SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga II · The Call · Arc 1 · Bark And Bell

Chapter 29

The Launch
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, dawn, the troll shipyard on the Brygdar fjord.

Frost on everything. The cliffs are carved with giant troll faces, eyes closed, sleeping. On the stone slipway stands the MARKA, finished: a long hull of grey-gold Ferdinand bark glowing softly in the first sun, one tall mast, her name in Drekk's big crooked letters on the bow. Trolls the size of houses move around her with ropes and wedges. Smoke rises from the troll huts.

P2MID, the bow.

Drekk sits astride the bowsprit, breath steaming, polishing the Kettle's dented brass bell with his sleeve. He's humming, badly.

DREKK
Big day, girl.
DREKK
Big day.
PAGE 2
P3HIGH ANGLE, the deck.

Trollmage lies flat on his back in the middle of the deck, coat over his legs, the crow asleep on his stomach. His hand-painted sign is propped against the mast:

WAITING. DAY 21.

Under it, in fresh paint: ALSO SUPERVISING.

On a string around his neck, rising and falling with his breathing, hangs a glass shard full of tiny sleeping lights: the index shard. His book lies open beside him, its pages fluttering toward the shard like a cat toward a fire.

P4MID.

Vigolas crouches over him, coat open, frowning at the shard.

VIGOLAS
Is that mine?
TROLLMAGEeyes shut
Borrowed.
VIGOLAS
From my coat. While I was wearing it.
TROLLMAGE
You sleep heavy.
P5CLOSE.

Mingus plants both front paws on Trollmage's chest and licks his whole face, ear to ear. Trollmage does not wake up. The crow does, and glares.

THE CROW
Kraa.
KOMPISoff-panel, laughing
He's not gonna wake up, buddy.
PAGE 3
P6MID, the rigging.

Kompis is tying a rope to a cleat, badly, his cloth-wrapped rifle slung across his back. Mingus sits on his foot.

IVARfrom the rifle, gravelly
That knot's a disgrace.
KOMPIS
Nobody asked the gun.
P7KOMPIS'S SOUL-SIGHT.

The deck seen through his eyes: fine golden threads run between every member of the crew, criss-crossing the ship like rigging. Vigolas is tied to all of them. A thick thread runs from Kompis to Mingus, bright as a rope of sunlight. And one brand-new thread, thin as a hair and very faint, runs from Drekk at the bow down the slipway to a rock on the shore.

P8CLOSE, Kompis

smiling to himself.

KOMPIS
Look at that. Look how many there are now.
MINGUS
Wuf.
PAGE 4
P9WIDE, the foot of the slipway.

On the rock at the end of that thin thread sits Smurjan, alone, grey and still, watching the ship. The low dawn sun throws his three shadows a long way up the slipway, almost to the hull.

P10MID.

A troll cook stirs a cauldron of porridge the size of a bathtub near the huts. Out of Smurjan's long shadow leans Kali, red braid swinging, black-glass sickle on her hip. She stretches along the shadow like it's a hallway, scoops four bowls from the troll's stack, fills them, and lines them up on Smurjan's rock.

KALI
Breakfast. One, two, three, four.
P11CLOSE, Smurjan

looking at the four bowls.

SMURJAN
Three.
PAGE 5
P12CLOSE, Kali

staring at the fourth bowl. A beat too long.

KALI
…Three. I know. I know. I keep doing that.
KALI
Why do I keep doing that? Do you know? You'd know. You've got the eye.
SMURJAN
I don't know.
P13ACTION.

Bakasura's enormous amber-lit maw rises out of the shadow behind the cook and swallows the cauldron, porridge, ladle and all.

GLUMP
BAKASURA
…Crunchy.
P14CLOSE, the troll cook

holding the empty air where the cauldron was.

KALI
He'll pay for that.
BAKASURA
…I'm still hungry.
PAGE 6
P15MID, the deck.

