SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga V · The Current · Arc 8 · The Deep

Chapter 320

The Law
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, the clearing.

The fresh footprints walking away across the grey moss, slow, long, toward the far trees and the river beyond, a drop of ink in every third one. Both crews watching them go. Nobody whispering now. Nobody saying anything at all.

P2CLOSE, Vigolas

Kompis's shoulder under his arm, staring after the prints.

VIGOLAS
…He's ahead of us.
FENNAwriting, not looking up, her balloon small and pale and low
…He always is. · · He comes through. · He stands there. · He reads. · · He never asks.
PAGE 2
P3CLOSE, Rougeina

cold.

ROUGEINA
…And you let him.
FENNA
…I don't let. · · I don't stop.
P4CLOSE, Vigolas

a long look at the small old woman on the stump who has never once looked him in the face.

VIGOLAS
…Then what are you?

(Her pen stops. A long beat. She doesn't look up.)

FENNA
…You've never asked me that.
VIGOLAS
…I was busy. · I'd just drowned.
PAGE 3
P5CLOSE, Fenna

her pen lifting off the page. Her milk-pale eyes still on the book. Her voice exactly as flat and quiet as before, the voice of someone reading a chart to the patient whose chart it is.

FENNA
…I witness.
P6CLOSE, Fenna.
FENNA
…Every soul. · · When they go. · · And when they come back.
PAGE 4
P7CLOSE, Fenna's hand

on the open book, turning one page. Columns of names, a mark beside each, and in the margin small tallies in the same exact hand.

FENNA
…Their last beat reaches me. · Wherever it stops. · · They come through here. · I write what they were worth. · Then they go on, and rest.

·

FENNA
…And when it's time, they come back the other way. · · I write that too.
P8CLOSE, Kompis

eyes gold. Seeing it now: the thousands of faint threads crossing the Wood in both directions, and every one of them, going or coming, passing the stump, brushing the open book like a hand brushing a doorframe on the way through.

KOMPISvery quietly
…They all go through her.
PAGE 5
P9CLOSE, Daniel

a step forward, one hand behind his back. The judge. Precise.

DANIEL
…Ma'am. · If a soul came through, and nobody witnessed it—
FENNA
…Everyone is witnessed.
DANIEL
…If.
P10CLOSE, Fenna

her pen quite still on the page. For the first time, a pause before she answers.

FENNA
…Then it has nowhere to come back to.
PAGE 6
P11CLOSE, Daniel

absolutely still, the way he goes when he's heard a law that he didn't know existed and knows at once is older than all the others.

DANIELbarely audible
…Say it the whole way. · · Please.
P12CLOSE, Fenna

lifting her head a fraction. Not to look at anyone. Toward the trees, toward the faint crowd only Kompis can see.

PAGES 7–8 — SPLASH
P13SPLASH (double page). THE WITNESS.

The Witness Wood as it is, for one panel: the ring of pale trees, the mist, and filling the whole clearing, faint as breath on glass, souls. Thousands. Going one way, grey and slow, out of the trees toward the river and the rest beyond, an old sailor, a child, a soldier, a woman with a basket. Coming the other way, up out of the river into colour, walking toward the world, a little brighter with every step. Every one of them passing the stump. Every one of them, as they pass, written: a line of fine ink rising off the open book like a thread and touching them, once, on the way through.

And on the stump, small and upright, not looking at any of them, the old woman with the pen.

FENNA
…A soul that no one witnesses cannot re-enter the world.
PAGE 9
P14CLOSE, Vigolas

looking at the book. Not at her. At the book.

VIGOLAS
…You saw him. · Jorvand. · · Every time.
FENNA
…Every one.
P15CLOSE, the book

Fenna turning back through it, far back, a page for every edit, from across three hundred years, the ink on each a different age: brown, black, faded blue, iron-grey. On each, the same line, and on each, one long, patient black stroke through the rank, and beside it a correction in a smaller, gentler hand.

FENNA
…I wrote them down. · · Every edit. · · Every life.
VIGOLAS
…And you didn't stop him.
FENNA
…I don't stop. · I witness.
PAGE 10
P16CLOSE, Vigolas

a long breath. And no anger in it. A man who stood on the edge of a burning branch a few weeks ago and called thirty-one dead men by name because he'd kept every one.

VIGOLAS
…That's a lousy job.
FENNA
…It's the only one there is.
VIGOLAS
… · You kept them, though. · · Every one.
FENNA
…Yes.
VIGOLASthe ghost of the grin
…Greedy.
FENNA
…No. · · Exact.
P17CLOSE, Kompis

looking at her with that warm, unhurried, dangerous gentleness of his. The spy who can't stop asking true questions.

