SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga V · The Current · Arc 8 · The Deep

Chapter 322

The Roll-Call
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, Thanatos.

The river-grey realm of the gentle dead: a slow, wide river under a sky the colour of rain, flowing between low grey hills. On the hills, terraced like the stands of an arena, rows of the watching dead, still, eyes closed. On the river, hundreds of small boats, drifting, each with a sleeping soul in it, curled up, peaceful. And lashed side by side in the middle of the river, too big, too loud, too alive for this place: the Marka and the Upp Igen.

P2CLOSE, the far shore.

The grey of the Null coming down the hills like fog with edges, and wherever it touches, the watching dead in the stands going pale, their outlines thinning, one, then a row. And on the water, a little boat drifting into it and fading, its sleeper and all, to nothing.

(No SFX. The Null makes no sound.)

PAGE 2
P3CLOSE, Kompis

at the rail, eyes gold, white-faced. Seeing threads end. Dozens. Hundreds.

KOMPIS
…They're not dying. · They're already dead. · · They're being uncounted. · Like they were never anyone's.
P4CLOSE, Vigolas

fists crackling, lightning useless and he knows it.

VIGOLAS
…Can we hit it?
SMURJANquietly
…Nothing touches the grey. · Not yet. · You know the rule.
PAGE 3
P5CLOSE, Öde

at the Marka's bow, the names inked up both her arms (a hundred and eleven of them, Värn's people), standing very straight. Grass springing up through the deck planks round her boots.

ÖDE
…Kvar taught me something. · On Askslätten. · · One voice is a memory. · Many voices is a witness.
P6CLOSE, Öde

turning to the crews.

ÖDE
…While a name is being heard, nobody can take it. · · We did it for Aldhrun. · We did it for Rougeina. · · We can do it for them.
KRYDOGfrom the Upp Igen's rail
…Whose names?
ÖDE
…Any you've got.
PAGE 4
P7CLOSE, Vigolas

a long breath. Then climbing up onto the Marka's rail, standing on it, facing the grey coming down the far hills, the river of sleeping boats between. Cupping his hands round his mouth.

VIGOLASa captain's roar, carrying across the dead river
…CAPTAIN ORVAR BLECK!
P8WIDE, across the river.

On the far shore, at the very edge of the grey, a little boat about to fade, and in it a broad grey-bearded man curled asleep, and his outline holding. The grey reaching for his boat and stopping, an inch away, as if it had touched glass.

PAGE 5
P9CLOSE, Vigolas

seeing it, his eyes going wide, and not stopping.

VIGOLAS
…MATE SIXTEN! COOK MALTE! BOSUN HENNING! · JÖNS! VALTER! ERK AND ARVO!
P10WIDE.

Across the river, one after another, little boats at the edge of the grey holding: thirty-one of them, bobbing in a ragged line, a sleeping crew from a burned merchantman, the grey pressing against the air round them and not getting in.

VIGOLAShoarse
…LILL-TORE! ABEL! RAGNVALD! OLD SIMON! TOBBE!
PAGE 6
P11CLOSE, Kompis

staring at the threads: thirty-one of them that were ending, not ending. Held. Each one tied to Vigolas's voice.

KOMPISbreathless
…It's working. · · While he says them, they're counted.
VIGOLASnot turning
…Then everybody start saying!
P12CLOSE, Öde

lifting both arms, the names on them, and beginning to read, steadily, the way she reads them every morning: her village's people, one after another, her grandmother's last.

ÖDE
…Agnes. Torvald. Little Mats. Brita of the mill. Hilding. · Farmor Sigrun.
PAGES 7–8 — SPLASH
P13SPLASH (double page). MANY VOICES.

The river of Thanatos, grey on grey, and across it, from two lashed ships, voices: drawn as lines of gold light going out over the water from every mouth, each line reaching a boat or a figure in the stands and holding it against the grey. Vigolas on the rail roaring a merchant crew's names. Öde reading her arms. Drekk at the wheel, hoarse: "Old Stav! Ulla's brothers! The Kettle's old crew!" Trollmage, awake, calling "Ulla" toward the stands. Krydog on the Upp Igen's rail calling the names of every man who ever sat on the Basin quay. Tihi, deaf from the Heartwood, shouting names she can't hear herself say. Kompis calling the Nursery's children who didn't make it. Kali, standing, calling the seventeen voices inside Smurjan by name, one after another, into the dark.

And everywhere a name lands, a pale soul in a boat or a stand holding, faint gold round its edges, while the grey breaks against it like fog against a window.

PAGE 9
P14A RUN OF SMALL PANELS.

The grey flowing round the held ones like water round stones, taking the boats in between: the unnamed, the ones nobody on two ships ever knew. A child's boat fading two lengths from a held one. An old man in the stands going pale between two who glow.

KOMPISchoking
…It's taking the ones we don't know.
EMMAwhite, beside him
…Then we learn them.
P15CLOSE, Levla

standing on the Upp Igen's rail, eight rings flashing, shouting not names but at the drifting boats nearest him.

