SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga II · The Call · Arc 4 · The Fox Den

Chapter 58

The Hounds
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, the Marka's deck, at the dock, afternoon.

The crew stands in a ring around Rougeina, who sits on a crate with her back to them, hood pulled up over the smooth blank of her face.

P2CLOSE, Trollmage

flipping through his Codex.

TROLLMAGE
Räva. the drifting order. "The Fox Who Wears Faces." Make you laugh, take your face. It says she gives them back… "eventually."
VIGOLAS
How eventually?
TROLLMAGE
There's a footnote. It just says "lol."
PAGE 2
P3CLOSE, Rougeina's hands

gripping the edge of the crate. Her shoulders are shaking. Without a mouth, she can't speak. She writes in the dust on the deck with one finger:

I CAN STILL SEE. I CAN'T TALK.

P4CLOSE, Vigolas

crouching down next to her.

VIGOLAS
Then we'll talk for you. We've got plenty of mouths. Too many, honestly.
PAGE 3
P5CLOSE, the panther

pacing up behind Rougeina. It sniffs her, then stops. Its ears go flat. It backs away, hackles up, and growls, low and uncertain, at its own mistress.

P6CLOSE, Rougeina

turning toward the sound. She reaches out a hand. The panther flinches from it.

P7CLOSE, Rougeina's hand

slowly lowering. That's the worst moment of the arc so far, and it has no dialogue at all.

PAGE 4
P8MID, the dock.

Kompis walks up the gangplank with a sheet of paper torn off a post.

KOMPIS
Bad news. Two kinds.
P9INSERT, the paper.

A Trisdel bounty notice. A drawing of Räva's fox grin: WANTED, THE FOX. Bring her nose to the Hounds. And under it, smaller, a second notice: a drawing of Kompis, with a mark in the corner of a white tower and the number three.

ASSET OF ARCHITECT THREE · ABSENT WITHOUT LEAVE · RETURN TO HANDLER.

PAGE 5
P10CLOSE, Vigolas.
VIGOLAS
Your handler's dead. Baldr's dead. Nobody even remembers him except her.

(He points at Rougeina. She nods.)

P11CLOSE, Kompis

folding the notice.

KOMPIS
The paperwork isn't dead. Trisdel never deletes paperwork. They just forget who signed it.
KOMPIS
That old man at the ramp, Brannvik. He doesn't just want her nose. He smelled me.
PAGE 6
P12WIDE, dusk.

On the far side of the market, the white Hound-ship lifts off the dock and drifts toward the Marka, low, its hound-head prow sniffing.

P13CLOSE, Drekk

at the wheel, hands tight.

DREKK
Here they come.
VIGOLAS
Cast off! Kompis, keep your head down! Rougeina—
P14CLOSE, Rougeina

already standing on the rail, eight blades drawn, hood up. Faceless. Ready.

PAGES 7–8 — THE CLASH
P15ACTION, a run of fast panels.

The Hound-ship comes alongside. Hooks of Ledger-light whip across and bite into the Marka's rail.

Hounds swarm over, sniffing, chains swinging.

Smurjan walks the Sightline down the boarding ramp, three precise palm strikes, three Hounds into the sea.

Bakasura bites a boarding ramp in half.

Trollmage, who's been napping on purpose all afternoon to store spells, casts MACRO : SLIPPERY = 40 and forty Hounds fall on their backsides at once.

P16ACTION.

A net of Ledger-light falls toward Kompis. Mingus tackles him out from under it.

PAGE 9
P17ACTION.

Rougeina Swaps in among the Hounds, a faceless red-haired ghost, cutting chains. A Hound swings around, sniffing, and his brass grille finds… nothing. No scent he knows. No plate. He swings wild at empty air.

HOUND
Who— what— there's nobody there!
P18CLOSE, Rougeina

behind him. She knocks him out with the pommel of a blade.

PAGE 10
P19CLOSE, Brannvik

on his own deck, white-bearded and grey-coated, the only unmasked face, watching through an old brass spyglass.

BRANNVIK
…A woman without a face. Not on any board. Not in any file.
BRANNVIKa slow, ugly smile
The fox has been busy. She's left me a blank.
P20CLOSE, Brannvik

raising a hand.

BRANNVIK
Leave her. The deserter. Take the deserter.
PAGES 11–12 — SPLASH
P21SPLASH (double page). THE TUG OF WAR.

Ten Hounds hit Kompis together. Ten chains of Ledger-light wrap around his arms, his legs, his chest, his throat, white light searing, and pull. He's dragged across the deck toward the Hound-ship's ramp, boots scraping, fighting.

On the other end, the whole crew pulls back: Vigolas with both arms around Kompis's waist, Drekk holding Vigolas, Smurjan holding Drekk, Trollmage hanging off the back. A human chain, heels dug into the deck.

And at the very front, between the Hounds and their prize, Mingus stands with his teeth sunk into one of the Ledger-chains, growling through it, pulling with everything his eighty pounds have, his gold fur glowing faintly at the edges. Almost. Not yet.

Above it all, faceless, Rougeina Swaps along the line of chains and cuts every one of them in a single silver-rose streak.

PAGE 13
P22WIDE.

The chains snap. Hounds go tumbling backwards onto their own ship. The crew falls in a heap on the Marka's deck with Kompis on top.

P23CLOSE, Mingus

standing on Kompis's chest, the faint gold glow at the edge of his fur fading. Just a dog again, wagging, licking his face.

KOMPISwinded
…Good boy. Good boy.
PAGE 14
P24WIDE.

The Hound-ship pulls away into the darkening Current, damaged. From its ramp, Brannvik calls across the water, calm.

BRANNVIK
Twenty years, deserter. Ask the fox how patient I am.
P25CLOSE, Vigolas

shouting back.

VIGOLAS
Ask him how annoying I am! · …That came out wrong.
PAGE 15
P26NIGHT. The deck.

The crew bandages, eats, collapses. Rougeina sits apart at the stern with her hood up.

P27CLOSE.

The panther pads slowly over to her. Sniffs her hand again, very carefully. Then, after a long moment, lies down at her feet, facing away from her, but touching. Not sure. Trying.

P28CLOSE, Rougeina's hand

resting on the panther's back. Her shoulders shake once.

PAGE 16
P29CLOSE, Drekk

alone at the wheel in the dark, looking out at the market island's fires. He hasn't said a word all evening.

P30CLOSE, Smurjan

joining him, quiet.

SMURJAN
You're still listening for it.
DREKK
Shut up.
SMURJAN
She's in here. In us. I'd hear her if she was out there.
DREKK
I said shut up.
PAGE 17 — THE HOOK
P31WIDE, the dock, late night.

Footsteps on the gangplank: heavy, unhurried, familiar. The sound of a chain dragging along the boards. A big shape, coming up out of the dark.

P32CLOSE, Drekk

turning. His face goes white.

P33FINAL PANEL, full figure, the top of the gangplank

lit by the deck lantern. A huge woman in a battered sea-coat, broad as a door, an anchor on a chain slung over one shoulder, salt in her braids, grinning the biggest grin in the world. She spreads her arms wide and laughs: a big, booming, generous laugh.

"MARKA": Drekk! There you are, you miserable old crab! Did you miss me?

END OF CHAPTER 58

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.