SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga V · The Current · Arc 8 · The Deep

Chapter 329

What'S Left
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, Thanatos, evening.

The near shore: the slow grey river, the boats of the witnessed dead asleep in it, soft light over each one like a blanket. The far shore: a hill with a shut chalk door in a black frame at its crest, and beyond it, nothing. Between, two ships floated off the shallows and moored to an old stone jetty, lashed together still.

P2CLOSE, the Sun-Wolf

on the near bank, lowering its colossal head to the Marka's deck, and opening its jaws: the sun inside shrinking, a ball of light, a lamp, a coal, a small ember in a curl of smoke, dropped gently into Vigolas's open palm.

VIGOLASvery quietly
…Thanks for holding it.
PAGE 2
P3ACTION.

The golden wolf shrinking in a long fall of gold light, smaller and smaller, until it's a golden retriever, wet, standing on the Marka's deck, shaking himself all over everybody.

fwwwwap-ap-ap-ap
P4CLOSE, Mingus

trotting straight to Kompis and lying down across his feet with an enormous groan, as if he'd had a long walk. Kompis on his knees, both arms round the dog's neck, face buried in wet fur.

KOMPISmuffled
…You held the sun.

(Mingus licks his ear. Very thoroughly.)

PAGE 3
P5WIDE, the decks.

Both crews sitting where they dropped. Nobody talking much. Bandages going round. Svala's burns. Kali's arm in a sling. Jeppson's hands still locked, Roffe feeding him stew off a spoon. The refugees from the uncharted islands, crowded in the Upp Igen's waist, staring at the grey river.

P6CLOSE, Drekk

at the wheel, doing the head-count: by sound and weight, every soul on deck in one beat. Eyes shut. Lips moving.

DREKK
…Twelve. · And a dog. · · Eight on the other one. · · And forty-one with no plates.

(For the first time in the series, the count comes up right.)

DREKKopening his eyes, startled
…Huh.
PAGE 4
P7CLOSE, Krydog

sitting on the Marka's deck with his back against the mast, beside Vigolas. Both of them battered past standing. Krydog's head drooping. Jerking up. Drooping.

KRYDOG
…I'm not tired.
VIGOLAS
…No.
KRYDOG
…Four thousand one hundred and ninety-one nights. · · And an afternoon. · · I'm not tired.
P8CLOSE, Krydog's head

settling, finally, onto Vigolas's shoulder. His eyes closing. Asleep. Snoring almost at once, a sound like a ship's timbers.

hhhhhnnnnggggkkk… hhhhhnnnnggggkkk…
PAGE 5
P9CLOSE, Vigolas

not moving a muscle, a sleeping rival on his shoulder, looking at the Up-Again crew across the lashings, who are all staring.

VIGOLASa whisper
…Nobody move.
TIHIa whisper, hands over her mouth
…He's asleep!
EMMAa whisper, tearful
…One hour. · · That's one.
P10CLOSE, the Up-Again crew

organising, in whispers, a watch over their sleeping captain: Perne up the mast, Daniel at the rail, Roffe with a blanket, Jeppson (hands locked) sitting guard with his elbows out, Flexsnus leaning on nothing beside them.

FLEXSNUSwhispering
…Twice in one month, friend. · Nobody breathes loud.
PAGE 6
P11WIDE, the stone jetty.

Rougeina sitting alone at the very end of it, her boots over the grey water, looking across the river at the far shore. At the hill. At the stands she can't see from here, where eight seats are empty.

P12CLOSE, beside her on the jetty

where there was nothing a moment ago: a stump. And on it, already seated, knees together, a book closed on her lap: Fenna. Not looking at Rougeina. Looking at the same far shore.

(Neither of them says anything for a long time.)

PAGE 7
P13CLOSE, Rougeina

not turning.

ROUGEINA
…You don't remember them.
FENNA
…No. · · But I know there were eight. · I can hear where they aren't.
P14CLOSE, Rougeina

her jaw tight, her eyes wet, saying them under her breath, the way she will every day now.

ROUGEINA
…Torvik. Baldr. Stillmark. Katriel. Wendlan. Edvar. Meirwen. Ingrith.
FENNAvery quietly
…Thank you.
ROUGEINA
…For what?
FENNA
…For letting me hear them. · · Once.
PAGES 8–9 — SPLASH
P15SPLASH (double page). WHAT'S LEFT.

