SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga II · The Call · Arc 1 · Bark And Bell

Chapter 31

Salt And Bark
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, the shipyard

picking up where we left off. Hrafnkell at the fire's edge, Vigolas at the other end, the white fire creeping up the shingle toward the slipway.

P2ACTION.

Hrafnkell doesn't come for Vigolas. He bolts sideways on all fours, straight up the cliff path, toward the ledge where the trolls set the troll children down.

VIGOLAS
Hey! HEY!
P3ACTION.

Vigolas goes after him, taking the cliff path four steps at a time.

VIGOLAS
Not the kids, you mutt!
PAGE 2
P4WIDE, the Tally

at the foot of the slipway now, its iron bow nosing onto the shingle. A long iron gangplank crashes down onto the rocks.

KLANNG
P5LOW ANGLE.

Down it, slowly, walks the broad, hooded figure. His boots have iron soles. He never steps off iron.

A heavy man whose whole body is a crust of white salt, cracked like the bed of a dried-out lake, with white light glowing faintly in the cracks. Bald and crusted. His eyes are red-rimmed and bone-dry, with grains of salt caught in the corners. He wears an oiled sealskin hood and long gloves, and carries a long iron branding iron, its head shaped like a closed gate.

SALTBRAND · K-III TESTED · Scalelist #3,870 · Bastion Five

P6CLOSE, Saltbrand

looking up at the Marka on her slipway. He speaks slowly, dryly, as if words cost him water.

SALTBRAND
Good bark. Pity.
PAGE 3
P7ACTION.

He touches the branding iron to the bottom of the slipway. White fire runs up the greased timbers like a lit fuse, straight for the hull.

FSSSSSHHHK
P8CLOSE, the hull.

The fire reaches the grey-gold bark, and the bark catches.

DREKKon the deck, white as a sheet
She held! She held against Trisdel fire!
ULLAfrom the cliff path
That's not Trisdel fire.
P9EXTREME CLOSE, the bark.

Where the white flame touches it, the soft gold glow of the tree goes out, like an eye closing. The wood turns white, and then it crumbles into salt and trickles down the hull.

SALT-FIRE burns what fire can't. And what dies in it stays dead.
PAGE 4
P10ACTION.

Smurjan, cut off on the shore by the burning shingle, goes up instead: up the cliff face onto a carved troll's stone cheek, along its nose, and off it in one long jump that lands him on the slipway, between Saltbrand and the ship.

P11TWO-SHOT, the slipway.

Smurjan's three shadows fall across the burning timbers. Saltbrand stands on his iron gangplank and looks him up and down.

SALTBRAND
Smurjan. K-four. One body, three souls. Comes back when he dies.
SALTBRAND
The Architect built five of us. One for each of you.
SALTBRAND
I'm yours.
P12CLOSE, Saltbrand.
SALTBRAND
How many times have you died, big man?
SMURJAN
Enough.
SALTBRAND
One more, then. The last one.
PAGE 5
P13ACTION.

Kali bursts out of the shadow, red braid flying, black-glass sickle out.

KALI
Oh, he talks! I love it when they talk. I talk! Do you know what I do to people who talk?
SALTBRAND
No.
KALI
I talk more—
P14ACTION.

Behind her, Bakasura's maw heaves up out of the slipway's shadow, amber-lit and enormous, opening wide enough to swallow Saltbrand, gangplank and all.

P15CLOSE, Smurjan

a hand flung out.

SMURJAN
NO. Not him! Don't eat the fire!
SMURJAN
Eighteen people live inside you. If that fire gets in, nothing comes back. None of them.
P16CLOSE, Bakasura's maw

frozen open, a hand's width from the white flames. Slowly, it closes and sinks back.

BAKASURA
…Salt.
PAGE 6
P17ACTION.

Smurjan attacks. His fight is all precision: the third eye open, his body sliding through the gaps between the flames. Saltbrand sweeps the branding iron in white arcs, and every arc misses Smurjan by a finger's width.

