SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga V · The Current · Arc 5 · Tidekant

Chapter 281

A Little Later
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, night, Tidekant.

The village awake: lamps in every window, fisher-folk hauling boats up the beach, children being carried up to the hill. Out on the lake, under the stars, the storm-wall, and in front of it, a black mass turning in on itself, slowly coiling, like a fist closing.

P2CLOSE, the dock.

Both crews round Njord, who sits on a barrel with his rod across his knees, staring at it.

DREKK
…How big?
NJORD
…Big enough. · He's not coming himself. · He's sending that first. · At first light it breaks, and the lake comes up over the village like a hand.
PAGE 2
P3CLOSE, Vigolas

fists crackling.

VIGOLAS
…Then I'll answer it.
NJORD
…There's nothing to answer, lad. · It's not lightning. · It's a wave. · A wave as wide as the lake. · You can't split water with a bolt.
P4CLOSE, Isa

a beat late.

ISA
…I can hold it.
NJORDreading Sill's hands, gently
…For how long, lass?
ISAa beat late, quieter
…Two minutes.
NJORD
…And then?
PAGE 3
P5WIDE.

Silence on the dock. Everyone looking at the coiling black thing on the lake. Nobody with an answer. Levla, Kompis, Rougeina, Krydog, all of them.

P6CLOSE, a pair of boots

coming down the dock at an easy stroll. And a voice, slow, amused, slightly thick on one side.

FLEXSNUSoff-panel
…What time, did you say?
PAGE 4
P7CLOSE, Flexsnus

leaning against a piling at an angle that shouldn't hold, the battered tin in one hand, the lazy half-smile.

FLEXSNUS
…The storm. · When does it form, friend?
NJORD
…First light. · The moment the sun clears the hills.
FLEXSNUS
…And you can catch it if it hasn't formed.
NJORD
…If I had an hour before it formed. · Aye.
P8CLOSE, Flexsnus

flicking the tin open. Inside the lid, scratched with a pin, nine little lines. Four struck through (paid). One still open: MOUTH, 1 NOTCH. DUE: ?. Four empty.

FLEXSNUS
…Storms keep a calendar. · The fishwives said so. · · Everything's got a schedule, friend. · Even a storm.
PAGE 5
P9CLOSE, Krydog

stepping up beside him, very quiet.

KRYDOG
…Flex. · That's the sky.
FLEXSNUS
…I know, captain.
KRYDOG
…You sure?
FLEXSNUSthe half-smile
…I'm never sure. · That's why it works.
P10CLOSE, Levla

beside them, looking at Flexsnus the way he looked at him on Lumen's beach. Softly.

LEVLA
…You're going to get rained on, aren't you, Flexi.
FLEXSNUS
…Probably, mate. · Probably.
PAGE 6
P11WIDE, before dawn.

The sky over the hills going grey. On the lake, the black mass almost closed: coiled tight, sails of cloud filling, lightning beginning to crawl in its belly. Njord in Old Pike, already rowing out toward it, Sill in the bow, the rod across his knees.

P12CLOSE, the end of the dock.

Flexsnus walking out to the very end of it. And then doing something nobody on either crew has ever seen him do: standing up straight. No lean. Feet planted. The tin in his left hand.

TIHIfrom the beach, whispering, awed
…He's standing.
PAGE 7
P13CLOSE, Flexsnus's thumb on the tin lid.
tk. · tk. · tk.
FLEXSNUSquietly, naming it
…The rule: a storm forms at first light.
P14CLOSE, Flexsnus's eyes

an emerald glint catching at the corner of one, like light finding a notch.

FLEXSNUS
…Hm. · · There's the give.
PAGES 8–9 — SPLASH
P15SPLASH (double page). ONE NOTCH.

Dawn over Heartbeat's great lake. The sun's rim about to clear the hills. Over the lake, the colossal coiled black storm, filling, lightning in its belly, on the very edge of breaking.

And across the whole sky, from horizon to horizon, a thin emerald ruled line, straight as a ledger rule, drawn right along the edge of the dawn. Made visible.

At the end of the dock, a long thin man standing straight for once, his right hand raised, finger and thumb pinching the line where it crosses the sun's rim, and kinking it one notch.

