SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga V · The Current · Arc 8 · The Deep

Chapter 319

The Witness Wood
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, inside the Wood.

The lashed ships gliding slowly up the grey river between pale leafless trees, the chalk join between them, Mingus asleep on his bed in the middle of it. The trunks rising on both banks, grey as old bark, branches meeting overhead like the lines on an open palm. Moss on every root, grey-green, dry, though mist lies on it. No birds. No wind. The sails hanging slack and the ships moving anyway, upstream, against a current too slow to feel, as if the Wood were drawing them in like a breath. Far ahead, through the bare branches, the grey still pouring down out of the sky beyond the Wood.

(No SFX anywhere in the Wood. Nothing here makes a sound that isn't spoken.)

P2CLOSE, Smurjan

at the Marka's rail, three eyes wide, and Kali leaning out of his shoulder to whisper in his ear.

KALIwhispering
…Why is everyone whispering?
SMURJANwhispering
…We don't know.
BAKASURAa vast shadow-jaw rising behind them, white streak and all, very softly
…Shh.
PAGE 2
P3CLOSE, Tihi

on the Upp Igen's rail, deaf since the tree, the only soul on either ship not bothered by the silence. Her balloon drawn hollow, the letters outlined and empty, and huge:

TIHI
…IS IT ME OR IS IT REALLY QUIET IN HERE?
EVERYONE ON BOTH SHIPSwhispering, all at once, little balloons
…Shh!

(Tihi reads it off twenty mouths at once and grins enormously.)

P4CLOSE, Daniel

at the Upp Igen's bow, and something gone out of his face that is always in it: the tiredness. He looks like a man who has slept for a week. Emma looking at him sideways.

EMMA
…You look rested.
DANIELlooking ahead at the trees, puzzled
…I've never been here. · · It feels like I've been here every day of my life.
PAGE 3
P5CLOSE, the moss of the bank

sliding past. Footprints, pressing into it one after another, walking down to the water's edge, with nobody making them. Bare feet, booted feet, small feet, a dog's paws. And others coming the other way, up out of the shallows into the trees, the moss dimpling under weight that isn't there.

P6CLOSE, Kompis

eyes gold, a hand on Mingus's sleeping back. Threads: thousands of them, faint as cobweb, passing through the Wood in both directions, in and out among the trees, like a crowd crossing a square.

KOMPISbarely a breath
…Every one of them's somebody. · · Going. · Coming back.
HEDDAon the Marka's rail with Vante, whispering
…Are those ghosts?
OLD STINAwhispering
…Hush. · They're walking. · Let them walk.
PAGE 4
P7CLOSE, the chalk join.

Both captains propped up against Mingus's bed, side by side, unable to lift their arms. Roffe kneeling in front of them with a bowl of broth and a spoon.

ROFFE
…Open.

(Krydog opens. Spoon.)

ROFFE
…Open.

(Vigolas opens. Spoon.)

LEVLAwatching from the Marka's rail, whispering
…That is the least dignified thing I have ever seen. · And I've owned a planet.
P8CLOSE, Isa

watching the footprints on the bank. Answering a question nobody asked yet, a beat late:

ISAwhispering
…They're early.
SVALA
…What are?
ISA
…The footprints. · · They get here before the people do.
PAGE 5
P9WIDE.

The river bending round a clearing: a wide flat bank of grey moss in a ring of pale trees, mist lying on it like a sheet. In the middle of it, a stump. And on the stump, small and upright, knees together, a book open across them: an old woman. Writing.

P10CLOSE, Vigolas

on the join, sitting up with an effort that makes him go grey. Staring at her.

VIGOLAS
…Her.
KOMPIS
…You know her?
VIGOLAS
…First face I ever saw. · · In this life.
PAGE 6
P11WIDE, the bank.

