SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga II · The Call · Arc 1 · Bark And Bell

Chapter 30

Audit
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, the shore.

The white fire reaches land. It climbs up out of the fjord onto the shingle with a sound like ice cracking, leaving a crust of white salt behind it. Steam everywhere. Trolls scoop troll children off the cliff edge by the armful and carry them up the paths.

ULLAstaff raised
Children UP! Up the cliff! Nobody touches it!
P2MID, the waterline.

At the bottom of the slipway, Vigolas and three trolls roll barrels of launching grease away from the creeping fire, coughing in the steam.

VIGOLAS
If these go up, the slipway goes with them!
TROLLrolling two barrels like marbles
Hrm.
PAGE 2
P3WIDE.

Out of the steam glides the white ship, close now, its iron-sheathed bow parting the flames. On the stern, in neat black letters: TALLY.

P4CLOSE, Kompis

at the top of the slipway beside the hull, staring up at it.

KOMPIS
The Tally. Registry Defence's hunting ship. They used to tell us stories about it, in Trisdel.
ROUGEINAlanding beside him, blades out
What kind of stories?
KOMPIS
The kind where nobody gets away.
P5LONG LENS, the bowsprit.

The lean figure is still crouched there on all fours. He lifts his head and takes one long, slow sniff of the air.

PAGE 3
P6ACTION.

He leaps. A long arc, high over the burning water, coat streaming behind him, arms out like a diving bird.

P7WIDE, impact.

He lands on all fours on the slipway, right at the crew's feet, so lightly that the frost doesn't crack.

Tall and gaunt as a starved hound. Long iron-grey hair tied back with dozens of little paper ledger-tags, each with a number. A long sharp nose whose nostrils never stop moving. Yellow-brown eyes. A slate-blue Registry greatcoat stitched all over with columns of tiny silver numbers, like a page from an accounts book. His bare forearms are covered in tally-mark tattoos. At his throat, on a chain, hangs a small silver tag with a closed-gate crest. A number was engraved on it once and has been scratched out.

HRAFNKELL, the Ledger-Hound · K-IV SHAPED · Scalelist #1,512 · Bastion Five

P8CLOSE, Hrafnkell

still crouched, looking up at them with a polite smile.

HRAFNKELL
Hrafnkell. Registry Defence. First of the Bastion Five.
HRAFNKELL
The Architect built five of us. You'll meet the others.
HRAFNKELL
I'm here for a thief.
PAGE 4
P9MID, the crew

facing him: Kompis with Ivar up and Mingus at his feet, Rougeina with two blades, Trollmage sitting up in his blanket with the crow on his head.

TROLLMAGE
We're all thieves. You'll need to be specific.
P10A TIER OF THREE, Hrafnkell sniffing.

He moves along the line on all fours, nose an inch from each of them.

(Kompis) HRAFNKELL: Ink. Gunpowder. Dog. And a deserter's sweat. Architect Three's little asset. I read your file.

(Rougeina) HRAFNKELL: Ink and blood. Lots of blood. And something like roses.

(Trollmage) HRAFNKELL: Old ink. Very old. Moss and dust and… (he wrinkles his nose) …is that porridge?

P11CLOSE, Hrafnkell and Mingus

nose to nose. Mingus sniffs him back, very interested. Hrafnkell frowns, sniffs again, and frowns harder.

HRAFNKELL
…That one smells like a dog.
MINGUStail wagging
Wuf.
PAGE 5
P12CLOSE, Hrafnkell

standing up at last, tall, nostrils flaring at the steam.

HRAFNKELL
Every soul has a line in the Ledger, and every line smells of ink. But somewhere on this beach, something smells like a page that's been torn out.
HRAFNKELL
The salt's in my nose. Where are you…?
P13ACTION.

Rougeina doesn't wait. She throws a blade past his ear. Blink: she's behind him, where the blade is, the second blade already swinging for the back of his neck. Silver-rose trails hang in the air.

P14ACTION.

He's not there. He's ducked under it without turning around, nose first, like a dog under a fence.

HRAFNKELL
Roses. You leave a trail, assassin.
TAK (Kompis's shot, a hair too late, chipping the slipway where his foot was)
PAGE 6
P15MID.

Trollmage is on his feet, blanket falling off him, the crow flapping up. Three weeks of waiting glow in his violet rune-markings. He starts writing in the air with one finger, glowing violet letters:

MACRO : WALL = 21 D—

TROLLMAGE
Three weeks. You'll like this one.
P16CLOSE, Hrafnkell

turning to look at the letters. He seems almost sorry.

HRAFNKELL
Oh, mage. Not in front of me.
P17EXTREME CLOSE, Hrafnkell's throat

as he throws his head back. The silver tag swings.

HRAFNKELL
Audit.
PAGES 7–8 — SPLASH (double page)
P18SPLASH. THE HOWL.

Hrafnkell howls. A long, terrible, beautiful hound's howl, and it is visible: it rolls out of his throat in rings of fine ruled lines, like the lines of a ledger page, sweeping across the shipyard, over the slipway, the hull, the shore.

Wherever the lines pass a fighter, that fighter's rank plate comes down over them out of the air, stamped in heavy iron, and clamps on like a yoke:

KOMPIS · K-II MARKED · Scalelist #3,107, slamming onto his shoulders. His knees buckle.

ROUGEINA · K-III TESTED · Scalelist #777, hitting her mid-step. She stumbles.

TROLLMAGE · K-II MARKED (assigned) · Scalelist #120,331, falling on him like an anvil.