P18ACTION, a tier.

Smurjan's open palm strikes the cracks in the salt crust: chest, ribs, collarbone. Chunks of white salt fly. There's no blood, because there's nothing inside to bleed.

SALTBRANDunbothered
Salt keeps things. Fish. Meat. Grudges.
SALTBRAND
And the dead. It keeps them dead.
PAGE 7
P19ACTION.

Kali comes in from the side with the sickle, fast and talking.

KALI
Stop being so dry, you big table of—
P20CLOSE.

Saltbrand catches the black-glass blade in his gloved hand. White fire runs up the sickle like water running uphill, and onto Kali's left hand.

P21CLOSE, Kali's arm.

Her hand goes white. Her wrist. Her forearm. The white climbs to her elbow, crusting and crackling, and then the whole forearm crumbles into salt and pours onto the burning slipway.

krrrsssshhh
KALI
AAAAAAAHH—
PAGE 8
P22CLOSE, Kali

staggering back, clutching a stump just below the elbow, crusted white. She's still grinning, but the grin shakes.

KALI
Ow. Ow ow ow. Okay. Okay, that's fine.
KALI
It'll grow back. It always grows back.
P23CLOSE, Smurjan's third eye.

The thin crimson line across it blazes. Wrath.

P24IMPACT.

One strike, perfectly placed, into the deepest crack in Saltbrand's left shoulder. The whole shoulder of salt shears off and shatters on the iron. Saltbrand staggers back up the gangplank for the first time.

KRAKK
SMURJAN
Kali. Inside. Now.

Kali pours back into the shadow, holding her stump.

PAGE 9
P25WIDE, the hull.

The fire has climbed the Marka's flank from the keel almost to the rail. Drekk, Kompis and a line of trolls throw buckets of fjord water onto it from the shallows.

P26ACTION.

Every bucket makes it worse. The white flames leap up, roaring, fed.

KOMPIS
Why is it getting bigger?!
ULLAstumping down the cliff path, staff in hand
STOP! Not the sea! It eats the salt in it!
P27CLOSE, Trollmage

on the slipway beside the hull, both hands up and empty. Not a single violet spark.

TROLLMAGE
I can't. I've got nothing. The howl ate all of it.
TROLLMAGE
I've got nothing.
P28CUT: THE CLIFF. The ledge above the shipyard.

Vigolas reaches the troll children, a dozen of them huddled against the rock, and plants himself in front of them, fists up. Hrafnkell is crouched on a boulder just above, calmly watching him.

P29MID.
HRAFNKELL
You came up. Not away. Toward the small ones.
VIGOLAS
Come down here and I'll show you what else I do.
HRAFNKELL
Not today. I'm not here to beat you yet, Captain. I'm here to learn how you run.
P30ACTION.

Vigolas's lightning-punch smashes the boulder to gravel. Hrafnkell is already gone: off the cliff edge, down through the steam, back toward the Tally. A troll child tugs Vigolas's coat and points down at the shipyard.

TROLL CHILD
Grandmother.
PAGE 10
P31CLOSE, Ulla

at the foot of the slipway. She bends down, slowly, cups a little water from the shallows where the white fire has already passed over and moved on, and tastes it.

P32CLOSE, Ulla.
ULLA
…Sweet.
ULLA
It's burned the salt out of the water. Behind the fire, the fjord's gone sweet.
P33WIDE, the slipway.

The launching ropes are burning through. The cradle under the keel is burning. The fire is eating up the flank toward the deck.

ULLA
Get her into the sweet water, and it drowns. Knock out the last wedges!
DREKK
She'll burn all the way down the slipway!
ULLA
No. She won't.
PAGE 11
P34MID.

Ulla drops her staff. It clatters on the stones.

P35WIDE.

She walks into the white fire on the slipway, slow and heavy, the way trolls walk, and stops against the burning flank of the ship. Then she spreads her great stone arms wide across the hull, presses her whole body against the burning bark, and holds it like a child.

