SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga II · The Call · Arc 1 · Bark And Bell

Chapter 33

Drift
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, the Current, two days later.

The Marka sails the Shallows between drifting islands. Behind her, a bank of glittering fog sits on the starlight like a cloud lying down.

P2MID, the wheel.
DREKK
Two days and no white sails. The drift-bank swallowed them.
VIGOLAS
Or they're being polite.
KOMPISat the rail
Hounds aren't polite. Hounds are patient.
PAGE 2
P3KOMPIS'S SOUL-SIGHT, over the rail.

The starlight tide is full of loose threads: golden strands drifting on the current like seaweed, tangled together, running out of nowhere and into nowhere.

P4CLOSE, Kompis

frowning.

KOMPIS
Something's wrong with the threads out here. They're… loose. They're not tied to anything.
P5WIDE, ahead.

An island drifts out of the glitter: a long pale beach, and behind it a clutter of houses that don't match: a stone tower, a thatched cottage, a white Trisdel townhouse, a fisherman's shed on stilts, all jammed together as if they'd been tipped out of a sack.

DREKK
Not on any chart.
VIGOLAS
Nothing's on any chart, Drekk. It's the Shallows.
PAGE 3 — SPLASH
P6SPLASH (single page). THE ISLAND OF THE MISROUTED.

The beach, close up. Hundreds of people sit or stand or lie in the starlight surf, the way the drowned wash up, but they're alive, and all of them are wrong.

A girl of about eight with pigtails sits on a rock, hunched like an old man, sucking on a pipe that isn't there. A soft, round, floury baker in an apron stands rigidly at attention, saluting. A tall knight in armour sits cradling the armour's helmet and weeping like a little boy. A grandmother hops through a hopscotch grid drawn in the sand, perfectly, laughing a child's laugh. A young mother keeps trying to pick up a baby who isn't hers; her hands don't know how.

Behind them the mismatched houses. Above them the realms hanging in the sky.

No one has come for any of them.

PAGE 4
P7WIDE.

The Marka's boat grinds onto the sand. The crew climbs out: Vigolas first, Kompis and Mingus, Rougeina and the panther, Smurjan with Kali half out of his shadow. Drekk stays with the ship. Trollmage stays lying on the deck by his sign: WAITING. DAY 3.

P8MID.

The pigtailed girl on the rock looks up at them with deeply unimpressed eyes. When she speaks, it's the voice of a cross old man.

THE GIRL
Don't stare. Never seen a girl with a bad back?
P9CLOSE, the girl

patting her pockets.

THE GIRL
Where's my pipe? Who took my knees? I had good knees. Seventy-one years, and they were finally comfortable.
VIGOLAScrouching beside her
What's your name?
THE GIRL
Bengt. Old Bengt. Old, mind.
PAGE 5
P10MID, the baker

marching up to them, still saluting with a soft floury hand.

THE BAKER
Sergeant Ragn, Third Lance, Trisdel garrison, reporting!
THE BAKERlooking at his hand
I can't make a fist. These hands only want to knead.
P11KOMPIS'S SOUL-SIGHT.

Out of the baker's chest runs one thread, his own, and it doesn't stop on the island. It runs into the surf, across the Current, east, a long, long way, toward a realm hanging in the sky.

P12TWO-SHOT.
KOMPIS
Your body's out there. East. A long way.
RAGN
And who's in it?
KOMPISsquinting along the thread
…A baker. Probably very confused in a garrison right now.
RAGNquietly
…I hope he's eating properly.
PAGE 6
P13KOMPIS'S SOUL-SIGHT, on Old Bengt.

The girl's thread doesn't go out to sea. It runs straight across the beach, through the crowd, to an old, old man sitting alone at the edge of the water, rocking, arms wrapped around his knees, crying in great gulping sobs like a little child.

P14CLOSE, Kompis

following the thread with his eyes, understanding.

KOMPIS
…Oh. Oh, you're swapped.
P15MID.

Kompis leads Old Bengt across the sand by her small hand, Mingus trotting alongside.

OLD BENGT
Where are we going?
KOMPIS
To find your knees.
PAGE 7
P16MID.

They stop in front of the crying old man. He looks up with red eyes. He looks at the girl. His face goes very still.

P17CLOSE.

The old man reaches out a shaking, knotted hand and touches the girl's cheek. When he speaks, it's a little girl's voice.

THE OLD MAN
…That's me. That's my face.
OLD BENGTgruff, and very gentle
Aye. Kept it clean for you. What's your name, then?
THE OLD MAN
Lova.
P18KOMPIS'S SOUL-SIGHT.

The two of them hold hands. Where their threads cross, they glow, warm gold, like a knot pulled tight.

P19CLOSE, Kompis.
KOMPIS
I can't put you back. I don't know how. Nobody does.
KOMPIS
But now you know where you are.
PAGE 8
P20A TIER OF THREE, a montage.

Kompis walking the beach with his eyes half-closed, reading threads, pairing people off: a woman to a man, a boy to a grandmother. Each pair, when they find each other, holds on.

Mingus taking people gently by the sleeve and leading them where Kompis points, tail wagging.

Smurjan carrying three exhausted people at once up the beach. Kali, one-armed, sits beside a crying knight and, for once, says nothing at all.

P21MID.