KOMPIS
…Who witnesses you?

(Fenna doesn't answer. Her pen moves. And she smiles: very faintly, at nothing, at the page, at the mist, the way she smiled at nothing the night the sky first wrote a sentence. It isn't for him. It isn't for anyone in the clearing.)

PAGE 11
P18CLOSE, Daniel

working it out aloud, step by step, the way he builds an appeal.

DANIEL
…If the grey takes Thanatos— · —the dead resting there are uncounted.
FENNA
…Yes.
DANIEL
…And what the grey takes— · —never comes here.
FENNA
…No. · · There's no last beat to hear. · No name to write. · · It's the only silence in my book.
P19CLOSE, Daniel.
DANIEL
…So nobody witnesses them.
FENNA
…No.
DANIEL
…So they can't come back.
FENNAa beat
…No.
PAGE 12
P20A RUN OF SMALL PANELS: every face in the clearing understanding it at once.

Who is resting in Thanatos.

Vigolas: a row of drowned sailors who once sat in the Arena's stands and saluted him with two fingers. Thirty-one men from a burned merchantman.

Drekk, at the clearing's edge: the Kettle's crew.

Svala, her white scarf gone still: an old woman with a bone whistle with a crack in its note.

Trollmage, wide awake: a grandmother on a slipway.

Rougeina: eight people nobody else can see.

Krydog: frowning at nothing, like a man who has walked into a room for something and can't remember what.

P21CLOSE, Smurjan

a hand flat on his chest, where seventeen voices live.

SMURJAN
…Everyone we have ever lost. · · Resting there.
KALIsmall, for once
…Waiting there.
PAGE 13
P22CLOSE, Krydog

straightening off Roffe's shoulder by sheer will. The shadows under his eyes nearly black.

KRYDOG
…Then we'd better hurry.
P23CLOSE, Fenna

the crews already turning toward the river. And her pen stopping. Her head turning, very slightly, toward the river, toward the ships beyond the trees, where none of them are looking: as if, out of all the sounds in the world that reach her, she had just heard one. A heartbeat. Steady. Slow. Close by. One beat. Her face doesn't change. Then she writes on.

(At the clearing's edge, Kompis glancing back at the river, puzzled, as if he'd felt something go past him in the other direction.)

PAGE 14
P24CLOSE, Vigolas

at the edge of the clearing, turning back once on Kompis's shoulder.

VIGOLAS
…Fenna. · · The first day. · You told me someone was going to be very upset that I exist.
FENNAwriting
…Yes.
VIGOLAS
…You undersold it.
P25CLOSE, Fenna.

Her pen moving. Not looking up. A long beat.

FENNA
…Go on, then.
PAGE 15
P26WIDE, the river.

The lashed ships pushing off from the moss bank, the crews aboard, the refugees at the rails. Tihi at the stern, waving both arms at the clearing. And the clearing behind them already mist: no stump, no woman, no book. Just grey moss and the ring of pale trees and footprints arriving.

P27WIDE, ahead.

The river narrowing between the last of the pale trunks toward the far arch: the second arch of the river-gate, the first one's twin, two great trunks leaning together over the water. No bar across this one. And through it, the light changing: not the black of the Deep, not the grey of the Wood. Wide. Low. The colour of rain.

DREKKat the wheel, Ysel at his elbow
…In by one. · Out by the other.
PAGE 16
P28WIDE, under the far arch.

The lashed ships gliding out between the two pale trunks, a hand's width to spare on either side, the chalk join creaking.

YSELvery quietly, at the wheel
…Drekk. · It's big.
P29CLOSE, the join.

Mingus up off his bed for the first time since the Wood, standing four-square on the chalk boards, ears up, nose working at the air. Tail still. Kompis's hand on his back. Beside them, Vigolas getting himself up onto one knee, and then, somehow, onto his feet.

PAGE 17 — THE HOOK
P30WIDE, the first sight of it.

THANATOS, opening out ahead of the lashed ships like the sea opening out of a river mouth: a slow, wide, grey river under a sky the colour of rain, flowing between low grey hills as far as the eye goes. On the hills on both sides, cut into them like the terraces of an arena, stands, row above row, and in them the watching dead, sitting, hands in laps, eyes closed. On the river, hundreds upon hundreds of small grey boats drifting slowly, each with a sleeper curled in it, at rest.

And on the crest of the far hills, across the whole width of the river, coming down over the top rows of the far stands like fog over a weir, colourless, edgeless, slow: the grey.

P31FINAL PANEL, close on Vigolas

on his feet on the join, swaying, one eye swollen shut, the other looking across the river of the dead at the far shore.

VIGOLAS
…It's already here.
END OF CHAPTER 320

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.