P36CLOSE.

The white flames leave the bark. They crawl, hungry, into her stone. Where they bite her, her grey skin goes white.

ULLA
Trolls. PUSH.
PAGE 12
P37ACTION.

The trolls throw their shoulders against the stern: twenty trolls the size of houses, roaring. The last wedges fly out.

TOK — TOK — KRRRRRRRK
P38CLOSE, Trollmage

running for her, and Rougeina catching him round the waist and hauling him back.

TROLLMAGE
GRANDMOTHER—
ROUGEINA
You'll burn!
ULLAnot looking round
Stone doesn't burn, boy.
P39CLOSE, Ulla's arm against the hull.

It does burn. White cracks spread across the grey stone like frost across a window.

PAGE 13
P40ACTION.

On the gangplank, Saltbrand, one-shouldered now, raises the branding iron toward Ulla's back.

P41ACTION.

Smurjan is in front of her. Not touching the fire, never touching it: his third eye reads every flame, and his hands strike only in the spaces between them. He knocks the branding iron aside, again, and again.

KALIfrom inside, frantic
Don't you dare die in that! We don't come back from that!
SMURJAN
Then I won't die.
PAGES 14–15 — SPLASH (double page)
P42SPLASH. THE LAUNCH.

The Marka slides. Down the burning slipway she goes, faster and faster, twenty trolls behind her roaring, smoke and steam pouring off her, white fire streaming from the slipway timbers.

And pressed against her flank, walking with her, step for step, is Grandmother Ulla: arms spread wide across the hull, cheek against the bark, the white fire pouring over her stone back and shoulders like a waterfall, her skin turning white and cracking, and she does not let go.

Ahead of them the sweet water of the fjord. The bell at the bow swings and rings.

DONNNNG — DONNNNG
PAGE 16
P43IMPACT.

The Marka hits the water. A wall of sweet fjord water explodes up over the bow and comes crashing down across the slipway, across the burning flank, across Saltbrand.

SPLOOOOOOSSH
P44CLOSE, Saltbrand.

The water hits him and his salt hisses and melts. His remaining arm runs like wet sugar. He screams, a dry, cracked scream, and scrambles back up his gangplank onto the Tally's iron plate. His face twists with pain, and his eyes stay bone-dry. Salt flakes from the corners where tears should be.

P45CLOSE, the Marka's flank, afloat.

The white fire on the hull drowns. A long scar of dead, white bark remains, and in the middle of it two patches of living gold glow untouched, in the shape of two great hands and two spread arms.

PAGE 17
P46WIDE, the foot of the slipway.

Ulla is still standing where the ship left her, arms still half-spread around the hull that's gone. Her stone is white all the way through now, cracked everywhere. Trollmage reaches her and takes her hand. It's like holding a hand of chalk.

P47CLOSE, Ulla

looking down at him. Slow, deep, the kindness still carved in her face.

ULLA
Your great-great-grandmother would be so angry how lazy you are.
P48CLOSE, Trollmage.

He can't speak.

P49CLOSE, Ulla.
ULLA
…And so proud.
PAGE 18 — THE HOOK
P50WIDE.

She goes still. A statue of white salt on the slipway, arms open. On the cliffs, in silence, every troll bows to her, and then, one by one, to the half-elf holding her hand.

P51MID.

Vigolas comes down the last of the cliff path at a run, a troll child on his hip, and stops. Too late. He looks at the statue and then at Trollmage, and says nothing. There's nothing to say.

P52MID, the Marka's deck, drifting in the sweet water.

Kali sits half out of Smurjan's shadow at the stern rail, staring at her stump. The salt crust over it is dry. Nothing has changed.

KALIquietly
…It always grows back.
P53FINAL PANEL, low angle, the deck.

Smurjan's three shadows lie across the planks in the evening light. One of them, Kali's, ends in a stump below the elbow.

SMURJANvery quietly
This one can make us stay dead.
END OF CHAPTER 31

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