Rougeina stops. In front of her, an old woman stands in the surf with her back straight and her shoulders square, the stance of a soldier on parade. The body is far too old for it, and it shakes.

P22CLOSE, Rougeina

kneeling, taking the old woman's arm, steadying her.

ROUGEINAvery quietly
My mother used to stand like that.
PAGE 9
P23TWO-SHOT, Vigolas and Old Bengt

sitting on her rock.

VIGOLAS
When did it happen?
OLD BENGT
The night the boards went dark. One heartbeat, every board in the world, black.
OLD BENGT
I was in my chair by the fire. Then I was in the surf. With pigtails.
P24CLOSE, Vigolas.

Something lands in his face.

ROUGEINAstanding behind him
The night the boards went dark.
KOMPISarriving
The First Sign.
PAGE 10
P25CLOSE, Vigolas

very quiet.

VIGOLAS
Baldr's Engagement Protocol signed the orders. Where souls go, which body, when.
VIGOLAS
We broke the Protocol.
P26WIDE, Vigolas's view.

The whole beach: hundreds of people in the wrong skins, holding hands with strangers who are wearing their faces.

P27CLOSE, Vigolas.

He stands up.

VIGOLAS
We broke routing.
VIGOLAS
These are ours now.
P28MID, the crew

looking at him.

VIGOLAS
Every one of them. We find every body that belongs to every soul on this beach, and then the next beach, and the next.
VIGOLAS
I keep everything. That includes the mess I make.
PAGE 11
P29SFX, across the top of the panel

barking. A lot of barking.

RRRUFF — RUFF — ARRRRF

P30WIDE.

Out of the drift-bank fog, a long bark longboat from the Tally slides onto the far end of the beach. Out of it pour Bastion handlers in slate-blue, and a pack of Registry hounds: lean grey tracking dogs with numbers inked on their flanks and collars that glow with pale ledger-light. The handlers carry armfuls of open iron collars. Each one is stamped MISFILED.

P31CLOSE, the lead handler

unrolling a scroll.

LEAD HANDLER
By order of Registry Defence! Misfiled souls are Registry property! Line up for collection!
PAGE 12
P32ACTION.

The handlers wade into the crowd and snap a collar around Ragn's soft neck. Another reaches for Lova.

RAGN
I'm a SERGEANT!
HANDLER
You're a baker. Move.
P33ACTION, a tier.

Vigolas punches the collar off Ragn's neck. It shatters into light.

Rougeina Swaps behind three handlers at once (blink) and they all fall over, their belts cut.

Smurjan catches a handler's club in two fingers and gently takes it away from him.

Kali, one-armed, sickle in her right hand, hooks a handler's ankle and drops him on his face.

KALIthrough her teeth
One's plenty. One's plenty.
P34CLOSE, Vigolas

as the pack charges.

VIGOLAS
Not the dogs! The dogs didn't sign anything!
PAGE 13
P35WIDE.

Twenty grey hounds race up the beach straight at the children and the old ones, snarling.

P36LOW ANGLE.

Mingus plants himself in front of them all, in front of Old Bengt and Lova and a cluster of small, frightened people, all four paws in the sand, hackles up, and barks. Once. Huge.

MINGUS
WOOF.
P37CLOSE.

The lead hound skids to a stop, nose to nose with Mingus. It sniffs him. No ink. No number. Nothing it has ever been trained to hunt. Its ears go back. Its tail, slowly, uncertainly, starts to wag.

PAGE 14
P38CLOSE, Kompis

rifle up, one hand reaching out to touch Mingus's back.

KOMPIS
Subtick.
P39GREY WORLD.

Hundreds of afterimages of Kompis, every one taking a different shot. The golden pulse line beats under it all. He's not aiming at the dogs. He's aiming at the collars.

P40ACTION, colour.

One shot. It ricochets from collar to collar, down the whole pack, and twenty collars of ledger-light pop open and fall in the sand.

TAK — tik tik tik tik tik tik tik
P41WIDE.

The pack, suddenly free, mobs Mingus, piling around him, sniffing, licking, tails going like windmills. Mingus sits in the middle of it, delighted.

KOMPISwatching, quietly
Yeah. I know how that feels.
PAGE 15
P42WIDE.

The handlers scramble back into the longboat, collarless and dogless. One of them lifts a horn and blows it, long and high, out into the fog.

HOOOOOOOOOO
P43MID, the beach, after.

Drekk has come ashore with a slate and a stub of chalk.

DREKK
Two hundred and twelve. Counting the knight.
P44TWO-SHOT, Vigolas and Old Bengt.
VIGOLAS
We'll come back for every one of you.
OLD BENGT
You'd better. I want my knees.
PAGE 16 — THE HOOK
P45WIDE, the ridge above the beach.

Long grey grass, bending in the wind off the Current. The wind blows from the beach, up the ridge.

P46CLOSE.

Lying flat in the grass on the ridge, perfectly still, downwind of everything, the way he's been lying since before the longboat landed: Hrafnkell. Chin on his folded hands. Smiling.

HRAFNKELLto himself
The dogs were never the hunt, Captain. They were there to make you stand still.
P47FINAL PANEL, extreme close on his nostrils

flaring, and his eyes closing in pleasure.

HRAFNKELL
…Found you.
END OF CHAPTER 33

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.