SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga V · The Current · Arc 8 · The Deep

Chapter 321

Thanatos
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, out of the far arch.

The lashed ships gliding out of the Witness Wood onto the river of the dead, and the river going on and on: wide, slow, grey, under a low sky the colour of rain. Low grey hills on both banks, and cut into them, row above row like the terraces of an arena, stands, and in the stands, sitting, hands in their laps, eyes closed, the watching dead. On the water, everywhere, hundreds upon hundreds of small grey boats, drifting, turning slowly, each with one sleeper in it. And the two ships among them, lashed together with chalk, much too big, much too loud, much too alive for this place.

P2CLOSE, the rails

both crews and forty-one refugees, all silent. Old Stina with her lantern down at her knee. Hedda holding Vante's hand.

HEDDAwhispering
…Is this where Mamma went?
OLD STINAa long beat
…Yes, love. · · Don't go looking. · Let her rest.
PAGE 2
P3A RUN OF THREE SMALL PANELS

boats drifting close past the Marka's side, close enough to touch.

An old fisherman curled on his side, his pipe held in both folded hands like a flower.

A young woman asleep on her back, a baby asleep on her chest, both breathing the same slow nothing.

A soldier with his boots off and set neatly side by side at his feet, his face younger than his grey hair.

Every face at peace. Every eye closed.

P4CLOSE, Kompis

eyes gold. From every sleeper, threads: thin, gold, very long, running away up out of the river, back through the Wood behind them, out toward the world. The fisherman's to a woman somewhere who still sets two cups. The soldier's to a boy who keeps his boots.

KOMPISvery softly
…They're all still tied to somebody.
PAGE 3
P5CLOSE, Kali

leaning out of Smurjan's shoulder over the rail at the young woman's boat, unable to help herself.

KALIa loud whisper
…Hello? · Hey— · Excuse me—

(The young woman doesn't stir. The baby doesn't stir.)

SMURJAN
…They're resting, Kali.
BAKASURAhis white-streaked jaws rising behind them, very gently
…Let them.
P6CLOSE, Trollmage

on the Marka's hatch, wide awake, crown in his lap, looking out over a whole river of sleepers with the face of a man who knows more about sleep than anyone alive.

TROLLMAGE
…Best sleep there is. · · Nothing owed. · Nothing waiting. · · Don't wake them.
LEVLAbeside him, very quietly
…Nobody's asking them for anything. · · I didn't know there was a place like that.
PAGE 4
P7WIDE, the near stands

on the hill above the left bank as the ships glide past below. Row on row of the watching dead. And one row, near the bottom, of sailors: drowned men in salt-stiff jackets, hair still wet, a few with an old wound or a missing tooth, sitting shoulder to shoulder with their eyes closed.

P8CLOSE, Vigolas

at the Marka's bow, coat back on, clinking, gripping the rail with both split hands.

VIGOLASbarely a voice
…That's my lot. · · My first crew.

(He lifts two fingers to his brow: the salute they gave him once in the Arena. Nobody in the row salutes back. They're asleep.)

VIGOLAS
…(very quietly) …Sleep well, lads.
PAGE 5
P9CLOSE, Svala

on the Marka's yard, going rigid. Looking down at a little boat drifting past below, and in it a tiny, very old woman with a face like a walnut, curled up asleep with a bone whistle on a cord on her chest, the crack in it showing.

SVALAa breath
…Farmor.
P10ACTION.

Svala already crouching on the yard the way she crouches before a Flight-Line, her whole body leaning toward the boat like a bird about to drop. And Rougeina, beside her on the yard in one silver-rose blink, a hand on her shoulder.

ROUGEINA
…Don't.
SVALA
…She's right there.
ROUGEINA
…She's resting. · · Let her.

(Svala doesn't fly. Her scarf goes still.)

PAGE 6
P11CLOSE, Jeppson

goggles down, the violet grid in his eyes, sighting across the whole width of the river at the far stands, the way he'd sight along a plank. Stopping. At a figure near the top: a broad old troll-mason asleep in his seat, and on his leather belt, a little brass buckle stamped with a hammer under a crooked crown.

JEPPSONvery quietly
…That's Stav's mark.
DREKKat the wheel, not turning his head, hoarse
…Old Stav. · · He built her keel.
P12CLOSE, Jeppson

lowering the goggles. Seeing how near the top of the far stands the old troll-mason sits. How near the crest of the far hills.

JEPPSON
…Hm. · · He's near the top.
PAGE 7
P13CLOSE, Trollmage

up off the hatch now, looking along the near stands, then the far, row after row, very slowly. Not finding what he's looking for. Sitting back down.

TROLLMAGE
…She's not where I can see. · · That's all right. · She never was, much.
P14CLOSE, Kompis's hand

on the sawn-off shotgun on his bandolier: blued steel with a gold vein, a birch grip, two boys and a dog, running engraved on the stock. And a small gold-edged balloon coming out of the gun, a child's voice:

BROR
…I'm not there. · I'm here.
KOMPISa hand flat on him
…I know, Lillebror. · · I know.
PAGE 8
P15WIDE.

Krydog on the Upp Igen's side of the join, upright again, Roffe's hand still under his elbow just in case, looking along the stands with everybody else. Not finding anybody. Frowning at nothing, like a man who has walked into a room for something and can't remember what. Kompis, a few feet away, glancing at him and away.