Grandmother Ulla climbs the gangplank. The whole ship creaks under her weight. She is ancient, her skin is grey stone, her face is a cliff with kindness carved into it, and she wears a shawl of woven roots. She raps Trollmage's sign with her staff.

TOK
ULLAslow, deep
Up.
TROLLMAGE
Supervising.
P16CLOSE, Ulla

looking down at him.

ULLA
You have your great-great-grandmother's ears. And none of her spine.
TROLLMAGE
I have her nap schedule.
P17CLOSE.

Ulla grunts. Then she pulls a blanket of troll wool off her shoulder and, very gently, tucks it over him up to the chin. The crow settles into it.

ULLAquietly
Lazy boy.
PAGE 7
P18TWO-SHOT, the foot of the slipway.

Vigolas has come down to Smurjan's rock. He steals one of the bowls and eats from it.

VIGOLAS
You coming aboard? Or are you going to watch her from down here forever?
SMURJAN
Drekk hasn't said I can.
P19CLOSE, Vigolas

mouth full.

VIGOLAS
He said "carry her right, or I'll take her out of you myself." That's Drekk for welcome aboard.
P20CLOSE, Smurjan

looking up at the bell on the bow, and at the wet crooked letters of the name.

SMURJAN
Today I watch.
VIGOLASafter a moment
…Fine. Save me a bowl.
KALIfrom the shadow
We saved you four.
PAGE 8
P21WIDE, mid-morning.

The launch begins. Ulla stands on a rock with her staff raised. Two lines of trolls hold the great launching ropes. Troll children sit along the cliff edge with their legs dangling, cheering. Drekk is at the wheel now, white-knuckled and grinning so hard it looks painful.

ULLA
At the top of the tide! Knock out the first wedges!
TOK — TOK — TOK
P22MID, the bow.

Vigolas has one boot up on the bow rail, coat flaring, arms spread to the whole fjord.

VIGOLAS
Crew of the Marka! Today, we—
P23SFX across the panel

cutting him off: a troll horn from the clifftop, long and low.

HRROOOOOOOOM

PAGE 9
P24WIDE, the fjord head.

Around the far point, out of the morning mist, comes a ship: tall and white. A bleached bark hull sheathed at the bow in white iron. White sails ruled in black lines like the pages of a ledger. And at the masthead, a white flag with a crest: a closed gate.

P25CLOSE, Drekk

cracked spyglass to his eye.

DREKK
White flag.
KOMPIS
…Surrender?
ROUGEINAfrom the masthead, barefoot, the panther beside her
That's not a surrender flag. That's a crest.
P26CLOSE, Kompis.

He's gone pale. He knows it.

KOMPIS
Closed gate. Architect Ten. Registry Defence.
KOMPIS
They're the ones who don't forget a thief.
PAGE 10
P27WIDE.

The white ship drops longboats, six of them, packed with Bastion guards in slate-blue armour and plumed helms. They row hard and fast for the slipway. Each guard carries a ledger-hook: an iron hook on a chain of pale, glowing light.

RANK PLATE ×30: BASTION GUARD · K-II MARKED · Scalelist #70,000–#99,000

P28CLOSE, Vigolas

cracking his knuckles. Green lightning sparks between them.

VIGOLAS
Good. I was worried today would be boring.
P29CLOSE, Drekk

at the wheel, through his teeth.

DREKK
If one hook touches her hull, I'm going in after it.
PAGE 11
P30ACTION, a tier.

The lead longboat throws. Twelve ledger-hooks fly at the Marka's rail.

Rougeina is gone from the masthead. Blink. She's standing on the first hook in mid-air. Blink. On the second. Blink. On the oars. Behind her, a line of silver-rose phantom trails hangs in the air like footprints made of ghosts. Every chain she passes falls apart, cut clean by mirror-steel.

ROUGEINA
Too slow.
P31ACTION.

The panther lands in the second longboat and the guards go over the side like skittles.

sploosh — sploosh — sploosh
PAGE 12
P32CLOSE, Kompis

at the bow, rifle up, one hand on Mingus's head.