LEVLA
…You! · What's your name? · Somebody — what's that one's name?!

(The sleeping dead don't answer. They're resting. They don't know they're being taken.)

PAGE 10
P16CLOSE, Rougeina

on the Marka's quarterdeck, very still, not calling. Her blades crossed on her back. Her eyes on the far shore. On the stands there, where the grey is thickest.

P17CLOSE, Rougeina's eyes

finding, in the stands on the far shore, at the edge of the grey, eight empty places. Eight places in a row where nobody sits, as if eight people were sitting there that nobody could see.

ROUGEINAvery quietly
…There you are.
PAGE 11
P18CLOSE, Kompis

beside her, following her look. Seeing nothing in the eight empty places. Then seeing threads: eight of them, faint, coming out of the empty seats, all running to her.

KOMPIS
…Rouge. · Those are yours.
ROUGEINA
…I know. · · Nobody else can see them. · Nobody else remembers them. · That's what I do.
P19CLOSE, Rougeina

stepping up onto the rail beside Vigolas. Her voice not loud. Clear. Every syllable placed.

ROUGEINA
…Torvik.
PAGE 12
P20CLOSE, the first empty seat

in the far stands, and someone in it: faint, flickering, a young man in an Examiner's coat, appearing, outlined in gold, because someone said his name aloud in a place where names are heard.

ROUGEINA
…Baldr. · Stillmark. · Katriel. · Wendlan.
P21CLOSE, the seats

filling one by one in the grey: an Architect in white, a lidless man, a woman in a stencilled robe, a gate-keeper. People the whole world forgot, the people she killed, appearing in the stands of the dead for the first time since they died, because she is calling them.

ROUGEINAsteady, eyes wet
…Edvar. · Meirwen. · Ingrith.
PAGE 13
P22CLOSE, Kompis

on the rail beside her, his voice joining hers, saying the same eight. He's the only other one who remembers them.

KOMPIS AND ROUGEINA
…Torvik. Baldr. Stillmark. Katriel. Wendlan. Edvar. Meirwen. Ingrith.

(One voice is a memory. Two is a witness.)

P23WIDE, the far stands.

Eight figures she killed, sitting in a row at the edge of the grey, held, glowing faintly gold, the grey breaking round them. One of them, the young man in the Examiner's coat, Torvik, turning his head very slightly in his sleep toward the voice.

ROUGEINAbarely audible
…I'll keep saying them. · · As long as I've got a voice.
PAGE 14
P24WIDE.

Two lashed ships in the middle of the river of the dead, every person aboard calling names, hoarse, relentless, and the grey across the far shore slowing. Stalled against a hundred glowing points it can't take. Pressing, flowing round them, taking the unnamed between, but slowing.

KRYDOGhoarse, triumphant
…It's stopping!
DANIELquiet, watching
…It's not stopping. · It's waiting. · · For us to run out of voice.
P25CLOSE, Isa

a beat late, the only one not calling. Watching the grey.

ISA
…He's right. · · It doesn't get tired. · We do.
PAGE 15
P26CLOSE, Vigolas

hoarse to a rasp, still shouting the thirty-one, again, from the top, "ORVAR BLECK—", his voice cracking.

VIGOLASrasping
…Then we take turns. · Shifts. · Like a watch. · Nobody stops. · Not for a second.
P27CLOSE, Drekk

at the wheel, nodding, already organising.

DREKK
…First watch, the Marka's names. · Second, the Up-Again's. · Öde reads in every gap. · · We can do this till Thursday.
PAGE 16
P28WIDE.

And on the river, between the two ships and the far shore, a boat drifting out of the grey, not like the others: black. Long and low, its prow carved like the top of a page, and no one rowing it. It glides upstream against the slow current, toward the lashed ships, silent.

P29CLOSE, the black boat's stern.

A tall thin stooped man sitting in it with an open book on his knees and a pen in his hand, his face kind, his eyes tired, half of him already grey.

JORVAND
…Clever, boy. · · Kvar's trick. · Many voices is a witness.
PAGE 17
P30CLOSE, Vigolas

on the rail, still calling, not stopping, his eyes on the black boat.

VIGOLASbetween names
…Erk and Arvo— · Go home, Jorvand— · Lill-Tore—
P31CLOSE, Jorvand's book

open on his knees. On the page, in neat black ink, a list. Their names. Every crew member on both ships, in a column, in his careful hand: VIGOLAS. KOMPIS. ROUGEINA. ÖDE. KRYDOG…

PAGE 18 — THE HOOK
P32CLOSE, Jorvand

lifting the pen. Gently. Sorry. Like an editor who has come to the part of the manuscript he likes least.

JORVAND
…A witness is only as good as the people doing the witnessing.
P33FINAL PANEL, close on the pen

its nib touching the first name on the page, the ink starting to spread into a black bar.

JORVAND
…(very softly) …Then I'll bar the callers.
END OF CHAPTER 322

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.