SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga V · The Current · Arc 5 · Tidekant

Chapter 280

Storm-Answer
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, dawn, the lake.

Old Pike far out on glassy water, Njord at the oars, Vigolas in the bow with his sleeves rolled up. Mingus swimming after them with his head up, Njord slowing to pull him aboard and hand him a strip of cod.

P2CLOSE, Njord

shipping the oars, lifting the tide-rod, picking at the first knot with a thick fingernail.

NJORD
…Yesterday's squall. · I caught it for tomorrow. · · Tomorrow's come early. · Stand up, lad.
PAGE 2
P3ACTION.

The knot untying, SNIK, and out of the rod, pouring up into the clear dawn sky, a squall: a little black storm the size of a barn, rain under it, wind round it, grumbling, no captain in it. Just weather.

SNIK — FWOOOOOM
P4CLOSE, Vigolas

grinning, cracking his knuckles, lightning blazing up his arms.

VIGOLAS
…Right. · Listen to it. · Got it.
NJORD
…You haven't.
PAGE 3
P5ACTION.

Vigolas throwing an Emerald Knuckle straight up at the middle of the squall. The lightning swallowed, turning grey, and the squall swelling, bigger, louder, raining harder on Old Pike.

KRA-KOOM — (then) rrrrRRRRMMMM
P6CLOSE, Vigolas

soaked, staring up.

VIGOLAS
…It ate it again.
NJORDdrily, rain pouring off his beard
…You told it where to go. · Storms don't take orders, lad. · You of all people should know a thing that doesn't take orders.
PAGE 4
P7A RUN OF SMALL PANELS, the morning going by.

Vigolas throwing at the squall's edge. Swallowed. Bigger.

Vigolas throwing at the water under it. The lake sizzles. The squall laughs (it doesn't, but it looks like it).

Vigolas throwing harder. Swallowed. Much bigger.

Vigolas sitting down in the bottom of Old Pike, soaked, sulking, Mingus licking rain off his face.

VIGOLAS
…I hate weather.
P8CLOSE, Njord

untouched by any of it, pipe lit somehow under the rain, fishing.

NJORD
…You're still telling it. · Shut up. · Listen.
PAGE 5
P9WIDE, the shore.

Krydog drilling the Up-Again crew on the beach in the rain: getting up, getting up, getting up. And Flexsnus, leaning against a net-rack under a tarp, not drilling, watching Old Pike far out on the lake. Listening to the fisher-folk.

FISHERWOMANto her neighbour
…Njord says the squall-season comes in on the new moon. · Always has. · Storms keep a calendar, you know.
P10CLOSE, Flexsnus

tapping the tin lid thoughtfully against his teeth.

FLEXSNUSto himself
…A calendar. · Hm. · · Everything's got a schedule.
PAGE 6
P11WIDE, noon, the lake.

Old Pike rowing back in. Kompis on the dock, waiting, Ivar on his hip.

KOMPIS
…Any luck?
VIGOLASclimbing out, dripping
…It won't listen.
NJORD
…He won't.
P12CLOSE, Kompis

looking at Vigolas with his eyes going gold, at the grey-white thread running from his friend's heart out across the lake toward the storm-wall.

KOMPIS
…Vigo. · That thread. · The one to him. · I can pull it.
PAGE 7
P13CLOSE, Kompis

explaining, his fingers hovering at the thread only he can see.

KOMPIS
…Thread-Pull. · I pull a thread and you feel the other end. · Like waking someone with their mother's thread. · · If I pull this one… you'll feel what the storm feels. · Where it wants to go.
VIGOLAS
…Will it hurt?
KOMPIS
…Probably.
VIGOLAS
…Do it.
P14CLOSE, Njord

looking at the two of them, nodding slowly.

NJORD
…The family's ears. · I said.
PAGE 8
P15WIDE, afternoon.

Old Pike out on the lake again, three in her now: Njord at the oars, Vigolas in the bow, Kompis behind him with two fingers resting on something in the air. The second knot untying, SNIK, a fresh squall pouring up into the sky.

P16CLOSE, Kompis's fingers

closing on the grey-white thread, and pulling.

