SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga II · The Call · Arc 3 · Sömnen

Chapter 52

The Loop
PAGE 1
P1CLOSE, Rougeina

white-faced, staring at the dark mirror. It has gone black, just dead steel now. Nothing moves inside it.

ROUGEINAa whisper
…Mamma?
P2CLOSE, Smurjan

a hand on her shoulder, gentle.

SMURJAN
It's gone quiet.
P3CLOSE, Rougeina.

She closes her eyes, breathes once, and opens them. Hard again. A blade's worth of hard.

ROUGEINA
Later. I'll break it later. Where's Kompis?
PAGE 2
P4WIDE, the snowfield below the cabin.

The crew and Vaka's Lucid regroup, battered. Drekk's mast-axe is chipped. The troll in the nightgown is asleep standing up.

VAKA
The cabin's the last door. But the Rider's sitting somewhere under it. A deeper room. The burning village.
P5CLOSE, Vigolas

staring at the distant glow of the village on the horizon.

VIGOLAS
Then I'm going.
TROLLMAGE
Alone?! Into the deepest part of a man's—
PAGE 3
P6CLOSE, Vigolas.
VIGOLAS
It's a room he never lets anybody into. If we all walk in there, he'll never forgive us.
VIGOLAS
One of us. The one he'd forgive.
P7CLOSE, Vaka

handing him a little glowing ember from her lantern, warm in his palm.

VAKA
Hold that. If you forget you're asleep down there, it'll burn you. That's how you'll know.
PAGE 4
P8WIDE.

Vigolas walks alone across the snowfield into the burning village. The snow stops falling up. Here it falls down, grey. Ash.

P9WIDE, the village.

Small log houses on fire. A Trisdel banner snapping in the hot wind, white with gold. Sentinels in white armour stand frozen mid-stride between the houses like statues, collars glowing. Everything is very quiet.

PAGE 5
P10CLOSE, the middle of the village street.

A boy, eight years old: golden-tan skin, a too-big hoodie, a hunting knife clutched in his hand. Young Kompis. He's running toward a burning house.

P11CLOSE.

In the doorway of the house stands a smaller boy, five years old, in a burned shirt. Holding out his hand. He has no face, just smooth skin where a face should be, like a doll with its features rubbed away.

P12CLOSE, young Kompis

reaching for him.

YOUNG KOMPIS
LILLEBROR!
PAGE 6
P13WIDE.

The roof of the house comes down. The doorway goes black.

P14CLOSE, young Kompis

frozen mid-stride. His eyes go grey. The whole world goes grey around him, a colourless instant. Subtick.

P15WIDE.

The scene jumps back. Young Kompis is running toward the house again. The smaller boy is in the doorway again, holding out his hand. The same seven seconds.

YOUNG KOMPIS
LILLEBROR!
PAGE 7
P16MONTAGE, nine tiny panels, a grid. The loop.

Each one is the same seven seconds with one thing different:

He runs faster. The roof comes down.

He goes round the back. The roof comes down.

He throws the knife at the beam. The roof comes down.

He shouts a warning earlier. The roof comes down.

He doesn't run at all, and the roof still comes down.

He runs faster. The roof comes down.

…

In every panel the little brother's featureless face is a fraction smoother, a fraction more gone.

P17CLOSE, Vigolas

at the edge of the street, understanding.

VIGOLASquietly
…It's his Subtick. It's looking for the version he survives.
VIGOLAS
And there isn't one.
PAGE 8
P18WIDE.

On the roof of the burning house, sitting with her legs crossed, sits Mörda: thin, grey-skinned, black hair floating as if underwater, wide red-rimmed eyes that never close. Below her, the shadow-horse grazes on smoke.

P19CLOSE, Mörda

chin in her hand, watching the loop like someone watching a fire on a cold night.

MÖRDA
Every time he lives it, it gets a little warmer for me.
MÖRDA
He's been doing it for days, by your clock. Years, by his.
PAGE 9
P20CLOSE, Mörda

turning her red eyes on Vigolas.

MÖRDA
And every time, I take a little of the face. It tastes like the last good summer.
P21CLOSE, Vigolas

very calm. The ember in his palm glows.

VIGOLAS
Get off my friend's roof.
PAGES 10–11 — THE CLASH
P22ACTION.

Vigolas leaps, green lightning (dream-weak, but real) on both fists, straight at her.

P23ACTION.

Mörda doesn't move. He passes through her like smoke and crashes into the burning roof beam beyond. Sparks and ash explode around him.

MÖRDA
I'm not a thing, pirate. I'm the weight on a sleeping man's chest.
P24ACTION.

Vigolas spins and throws his open hand at her.

VIGOLAS
COMPACT!

The space around Mörda folds, crumpling into corners… and folds around nothing. She's still sitting there. There's no shape to grip.

P25CLOSE, Mörda

laughing softly.

MÖRDA
You can't fold a feeling into a box.
PAGE 12
P26CLOSE, Vigolas

panting. His other hand rises, palm open, and the air around his fingers goes black, the colour of nothing. ERASE, gathering.

P27CLOSE, Vigolas

staring at his own hand. The black flickers.

VIGOLASthinking
…I can wipe her off this roof.
VIGOLASthinking
And whatever's under her. This is his head. I don't know what I'd be erasing.
P28CLOSE, Vigolas's hand closing

the black going out.

VIGOLAS
…Not in here.
PAGE 13
P29CLOSE, Mörda

tilting her head, curious, almost respectful.

MÖRDA
Oh. You're careful with him.
MÖRDA
I didn't think pirates knew how.
P30ACTION.

She raises one hand, and the shadow-horse rears. Its hooves come down on the street, and the whole burning village lurches, like a sleeper rolling over. Vigolas is thrown off his feet.

PAGES 14–15 — SPLASH
P31SPLASH (double page). THE RIDER.

Mörda descends from the roof like smoke pouring down a wall, and sits down on Vigolas's chest as he lies on his back in the ash. She is weightless and she is the heaviest thing he has ever felt. His arms are pinned by nothing. Above her, the shadow-horse rears against the burning sky, and around them the loop keeps running: LILLEBROR! The roof comes down. LILLEBROR! The roof comes down. A boy who will not stop running toward a door.

Mörda leans close to Vigolas's face, her black hair falling around both of them like a curtain.

PAGE 16
P32CLOSE, Mörda

studying him.

MÖRDA
Let's see. What does the man with no number dream about?
P33CLOSE, Mörda

her eyes widening, delighted.

MÖRDA
Oh. Only one thing. You only have one dream.
MÖRDA
Isn't that lonely.
P34CLOSE, Vigolas's palm.

The ember from Vaka's lantern flares, burning into his skin. He's forgetting.

VIGOLASthrough his teeth
…I'm asleep. I'm asleep, I'm asleep…
PAGE 17 — THE HOOK
P35CLOSE, Vigolas's eyes

rolling up, grey creeping into the green.

P36FINAL PANEL, WIDE.

The burning village is gone. Vigolas is standing on the deck of a black-sailed ship, soaked, in the roaring dark of a storm. Gold coins spill across the planks at his feet. And in front of him, rising out of the sea taller than any mountain, curling, white-crested, is the wave.

MÖRDAsomewhere, a whisper
…again.
END OF CHAPTER 52

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.