SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga II · The Call · Arc 4 · The Fox Den

Chapter 59

At Our Fire
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, the deck, night.

Everyone has frozen. Vigolas with a cup halfway to his mouth. Trollmage mid-yawn. Kompis on his feet. Smurjan half-risen, his third eye already opening.

P2CLOSE, "Marka"

at the top of the gangplank: arms wide, laughing, exactly her. The coat, the salt in the braids, the chipped front tooth, the anchor.

"MARKA": Well? Nobody's going to hug me? I came all the way back from the dead, you rude little—

PAGE 2
P3CLOSE, Drekk.

He's let go of the wheel. He takes one step toward her. Then another. His hands are shaking.

DREKK
…Captain.
P4CLOSE, Smurjan

third eye fully open, crimson. He sees it.

P5POV, the third eye.

In grey diagram lines: the shape of Marka, huge and broad, drawn perfectly. But behind her eyes, where the lines should go back into a skull, there are two amber points of light, laughing. And behind her broad back, faint in the diagram, a fox's tail.

PAGE 3
P6CLOSE, Smurjan

at Drekk's shoulder, very quietly, so only Drekk can hear.

SMURJAN
Drekk. It isn't her. Her eyes are amber. It's the fox.
P7CLOSE, Drekk.

He doesn't look away from "Marka". His jaw is tight. His eyes are wet.

DREKKbarely audible
I know.
P8CLOSE, Drekk.
DREKK
I know, Smurjan. I knew on the island.
DREKK
Let me have tonight.
PAGE 4
P9CLOSE, Smurjan.

A long moment. Inside him, among eighteen voices, one is very, very silent. He lowers his eye.

SMURJAN
…One night.
P10CLOSE, Vigolas

looking from Drekk to Smurjan to "Marka", understanding all of it. He puts his cup down.

VIGOLASloudly, cheerfully
Well, don't just stand there, captain! Come and sit! We've got stew! It's terrible!
PAGE 5
P11WIDE, the crew's fire on the deck

in its iron brazier. "Marka" sits on a barrel, huge and laughing, a bowl of stew in her lap. The crew sits around her: Vigolas laughing too loudly, Kompis watchful, Trollmage confused, Rougeina faceless and absolutely rigid, a blade half-drawn in her lap. Smurjan sits very still. Drekk sits right beside "Marka".

P12CLOSE, "Marka"

telling a story with her hands.

"MARKA": —so Drekk says, "It's a perfectly good boat," and I say, "Drekk, it's a door. You've nailed a mast to a door." And he sails it anyway—

PAGE 6
P13CLOSE, Drekk

staring at her face in the firelight. He isn't laughing. He's just looking, memorising.

DREKKquiet
…It floated.

"MARKA": It floated for twenty minutes!

P14CLOSE, Kompis

using his Lust-sight, seeing threads. From "Marka" there are no threads to anyone on the ship. Just a thin sad thread to Drekk, a borrowed one, not her own. And one thin thread from Drekk back to her: real, desperate.

KOMPISthinking
…Oh, Drekk.
PAGE 7
P15CLOSE, "Marka"

leaning in to Drekk, gentle.

"MARKA": You know what I always said about you, crab.

P16CLOSE, Drekk

very still.

DREKKwhisper
…Don't.
P17CLOSE, "Marka"

grinning the big chipped-tooth grin.

"MARKA": "That man couldn't find the sea if you dropped him in it."

PAGE 8
P18CLOSE, Drekk.

And it breaks out of him. A laugh, a real one, through tears, the first time he has laughed since he watched her hold the jaws open. Ugly and helpless and full of grief. He covers his face with both hands, laughing and sobbing at once.

DREKK
—hah— ha ha— you always said that— you always—
P19CLOSE, Drekk's hands

lowering slowly from his face.

P20CLOSE, Drekk's face.

Smooth. Blank. Like an egg. Gone.

PAGE 9
P21CLOSE, "Marka".

Her grin is gone. For one moment, in Marka's face, she looks almost sorry.

"MARKA" (softly, Marka's voice, not laughing): …Sorry, sailor.

P22WIDE.

The crew explodes off their seats: Rougeina first, faceless, blades out, Vigolas with lightning in both fists, Smurjan's script blazing crimson.

VIGOLAS
GET AWAY FROM HIM!
PAGES 10–11 — THE CLASH
P23ACTION, a run of fast panels: three faces.

Rougeina Swaps behind "Marka" and her blades cut… Rougeina. Räva has switched faces: crimson hair, Rougeina's own green eyes. Rougeina's blades stop an inch from her own throat. She can't cut her own face.

Vigolas swings at her, and she switches to Drekk's face, freshly stolen. Vigolas pulls the punch. Can't hit Drekk.

Smurjan walks the Sightline, and she switches back to Marka. He freezes. Inside him, one voice of eighteen screams.

P24CLOSE, Räva

flickering face to face to face (Marka / Rougeina / Drekk / Marka), laughing in three voices at once.

RÄVA
Not so easy to hit the people you love, is it?!
PAGE 12
P25ACTION.

Trollmage, who loves nobody whose face she's wearing, hits her full in the back with a stored spell. MACRO : SNEEZE = 12. Räva sneezes twelve times in a row and drops the anchor.

TROLLMAGE
Nothing personal! I just don't know any of you!
P26ACTION.

Mingus bites the seat of her trousers and hangs on. Räva yelps in four voices.

PAGES 13–14 — SPLASH
P27SPLASH (double page). RÄVGRYTET.

Behind the Marka, the starlight sea heaves. Something rises out of the Current, huge, streaming light like water off a whale's back: a planet, small, round and rust-red, its whole surface a maze. Walls of red stone, hedges of copper-coloured thorns, corridors spiralling into corridors, all of it lit by fox-fire lanterns, rising out of the sea beside them like a moon coming up.

On the Marka's rail, Räva, wearing Marka's face with Mingus still hanging off her trousers, tears free (leaving a strip of cloth in the dog's mouth), salutes the crew with two fingers, Marka's salute, and leaps across the gap onto the maze-planet's outermost wall.

RÄVAMarka's voice, calling back
Come and find me, darlings! If you can stop laughing long enough!
PAGE 15
P28WIDE.

She vanishes into the maze. The planet hangs in the sky beside the Marka, slowly rotating, enormous.

P29CLOSE, Mingus

sitting proudly on the deck with a strip of trouser in his mouth, tail wagging.

PAGE 16
P30WIDE, the deck.

Silence. Two faceless crew members now: Rougeina and Drekk. Drekk stands at the brazier, swaying, hands at his smooth face.

P31CLOSE, Smurjan

beside him, his voice wrecked.

SMURJAN
…I should have stopped you.

DREKK can't answer. He has no mouth. He just puts one hand on Smurjan's shoulder, heavily, once. Not your fault. The first time Drekk has ever touched him.

PAGE 17 — THE HOOK
P32WIDE.

Drekk walks to the wheel. Takes it in both hands. Faceless, he turns his head toward the maze-planet hanging in the sky.

P33CLOSE, the deck at his feet.

With the toe of his boot, in the soot from the brazier, he writes two words.

P34FINAL PANEL, close on the soot.

FOLLOW HER.

END OF CHAPTER 59

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.