The sun, rising behind the hills, pausing. A little. The storm, a breath from bursting, stalling, as if somebody had told it it was early.

knk.
FLEXSNUS
…A little later.
PAGE 10
P16CLOSE, the storm

still coiled, still unformed, sails full and not filling, lightning crawling and not striking. Waiting. A weather-front that has just been told, very politely, that its appointment has been moved.

P17CLOSE, Njord in Old Pike

right under it now, staring up, his eyes moving like water, and the faint watermark over the storm changing: first light sliding one notch along to an hour after.

NJORDbarely a breath
…It's not formed. · It's not formed.
PAGE 11
P18ACTION.

Njord on his feet in the skiff, the rod raised high, his big fingers on the cord, and tying: a fisherman's knot, slow, careful, the best knot of his life, while the biggest storm he has ever heard hangs over his head.

SILLsigning, frantic, both hands
[FASTER GRANDPA FASTER]
NJORDnot looking
…Knots aren't fast, lass. · They're right.
P19ACTION.

The whole coiled storm pouring down out of the sky into the cord, a black funnel twisting down onto the rod, smaller and smaller, squeezed into one hard dark knot that whines like a kettle.

SSSSSSSNNNNNNK.
PAGE 12
P20WIDE, the lake.

Empty sky. Clear. The sun clearing the hills, an hour late, gold across the lake. No storm. And far out, the storm-wall, and one small skiff with an old man holding up a rod with one very dark knot on it.

P21CLOSE, the dock.

Both crews and the whole village erupting: cheering, Tihi screaming, Krydog throwing Roffe in the lake, Sill standing up in Old Pike waving both arms.

KRYDOG
…FLEX! FLEX! FLEX!
PAGE 13
P22CLOSE, Flexsnus

at the end of the dock, letting out a long breath, and leaning again, against nothing, at his usual impossible angle. Lazy half-smile back.

FLEXSNUS
…Told you. · Schedules.
P23CLOSE, the corner of the panel.

A tiny emerald notch-icon appearing.

pling.
PAGE 14
P24CLOSE, Flexsnus.

Directly over his head, about a metre up, a tiny raincloud the size of a hat, appearing out of nowhere. Grey. Grumpy. And raining on him. Only on him.

pitter pitter pitter pitter
P25CLOSE, Flexsnus

soaked in two seconds, slick hair plastered down, the pinch in his lip going soggy, looking up at it with deep, resigned affection.

FLEXSNUS
…There it is. · The bend-back. · · Seven days, probably.
LEVLAlaughing so hard he's crying
…Worth it?
FLEXSNUS
…Worth it, mate.
PAGE 15
P26CLOSE, Flexsnus

scratching a new line inside the tin lid with a pin, under his little raincloud: STORM, 1 NOTCH. DUE: 7 DAYS RAIN (paid in advance).

FLEXSNUS
…Two open. · Plenty of room.
P27CLOSE, Vigolas

wading out onto the dock to him, wet from Krydog's celebrations, holding out a hand.

VIGOLAS
…That was the sky, Flexsnus.
FLEXSNUSshaking it, rain dripping off both of them
…One notch of it, captain. · · I'll send you the bill.
VIGOLAS
…Bill?
PAGE 16
P28WIDE, mid-morning.

Old Pike coming back in, Njord at the oars, the rod across the thwart with its very dark knot whining softly. Mingus swimming out to meet them. Njord pulling the dog aboard one-handed.

P29CLOSE, Njord

climbing up onto the dock, stopping in front of Flexsnus under his raincloud. Looking at him a long time. Then holding out his huge hand.

NJORD
…Forty years I've wanted one more hour. · · Thank you, lad.
FLEXSNUStaking it, rain dripping
…Anytime, friend. · Well. · Not any time. · Seven days from now, maybe.
PAGE 17 — THE HOOK
P30WIDE, the lake, noon.

And out at the storm-wall, the whole wall moving. Breaking open. Storm after storm after storm pouring out of it, sails of thunderhead filling the horizon: the whole Storm Fleet. And at its head, bigger than all of them, black as tar, hail falling in a white curtain: the flagship.

P31FINAL PANEL, close on Hagel's face

forming in the front of the flagship storm, lightning eyes blazing, hail-beard streaming, enraged.

HAGEL
…You stole my storm. · · THEN I'LL BRING IT MYSELF!
END OF CHAPTER 281

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.