P16CLOSE, Isa

at the Upp Igen's rail, looking not at the stands but across the river, at the far hills. A beat after everyone else, she sees it. She doesn't raise her voice. She never does.

ISA
…Look.
PAGES 9–10 — SPLASH
P17SPLASH (double page). THE FAR SHORE.

The whole width of the river of the dead, and the far hills filling both pages, terraced with stands from the water to the crest. And coming down over the crest, over the top rows of the stands, slow, patient, like fog pouring over a weir: the grey. Colourless. Edgeless. No texture, no shadow, nothing in it to draw.

Where it touches, the watching dead go pale: a whole top row losing its colour at once, outlines thinning, a face, a hand, a folded coat, fading like breath off a cold window. The next row. The next. On the water below, at the far bank, little boats drifting into the edge of it and fading with their sleepers, the sleeper first, then the boat, then nothing on the water at all.

And across the river, small, two ships lashed together with chalk, and every face on them turned toward the far shore.

(No SFX. The grey makes no sound.)

PAGE 11
P18CLOSE, a single boat

at the edge of the grey on the far side. An old woman asleep in it with her hands folded on a knitted shawl. Her outline going pale, thinning, a soft grey line where her edge was. Then nothing in the boat. Then the boat drifting a moment, empty. Then not the boat.

P19CLOSE, Kompis

eyes gold, watching her thread: running up out of the river, through the Wood, out toward the world to someone, somewhere. And ending. Not cut at a bar. Just stopping, the gold going out of it from the far end, like a lamp turned down in a window a long way off.

KOMPISbarely audible
…Somewhere… · …somebody just stopped missing her.
PAGE 12
P20CLOSE, Krydog

shoving off Roffe's arm, roaring for the first time since the shingle.

KRYDOG
…Get us OVER there!
DREKK
…Hard a-port! · Both wheels! · Daniel, with me—
P21WIDE.

The lashed ships turning, slow and enormous and clumsy, two hulls answering two wheels as one ship, the chalk join groaning, nudging aside little boats of sleepers as gently as Drekk and Daniel can manage, heading out toward the middle of the river.

SVALAon the yard, crouched
…I could be over there in one line—
ROUGEINA
…And do what?

(Svala opens her mouth. Shuts it.)

PAGE 13
P22WIDE, mid-river.

The lashed ships in the very middle of the river of the dead, hundreds of boats drifting round them, the near stands behind, the far stands ahead with the grey coming down them row by row. Closer now. Every face on the far slope clear. Going pale, one row at a time.

P23CLOSE, Vigolas

on the Marka's bow rail, the coat clinking, green lightning crawling up his arms and finding nothing to go to. His hand going, by itself, to his coat pocket, where something small and warm glows through the cloth: Aska's ember. Holding it there.

VIGOLASa captain's roar, across the whole river
…JORVAND!

(Nothing answers. The grey keeps coming.)

PAGE 14
P24CLOSE, the Upp Igen's waist.

Vante, on Hedda's hip, pointing at the far shore with one mittened hand.

VANTE
…It's eating the boats.

(Hedda putting her hand over his eyes.)

OLD STINAvery quietly
…Same as home.
P25CLOSE, Emma

at the rail, her ringed ash staff in both hands, a healer looking at a shore full of people she can't heal.

EMMA
…There's nobody to heal. · · They're already—

(She stops. She doesn't finish it.)

PAGE 15
P26CLOSE, Mingus

on the chalk join. Suddenly spinning round, away from the far shore, facing back the way they came. Ears flat. Standing four-square in front of everyone on both ships. A low growl coming out of him, the growl eighty pounds of golden retriever saves for one man in the world.

grrrrrrrrrrrr…
P27CLOSE, Kompis

turning with him.

KOMPIS
…Boy?

(And one by one, along both rails, every head turning to look back upriver.)

PAGE 16
P28WIDE, looking back upriver.

Far behind them, small at the end of the long grey water, where the river runs out of the Witness Wood: the far arch of the river-gate, two pale trunks leaning together over the water. And sliding across it, from nowhere, slow, level, steady, as neatly as a ruler laid across a page: a black bar.

(No SFX. A soft, dry rustle, like a page being turned in another room.)

P29CLOSE, Drekk

at the wheel, a hand on the Keeper's Log, his whole face going grey.

DREKK
…That's the way out.
ISAa beat after him
…It's closing.
PAGE 17 — THE HOOK
P30CLOSE, the far arch.

The bar settled across it. The gap beneath it filled with black, like a line of a page inked out. The grey river still running out under it toward the Wood. Nothing else will.

P31FINAL PANEL, wide and high.

The river of the dead under its rain-coloured sky. The near stands asleep. The far stands going pale under the grey, row by row. And in the very middle of it, small and alone among hundreds of drifting boats, two ships lashed into one, every soul aboard looking back at a door that isn't there any more.

And a voice from everywhere: from the water, the hills, the stands, the sky. A plain balloon with no tail, edged in faint grey, soft as paper tearing.

JORVAND
…Now nobody leaves, boy. · · Not until it's finished.
END OF CHAPTER 321

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.