Drekk easing the lashed ships in against the moss. The crews stepping ashore one by one onto ground that gives like a carpet and makes no sound: Kompis with Vigolas's arm over his shoulders, Roffe with Krydog's, the rest behind, every one of them treading as if in a house where someone is asleep.

P12CLOSE, Mingus

on his bed on the join, awake now, chin on his paws, ears up, looking at the trees. Not getting up. Kompis, half over the rail, looking back at him.

KOMPISwhispering
…Come on, boy.

(Mingus doesn't move. His tail stirs once on the chalk.)

KOMPIS
…Okay. · Stay.
OLD STINAat the rail behind the dog, Hedda and Vante peering round her shawls
…Not us, either, son. · That's no place for the living to go walking.
PAGES 7–8 — SPLASH
P13SPLASH (double page). THE WITNESS WOOD.

The clearing, wide and grey. A ring of pale leafless trees with branches like the lines on a hand. Moss, mist, nothing moving. And across the moss from every direction, out of the trees, footprints arriving: hundreds of them, pressing into the grey one after another, all walking toward the stump in the middle, and from the stump, footprints walking away, down to the river, into the water, gone.

On the stump, very small in all that grey: Fenna. A slight old woman in a plain grey coat, long, unbuttoned, the grey of the bark. White hair in one loose braid over her left shoulder, tied with a strip of dark cloth. Bare feet on the moss that leave no prints. Milk-pale eyes on the open book of worth across her knees: columns of names, a mark beside each, a margin of tiny tallies. Her pen moving. Not looking up.

And coming into the clearing from the river side, tiny, quiet, staring: two crews. A pirate at the front with his arm over a fisherman's shoulders. A captain in a patchwork coat leaning on a cook.

PAGE 9
P14CLOSE, Vigolas

stopping in front of the stump, Kompis holding him up. Looking down at the small old woman. His voice coming out much smaller than he means it to.

VIGOLAS
…Hello.

(She writes.)

P15CLOSE, Fenna

her pen still moving. Her balloon small and pale and plain, sitting a little lower than it should, as if it were heard rather than spoken:

FENNA
…Name.
VIGOLASthe ghost of a grin
…You know my name.
FENNA
…I know your entry.
PAGE 10
P16CLOSE, the book

turned very slightly toward him, the way she always turns it toward the soul it's about, so that we see the page at a slant: a line of ink in a column, and where a rank should sit, ink that won't settle, numerals sliding and glitching gold on the paper like his plate does in the air. No number readable.

FENNA
…Your entry has been edited. · Seven times. · · Then once more.
VIGOLAS
…By who?
FENNA
…Not by me.
P17CLOSE, Vigolas

a long breath.

VIGOLAS
…You said that the first day. · Soaked. · Barefoot.
FENNA
…I say it every time you come through.
VIGOLAS
…I don't remember the other times.
FENNA
…No. · Nobody does.
PAGE 11
P18A RUN OF SMALL PANELS.

Fenna's eyes moving from one of them to the next, never to their faces, always to whatever is being counted, and her pen writing one line for each. We see the eyes and the moving pen. We never see a number. Her hand, the angle, the edge of the panel always over it.

Kompis's big careful hands, and the gold knot on his wrist.

Krydog's chest, where a heart beats twice.

Roffe's belly, always empty.

Jeppson's fingers, beginning to tremble.

Öde's arms, inked with a hundred and eleven names.

Smurjan's three shadows on the moss, and a faint fourth.

Isa's bare feet, perfectly still.

Ysel, where her shadow isn't.

Levla's empty hands.

P19CLOSE, Krydog and Kali

both leaning in at once, trying to see the page.

KRYDOGwhispering
…What'd I get?

(She writes.)

KALI
…What did I get? · What did I GET?

(She writes.)

BAKASURA
…Mm.
LEVLAeyes coin-gold, trying to Appraise the book and blinking
…I can't price it. · · First time in my life I can't even see the paper.
PAGE 12
P20CLOSE, Fenna's pen

at Krydog's line, pausing. One beat. Her head tilting a fraction, the way someone tilts their head when they're listening for a sound that should be there and isn't. Then writing on.