At the centre of it all, Hrafnkell's own throat is one blaze of white sound. Whatever hangs at his collar is lost in it.

AAAAAWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
AUDIT. Inside the Ledger-Hound's howl, every fighter is held to the rank the Order assigned them. Not one inch more.
PAGE 9
P19CLOSE, Trollmage's letters

half-written in the air. They go grey. Then they fall, one by one, like lead type, and clatter on the slipway stones.

tik — tak — tik — tak
P20MID, Trollmage

on one knee under the iron plate, staring at the dead letters. The violet glow in his rune-markings has gone out. The crow lands on a fallen W and pecks it. It doesn't move.

TROLLMAGE
…It's gone.
TROLLMAGE
Not stopped. Gone. Three weeks.
P21CLOSE, Trollmage.

His face does something we have never seen it do. He's scared.

PAGE 10
P22ACTION.

Hrafnkell comes for Kompis, fast and low. Kompis, teeth gritted under the plate, one hand on Mingus.

KOMPIS
Subtick.
P23GREY WORLD, but wrong.

The world freezes, and Kompis starts living the moment again and again, but this time there are only seven afterimages behind him instead of a crowd: one dodges and is caught, one shoots and misses, one is kicked in the throat, one in the jaw… The golden pulse line along the bottom still beats, but the grey snaps back after the seventh like a door slamming.

P24ACTION, colour.

He keeps the only version he survives: he turns his shoulder into the kick instead of his throat. It still throws him into the hull. Blood from his nose.

KOMPISgasping
Seven. I got seven.
IVAR
That's not enough.
KOMPIS
I know it's not enough!
PAGE 11
P25ACTION.

Rougeina Swaps, aiming for the Tally's flagpole, to cut the crest down.

P26WIDE.

She lands ten paces away, on the slipway, nowhere near it. Her silver-rose trail stops short in the air like a rope cut off.

ROUGEINA
…What?
P27ACTION.

Hrafnkell is already there, nose first, following the trail by scent. A backhand sends her into the scaffold. Planks rain down.

HRAFNKELL
Seven hundred and seventy-seventh. On paper.
HRAFNKELL
In here, paper is all there is.
PAGE 12
P28WIDE, Smurjan's rock.

Smurjan is on his feet, running for the slipway. Between him and the fight, the white fire has climbed out of the water onto the shore in a low, crackling wall.

Kali flies out of his shadow ahead of him, sickle raised, to leap it.

KALI
It's fire, I've been on fire, we'll grow back—
P29POV, through Smurjan's third eye.

The world as diagrams: edges, weights, angles. Every ordinary fire he has ever seen through this eye has an after, drawn faintly behind it: ash, smoke, new grass. This one has nothing behind it. The world beyond the white flames is a blank.

P30CLOSE, Smurjan.
SMURJAN
Kali. Back.
KALI
It's just—
SMURJAN
It isn't. Look.

Kali looks through his eye. She goes quiet, and Kali is never quiet.

KALI
…Oh.
BAKASURAlow, from the shadow
…Not hungry.
PAGE 13
P31MID.

Hrafnkell walks to Trollmage and lifts him off the stones by the collar, one-handed. Trollmage hangs there under his iron plate, feet off the ground.

HRAFNKELL
K-two. On paper, and now in fact. Do you know how many K-twos I've put in collars?
P32CLOSE, Trollmage.
TROLLMAGE
…Is this the part where I'm supposed to be scared?
HRAFNKELL
Yes.
TROLLMAGE
I am, a bit.
P33WIDE, from the cliff path.

Ulla, a troll child under each arm, roars down at the slipway.

ULLA
GET UP, BOY!

Trollmage can't.

PAGE 14
P34WIDE.

Through the steam, up the slipway, Vigolas is walking into the howl.

P35CLOSE, the howl around him.

The ruled lines of the howl reach him, and bend, like water around a stone. No iron plate comes down. Above his head, faint as always, his line on the board flickers gold, ∞−1, and the howl slides off it, finding nothing to grab.

P36MID.

He stops three paces from Hrafnkell. Green lightning crawls over both fists.

VIGOLAS
Put my mage down.
PAGE 15
P37CLOSE, Hrafnkell

turning. His nose wrinkles. He can't place it, not through the salt steam.

HRAFNKELL
And who are y—
P38IMPACT.

Vigolas's fist, wrapped in green lightning, lands square in his face.

KRA-KOOOM
PAGE 16
P39WIDE.

Hrafnkell flies the length of the shipyard, straight through what's left of the scaffold, and bounces across the shingle until he skids to a stop on all fours at the very edge of the white fire.

P40MID.

The howl breaks. The ruled lines in the air snap like threads. The iron plates vanish. Trollmage drops onto the stones, gasping. Kompis sucks in a breath like a man coming up from deep water. Rougeina is already on her feet, blades out.

VIGOLAS
Everyone alive?
KOMPISflat on his back
Define alive.
PAGE 17 — THE HOOK
P41CLOSE, Hrafnkell

on all fours at the fire's edge, blood running from his nose, steam curling around him. He's laughing: quiet and breathless, like a man who's just been handed a gift. His nostrils flare. He sniffs once, deep.

P42EXTREME CLOSE, his eyes.

The pupils go wide, like a hound that's just seen the hare.

HRAFNKELL
…There you are.
P43FINAL PANEL, wide.

Hrafnkell at one end of the shipyard, Vigolas at the other, the white fire between them climbing toward the hull.

HRAFNKELL
The brightest absence I've ever smelled.
END OF CHAPTER 30

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.