Thanatos at nightfall, drawn wide. On the near side of the river, the witnessed dead asleep in their boats under soft light, hundreds, a quiet harbour of resting souls. In the middle, two ships lashed together at a stone jetty: on one deck a captain asleep on a pirate's shoulder and a whole crew keeping silent watch; on the other a boy asleep with a goat across his feet. At the end of the jetty, a woman with short crimson hair and an old woman on a stump, side by side, looking the same way.

And across the river, on the far hill, a shut chalk door in a black frame, a hair off true at one hinge, holding. And beyond it, half a world of nothing: drawn as blank page, the borders of the realm running into white.

PAGE 10
P16CLOSE, Fenna

opening her book on her knees, turning a page, and on it, in the margin, very small, writing one word in her exact hand.

(We don't see the word.)

P17CLOSE, Rougeina

glancing sideways at last. And Fenna gone: the stump empty, then not even the stump. A little moss where it stood.

ROUGEINAto the empty jetty, a ghost of a smile
…She never walks.
PAGE 11
P18CLOSE, Öde

on the Marka's deck, reading her arms by lamplight. A hundred and eleven names. Every one still there, ink dark. She touches them one by one.

ÖDEto herself
…Witnessed. · · All of you.
P19CLOSE, Vigolas

Krydog still asleep on his shoulder, Aska's ember warm in his free hand. Looking down at the grey river. At thirty-one boats in a ragged line near the jetty, asleep under soft light.

VIGOLASvery quietly, to them
…Fair winds, Gråtrut.

(In one boat, a ship's boy of fourteen smiles in his sleep.)

PAGE 12
P20CLOSE, Kompis

sitting up against the rail with Mingus, eyes gold, looking out across the river at the far shore. Seeing no threads there at all. Not cut. Not ended. None.

KOMPISto the dog, low
…How many, do you think? · · That we didn't know?

(Mingus puts his chin on Kompis's knee and doesn't answer. Dogs don't count. They just know.)

P21CLOSE, Levla

beside them, ten dull rings, looking at the same nothing.

LEVLA
…A whole half of a world. · · And nobody can even put a price on it. · · There's nothing there to price.
PAGE 13
P22WIDE, the Upp Igen's deck, late.

The watch round the sleeping captain. Flexsnus leaning against the rail beside Levla's shoulder (they've drifted together), flicking open his tin by habit. Reading the lid by lamplight.

P23CLOSE, the lid.

Nine ruled lines, seven scratched. Most struck through. Two still open:

MOUTH, 1 NOTCH. DUE: ?

NULL, 1 NOTCH. DUE: ?

FLEXSNUSquietly
…Two open. · · Plenty of room.
PAGE 14
P24CLOSE, the corner of the panel.

A tiny emerald notch-icon.

pling.
P25CLOSE, the lid

the first line changing under his eyes, the pin-scratches rearranging themselves by no hand:

MOUTH, 1 NOTCH. DUE: SOON.

FLEXSNUSgoing white
…Oh.
LEVLAhalf asleep
…Hm?
FLEXSNUS
…Nothing, mate. · (Closing the tin, very gently.) · Go back to sleep.
PAGE 15
P26CLOSE, Flexsnus

leaning, looking out over the dark river toward the way they came in: the Witness Wood, the Deep, and far beyond it, past the fixed star, the Mouth where he bent the world one notch so two ships could go through side by side.

FLEXSNUSto himself, barely audible
…One ship. · And a bit. · · And now the bit comes due.
P27CLOSE, Mingus

on the Marka, lifting his head off Kompis's knee. Ears forward. Very still. Looking down: at the deck, at the water, at the ground under the river.

PAGE 16
P28CLOSE, a cup of stew

on the Marka's rail, Roffe's, untouched. Its surface trembling. Tiny rings spreading across it.

P29CLOSE, the grey river

the soft light on the sleeping boats flickering, the whole slow surface of it shivering, as if something very, very large, very far down, had moved.

(No SFX yet.)

PAGE 17 — THE HOOK
P30CLOSE, Krydog

on Vigolas's shoulder, waking up in one jolt, eyes wide, an hour exactly.

KRYDOG
…What was that?
VIGOLASvery still
…I don't know.
P31FINAL PANEL, wide.

The realm of Thanatos, the river, the jetty, two ships, a door on a hill. And from under all of it, under the water, under the hills, under the realm, under the world, a sound, drawn as a single long crack across the whole panel, like the grain of an enormous tree splitting:

—grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrooooooooooOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAANNNNN—
END OF CHAPTER 329

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.