(Behind Krydog, Kompis, gold-eyed, looking at the one thread on the big man that has always ended in nothing. Saying nothing. He's said nothing for a whole saga.)

P21CLOSE, Daniel

stepping up to the stump, neat and formal, one hand behind his back, like a clerk at a counter.

DANIEL
…Ma'am. · Forgive me. · · Are you a true witness?
FENNA
…Yes.
DANIELa small bow
…Thank you. · That's all.

(He steps back. Emma looks at him. He doesn't explain. He looks like a man who has just put something very carefully into a very safe drawer.)

PAGE 13
P22CLOSE, Rougeina

stepping up last, barefoot on the moss, her crimson hair ragged at the jaw, eight thin blades crossed in an X on her back. She doesn't crouch. She stands very straight.

ROUGEINA
…You write everyone down.
FENNA
…Everyone.
ROUGEINA
…Then you've got mine. · · The ones I killed. · Eight.
P23CLOSE, Fenna's hands

turning pages, back and back, a long way back. Stopping. On the page: eight lines in her own small exact hand. And her milk-pale eyes on them, and the words sliding off her eyes like water off glass. She looks, and looks, and can't hold on.

FENNA
…There's something here. · In my hand. · · I can't read it.
ROUGEINA
…Their names are—
FENNA
…Don't. · · I can't keep them. · You'd only be handing them to someone who'll drop them.
PAGE 14
P24CLOSE, Rougeina

very still. Very quiet.

ROUGEINA
…Then nobody remembers them but me.
KOMPISat her shoulder, without being asked
…And me.
P25CLOSE, Fenna

lifting her eyes from the page for the first time: not to their faces. To the space between them, where something is being counted that no one else can see. And her face changing, very slightly. Draw it as an event: the smallest movement of an old mouth, the kind of change that face has made perhaps three times since there were faces.

(She looks down again and writes something in the margin. Small. We don't see what.)

ROUGEINA
…What did you write?

(Fenna turns the page.)

PAGE 15
P26CLOSE, Tihi

who has wandered up while nobody was looking and sat down cross-legged on the moss right in front of the stump, deaf, chin in her hands, simply staring up at the old woman's face to read it. Then lifting her small hands and signing, slowly, carefully:

TIHIsigning
[Hello.]
P27CLOSE, Fenna

her pen stopping. And, without looking up from the book, lifting her own free hand off the page, small and exact, and signing back:

FENNAsigning
[Hello.]

(Tihi's mouth falling open. Her rose dimple-marks lighting up. The biggest silent grin in the history of either ship. Behind her, Kompis blinking.)

PAGE 16
P28CLOSE, Vigolas

still on Kompis's shoulder, steadier now.

VIGOLAS
…We're going to Thanatos.
FENNAwriting
…I know.
VIGOLAS
…Jorvand's there. · · Is there anything you can tell us?
FENNA
…I don't tell. · I write.
P29CLOSE, Krydog

turning to go, leaning on Roffe, and stopping, looking down at the moss beside the stump. Old footprints. Set deep, long, a tall man's, the toes turned in toward the stump, close, the way a man stands who has stood in one place for a very long time reading over someone's shoulder. And in each print, dried into the moss, a drop of ink.

KRYDOGwhispering
…Somebody stood here a long while.
PAGE 17 — THE HOOK
P30CLOSE, the moss beside the old prints.

And a new footprint, pressing into it now, fresh, slow, a tall man's, as the crews watch. Then another, going past the stump toward the far side of the clearing, toward the river and the way on. Nobody making them. In the first one, a small black drop, still wet.

P31FINAL PANEL, close on Fenna.

Still not looking up. Her pen still moving. But her head turning, very slightly, toward the edge of the panel, toward someone the reader can't see.

FENNA
…You again.
END OF CHAPTER 319

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.