.

SMURJAN
This came out of your coat.
VIGOLAS
Keep it. You earned it.
SMURJAN
When?
VIGOLAS
The bark-yard. You stood in front of my navigator.
PAGES 13–14 — SPLASH (double page)
P33SPLASH. The christening.

Sunset on the fjord. The finished ship on the slipway: a hull of grey-gold Ferdinand bark glowing softly in the low light, a tall mast, and at the bow the Kettle's dented brass bell. On the bow, in big crooked letters still wet, Drekk has painted her name:

MARKA

The crew stands on deck: Vigolas at the bow rail with one boot up, coat open, thirty-six shards glowing in the lining; Kompis with Mingus wagging at his feet; Rougeina barefoot at the masthead with the panther; Trollmage lying flat on the deck with his crow; Smurjan at the stern, three shadows stretching out behind him; and Drekk at the wheel. On the shore, Grandmother Ulla and a crowd of trolls and troll children cheer.

DREKK
Her name is MARKA.
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P34MID, the deck, the celebration winding down.

Drekk raises his cracked spyglass and points it across the fjord at the Trisdel border town on the far shore, where a Scalelist board glows above the rooftops.

DREKK
Board's moving.
P35POV, through the cracked lens.

One line climbs, the numbers flickering upward:

KOMPIS · K-II · Scalelist #9,880 → #3,107

KOMPIS
…Huh.
VIGOLAS
Show-off.
P36POV, the lens.

Another line, unmoved:

ROUGEINA · K-III · Scalelist #777

VIGOLAS
Yours didn't move.
ROUGEINA
It never does. Not for those.
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P37POV, the lens.

At the very top of the board, where it always sits, the line that started everything: ∞−1. It used to blink red. Now it blinks gold.

VIGOLAS
Gold. Gold's good, right? Gold's always good.
P38INSERT, inside Vigolas's coat.

Among the thirty-six shards, the black shard frosts over, cold and grey, for one heartbeat. A thin rime of grey creeps across the lining. Then it's gone.

P39CLOSE, Vigolas

shivering for no reason. He pulls his coat tighter and grins at his crew.

VIGOLAS
…Cold, all of a sudden.
KOMPIS
It's the north.
VIGOLAS
Right. The north.
PAGE 17
P40WIDE, far away: the grey Witness Wood.

Leafless pale trees. Footprints pressing into the moss with nobody making them. On her stump sits FENNA, the book of worth open across her knees.

P41INSERT, the page.

VIGOLAS. In the rank column, the ink that never settles: ∞−1. In the margin beside it, a small tally in her own hand: edited · 7. As we watch, the seven shivers, and becomes an eight.

PAGE 18 — THE HOOK
P42CLOSE, Fenna.

Her expression changes, very slightly.

FENNA
Edited.
FENNA
Eight times.
P43MID.

She turns her head toward the edge of the panel, toward someone the reader cannot see. In the moss beside her stump, a fresh pair of footprints that are not hers.

P44FINAL PANEL, close on Fenna

looking at whoever is there.

FENNA
…You again.
END OF CHAPTER 28

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.