KOMPIS
…Now.
PAGES 9–10 — SPLASH
P17SPLASH (double page). LISTEN.

Vigolas in the bow of a little skiff under a black squall, eyes closed, head tilted back. And the whole sky over him drawn the way he is feeling it now: not a cloud but a current, lines of pressure and charge, the whole squall leaning, every part of it straining one way, toward one place: an old cairn of stones on a rock at the lake's edge, the highest point for a mile. A path in the sky, already drawn, waiting for a bolt to walk it.

Behind him, Kompis with a nosebleed, holding the thread. Njord at the oars, watching, very still.

VIGOLASeyes closed, barely audible
…Oh. · It wants the rock. · It's always wanted the rock.
PAGE 11
P18CLOSE, Vigolas's fist

the green lightning gathering, but not wound up, not aimed: just held. Waiting. His eyes still closed.

NJORDvery quietly
…Don't throw it. · Go with it.
P19ACTION.

Vigolas opening his hand toward the cairn, and the green lightning leaving it, not thrown, released, and in the same instant the squall's own grey-white bolt dropping out of the cloud toward the same rock, the two meeting on the path that was already there: grey and green braiding into one bolt.

—
PAGE 12
P20ACTION, full width.

The bolt hitting the cairn, and the rock splitting clean in two from top to waterline, stones flying a hundred metres, the lake round it boiling white. Twice as hard as anything he has ever thrown.

KRRRRAAAA-THOOOOOOOOM
P21CLOSE, the squall above

empty: its lightning spent, raining itself out gently over the lake, smaller and smaller, until it's just a shower. Gone.

PAGE 13
P22CLOSE, Vigolas

opening his eyes, staring at the split rock smoking at the lake's edge. His hand still open.

VIGOLASbarely audible
…I didn't even throw it.
NJORD
…No. · You answered it.
P23CLOSE, Kompis

wiping a nosebleed on his sleeve, letting go of the thread, grinning.

KOMPIS
…Twice as hard.
VIGOLASa slow huge grin
…Twice as hard.
PAGE 14
P24CLOSE, Njord's rod.

Where the second knot was, the cord frayed: limp, split, the fibres sticking out like hair. Not a knot any more, and never going to be.

NJORDtouching it
…Teaching it costs. · That bit of cord'll never hold weather again. · · Six knots now. · Worth it.
P25CLOSE, Vigolas

sobering, looking at the frayed cord.

VIGOLAS
…You didn't say it'd cost you.
NJORD
…You didn't ask. · · You were going to.
PAGE 15
P26WIDE, dusk, the dock.

Both crews cheering Old Pike in: word has got round. The split rock still smoking on the far shore. Tihi doing cartwheels. Krydog shouting "TWICE AS HARD!" as if he did it himself. Sill signing furiously at Vigolas: [SHOW ME AGAIN].

P27CLOSE, Flexsnus

still under his tarp, watching Njord climb out of the boat. Turning the tin over in his long fingers.

FLEXSNUSto Levla, beside him
…Old man can only catch what hasn't formed, right?
LEVLA
…That's what he says.
FLEXSNUS
…Hm.
PAGE 16
P28CLOSE, Njord

halfway up the dock, mid-sentence to Sill, his pipe in his hand. And stopping. His head turning toward the lake, toward the storm-wall. His eyes starting to move like water.

P29THE SKY OVER THE LAKE

tonight's stars, and over them, faint as a watermark, not three days off: one night off. The flagship storm, enormous, already starting to turn in on itself, coiling, its sails filling. Forming.

NJORDa whisper
…No. · No, no— · He said three days—
PAGE 17 — THE HOOK
P30CLOSE, Njord

going grey under his salt beard, the pipe dropping from his fingers onto the dock.

NJORD
…The flagship's storm. · It's forming now. · It'll break over Tidekant at dawn.
VIGOLAS
…Then knot it!
P31FINAL PANEL, close on Njord

an old man with six knots on his rod and nothing he can do with them.

NJORD
…I can only catch what hasn't formed, lad. · · By the time I can reach it… · it'll already be.
END OF CHAPTER 280

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