KOMPIS
Subtick.
P33GREY WORLD.

Everything freezes grey: spray in the air, oars mid-stroke, a hook hanging an arm's length from Drekk's wheel. Only Kompis is in colour, with dozens upon dozens of translucent afterimages of himself fanning out behind him, each trying a different shot. Along the bottom of the panel runs the golden pulse line: Mingus's heartbeat, steady. Thump… thump…

P34ACTION, back in colour.

One shot. The bullet hits the first chain, ricochets off a helm, cuts the second, the third, the fourth, and drops into the water. Four hooks fall short.

TAK — tang — tang — tang
IVAR
Show-off.
KOMPISwiping a thin line of blood from his nose
You love it.
PAGE 13
P35ACTION, the shore.

A longboat beaches by Smurjan's rock. Guards pour out. Smurjan doesn't stand up. A hook flies at his head; he catches the chain between two fingers, exactly, and gives it one small flick. The guard on the other end flies backwards into the fjord.

SMURJAN
No.
P36ACTION.

Kali spins out of his shadow, sickle singing, and cuts three chains at once.

KALI
Oh, finally, something to do. Hello! Hi! You're very blue. Did you know you're very blue?
P37ACTION.

Bakasura rises out of the water's shadow beneath the last longboat and swallows the whole front half of it. The guards in the back half stare at the bite mark.

BAKASURA
…Crunchy.
PAGE 14
P38ACTION.

Vigolas leaps from the bow rail clear across the water and lands in the lead longboat feet-first. The boat bucks. Green lightning on both fists. A guard captain raises his hook, sees who it is, and hesitates.

VIGOLAS
Morning!
KRAK
P39ACTION.

One punch, and the guard captain sails over the fjord in a long arc. Two trolls on the shore catch him between finger and thumb, look at each other, and throw him back toward the white ship.

sploosh
P40CLOSE, a ledger-hook

flying at the Marka's bell. Mingus jumps from the deck, catches the chain in his teeth in mid-air, lands, and trots proudly back to Kompis with it, tail going like a flag.

KOMPIS
Good boy. Good boy.
PAGE 15
P41WIDE.

The longboats are wrecked, sinking or rowing away full of soaked, furious guards. The trolls on the cliff are cheering. Trollmage has not woken up.

VIGOLASstanding on a half-sunk longboat, shouting at the white ship
Tell your Architect the Marka sails TODAY!
P42MID, the masthead.

Rougeina is back, crouched, blades sheathed. She isn't celebrating. She's watching the white ship.

ROUGEINA
They weren't trying.
VIGOLASclimbing back aboard
Sure looked like trying.
ROUGEINA
They were measuring us.
P43LONG LENS, the white ship's bow.

On the bowsprit, a lean figure crouches on all fours like a dog, nose to the wind, sniffing. Behind him, on a square iron plate set into the deck, stands a broad, hooded figure whose skin catches the light strangely, white and cracked. The broad one lifts a long iron rod and, slowly, lowers its glowing white tip over the bow toward the water.

PAGES 16–17 — SPLASH (double page)
P44SPLASH. The fjord catches fire.

From the white ship's bow, white flames race out across the surface of the water, low and roaring, crackling like frost, spreading faster than anything can row. The fjord is burning, the whole width of it from cliff to cliff, a sheet of white fire with steam boiling off it. Where it touches the rocks at the shore, white crust forms and creeps upward. Dead fish float up through the flames, gone white and stiff.

And the fire is coming straight up the fjord toward the slipway, toward the troll huts, toward the children on the cliff, toward the grey-gold hull of the Marka.

In the middle of it all the white ship sails on, untouched, its iron bow parting the flames.

ULLAsmall, at the edge of the panel
…That isn't fire. Fire is warm.
PAGE 18 — THE HOOK
P45CLOSE, Trollmage.

For the first time in the chapter, his eyes are open. The crow is wide awake on his chest. The index shard glows violet against his throat.

TROLLMAGE
…Salt-fire.
END OF CHAPTER 29

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